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** Alice is absolutely heroic with no evil ulterior motives, while Bob is unironically heinous and has nothing but completely wicked intentions.
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** Alice is [[IncorruptiblePurePureness absolutely heroic with no evil ulterior motives, motives]], while Bob is [[CompleteMonster unironically heinous and has nothing but completely wicked intentions.intentions]].
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* '''Straight''': Alice, a heroine, is much nicer than Bob, who is a villain.
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* '''Straight''': Alice, a the heroine, is much nicer than Bob, who is a the villain.
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** While Alice [[GoodIsNotNice isn't the nicest person]] and Bob [[WellIntentionedExtremist means well]], it's pretty clear who's good and who's evil.
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** GrayingMorality
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** GrayingMoralityGrayingMorality.
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** GreyAndGrayMorality
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** GreyAndGrayMoralityGreyAndGrayMorality.
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** WhiteAndGreyMorality - Alice is unambiguously good while Bob is [[AntiVillain evil if not completely]].
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** WhiteAndGreyMorality - Alice is unambiguously good while Bob is [[AntiVillain evil if not completely]].morally ambiguous instead of straight evil]].
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** The aura and temperament these characters give to the audience reveal their innate quality as [[BeautyEqualsGoodness good]] or [[EvilMakesYouUgly evil]].
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** The aura and temperament these characters give to the audience reveal their innate quality as [[BeautyEqualsGoodness good]] or [[EvilMakesYouUgly evil]].{{evil|MakesYouUgly}}.
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** Alice is extremely reliant on [[ShootTheDog pragmatic options]], while the presence of a MoralityPet makes Bob become a [[NobleDemon better person.]] [[GrayingMorality It becomes hard to determine who is good and who is bad.]]
** The story is told entirely from Alice's [[BlackAndWhiteInsanity perspective.]] It quickly becomes clear that she's an UnreliableNarrator.
** The story is told entirely from Alice's [[BlackAndWhiteInsanity perspective.]] It quickly becomes clear that she's an UnreliableNarrator.
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** Alice is extremely reliant on [[ShootTheDog pragmatic options]], while the presence of a MoralityPet makes Bob become a [[NobleDemon better person.]] person]]. [[GrayingMorality It becomes hard to determine who is good and who is bad.]]
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** The story is told entirely from Alice's [[BlackAndWhiteInsanityperspective.]] perspective]]. It quickly becomes clear that she's an UnreliableNarrator.
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** Alice realizes [[HeelRealization that she's doing bad things]] and vows to never ShootTheDog again. The MoralityPet gets killed causing Bob to go back to his [[HeelFaceRevolvingDoor old self.]] Ultimately StatusQuoIsGod.
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** Alice realizes [[HeelRealization that she's doing bad things]] and vows to never ShootTheDog again. The MoralityPet gets killed causing Bob to go back to his [[HeelFaceRevolvingDoor old self.]] self]]. Ultimately StatusQuoIsGod.
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** Alice is so sickeningly sweet and pure that she [[TastesLikeDiabetes gives everyone diabetes]], whereas Bob is considered irredeemably evil because he [[PokeThePoodle smokes weed and listens to Heavy Metal.]]
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** Alice is so sickeningly sweet and pure that she [[TastesLikeDiabetes gives everyone diabetes]], whereas Bob is considered irredeemably evil because he [[PokeThePoodle smokes weed and listens to Heavy Metal.]]Metal]].
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'''Bob''': It is but it's also the [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight best option available.]] It doesn't make me proud, but if I can save innocent lives with it, [[NecessarilyEvil so be it]].
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'''Bob''': It is but it's also the [[ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight best option available.]] available]]. It doesn't make me proud, but if I can save innocent lives with it, [[NecessarilyEvil so be it]].
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** See "Invoked". Everyone is sick of having to follow an absolutist moral code and having to identify as good or [[CardCarryingVillain evil]] which always forces the "Good" people to [[GoodIsDumb do]] {{stupid| good}} [[HonorBeforeReason things]] while "Bad" people are never able to have [[WellIntentionedExtremist good intentions.]] They all band together to RageAgainstTheHeavens.
