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** "*Ow!* I felt that and I don't even HAVE breasts!"
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** "*Ow!* [[ShareTheMalePain I felt that and I don't even HAVE breasts!"breasts]]!"
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice's breasts are horrifically maimed by the attack, and as a results she feels both angry and violated.
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* '''Deconstructed''': '''Deconstructed''':
** Alice's breasts are horrifically maimed by the attack, and as a results she feels both angry and violated.
** Alice's breasts are horrifically maimed by the attack, and as a results she feels both angry and violated.
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** Turns out that targets between a woman's arms are pretty bad a position, especially when Alice is herself armed.
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** Alice is wearing full body armor, but with a CleavageWindow, and SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome occurs.
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** Alice is wearing full body armor, but with a CleavageWindow, and SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome occurs.SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome.
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** Alice is wearing full body armor, but with a CleavageWindow, and RealityEnsues.
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** Alice is wearing full body armor, but with a CleavageWindow, and RealityEnsues.SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome occurs.
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* '''Lampshaded''': "*Ow!* I felt that and I don't even HAVE breasts!"
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* '''Lampshaded''': '''Lampshaded''':
** "*Ow!* I felt that and I don't even HAVEbreasts!"breasts!"
** [[Film/ScottPilgrimVsTheWorld "You punched me in the boob! Prepare to die, obviously."]]
** "*Ow!* I felt that and I don't even HAVE
** [[Film/ScottPilgrimVsTheWorld "You punched me in the boob! Prepare to die, obviously."]]
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** Alice and Bob are in hand-to-hand combat, and Alice knocks Bob off balance by smacking his head with her boob.
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** Alice and Bob are in hand-to-hand combat, and Alice knocks Bob off balance by smacking his head with her boob.breast.
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* '''Averted''': Alice wears a costume with a bulls-eye symbol on her chest, but never gets hit there.
* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her holding her breasts and {{trying not to cry}}.
* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her holding her breasts and {{trying not to cry}}.
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* '''Averted''': Alice wears a costume with a bulls-eye symbol on across her chest, breasts, but never gets hit there.
* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see herholding clutching her breasts and {{trying not to cry}}.
* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her
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* '''Lampshaded''': "*Ow!* I felt that and I don't eve HAVE those!"
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* '''Lampshaded''': "*Ow!* I felt that and I don't eve even HAVE those!"breasts!"
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** Alice runs around and yelps comically whenever she's hit in the breasts.
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** Alice runs around and yelps comically whenever she's hit in the breasts.boobies.
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** Alice is already feeling soreness and pain in her breasts so Bob makes sure to target them in their fight, knowing it will give him an advantage.
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** Alice is already feeling soreness and pain in her breasts so Bob makes sure to target them her breasts in their fight, knowing it will give him an advantage.
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** Alice is already feeling soreness and pain in her breasts so Bob makes sure to target them in their fight, knowing it will give him an advantage.
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* '''Downplayed''':
** Bob punched Alice in her breast, but it was just one of the many blows he landed on her.
** Alice thinks she is being given an injection in her breasts that [[BreastExpansion make them bigger]], but it's really a [[{{Brainwashed}} mind control drug]].
** Bob punched Alice in her breast, but it was just one of the many blows he landed on her.
** Alice thinks she is being given an injection in her breasts that [[BreastExpansion make them bigger]], but it's really a [[{{Brainwashed}} mind control drug]].
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* '''Downplayed''':
** Bob punched'''Downplayed''': Alice got hit in her the breast, but it was just one of the many blows he landed on her.
** Alice thinkspunches she is being given an injection in her breasts that [[BreastExpansion make them bigger]], but it's really a [[{{Brainwashed}} mind control drug]].got hit with.
** Bob punched
** Alice thinks
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* '''Parodied''':
** Alice's breasts act like punching bags.
** Alice's breasts act like punching bags.
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* '''Parodied''':
**'''Parodied''': Alice's breasts act like punching bags.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob punched Alice in her breast, but it was just one of the many blows he landed on her.
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* '''Downplayed''': '''Downplayed''':
** Bob punched Alice in her breast, but it was just one of the many blows he landed onher.her.
** Alice thinks she is being given an injection in her breasts that [[BreastExpansion make them bigger]], but it's really a [[{{Brainwashed}} mind control drug]].
** Bob punched Alice in her breast, but it was just one of the many blows he landed on
** Alice thinks she is being given an injection in her breasts that [[BreastExpansion make them bigger]], but it's really a [[{{Brainwashed}} mind control drug]].
