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* The ''Literature/WarriorCats'' fic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11511977/1/Into-the-Shadows Into the Shadows]]'' depicts a mother playing favorites with her newborn kits. Fair enough, but then her mate's reaction to this is taken to ridiculous extremes:
-->He half screamed, his eyes screaming. If cats had tear ducts tears would be dropping from his eyes.
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** "Soil, is my power." Supposedly, it was taken from the ''FinalFantasyUnlimited'' anime along with the Magun, but that doesn't make it much better.

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** "Soil, is my power." Supposedly, it was taken from the ''FinalFantasyUnlimited'' ''Anime/FinalFantasyUnlimited'' anime along with the Magun, but that doesn't make it much better.
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* Fics shipping people IRL. One could only wonder what was going through the writer's mind while making fanfics shipping PewDiePie and Cryoatic, especially since the former ''has a girlfriend.'' The two might have caught on, since the ''actually did a dramatic reading of one such fic, while collectively laughing their asses off.''

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* Fics shipping people IRL. One could only wonder what was going through the writer's mind while making fanfics shipping PewDiePie and Cryoatic, especially since the former ''has a girlfriend.'' The two might have caught on, since the ''actually did a dramatic reading of one such fic, while collectively laughing their asses off.'''' [[https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=TGhkmWCFjiA Watch it unfold right here.]]
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* Fics shipping people IRL. One could only wonder what was going through any writer's mind while making fanfics shipping PewDiePie and Cryoatic, especially since the former ''has a girlfriend.''

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* Fics shipping people IRL. One could only wonder what was going through any the writer's mind while making fanfics shipping PewDiePie and Cryoatic, especially since the former ''has a girlfriend.'' The two might have caught on, since the ''actually did a dramatic reading of one such fic, while collectively laughing their asses off.''

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* KingdomHearts fanfics are a ''deep ocean'' of narm. If it's not for all the Yaoi fics laying around (which, BTW, take up 50-60% of the fics, considering there are ''70k+ fanfics'' on fanfiction.net), the ''exceedingly'' OOC fics, CrackPairing fics, Wangst-y fics, ''or'' the brain bleach inducing sex fics, then it has to be the fics that turn Kairi into an utter bitch who "gets in the way of Sora and Riku's love". You can make YouTube hits making dramatic readings of said fics.

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* KingdomHearts fanfics are a ''deep ocean'' of narm. If it's not for all the Yaoi fics laying around (which, BTW, take up 50-60% of the fics, archive, considering there are ''70k+ fanfics'' on fanfiction.net), the ''exceedingly'' OOC fics, CrackPairing fics, Wangst-y fics, ''or'' the brain bleach inducing sex fics, then it has to be the fics that turn Kairi into an utter bitch who "gets in the way of Sora and Riku's love". You can make YouTube hits making dramatic readings of said fics.[[SarcasmMode works of art.]]
* Fics shipping people IRL. One could only wonder what was going through any writer's mind while making fanfics shipping PewDiePie and Cryoatic, especially since the former ''has a girlfriend.''
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* KingdomHearts fanfics are a ''deep ocean'' of narm. If it's not for all the Yaoi fics laying around (which, BTW, take up 50-60% of the fics, considering there are ''70k+ fanfics'' on fanfiction.net), the ''exceedingly'' OOC fics, CrackPairing fics, Wangst-y fics, ''or'' the brain bleach inducing sex fics, then it has to be the fics that turn Kairi into an utter bitch who "gets in the way of Sora and Riku's love". You can make YouTube hits making dramatic readings of said fics.
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* The original version of ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it several years after he finished it. Even the rewritten version isn't completely free from it.

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* The original version of ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it several years after he finished it. Even While better than the original, even the rewritten version isn't completely free from it.



** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously.
** The ''extremely'' grimdark setting is so over the top and trying so hard to be "edgy" that it comes off as silly rather than disturbing. The rewrite seems to be very aware of this; it plays a lot of the darkness for BlackComedy and NarmCharm instead.

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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. \n Jesus actually lampshades it in the rewrite.
** The ''extremely'' grimdark setting is so over the top and trying so hard to be "edgy" that it comes off as silly rather than disturbing. The silly; this is probably why the rewrite seems to be very aware of this; it plays a lot of the darkness for BlackComedy and NarmCharm instead.NarmCharm.
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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously.

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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously.
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** "Remember kids, Islam is bad and if you're a Muslim, you should feel bad!" Yes it's an [[StealthParody intentional]] SpoofAesop and PlayedForLaughs, but ''come on''.

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** "Remember kids, Islam is bad and if you're a Muslim, you should feel bad!" Yes it's an [[StealthParody intentional]] SpoofAesop and PlayedForLaughs, SpoofAesop, but ''come on''.



** The ''extremely'' grimdark setting is so over-the-top and trying so hard to be "edgy" that it comes off as silly rather than disturbing. The rewrite seems to be very aware of this - it plays a lot of the darkness for BlackComedy and NarmCharm instead.

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** The ''extremely'' grimdark setting is so over-the-top over the top and trying so hard to be "edgy" that it comes off as silly rather than disturbing. The rewrite seems to be very aware of this - this; it plays a lot of the darkness for BlackComedy and NarmCharm instead.
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-->'''Ash''': Heracross! [[spoiler:Your arms are machine guns!]]