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** See "Invoked". Everyone is sick of having to follow an absolutist moral code and having to identify as good or [[CardCarryingVillain evil]] which always forces the "Good" people to [[GoodIsDumb do]] {{stupid| good}} {{stupid|good}} [[HonorBeforeReason things]] while "Bad" people are never able to have [[WellIntentionedExtremist good intentions.]] intentions]]. They all band together to RageAgainstTheHeavens.
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** Alice believes that in order for society to be fair and just, moral standards of right and wrong have to be in place, a belief she holds strongly to, which many find perfectly reasonable. Whether Bob is evil or morally gray ends up being irrelevant to the fact that he has done evil deeds and needs to be brought to justice.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is [[IncorruptiblePurePureness undoubtedly good]] while Bob is unquestionably evil.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Alice is [[IncorruptiblePurePureness undoubtedly good]] while Bob is unquestionably evil.
** Alice is [[IncorruptiblePurePureness undoubtedly good]] while Bob is unquestionably evil.
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** Alice is absolutely heroic while Bob is unironically heinous.
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** Alice is absolutely heroic with no evil ulterior motives, while Bob is unironically heinous.heinous and has nothing but completely wicked intentions.
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** Alice is absolutely heroic while Bob is unironically heinous.
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** The aura and temperament these character give to the audience reveal their innate quality as [[BeautyEqualsGoodness good]] or [[EvilMakesYouUgly evil]].
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** The aura and temperament these character characters give to the audience reveal their innate quality as [[BeautyEqualsGoodness good]] or [[EvilMakesYouUgly evil]].
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** The aura and temperament these character give to the audience reveal their innate quality as [BeautyEqualsGoodness good] or [EvilMakesYouUgly evil].
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** The aura and temperament these character give to the audience reveal their innate quality as [BeautyEqualsGoodness good] [[BeautyEqualsGoodness good]] or [EvilMakesYouUgly evil].[[EvilMakesYouUgly evil]].
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** The aura and temperament these character give to the audience reveal their innate quality as [BeautyEqualsGoodness good] or [EvilMakesYouUgly evil].
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** The enemies the hero faces are made to be the embodiment of evil such as demons from hell, and the hero is meant to be an embodiment of good such as an angel from heaven.
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** {{Heel Face Turn}}s are required that there is to be some good in the person beforehand to inspire them to make the change and {{Face Heel Turn}}s requires the person to be selfish or cruel enough to be capable of turning evil. Because everyone is either 100% good or evil, their [[CharacterAlignment moral alignments]] are set in stone and thus they are unable to change and grow as people.
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** {{Heel Face Turn}}s are required that there is to be some good in the person beforehand to inspire them to make the change and {{Face Heel Turn}}s requires the person to be selfish or cruel enough to be capable of turning evil. Because everyone is either 100% good or evil, their [[CharacterAlignment moral alignments]] are set in stone and [[StaticCharacter thus they are unable to change and grow as people.people]].
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** See "Invoked". Everyone is sick of having to follow an absolutist moral code and having to identify as good or [[CardCarryingVillain evil]] which always forces the "Good" people to [[GoodIsDumb do]] [[StupidGood stupid things]] while "Bad" people are never able to have [[WellIntentionedExtremist good intentions.]] They all band together to RageAgainstTheHeavens.
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** See "Invoked". Everyone is sick of having to follow an absolutist moral code and having to identify as good or [[CardCarryingVillain evil]] which always forces the "Good" people to [[GoodIsDumb do]] [[StupidGood stupid {{stupid| good}} [[HonorBeforeReason things]] while "Bad" people are never able to have [[WellIntentionedExtremist good intentions.]] They all band together to RageAgainstTheHeavens.
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** See "Invoked". Everyone is sick of having to follow an absolutist moral code and having to identify as good or [[CardCarryingVillain evil]] which always forces the "Good" people to [[GoodIsDumb do stupid things]] while "Bad" people are never able to have [[WellIntentionedExtremist good intentions.]] They all band together to RageAgainstTheHeavens.
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** See "Invoked". Everyone is sick of having to follow an absolutist moral code and having to identify as good or [[CardCarryingVillain evil]] which always forces the "Good" people to [[GoodIsDumb do do]] [[StupidGood stupid things]] while "Bad" people are never able to have [[WellIntentionedExtremist good intentions.]] They all band together to RageAgainstTheHeavens.
