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** His tormented screams as he flails about futilely fighting for his life really seal the horror of the moment.
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** His tormented screams as he flails about futilely fighting for his life really seal the horror of the moment.moment, and Hook's amused reaction to his terror is the icing on the cake.
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--->'''Hook''': (smirks) Yes.
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That doesn't add up, the pirates knew about the children before coming to London, Maggie implies Smee has been spying on them (and Smee has Jack's baseball ball in his possession), not to mention one of the pirate specifically bet against Hook successfully bringing the children to Neverland
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*** What makes it worse - apparently Hook ''improvised on the fly'' when he abducted Jack and Maggie. Briefly, there's a gust of wind at the ceremony and Wendy stumbles, knocking over a glass of wine. The implication is that Hook went for ''her'' first, then realised there was something ''better'' and there was ''no-one to stop him in the house'' and changed his plan accordingly.
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** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere]]. Neverland may be a fantasy world, but we don't see anything up until then to suggest that the dead can come back to life. Then Hook tears his hook through the crocodile's belly, and the huge, dry, dusty reptile (which must have been dead and stuffed for ''decades'' by that time) opens its mouth in a roar and starts breaking free of its support beams...[[OhCrap and tilts its head down to look right at the Captain]].
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** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere]]. Neverland may be a fantasy world, but we don't see anything up until then to suggest that the dead can come back to life. Then Hook tears his hook through the crocodile's belly, and the huge, dry, dusty reptile (which must have been dead and stuffed for ''decades'' by that time) opens its mouth in a roar and starts breaking free of its support beams...[[OhCrap and tilts its head down to look right at the Captain]]. One can hardly blame him for screaming.
--->"[[PunctuatedForEmphasis I! WANT!]] [[IWantMyMommy MY! MOMMYYYYYYY!]]"
--->"[[PunctuatedForEmphasis I! WANT!]] [[IWantMyMommy MY! MOMMYYYYYYY!]]"
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--->'''Gutless''': NO! NOT THAT!
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--->'''Gutless''': NO! NOT THAT!THAT! '''''[[BigNo NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!]]'''''
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** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere.]] Neverland may be a fantasy world, but we don't see anything up until then to suggest that the dead can come back to life. Then Hook tears his hook through the crocodile's belly, and the huge, dry, dusty reptile (which must have been dead and stuffed for ''decades'' by that time) opens its mouth in a roar and starts breaking free of its support beams...[[OhCrap and tilts its head down to look right at the Captain]].
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** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere.]] nowhere]]. Neverland may be a fantasy world, but we don't see anything up until then to suggest that the dead can come back to life. Then Hook tears his hook through the crocodile's belly, and the huge, dry, dusty reptile (which must have been dead and stuffed for ''decades'' by that time) opens its mouth in a roar and starts breaking free of its support beams...[[OhCrap and tilts its head down to look right at the Captain]].
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--->'''Maggie:''' The mean, scary man at the window stole [Jack's baseball].
--->'''Peter:''' There's no mean, scary man.
--->'''Maggie:''' But he says he's a window washer!
--->'''Peter:''' There's no mean, scary man.
--->'''Maggie:''' But he says he's a window washer!
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'''Peter:''' There's no mean, scary
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'''Maggie:''' But he says he's a window washer!
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* Peter exploding at his family when they annoy him during his business call, complete with an extremely upsetting BigShutUp. It's [[MoodWhiplash a far cry]] from the aloof and frustrated but bumbling father Peter's been up to that point.
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* Peter exploding at his family when they annoy him during his business call, complete with an extremely upsetting BigShutUp. It's [[MoodWhiplash a far cry]] from the aloof and frustrated but bumbling father Peter's been up to that point.point, showing an absolute dark AbusiveDad and ChildHater side to him.
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*** Worse, it's hinted that the pirates were watching the children from the moment the family arrived at the house -- possibly even longer, since they not only knew that Jack and Maggie ''were'' Peter's children, but the exact night that the family arrived in London.
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*** Worse, it's hinted that the pirates were watching the children family from the moment the family they arrived at the house -- possibly even longer, since they not only knew that Jack and Maggie ''were'' Peter's children, but the exact night that the family arrived would arrive in London.
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--->'''Hook''': You made a boo boo, didn't you?
--->'''Gutless''': (sobbing) I deed, I deeed...
--->'''Hook''': (aside) The Boo Box.
--->'''Gutless''': NO! NOT THAT!
--->'''Gutless''': (sobbing) I deed, I deeed...
--->'''Hook''': (aside) The Boo Box.
--->'''Gutless''': NO! NOT THAT!
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** Worse, it's hinted that the pirates were watching the children from the moment the family arrived at the house -- possibly even longer, since they not only knew that Jack and Maggie ''were'' Peter's children, but the exact night that the family would arrive in London.
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** Another creepy moment, as Tootles realizes downstairs that Hook is coming, the fearful barking from the dog Nana outside gradually morphs into guttural yells of "HOOK! HOOK!".
