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** Bob simply doesn't believe that John wants to change, and mercilessly slaughters him as he pleads for a chance to redeem himself, dying a horrible and painful death with no one ever to know of his change of heart.
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** John, who's about to help Bob, is literally [[TheDoorSlamsYou slammed by Jason with a door]].
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** John, who's about to help Bob, is literally [[ExactWords literally]] [[TheDoorSlamsYou slammed by Jason with a door]].
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
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* '''Zig Zagged''': ???HeelFaceRevolvingDoor mixed with TheyKilledKennyAgain.
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** [[WhatTheHellHero "Bob, why didn't you forgive John?]] [[NotSoDifferent You're just as bad as he is]]."
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** [[WhatTheHellHero "Bob, why didn't you forgive John?]] [[NotSoDifferent [[NotSoDifferentRemark You're just as bad as he is]]."
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** Jason had long suspected that John was having qualms about his work, so he was fully prepared to kill him as soon as he acted on it.
** John comes BackFromTheDead as a heroic RevenantZombie.
* '''Implied''': Jason is an extremely paranoid villain who might have killed John for basically no reason, but there are some subtle hints John may have genuinely wanted to defect.
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** John was such an utterly vile person with so many despicable acts to his name that no one in their right mind would even contemplate allowing him to redeem himself, and when he tries, Bob kills him on the spot in outrage at his sheer audacity.
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** [[MoralEventHorizon John was such an utterly vile person with so many despicable acts to his name that no one in their right mind would even contemplate allowing him to redeem himself, himself,]] and when he tries, Bob kills him on the spot in outrage at his sheer audacity.
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** John was such an utterly vile person with so many despicable acts to his name that no one in their right mind would even contemplate allowing him to redeem himself, and when he tries, they kill him on the spot in outrage at his sheer audacity.
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** John was such an utterly vile person with so many despicable acts to his name that no one in their right mind would even contemplate allowing him to redeem himself, and when he tries, they kill Bob kills him on the spot in outrage at his sheer audacity.
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** John was such an utterly vile person with so many despicable acts to his name that no one in their right mind would even contemplate allowing him to redeem himself, and when he tries, they kill him on the spot in outrage at his sheer audacity.
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** John has a history of being a HeelFaceMole, it is hard to even trust him.
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** John has a history of being a HeelFaceMole, TheMole, it is hard to even trust him.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character attempts to be redeemed but is denied.
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'''Basic Trope''': A character attempts is about to be redeemed redeemed, but is denied.suddenly perishes.
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* '''Enforced''': The writer is very harsh with establishing {{Laser Guided Karma}}s for villains or jerkasses, and wants to show how vindictive he is by having John get killed before he turns to the good side.
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* '''Enforced''': The writer is very harsh with establishing {{Laser Guided Karma}}s for villains or jerkasses, and sees redeeming them as [[KarmaHoudini letting them off easy]]. Thus, he wants to show how vindictive he is by having John get killed before he turns to the good side.
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* '''Downplayed''': John thinks about helping Bob, but does not. John goes on to live a full life for many years and to a ripe old age but dies of heart attack caused by the guilt of not helping Bob once he gives it a thought one day.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** John thinks about helping Bob, but does not. John goes on to live a full life for many years and to a ripe old age but dies of heart attack caused by the guilt of not helping Bob once he gives it a thought oneday.day.
** John helps Bob, [[ReformedButRejected only for Bob to treat John like shit.]]
** John thinks about helping Bob, but does not. John goes on to live a full life for many years and to a ripe old age but dies of heart attack caused by the guilt of not helping Bob once he gives it a thought one
** John helps Bob, [[ReformedButRejected only for Bob to treat John like shit.]]
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** Jason, after helping Bob to kill Jason, is immediately [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves dispatched by Bob]] afterward.
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** Jason, John, after helping Bob to kill Jason, is immediately [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserves dispatched by Bob]] afterward.