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** Because everyone is either pure good or pure evil. Therefore if they aren't 100% heroic and do mundane every-day things instead of saving lives, [[NeutralityBacklash they must]] [[WithUsOrAgainstUs be evil]]. And your average joe does mundane things instead saving people and thus must be evil and not worth saving.
** Since {{Heel Face Turn}}s require there to be some good in the person beforehand to inspire them to make the change and {{Face Heel Turn}}s require the person to be selfish or cruel enough to be capable of turning evil. And everyone is either 100% good or evil, their [[CharacterAlignment moral alignments]] are set in stone and thus they are unable to change and grow as people.
** Since {{Heel Face Turn}}s require there to be some good in the person beforehand to inspire them to make the change and {{Face Heel Turn}}s require the person to be selfish or cruel enough to be capable of turning evil. And everyone is either 100% good or evil, their [[CharacterAlignment moral alignments]] are set in stone and thus they are unable to change and grow as people.
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** Because everyone Everyone is either pure good or pure evil. Therefore if they aren't 100% heroic and do mundane every-day things instead of saving lives, [[NeutralityBacklash they must]] [[WithUsOrAgainstUs be evil]]. And your average joe Average Joe does mundane things instead of saving people and thus must be evil and is not worth saving.
**Since {{Heel Face Turn}}s require are required that there is to be some good in the person beforehand to inspire them to make the change and {{Face Heel Turn}}s require requires the person to be selfish or cruel enough to be capable of turning evil. And Because everyone is either 100% good or evil, their [[CharacterAlignment moral alignments]] are set in stone and thus they are unable to change and grow as people.
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** But to Alice, they are evil because they serve their own side, which is the same as evil.
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** Alice is good because she [[TastesLikeDiabetes gives everyone seizures]] whereas Bob is evil because he [[PokeThePoodle smokes weed and listens to Heavy Metal.]]
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** Alice is good because so sickeningly sweet and pure that she [[TastesLikeDiabetes gives everyone seizures]] diabetes]], whereas Bob is considered irredeemably evil because he [[PokeThePoodle smokes weed and listens to Heavy Metal.]]
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up as TheDevil.
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up as TheDevil.[[{{Satan}} The Devil]].
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** WhiteAndGreyMorality - Alice is unambiguously good while Bob is [[AntiVillain evil by circumstances]].
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** WhiteAndGreyMorality - Alice is unambiguously good while Bob is [[AntiVillain evil by circumstances]].if not completely]].
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up as [[TheDevil]].
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up as [[TheDevil]].TheDevil.
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up a [[{{Satan}}Devil]].
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up a [[{{Satan}}Devil]].as [[TheDevil]].
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up a Devil.
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** Alice is dressed up as an angel and Bob is dressed up a Devil.[[{{Satan}}Devil]].
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** The world itself has moral absolutism built into it's very core.
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** The world itself has moral absolutism built into it's its very core.
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** Alice becomes a KnightTemplar in her pursuit of justice, and in so doing, is [[NotSoDifferent not terribly different from Bob]].
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** See Donconstructed #5. [[NominalHero Bad guys can still do good]] or [[TokenEvilTeammate join the heroes]] as long as [[NotInThisForYourRevolution there's something in it for them]].
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** See Donconstructed Deconstructed #5. [[NominalHero Bad guys can still do good]] or [[TokenEvilTeammate join the heroes]] as long as [[NotInThisForYourRevolution there's something in it for them]].
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** See Donconstructed #5. [[NominalHero Bad guys can still do good]] or [[TokenEvilTeammate turn to the side of good]] as long as [[NotInThisForYourRevolution there's something in it for them]].
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** See Donconstructed #5. [[NominalHero Bad guys can still do good]] or [[TokenEvilTeammate turn to join the side of good]] heroes]] as long as [[NotInThisForYourRevolution there's something in it for them]].
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** See Donconstructed #5. [[NominalHero Bad guys can still do good]] or [[TokenEvilTeammate turn to the side of good]] as long as [[NotInItForYourRevolution there's something in it for them]].
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** See Donconstructed #5. [[NominalHero Bad guys can still do good]] or [[TokenEvilTeammate turn to the side of good]] as long as [[NotInItForYourRevolution [[NotInThisForYourRevolution there's something in it for them]].