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*** The fact that the wolf corpse Fushi finds in the snow is actually Johann, makes it more heartbreaking when the boy sees Fushi, believing his furry companion who was lost for so long had finally returned.
* The boy sees his afterlife, which has Johann, his village, and he happily asks if they had "fruit".
* The boy sees his afterlife, which has Johann, his village, and he happily asks if they had "fruit".
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*** The fact that the wolf corpse Fushi finds in the snow is actually Johann, Joaan, makes it more heartbreaking when the boy sees Fushi, believing his furry companion who was lost for so long had finally returned.
* The boy sees his afterlife, which hasJohann, Joaan, his village, and he happily asks if they had "fruit".
* The boy sees his afterlife, which has
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* Whenever the people who Fushi interacted with [[spoiler: die and see their version of a perfect life, they look around in confusion and ask where Fushi is, only to realize that they are dead]].
* When the nameless boy realizes [[spoiler: that his tribe had been essentially wiped out by the snowstorm and sees a sign that says "turn back"]], his cheery optimism finally fails him as he breaks down in the snow and begins to cry.
** Fushi even tries to [[spoiler: move the boy's body when the boy fell out of his chair, but didn't move]].
* When the nameless boy realizes [[spoiler: that his tribe had been essentially wiped out by the snowstorm and sees a sign that says "turn back"]], his cheery optimism finally fails him as he breaks down in the snow and begins to cry.
** Fushi even tries to [[spoiler: move the boy's body when the boy fell out of his chair, but didn't move]].
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* Whenever the people who Fushi interacted with [[spoiler: die and see their version of a perfect life, they look around in confusion and ask where Fushi is, only to realize that they are dead]].
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* When the nameless boy realizes[[spoiler: that his tribe had been essentially wiped out by the snowstorm and sees a sign that says "turn back"]], back", his cheery optimism finally fails him as he breaks down in the snow and begins to cry.
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* The boy sees his [[spoiler: afterlife, which has Johann, his village, and he happily asks if they had "fruit"]].
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* March trying to stop Parona from committing suicide [[spoiler: as she holds March's lifeless body]].
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* Fushi suddenly shifting into [[spoiler: Parona's form]] during his gladiator match. Immediately he's horrified at what [[spoiler: her]] fate was.
* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healthy body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred that he continues to mourn Pyoran's fate for decades]].
* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the Nokkers take a tool on his mind until the point[[spoiler: he starts indiscriminately kill Fushi over and over, due to his willpower fading enough for the Nokker to take control, just to make it all end. All with a serene smile in his face as he keeps mutilating the immortal being over and over...]]
* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healthy body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred that he continues to mourn Pyoran's fate for decades]].
* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the Nokkers take a tool on his mind until the point[[spoiler: he starts indiscriminately kill Fushi over and over, due to his willpower fading enough for the Nokker to take control, just to make it all end. All with a serene smile in his face as he keeps mutilating the immortal being over and over...]]
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* Fushi suddenly shifting into [[spoiler: Parona's form]] form during his gladiator match. Immediately he's horrified at what [[spoiler: her]] her fate was.
* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone,[[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healthy body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred that he continues to mourn Pyoran's fate for decades]].
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* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the Nokkers take a tool on his mind until thepoint[[spoiler: point he starts indiscriminately kill Fushi over and over, due to his willpower fading enough for the Nokker to take control, just to make it all end. All with a serene smile in his face as he keeps mutilating the immortal being over and over...]]
* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone,
* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the Nokkers take a tool on his mind until the
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* The way that Fushi [[spoiler: was about to kill Izumi's knocker (penetrating some vines into her body and then burning her from inside even feeling her pain at full length)... was spine-chilling, to say the least.]]
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* The way that Fushi [[spoiler: was about to kill Izumi's knocker (penetrating some vines into her body and then burning her from inside even feeling her pain at full length)... was spine-chilling, to say the least.]]
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Set in a medieval time where death is around at every corner, you can expect plenty of gruesome thing to happen.
