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** So much of the Blank Story arc is Nightmare Fuel. When [[spoiler: Grey Hoof]] has his VillainousBreakdown, his skeleton, and only his skeleton, grow to the size of an alicorn. He grows skeletal wings and a horn, too, and they all tear through his flesh to shreds as they grow.
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** The descriptions of the [[spoiler: zomponies are made of Nightmare Fuel. Anyone affected suffers a PainfulTransformation as their ''[[EyeScream eyes dissolve]]'', their flesh rots, and they ''scream''.]]
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** The descriptions of the [[spoiler: zomponies zomponies]] are made of Nightmare Fuel. Anyone affected suffers a PainfulTransformation as their ''[[EyeScream eyes dissolve]]'', their flesh rots, and they ''scream''.]] The pain is described as similar to being dipped in acid, and [[spoiler: Medic]] can feel ''wind blowing through his ribcage.''
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* The most A recent chapter has [[spoiler: [[HumanoidAbomination Vagineer and Heavydile]] menacing the RED team alongside [[AxCrazy Christian Brutal Sniper]].]] To say nothing of the fact that there are now [[spoiler: [[OhCrap FIVE]] Nightmares]] facing off against the citizens of Ponyville...
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* Essentially any time a TF2 Freakshow appears is going to be this... unless it's [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment PAINis]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Cupcake]].
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* Essentially any time a TF2 [=TF2=] Freakshow appears is going to be this... unless it's [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment PAINis]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Cupcake]].
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** [[spoiler: Heavydile and Vagineer as well.]]
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**[[spoiler: Heavydile and Vagineer as well.]]
*Essentially any time a TF2 Freakshow appears is going to be this... unless it's [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment PAINis]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Cupcake]].
*Essentially any time a TF2 Freakshow appears is going to be this... unless it's [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment PAINis]] [[CrowningMomentOfFunny Cupcake]].
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* Chapter 21, Good Lord.
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* Chapter 21, 20, Good Lord.
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** Nightmare Gardener, made from poor sweet and kind [[spoiler:Cheerilee.]]
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** Nightmare Gardener, made from poor sweet and kind [[spoiler:Cheerilee.]]
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* The entirety of Chapter 19 is merely three lines. What are they?
*** [[spoiler: THE MOON HAS FALLEN]]
*** [[spoiler: LOVE HAS MET A SOMBER FATE]]
*** [[spoiler: THE END SHALL COME WHEN THE SUN RISES]]
*** [[spoiler: THE MOON HAS FALLEN]]
*** [[spoiler: LOVE HAS MET A SOMBER FATE]]
*** [[spoiler: THE END SHALL COME WHEN THE SUN RISES]]
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* Chapter 21, Good Lord.
** The revelation that [[spoiler:''Discord'' is terrified of Slendermane.]]
** Celestia [[spoiler:being mind-controlled by Slendermane into possibly committing murder.]]
** Gray Mann's [[DealWithTheDevil deal]] with [[spoiler:this world's Slenderman.]]
** [[spoiler:Christian Brutal Sniper, the physical embodiment of Sniper's darkest fantasies and self-loathing.]]
** Nightmare Gardener, made from poor sweet and kind [[spoiler:Cheerilee.]]
* Chapter 21, Good Lord.
** The revelation that [[spoiler:''Discord'' is terrified of Slendermane.]]
** Celestia [[spoiler:being mind-controlled by Slendermane into possibly committing murder.]]
** Gray Mann's [[DealWithTheDevil deal]] with [[spoiler:this world's Slenderman.]]
** [[spoiler:Christian Brutal Sniper, the physical embodiment of Sniper's darkest fantasies and self-loathing.]]
** Nightmare Gardener, made from poor sweet and kind [[spoiler:Cheerilee.]]
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Nightmare Fuel cleanup; see thread for reference
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When Nightmares are the MonsterOfTheWeek, you WILL have NightmareFuel a plenty.
horror by the bucketful.
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** And now, [[spoiler:the Slenderman of their world might have taken notice. [[SarcasmMode Fun times]]]]
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** And now, [[spoiler:the Slenderman of their world might have taken notice. [[SarcasmMode Fun times]]]]times]]]]
*The entirety of Chapter 19 is merely three lines. What are they?
***[[spoiler: THE MOON HAS FALLEN]]
***[[spoiler: LOVE HAS MET A SOMBER FATE]]
***[[spoiler: THE END SHALL COME WHEN THE SUN RISES]]
*The entirety of Chapter 19 is merely three lines. What are they?
***[[spoiler: THE MOON HAS FALLEN]]
***[[spoiler: LOVE HAS MET A SOMBER FATE]]
***[[spoiler: THE END SHALL COME WHEN THE SUN RISES]]
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* [[spoiler:Slenderman,a NighInvulnerable EldritchAbomination with MindRape powers. There is nothing more that needs to be said about him. Team RED was lucky that the RED Medic was able to use ThePowerOfFriendship and Kindness (thourgh Sasha).]]]]
** And now, [[spoiler:the Slenderman of their world might have taken notice. [[SarcasmMode Fun times]]]]
** And now, [[spoiler:the Slenderman of their world might have taken notice. [[SarcasmMode Fun times]]]]
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* "Tick tick, goes the clock..." [[spoiler:Doctor Whooves PainfulTransformation. Minuette/Riversong, experiencing the the last few minutes of life of every version of herself that died a horrible, agonizing death, ones that she didn't regenerate from, at the same time, on eternal repeat. Demo experiencing every time he died and forgeting each time he survived. Applejack having to live out Pinkie and Twilight bad dreams, both as vitcim and victimizer.]]