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** Another creepy moment, as Tootles realizes downstairs that Hook is coming, the fearful barking from the dog Nana outside gradually morphs into guttural yells of "HOOK! HOOK!".HOOK!"
*** And when Tootles realizes what's happening, he looks ''terrified''. For a young, energetic Lost Boy, Hook's approach would mean that an exciting adventure is about to unfold; for a defenseless old man, however... Suffice to say, Tootles is ''very'' lucky that the Captain was focused on taking Jack and Maggie, and wasn't feeling particularly vengeful that night.
*** And when Tootles realizes what's happening, he looks ''terrified''. For a young, energetic Lost Boy, Hook's approach would mean that an exciting adventure is about to unfold; for a defenseless old man, however... Suffice to say, Tootles is ''very'' lucky that the Captain was focused on taking Jack and Maggie, and wasn't feeling particularly vengeful that night.
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* Gutless's punishment for betting against Hook: he's locked in a small chest (the "Boo Box") where the other pirates drop live scorpions on him through a small hatch. And [[ScaryBlackMan one pirate]] mocks him with "BOO!" upon each scorpion dropped on Gutless. It's truly a horrible way to die.
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* Gutless's punishment for betting against Hook: he's locked in a small chest (the "Boo Box") where the other pirates drop live scorpions on him through a small hatch. And [[ScaryBlackMan one pirate]] mocks two pirates mock him with "BOO!" upon each scorpion dropped on Gutless. It's truly a horrible way to die.
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* Gutless's punishment for betting against Hook: he's locked in a small chest (the "Boo Box") where the other pirates drop live scorpions in there with him. And [[ScaryBlackMan one pirate]] mocks him with "BOO!" upon each scorpion dropped on Gutless. It's truly a horrible way to die.
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* Gutless's punishment for betting against Hook: he's locked in a small chest (the "Boo Box") where the other pirates drop live scorpions in there with him.on him through a small hatch. And [[ScaryBlackMan one pirate]] mocks him with "BOO!" upon each scorpion dropped on Gutless. It's truly a horrible way to die.
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** Another creepy moment, as Tootles realizes downstairs that Hook is coming, the fearful barking from the dog Nana outside gradually morphs into guttural yells of "HOOK! HOOK!".
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*** What makes it worse - apparently Hook ''improvised on the fly'' when he abducted Jack and Maggie. Briefly, there's a gust of wind at the ceremony and Wendy stumbles, knocking over a glass of wine. The implication is that Hook went for ''her'' first, then realised there was something ''better'' and there was ''no-one to stop him in the house'' and changed his plan accordingly.
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*** What makes it worse - apparently Hook ''improvised on the fly'' when he abducted Jack and Maggie. Briefly, there's a gust of wind at the ceremony and Wendy stumbles, knocking over a glass of wine. The implication is that Hook went for ''her'' first, then realised there was something ''better'' and there was ''no-one to stop him in the house'' and changed his plan accordingly.
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*** What makes it worse - apparently Hook ''improvised on the fly'' when he abducted Jack and Maggie. Briefly, there's a gust of wind at the ceremony and Wendy stumbles, knocking over a glass of wine. The implication is that Hook went for ''her'' first, then realised there was something ''better'' and there was ''no-one to stop him in the house'' and changed his plan accordingly.
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** MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Did the stuffed croc really come back to life, or did Hook just set off a chain reaction of old ropes and supports snapping by hitting, and then tugging at, the body?
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** MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Did the stuffed croc really come back to life, or did Hook just set off a chain reaction of old ropes and supports snapping by hitting, and then tugging at, the body?
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* Captain Hook flat out slew Rufio so nonchalantly as though opening a letter.
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* The dead crocodile clock (made from the same croc that ate Hook's hand) coming back to life to finish the job by '' eating Hook alive.''
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* The dead crocodile clock (made from the same croc that ate Hook's hand) coming back to life to finish the job by '' eating ''eating Hook alive.''
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*** Granted, some unofficial sources claim the Croc's body came back to life because it was possessed by its restless spirit at that moment, with the intent of [[GhostlyGoals finishing its vendetta against Hook]] so it could ascend to the afterlife, but even then, this is still unconfirmed.
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* The dead crocodile clock (made from the same croc that ate Hook's hand) coming back to life to finish the job by]] '' eating Hook alive.''
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* The dead crocodile clock (made from the same croc that ate Hook's hand) coming back to life to finish the job by]] by '' eating Hook alive.''
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** Especially when [[spoiler:Peter meets a man that looks like Smee after arriving from Neverland]], it gives you all the FridgeHorror mentioned above.
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** Especially when [[spoiler:Peter Peter meets a man that looks like Smee after arriving from Neverland]], Neverland, it gives you all the FridgeHorror mentioned above.
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* Captain Hook flat out [[spoiler: slew Rufio so nonchalantly as though opening a letter.]]