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Set in a medieval time where death is around at every corner, you can expect plenty of gruesome thing things to happen.
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** When Fushi looks at him and notices the boy doesn't look well, his face looks extremely worried.
** Just as he slowly succumbs to his fever, he talks to Fushi and tells him with a smile to never forget him. Even until the very end, the boy never stopped smiling as he [[spoiler: passed peacefully in his sleep]].
** Fushi even tries to move his body [[spoiler: when the boy fell out of his chair, but didn't move]].
** Just as he slowly succumbs to his fever, he talks to Fushi and tells him with a smile to never forget him. Even until the very end, the boy never stopped smiling as he [[spoiler: passed peacefully in his sleep]].
** Fushi even tries to move his body [[spoiler: when the boy fell out of his chair, but didn't move]].
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** Just as he slowly succumbs to his fever, he talks to Fushi and tells him with a smile to never forget him. Even until the very end, the boy never stopped smiling as he [[spoiler: passed peacefully in his sleep]].
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** [[spoiler: In the afterlife, we see March's wish come true as she's shown as a young woman who's eager to raise her children.]]
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* Fushi feeling pain when fighting the monster for a third time, but realizing he hadn't sustained any injuries yet. When he [[spoiler: suddenly takes on Gugu's form mid battle]] he cries out in anguish, [[spoiler: heaving out balls of fire]] and vehemently denying that [[spoiler: Gugu was dead]].
* Fushi going back to the old man and woman who looked after him and Gugu for the past years [[spoiler: to tell them that Gugu had died]].
** [[spoiler: Gugu, realizing that he had died, attempts to comfort his surrogate family with a hug as he watches them cry.]]
* Rynn running to see Gugu [[spoiler: whose form Fushi had taken]] and telling him she loved him.
** It's shown that despite how the others tried to hide it, Rynn [[spoiler: ''knows'' Gugu is dead, but carried on with a smile]]. As Gugu leaves, she promises to wait for him and when he returns, they'd go pick flowers like he promised.
* Fushi going back to the old man and woman who looked after him and Gugu for the past years [[spoiler: to tell them that Gugu had died]].
** [[spoiler: Gugu, realizing that he had died, attempts to comfort his surrogate family with a hug as he watches them cry.]]
* Rynn running to see Gugu [[spoiler: whose form Fushi had taken]] and telling him she loved him.
** It's shown that despite how the others tried to hide it, Rynn [[spoiler: ''knows'' Gugu is dead, but carried on with a smile]]. As Gugu leaves, she promises to wait for him and when he returns, they'd go pick flowers like he promised.
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* The way that Fushi [[spoiler: was about to kill Mizuha's knocker (penetrating some vines into her body and then burning her from inside) even feeling her pain at full length... was spine-chilling, to say the least.]]
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* The way that Fushi [[spoiler: was about to kill Mizuha's Izumi's knocker (penetrating some vines into her body and then burning her from inside) inside even feeling her pain at full length...length)... was spine-chilling, to say the least.]]
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* The way Fushi [[spoiler: was about to kill Mizuha's knocker (penetrating some vines into her body and then burning her from inside) even feeling her pain in full length... was spine-chilling to say de least.]]
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* The way that Fushi [[spoiler: was about to kill Mizuha's knocker (penetrating some vines into her body and then burning her from inside) even feeling her pain in at full length... was spine-chilling spine-chilling, to say de the least.]]
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* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Bordering into AdultFear, Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healthy body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred that he continues to mourn Pyoran's fate for decades]].
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* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Bordering into AdultFear, Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healthy body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred that he continues to mourn Pyoran's fate for decades]].
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* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Bordering into AdultFear, Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healty body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred to keep mourning Pyoran's fate for decades]].
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* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Bordering into AdultFear, Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healty healthy body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred that he continues to keep mourning mourn Pyoran's fate for decades]].
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* Hayase stripping and trying to have her way with Fushi while the immortal is drugged and unable to resist.