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* "Tick tick, goes the clock..." [[spoiler:Doctor Whooves PainfulTransformation. Minuette/Riversong, experiencing the the last few minutes of life of every version of herself that died a horrible, agonizing death, ones that she didn't regenerate from, at the same time, on eternal repeat. Demo experiencing every time he died and forgeting each time he survived. Applejack having to live out Pinkie and Twilight bad dreams, both as vitcim and victimizer.]]
* [[spoiler:Slenderman,a NighInvulnerable EldritchAbomination with MindRape powers. Team RED was lucky that the RED Medic was able to use ThePowerOfFriendship and Kindness (thourgh Sasha).]]
* [[spoiler:Slenderman,a NighInvulnerable EldritchAbomination with MindRape powers. Team RED was lucky that the RED Medic was able to use ThePowerOfFriendship and Kindness (thourgh Sasha).]]
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* The names the Maskies use for the BLU team in chapter 2.
** The Chattering Clown - Scout
** The Raging War Cry - Soldier
** The Lost Soul of Fire - Pyro
** The Laughing Destruction - Demoman
** The Brutal Juggernaut - Heavy
** The Angel-Hearted Builder - Engineer
** The Dead One - Medic
** The Heart of Ice - Sniper
** The Killing Ghost - Spy
** The Chattering Clown - Scout
** The Raging War Cry - Soldier
** The Lost Soul of Fire - Pyro
** The Laughing Destruction - Demoman
** The Brutal Juggernaut - Heavy
** The Angel-Hearted Builder - Engineer
** The Dead One - Medic
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** The Killing Ghost - Spy
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** The Chattering Clown - Scout, the Scout
** The Raging War Cry -Soldier, the Soldier
** The Lost Soul of Fire -Pyro, the Pyro
** The Laughing Destruction -Demoman, the Demoman
** The Brutal Juggernaut -Heavy, the Heavy
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ThE ChAtTeRiNg ClOwN/Scout, tHe RaGiNg WaR cRy/soldier, ThE lOsT sOuL oF fIrE/Pyro, tHe LaUgHiNg DeStRuCtIoN/Demo, tHe BrUtAl JuGgErNaUt/Heavy, ThE aNgEl-HeArTeD bUiLdEr/Engineer, ThE dEaD oNe/Medic, ThE hEaRt Of IcE/Sniper and tHe KiLlInG gHoSt/Spy.
ThE ChAtTeRiNg ClOwN/Scout, tHe RaGiNg WaR cRy/soldier, ThE lOsT sOuL oF fIrE/Pyro, tHe LaUgHiNg DeStRuCtIoN/Demo, tHe BrUtAl JuGgErNaUt/Heavy, ThE aNgEl-HeArTeD bUiLdEr/Engineer, ThE dEaD oNe/Medic, ThE hEaRt Of IcE/Sniper and tHe KiLlInG gHoSt/Spy.
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* The names the masked pegasus uses Maskies use for the BLUs BLU team in chapter 2.
ThE ChAtTeRiNg ClOwN/Scout, tHe RaGiNg WaR cRy/soldier, ThE lOsT sOuL oF fIrE/Pyro, tHe LaUgHiNg DeStRuCtIoN/Demo, tHe BrUtAl JuGgErNaUt/Heavy, ThE aNgEl-HeArTeD bUiLdEr/Engineer, ThE dEaD oNe/Medic, ThE hEaRt Of IcE/Sniper and tHe KiLlInG gHoSt/Spy. ** The Chattering Clown - Scout, the Raging War Cry - Soldier, the Lost Soul of Fire - Pyro, the Laughing Destruction - Demoman, the Brutal Juggernaut - Heavy, the Angel-Hearted Builder - Engineer, the Dead One - Medic, the Heart of Ice - Sniper, the Killing Ghost - Spy
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ThE ChAtTeRiNg ClOwN/Scout, tHe RaGiNg WaR cRy/soldier, ThE lOsT sOuL oF fIrE/Pyro, tHe LaUgHiNg DeStRuCtIoN/Demo, tHe BrUtAl JuGgErNaUt/Heavy, ThE aNgEl-HeArTeD bUiLdEr/Engineer, ThE dEaD oNe/Medic, ThE hEaRt Of IcE/Sniper and tHe KiLlInG gHoSt/Spy.
ThE ChAtTeRiNg ClOwN/Scout, tHe RaGiNg WaR cRy/soldier, ThE lOsT sOuL oF fIrE/Pyro, tHe LaUgHiNg DeStRuCtIoN/Demo, tHe BrUtAl JuGgErNaUt/Heavy, ThE aNgEl-HeArTeD bUiLdEr/Engineer, ThE dEaD oNe/Medic, ThE hEaRt Of IcE/Sniper and tHe KiLlInG gHoSt/Spy.
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* "Tick tick, goes the clock..." [[spoiler:Doctor Whooves PainfulTransformation ,Minuette/Riversong, PainfulTransformation. Minuette/Riversong, experiencing the the last few minutes of life of every version of herself that died a horrible, agonizing death, ones that she didn't regenerate from. At from, at the same time, on eternal repeat, repeat. Demo experiencing every time he died and forgeting each time he survived.survived. Applejack having to live out Pinkie and Twilight bad dreams, both as vitcim and victimizer.]]
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* "Tick tick, goes the clock..." [[spoiler:Doctor Whooves PainfulTransformation ,Minuette/Riversong, experiencing the the last few minutes of life of every version of herself that died a horrible, agonizing death, ones that she didn't regenerate from. At the same time, on eternal repeat, Demo ecperiencing experiencing every time he died and forgeting each time he survived.]]
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