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** Alice may occasionally run into things, but unless they hit her in the head or happen to be sharp, on fire, moving vehicles, large animals, or [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs moving vehicles transporting large animals]], she's not in much danger of getting seriously hurt by it.
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** Alice may occasionally run into things, but unless [[{{Kevlard}} her large mass protects her from impact.]] Unless they hit her in the head or happen to be sharp, on fire, moving vehicles, large animals, or [[BreadEggsBreadedEggs moving vehicles transporting large animals]], she's not in much danger of getting seriously hurt by it.
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* '''Exaggerated''': Alice is morbidly obese, and yet is able to run constantly and moves effortlessly.
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* '''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** Alice is morbidly obese, and yet is able to run constantly and moveseffortlessly.effortlessly.
** Alice is the size of a large mansion, and is a master of every martial art ever created and even can run faster than Usain Bolt himself!
** Alice is morbidly obese, and yet is able to run constantly and moves
** Alice is the size of a large mansion, and is a master of every martial art ever created and even can run faster than Usain Bolt himself!
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** Alice trains hard, but simply eats more calories than she burns.
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** Alice trains hard, hard but simply eats more calories than she burns.
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alice is the world's greatest acrobat! But then Bob sees a picture of her and her file, and realizes that she got fat. But then Bob is told that she was always fat, and still the world's greatest acrobat! But then, when Bob meets Alice in person, he realises that she's fattened up way more than ever, and she's morbidly obese now. But then she does some acrobatics that prove that she's ''still'' the world's best acrobat!
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* '''Zig-Zagged''': Alice is the world's greatest acrobat! But then Bob sees a picture of her and her file, file and realizes that she got fat. But then Bob is told that she was always fat, and still the world's greatest acrobat! But then, when Bob meets Alice in person, he realises realizes that she's fattened up way more than ever, and she's morbidly obese now. But then she does some acrobatics that prove proves that she's ''still'' the world's best acrobat!
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* '''Invoked''': Alice, the world's best acrobat, gets fat on a secret under-cover mission, but she doesn't find it affects her speed or agility.
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* '''Invoked''': Alice, the world's best acrobat, gets fat on a secret under-cover undercover mission, but she doesn't find it affects her speed or agility.
* '''Implied:''': Alice is shown to be fat. When Bob calls her over from a faraway place and looks away for five seconds, she is suddenly there when Bob looks back.
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** Alice may run fast, but due to her fat she runs out of breath easily.
** Alice's huge size combined with her relentless speed lead to ''serious'' problems with inertia. She handles turns like a brick covered in Crisco, [[TooFastToStop and God help her if she ever needs to hit the brakes.]]
** Alice's huge size combined with her relentless speed lead to ''serious'' problems with inertia. She handles turns like a brick covered in Crisco, [[TooFastToStop and God help her if she ever needs to hit the brakes.]]
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** Alice may run fast, but due to her fat fat, she runs out of breath easily.
** Alice's huge size combined with her relentless speedlead led to ''serious'' problems with inertia. She handles turns like a brick covered in Crisco, [[TooFastToStop and God help her if she ever needs to hit the brakes.]]
** Alice's huge size combined with her relentless speed
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* '''Played for Horror''': A disgusting monster that resembles a lump of adipose is able to move at breakneck speed to catch up to and devour it's prey.
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* '''Played for Horror''': A disgusting monster that resembles a lump of adipose is able to move at breakneck speed to catch up to and devour it's its prey.
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* '''Justified''': Alice has been training for years. Her fat is no impediment, merely a result of doing a diet and exercise regimen based more on practicality and performance, than on her appearance.
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* '''Justified''': '''Justified''':
** Alice has been training for years. Her fat is no impediment, merely a result of doing a diet and exercise regimen based more on practicality and performance, than on herappearance.appearance.
** Alice trains hard, but simply eats more calories than she burns.
** Alice has been training for years. Her fat is no impediment, merely a result of doing a diet and exercise regimen based more on practicality and performance, than on her
** Alice trains hard, but simply eats more calories than she burns.
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* '''Played for Horror''': A disgusting monster that resembles a lump of adipose is able to move at breakneck speed to catch up to and devour it's prey.
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** Alice's huge size combined with his relentless speed lead to ''serious'' problems with inertia. She handles turns like a brick covered in Crisco, [[TooFastToStop and God help her if she ever needs to hit the brakes.]]
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** Alice's huge size combined with his her relentless speed lead to ''serious'' problems with inertia. She handles turns like a brick covered in Crisco, [[TooFastToStop and God help her if she ever needs to hit the brakes.]]]]
** As a result of her incredible weight and the SquareCubeLaw, Alice's legs have to work extremely hard to get her up to speed, causing her to overheat easily. Eventually, this leads to her becoming hospitalized when she overexerts herself and gets heatstroke.
** As a result of her incredible weight and the SquareCubeLaw, Alice's legs have to work extremely hard to get her up to speed, causing her to overheat easily. Eventually, this leads to her becoming hospitalized when she overexerts herself and gets heatstroke.
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** Alice may run fast, but due to his fat he runs out of breath easily.
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** Alice may run fast, but due to his her fat he she runs out of breath easily.
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** She learns to control his breathing a bit better.
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** She learns to control his her breathing a bit better.
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* '''Played For Laughs''':
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* '''Played For Drama''': Alice had to overcome many ordeals to make it this far into the race, constantly being mocked for being different. The race becomes intense as she and Bob race neck and neck to the finish line.
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* '''Played For for Drama''': Alice had to overcome many ordeals to make it this far into the race, constantly being mocked for being different. The race becomes intense as she and Bob race neck and neck to the finish line.
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