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* That the Nameless Boy is the last of his tribe, alone and doomed to a slow death before Fushi even gets there. The fact that he dies quickly is merciful in comparison to the slow death he'd die alone if Fushi hadn't come upon him (as his Joaan was dead). Given how long it seemed between the 1st and 2nd episode where Fushi wanders aimlessly there was no likely human contact anywhere near close enough to matter.
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* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the knockers take a tool on his mind until the point[[spoiler: he starts indiscriminately kill Fushi over and over, due to his willpower fading enough for the knocker to take control, just to make it all end. All with a serene smile in his face as he keeps mutilating the immortal being over and over...]]
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* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the knockers Nokkers take a tool on his mind until the point[[spoiler: he starts indiscriminately kill Fushi over and over, due to his willpower fading enough for the knocker Nokker to take control, just to make it all end. All with a serene smile in his face as he keeps mutilating the immortal being over and over...]]
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* March's dream of growing up to become a mother is essentially dashed when she's chosen to become the annual sacrifice to the rampant bear spirit.
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* March's dream of growing up to become a mother is essentially dashed when she's chosen to become the annual sacrifice to the rampant bear spirit.Oniguma.
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* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Bordering into AdultFear, Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Man in Black to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healty body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred to keep mourning Pyoran's fate for decades]].
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* After many adventures together, and after she promised Fushi she'll never be killed and leave him alone, [[spoiler: Pyoran starts going senile, developing dementia, possibly Alzheimer-like symptoms until the once active old woman is a cranky, needy, depressed shell of her former self, with Fushi acting heartbroken and dismayed. Bordering into AdultFear, Pyoran gets some moments of lucidity in which she begs the Man in Black Beholder to let her die remembering a past in which she was healthy, strong and beautiful: while every other character dies "waking up" in his/her ideal world, slowly realizing his/her passing, Pyoran, fully aware to have passed on, gets to briefly enjoy an healty body and mind and thanks the Man in Black before passing on. Fushi is so scarred to keep mourning Pyoran's fate for decades]].
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* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the knockers take a tool on his mind until the point[[spoiler: he starts indiscriminately kill Fushi over and over, blaming it all on the knocker in his hand, just to make it all end. All with a serene smile in his face as he keeps mutilating the immortal being over and over...]]
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* Kahaku's SanitySlippage after a prolonged siege by the knockers take a tool on his mind until the point[[spoiler: he starts indiscriminately kill Fushi over and over, blaming it all on due to his willpower fading enough for the knocker in his hand, to take control, just to make it all end. All with a serene smile in his face as he keeps mutilating the immortal being over and over...]]
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From the author who wrote [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/ASilentVoice?from=Manga.KoeNoKatachi "A Silent Voice"]], you can expect a lot of tears to be shed in this story.
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From the author who wrote [[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Manga/ASilentVoice?from=Manga.KoeNoKatachi "A Silent Voice"]], you can expect a lot of tears to be shed in this story.
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* Whenever the people who Fushi interacted with [[spoiler: die and see their version of a perfect life, they look around in confusion and ask where Fushi is, only to realize that they are dead]].
* When the nameless boy realizes [[spoiler: that his tribe had been essentially wiped out by the snowstorm and sees a sign that says "turn back"]], his cheery optimism finally fails him as he breaks down in the snow and begins to cry.
** When Fushi looks at him and notices the boy doesn't look well, his face looks extremely worried.
** Just as he slowly succumbs to his fever, he talks to Fushi and tells him with a smile to never forget him. Even until the very end, the boy never stopped smiling as he [[spoiler: passed peacefully in his sleep]].
** Fushi even tries to move his body [[spoiler: when the boy fell out of his chair, but didn't move]].
*** The fact that the wolf corpse Fushi finds in the snow is actually Johann, makes it more heartbreaking when the boy sees Fushi, believing his furry companion who was lost for so long had finally returned.
* The boy sees his [[spoiler: afterlife, which has Johann, his village, and he happily asks if they had "fruit"]].
* March's dream of growing up to become a mother is essentially dashed when she's chosen to become the annual sacrifice to the rampant bear spirit.