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* '''Inverted''': Alice [[TorpedoTits uses her breasts as weapons.]]
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* '''Inverted''': '''Inverted''':
** Alice [[TorpedoTits uses her breasts asweapons.]]weapons]].
** Alice's breast attacks her.
** Alice [[TorpedoTits uses her breasts as
** Alice's breast attacks her.
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* '''Gender Inverted''': GroinAttack
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* '''Gender Inverted''': Inverted''':
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** Alice's breast attacks her.
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* '''Lampshaded''': Alice asks Bob to stop punching her breasts.
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* '''Lampshaded''': Alice asks Bob to stop punching her breasts."*Ow!* I felt that and I don't eve HAVE those!"
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* '''Defied''': Bob and Alice fight. Alice expects him to hit her in the breasts, but Bob refuses and only punches Alice in the face.
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* '''Defied''': '''Defied''':
** Alice asks Bob to stop punching her breasts, and she won't go for his sensitive areas.
** Bob and Alice fight. Alice expects him to hit her in the breasts, but Bob refuses and only punches Alice in the face.
** Alice asks Bob to stop punching her breasts, and she won't go for his sensitive areas.
** Bob and Alice fight. Alice expects him to hit her in the breasts, but Bob refuses and only punches Alice in the face.
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* '''Conversed''': "*Ow!* I felt that and I don't eve HAVE those!"
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* '''Conversed''': "*Ow!* I felt "Have you ever noticed that the areola and the nipple look kind of like a target and a bullseye? [[TheGadfly Well I don't eve HAVE those!"bet you can't unsee it now!]]"
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** An assassin leaps in front of Alice and stabs her breasts with two needles, but instead of causing her harm, they are [[HypnotizeThePrincess filled with mind control serum]].
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob punched Alice in her breasts, but it was just one of the many blows he landed on her.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob punched Alice in her breasts, breast, but it was just one of the many blows he landed on her.
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* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her wrapping her arms around her chest and {{trying not to cry}}.
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* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her wrapping holding her arms around her chest breasts and {{trying not to cry}}.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob aims for Alice's chest because he expects it to be an excellent tactic.
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* '''Invoked''': Bob aims for Alice's chest breasts because he expects it to be an excellent tactic.
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* '''Defied''': Bob and Alice fight. Alice expects him to hit her in the chest, but Bob refuses and only hits Alice in the face.
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* '''Defied''': Bob and Alice fight. Alice expects him to hit her in the chest, breasts, but Bob refuses and only hits punches Alice in the face.
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** Alice wears an inflatable bra to make her chest look bigger. When she gets hit there, it sound like a woopie cushion.
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** Alice wears an inflatable bra to make her chest breasts look bigger. When she gets hit there, it sound like a woopie cushion.
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** Hitting a woman in the breasts can cause fight-ending levels of pain.
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** Hitting a woman in the breasts can Knowing it would cause fight-ending levels of pain.great pain and end the fight, Bob focused his attacks on Alice's breasts.
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* '''Downplayed''': Alice gets hit in the breasts, but it's just one of many blows in a battle.
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* '''Downplayed''': Bob punched Alice gets hit in the her breasts, but it's it was just one of the many blows in a battle.he landed on her.
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* '''Exaggerated''': He fires 30 rounds into her breasts with a machine gun.
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* '''Exaggerated''': He fires 30 hundreds of rounds into at her breasts with a machine gun.
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** Punching Bob's pecs means there's less between Alice's fist and his ribs, so it actually hurts him more than getting hit hurts her.
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** Punching Bob's pecs means there's less between Alice's fist and his ribs, so it getting hit there actually hurts him more than getting hit it hurts her.
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** An assassin leaps in front of Alice, tears open her blouse, but just [[AnywhereButTheirLips kisses Alice's breasts]].
* '''Double Subverted''': The assassin was [[DruggedLipstick wearing poisoned lipstick]]!
* '''Double Subverted''': The assassin was [[DruggedLipstick wearing poisoned lipstick]]!
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** An assassin leaps in front of Alice, tears open her blouse, but just [[AnywhereButTheirLips kisses Alice's breasts]].
breasts]]...
* '''DoubleSubverted''': Subverted''':... The assassin was [[DruggedLipstick wearing poisoned lipstick]]!
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* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her wrapping her arms around her chest and trying not to cry.
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* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her wrapping her arms around her chest and trying {{trying not to cry.cry}}.
