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* '''Played For Laughs''': when molly bowls the mooks over, they make the sound of clattering bowling pins.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': when molly When Polly bowls the mooks over, they make the sound of clattering bowling pins.
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
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%%* '''Implied''': ???Polly is unscathed and surrounded by unconscious Mooks while Mark is standing next to her,looking dazed.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': when molly bowls the mooks over, they make the sound of clattering bowling pins.
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* '''Justified''': Polly lacks a proper weapon, and Mark is both NighInvulnerable and really solid, and therefore is an effective bludgeon.
* '''Inverted''': One of the mooks has HealingHands; Polly tries to swing it around as a HealingShiv
* '''Inverted''': One of the mooks has HealingHands; Polly tries to swing it around as a HealingShiv
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* '''Justified''': Polly lacks a proper weapon, and Mark is both NighInvulnerable and really solid, and therefore is an effective effective, living bludgeon.
* '''Inverted''': One of the mooks has HealingHands; Polly tries to swing it around as aHealingShivHealingShiv.
* '''Inverted''': One of the mooks has HealingHands; Polly tries to swing it around as a
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* '''Lampshaded''': "Polly, why can't you use a normal weapon like everyone else, instead of me?"
** Time to beats some weaklings with OTHER weaklings!
** Time to beats some weaklings with OTHER weaklings!
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "Polly, why can't you use a normal weapon like everyone else, instead of me?"
**Time "Time to beats beat some weaklings with OTHER weaklings!weaklings!"
** "Polly, why can't you use a normal weapon like everyone else, instead of me?"
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* '''Exploited''': Evulz brings a poisoned blade to the battle, knowing that parrying will simultaneously ruin Polly's weapon and hurt her ally,
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* '''Exploited''': Evulz brings a poisoned blade to the battle, knowing that parrying will simultaneously ruin Polly's weapon and hurt her ally,ally.
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* '''Reconstructed''': No, he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
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* '''Reconstructed''': '''Reconstructed''':
** No, he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
** No, he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
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** Time to beats some weaklings with OTHER weaklings!
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* '''Exploited''': ???
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* '''Exploited''': ???Evulz brings a poisoned blade to the battle, knowing that parrying will simultaneously ruin Polly's weapon and hurt her ally,
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** Polly stops beating people with Mark, and starts picking up the mooks instead, killing two birds with one stone. The fact no one mook lasts long is not really Polly's problem.
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* '''Conversed''': “…That has got to hurt.” “Mark, or the other guy?” “Both really.”
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* '''Conversed''': “…That has got to hurt.” “Mark, or the other guy?” “Both “Both, really.”
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* '''Reconstructed''': No he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
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* '''Reconstructed''': No No, he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
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* '''Defied''': Polly attempts to use mark in this manner, but he squirms out of her grip in blind panic.
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* '''Defied''': Polly attempts to use mark Mark in this manner, but he squirms out of her grip in blind panic.
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* '''Justified''': Polly lacks a proper weapon, and Mark is both NighInvulnerable and really solid, and therefore is an effective bludgeon.
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* '''Justified''': Polly lacks a proper weapon, and Mark is both NighInvulnerable and really solid, and therefore is an effective bludgeon.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Polly's habit of using Mark as a weapon leaves him with just as much physical trauma as the people she beats up, if not more. Mark is practically dead by the end of the battle.
* '''Reconstructed''': No he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
* '''Reconstructed''': No he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
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* '''Invoked''': Mark goads Polly into using him as a weapon, knowing himself as a NonActionGuy despite his resistance to damage.
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* '''Invoked''': Mark goads Polly into using him as a weapon, knowing himself as a NonActionGuy despite his resistance to damage. damage.
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Exploited''': ???
* '''Deconstructed''': Polly's habit of using Mark as a weapon leaves him with just as much physical trauma as the people she beats up, if not more. Mark is practically dead by the end of the battle.
* '''Reconstructed''': No he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
* '''Reconstructed''': No he isn't. Mark is MadeOfIron, so he takes a lot less damage than his opponents do.
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%% Optional items, added after Conversed, at your discretion:
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%%* '''Implied''': ???
%%* '''Plotted A Good Waste''': ???
%%* '''Played For Laughs''': ???
%%* '''Played For Drama''': ???
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* '''Downplayed''': Mark falls asleep, and Polly wakes him by gently slapping him with his own hand.
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* '''Conversed''': “…ThatHasGotToHurt.” “Mark, or the other guy?” “Both really.”
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* '''Conversed''': “…ThatHasGotToHurt.“…That has got to hurt.” “Mark, or the other guy?” “Both really.”
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* '''Justified''':Polly lacks a proper weapon, and Mark is both NighInvulnerable and really solid, and therefore is an effective bludgeon.
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* '''Justified''':Polly '''Justified''': Polly lacks a proper weapon, and Mark is both NighInvulnerable and really solid, and therefore is an effective bludgeon.
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* '''Parodied''': A GiantMook on the opposing side grabs his collages and proceeds to have a "Body-fight!" with Polly, much to Mark's distaste.
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* '''Parodied''': A GiantMook on the opposing side grabs his collages colleagues and proceeds to have a "Body-fight!" with Polly, much to Mark's distaste.
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* '''Conversed''': “…ThatHadGotToHurt.” “Hurt mark, or the other guy?” “Both really.”
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* '''Conversed''': “…ThatHadGotToHurt.“…ThatHasGotToHurt.” “Hurt mark, “Mark, or the other guy?” “Both really.”
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* '''Inverted''': One of the mooks has HellingHands Polly trays to swing it around as a HealingShiv
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* '''Inverted''': One of the mooks has HellingHands HealingHands; Polly trays tries to swing it around as a HealingShiv