** [[spoiler: In the afterlife, we see March's wish come true as she's shown as a young woman who's eager to raise her children.]]
* March trying to stop Parona from committing suicide [[spoiler: as she holds March's lifeless body]].
* Gugu testing Fushi's other abilities and the two realizing that Fushi can conjure items he has touched or tasted before from his body. Gugu takes it a bit too far, cutting Fushi with a knife and burning him with a piece of firewood. While Fushi can heal quickly, Gugu scolds Fushi and tells him it's for his own good, Fushi at first looks surprised and close to crying.
* Fushi feeling pain when fighting the monster for a third time, but realizing he hadn't sustained any injuries yet. When he [[spoiler: suddenly takes on Gugu's form mid battle]] he cries out in anguish, [[spoiler: heaving out balls of fire]] and vehemently denying that [[spoiler: Gugu was dead]].
* Fushi going back to the old man and woman who looked after him and Gugu for the past years [[spoiler: to tell them that Gugu had died]].
** [[spoiler: Gugu, realizing that he had died, attempts to comfort his surrogate family with a hug as he watches them cry.]]
* Rynn running to see Gugu [[spoiler: whose form Fushi had taken]] and telling him she loved him.
** It's shown that despite how the others tried to hide it, Rynn [[spoiler: ''knows'' Gugu is dead, but carried on with a smile]]. As Gugu leaves, she promises to wait for him and when he returns, they'd go pick flowers like he promised.
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* Whenever the people who Fushi interacted with [[spoiler: die and see their version of a perfect life, they look around in confusion and ask where Fushi is, only to realize that they are dead]].
* When the nameless boy realizes [[spoiler: that his tribe had been essentially wiped out by the snowstorm and sees a sign that says "turn back"]], his cheery optimism finally fails him as he breaks down in the snow and begins to cry.
** When Fushi looks at him and notices the boy doesn't look well, his face looks extremely worried.
** Just as he slowly succumbs to his fever, he talks to Fushi and tells him with a smile to never forget him. Even until the very end, the boy never stopped smiling as he [[spoiler: passed peacefully in his sleep]].
** Fushi even tries to move his body [[spoiler: when the boy fell out of his chair, but didn't move]].
*** The fact that the wolf corpse Fushi finds in the snow is actually Johann, makes it more heartbreaking when the boy sees Fushi, believing his furry companion who was lost for so long had finally returned.
* The boy sees his [[spoiler: afterlife, which has Johann, his village, and he happily asks if they had "fruit"]].
* March's dream of growing up to become a mother is essentially dashed when she's chosen to become the annual sacrifice to the rampant bear spirit.
** [[spoiler: In the afterlife, we see March's wish come true as she's shown as a young woman who's eager to raise her children.]]
* March trying to stop Parona from committing suicide [[spoiler: as she holds March's lifeless body]].
* Gugu testing Fushi's other abilities and the two realizing that Fushi can conjure items he has touched or tasted before from his body. Gugu takes it a bit too far, cutting Fushi with a knife and burning him with a piece of firewood. While Fushi can heal quickly, Gugu scolds Fushi and tells him it's for his own good, Fushi at first looks surprised and close to crying.
* Fushi feeling pain when fighting the monster for a third time, but realizing he hadn't sustained any injuries yet. When he [[spoiler: suddenly takes on Gugu's form mid battle]] he cries out in anguish, [[spoiler: heaving out balls of fire]] and vehemently denying that [[spoiler: Gugu was dead]].
* Fushi going back to the old man and woman who looked after him and Gugu for the past years [[spoiler: to tell them that Gugu had died]].
** [[spoiler: Gugu, realizing that he had died, attempts to comfort his surrogate family with a hug as he watches them cry.]]
* Rynn running to see Gugu [[spoiler: whose form Fushi had taken]] and telling him she loved him.
** It's shown that despite how the others tried to hide it, Rynn [[spoiler: ''knows'' Gugu is dead, but carried on with a smile]]. As Gugu leaves, she promises to wait for him and when he returns, they'd go pick flowers like he promised.
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