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** Alice's fighting style requires maximum agility, so minimum armor, but she still lines her FurBikini with Kevlar and other such materials.
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** Alice's fighting style requires maximum agility, so and therefore minimum armor, but she still lines her FurBikini with Kevlar and other such materials.
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** Alice wears an inflatable bra to make her chest look bigger. When she gets hit there, it sound like a woopie cushion.
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* '''Averted''': Alice wears a costume with a bullseye symbol on her chest, but never gets hit there.
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* '''Averted''': Alice wears a costume with a bullseye bulls-eye symbol on her chest, but never gets hit there.
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** "Alice" is a WholesomeCrossdresser and uses a unifrom that draws attention to his assets, so that his fake breasts will be hit and not him.
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** "Alice" is a WholesomeCrossdresser and uses a unifrom uniform that draws attention to his assets, so that his fake breasts will be hit and not him.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice's breasts are horrificaly maimed by the attack, and as a results she feels both angry and violated.
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* '''Deconstructed''': Alice's breasts are horrificaly horrifically maimed by the attack, and as a results she feels both angry and violated.
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* '''Played For Drama''': This gives Alice chronic soreness, which ends her fighting career, but that's the first act, and this is the heartwarming story of how she overcomes that injury.
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* '''Played For Drama''': This gives Alice chronic soreness, which ends her fighting career, but that's the first act, and this is act of the heartwarming heartwarming, inspirational story of how she overcomes that injury.
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* '''Enforced''': Well it's an exploitation film, so this kind of thing is expected.
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* '''Enforced''': Well it's an exploitation film, {{exploitation film}}, so this kind of thing is expected.
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** Alice is a mermaid trying on a SeashellBra, and instead her breasts get caught in a ClamTrap.
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* '''Double Subverted''': The assassin was wearing poisoned lipstick!
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* '''Double Subverted''': The assassin was [[DruggedLipstick wearing poisoned lipstick!lipstick]]!
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** An assassin leaps in front of Alice and stabs her breasts with two needles, but instead of causing her harm, they are [[HypnotizeThePrincess filled with mind control serum]].
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** Alice's breasts are the [[AchillesHeel only part of her body vulnerable to attack.]]
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** Alice's breasts are the [[AchillesHeel only part of her Alice is wearing full body vulnerable to attack.]]armor, but with a CleavageWindow, and RealityEnsues.
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** Alice and Bob are in hand-to-hand combat, and Alice knocks Bob off balance by smacking his head with her boob.
* '''Gender Inverted''':GroinAttack (almost always)GroinAttack
** Alice slices Bob's nipple, and it's a lot more painful than either of them realized.
** Punching Bob's pecs means there's less between Alice's fist and his ribs, so it actually hurts him more than getting hit hurts her.
* '''Gender Inverted''':
** Alice slices Bob's nipple, and it's a lot more painful than either of them realized.
** Punching Bob's pecs means there's less between Alice's fist and his ribs, so it actually hurts him more than getting hit hurts her.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Only because she's wearing steel armour to protect her breasts
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** An assassin leaps in front of Alice, tears open her blouse, but just [[AnywhereButTheirLips kisses Alice's breasts]].
* '''Double Subverted''':Only because she's The assassin was wearing steel armour to protect her breastspoisoned lipstick!
* '''Double Subverted''':
* '''Implied''': We don't see where Alice is hit, but we do see her wrapping her arms around her chest and trying not to cry.
** Alice and Bob are just getting "in the mood", and hitting Alice's nipples turns her on enough that they head straight to sex after that.
** Alice's fighting style requires maximum agility, so minimum armor, but she still lines her FurBikini with Kevlar and other such materials.
* '''Reconstructed''': Alice and Bob learn that hitting the breasts doesn't hurt or cripple as much as other body parts, but it does have a strong psychological effect, which they use when teaming up against the lady ninja army.
* '''Played For Drama''': This gives Alice chronic soreness, which ends her fighting career, but that's the first act, and this is the heartwarming story of how she overcomes that injury.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Alice runs around and yelps comically whenever she's hit in the breasts.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Laughs''':
** Alice runs around and yelps comically whenever she's hit in the breasts.
** Alice runs around and yelps comically whenever she's hit in the breasts.
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** The heated battle between Alice and Bob ends in a CrossCounter to their respective [[BreastAttack weak]] [[GroinAttack points]] and they go down simultaneously, writhing on the ground and groaning in pain.