* The dead crocodile clock (made from the same croc that ate Hook's hand) [[spoiler: coming back to life to finish the job by]] ''[[spoiler: eating Hook alive.]]''
** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere.]] Neverland may be a fantasy world, but [[spoiler: we don't see anything up until then to suggest that the dead can come back to life. Then Hook tears his hook through the crocodile's belly, and the huge, dry, dusty reptile (which must have been dead and stuffed for ''decades'' by that time) opens its mouth in a roar and starts breaking free of its support beams...[[OhCrap and tilts its head down to look right at the Captain]].]]
*** Granted, some unofficial sources claim [[spoiler: the Croc's body came back to life because it was possessed by its restless spirit at that moment, with the intent of [[GhostlyGoals finishing its vendetta against Hook]] so it could ascend to the afterlife, but even then, this is still unconfirmed]].
* The dead crocodile clock (made from the same croc that ate Hook's hand) [[spoiler: coming back to life to finish the job by]] ''[[spoiler: eating Hook alive.]]''
** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere.]] Neverland may be a fantasy world, but [[spoiler: we don't see anything up until then to suggest that the dead can come back to life. Then Hook tears his hook through the crocodile's belly, and the huge, dry, dusty reptile (which must have been dead and stuffed for ''decades'' by that time) opens its mouth in a roar and starts breaking free of its support beams...[[OhCrap and tilts its head down to look right at the Captain]].]]
*** Granted, some unofficial sources claim [[spoiler: the Croc's body came back to life because it was possessed by its restless spirit at that moment, with the intent of [[GhostlyGoals finishing its vendetta against Hook]] so it could ascend to the afterlife, but even then, this is still unconfirmed]].
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* Captain Hook flat out [[spoiler: slew Rufio so nonchalantly as though opening a letter.]]
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* The dead crocodile clock (made from the same croc that ate Hook's hand)[[spoiler: coming back to life to finish the job by]] ''[[spoiler: '' eating Hook alive.]]''
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** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere.]] Neverland may be a fantasy world, but[[spoiler: we don't see anything up until then to suggest that the dead can come back to life. Then Hook tears his hook through the crocodile's belly, and the huge, dry, dusty reptile (which must have been dead and stuffed for ''decades'' by that time) opens its mouth in a roar and starts breaking free of its support beams...[[OhCrap and tilts its head down to look right at the Captain]].]]
Captain]].
*** Granted, some unofficial sources claim[[spoiler: the Croc's body came back to life because it was possessed by its restless spirit at that moment, with the intent of [[GhostlyGoals finishing its vendetta against Hook]] so it could ascend to the afterlife, but even then, this is still unconfirmed]].unconfirmed.
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** What makes the scene especially weird and creepy is the way it [[DeusExMachina comes completely out of nowhere.]] Neverland may be a fantasy world, but
*** Granted, some unofficial sources claim
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** All in all, Hook may be just a rather nasty pirate, but the kidnapping scene depicts him more like a demon from hell!
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** This parallels the original play where the Darlings come back home to find their children's beds empty (they left with Peter Pan). Of course Hook deliberately made their discovery as nightmarish he could by trashing the house, scraping the wall with his hook and knocking out the housekeeper.
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** This parallels the original play where the Darlings come back home to find their children's beds empty (they left with Peter Pan). Of course Hook deliberately made their discovery as nightmarish as he could by trashing the house, scraping the wall with his hook and knocking out the housekeeper.
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* Hook's manipulation (or attempted manipulation, in Maggie's case) of Peter's children. Although the classroom scene has its funny moments, it's also quite unsettling because Hook plays off on insecurities that many young children, not just Jack and Maggie, probably experience; that their parents maybe don't like them or don't want to spend time with them. In particular, some of the things Hook says to Maggie:
--> '''Hook''': Before you were born, your parents would stay up all night together...just to see the sunrise. Don't be frightened. Maggie, before you were born, they were happier. They were free.
--> '''Hook''': Before you were born, your parents would stay up all night together...just to see the sunrise. Don't be frightened. Maggie, before you were born, they were happier. They were free.
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* Peter exploding at his family when they annoy him during his business call, complete with an extremely upsetting BigShutUp. It's [[MoodWhiplash a far cry]] from the aloof and frustrated but bumbling father Peter's been up to that point.
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* Gutless's punishment for betting against Hook: he's locked in a small chest (the "Boo Box") where the other pirates drop live scorpions in there with him. And [[ScaryBlackMan one pirate]] mocks his screams with "Boo hoo!", It's truly a horrible way to die.
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* Gutless's punishment for betting against Hook: he's locked in a small chest (the "Boo Box") where the other pirates drop live scorpions in there with him. And [[ScaryBlackMan one pirate]] mocks his screams him with "Boo hoo!", "BOO!" upon each scorpion dropped on Gutless. It's truly a horrible way to die.