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-->'''Ash''': Heracross! [[spoiler:Your [[spoiler:[[MakesSenseInContext Your arms are machine guns!]]
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* ''Fanfic/AshesOfThePast'' is usually good with having its insanely over-the-top events taken seriously by the readers, but one line, said by Ash during his Gym battle with Pryce, really stands out and can result in unintentional laughter, especially if you [[CantUnhearIt read Ash's dialogue in his current dub voice]]:
-->'''Ash''': Heracross! [[spoiler:Your arms are machine guns!]]
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Source? I found it on http://fyeahpokemoncreepypasta.tumblr.com/post/1547415858/the-arms, but not sure if it originated from elsewhere...

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** (not from Retsupurae) "The Arms" is a [[VideoGame/PokemonRubyAndSapphire Pokemon Emerald]] pasta that starts with the player meeting the Elite Four as they run out of a portal that appeared for no reason. They tell you about how the titular arms killed their Pokemon, and Drake even implies that he will commit suicide due to all this ("I have nothing left. Farewell."). Fair enough. The player walks through this portal... And then there's ''this'':
--> "The room within the teleporter looked like what tvtropes.org refers to as a “{{womb level}}”[...]"

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it.

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* The original version of ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it several years after he finished it. Even the rewritten version isn't completely free from it.



** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. The rewrite actually [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this.

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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. seriously.
** The ''extremely'' grimdark setting is so over-the-top and trying so hard to be "edgy" that it comes off as silly rather than disturbing.
The rewrite actually [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this.seems to be very aware of this - it plays a lot of the darkness for BlackComedy and NarmCharm instead.
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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the ludicrous over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it.

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the ludicrous silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it.



** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant StrawCharacter archetypes that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. The rewrite actually [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this.

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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant StrawCharacter archetypes [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. The rewrite actually [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this.
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** "Remember kids, Islam is bad and if you're a Muslim, you should feel bad" Yes it's an [[StealthParody intentional]] SpoofAesop and PlayedForLaughs, but ''come on''.
** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant StrawCharacter archetypes that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously.

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** "Remember kids, Islam is bad and if you're a Muslim, you should feel bad" bad!" Yes it's an [[StealthParody intentional]] SpoofAesop and PlayedForLaughs, but ''come on''.
** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant StrawCharacter archetypes that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. The rewrite actually [[LampshadeHanging lampshades]] this.

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the ludicrous over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm and replaces it with NarmCharm instead. And sometimes, the rewrite even [[BlackComedy embraces the more silly elements]].

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the ludicrous over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm and replaces it with NarmCharm instead. And sometimes, the rewrite even [[BlackComedy embraces the more silly elements]].it.


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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant StrawCharacter archetypes that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously.
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** "[[BreakingTheFourthWall Remember kids]], [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop Islam is bad]] and if you're a Muslim, [[AndThatsTerrible you should feel bad!]]" Yes it's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] and PlayedForLaughs, but ''come on''.

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** "[[BreakingTheFourthWall Remember kids]], [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop "Remember kids, Islam is bad]] bad and if you're a Muslim, [[AndThatsTerrible you should feel bad!]]" bad" Yes it's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] an [[StealthParody intentional]] SpoofAesop and PlayedForLaughs, but ''come on''.
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** "[[BreakingTheFourthWall Remember kids]], [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop Islam is bad]] and if you're a Muslim, [[AndThatsTerrible you should feel bad!]]" Yes it's [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] and PlayedForLaughs, but ''come on''.
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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the ludicrous over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm and replaces it with NarmCharm instead. And sometimes, the rewrite even [[BlackComedy embraces the more silly elements]].

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the ludicrous over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author declared it an OldShame and decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm and replaces it with NarmCharm instead. And sometimes, the rewrite even [[BlackComedy embraces the more silly elements]].
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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm. [[SelfDeprecation And sometimes]], the rewrite even [[BlackComedy embraces it]].

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly ludicrous over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm. [[SelfDeprecation narm and replaces it with NarmCharm instead. And sometimes]], sometimes, the rewrite even [[BlackComedy embraces it]].the more silly elements]].
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* In the otherwise sad final chapter of the ''{{Franchise/Digimon}}'' fanfic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/685662/38/Don-t-fall-asleep Don't Fall Asleep]]'', [[spoiler: Alice is killed by the fusion of MoonMilleniummon and Dark Ryo in front of the heroes]]. Unfortunately, their YouMonster reactions are... ''unimpressive'':
-->'''Female Tai''': "You worse [[RougeAnglesofSatin then]] any monster on television!"

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* In the otherwise sad final chapter of the ''{{Franchise/Digimon}}'' fanfic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/685662/38/Don-t-fall-asleep Don't Fall Asleep]]'', [[spoiler: Alice is killed by the fusion of MoonMilleniummon [=MoonMilleniummon=] and Dark Ryo in front of the heroes]]. Unfortunately, their YouMonster reactions are... ''unimpressive'':
-->'''Female Tai''': "You worse [[RougeAnglesofSatin [[RougeAnglesOfSatin then]] any monster on television!" television!"
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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm.

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help. The original in particular was so narmy that the author decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm. [[SelfDeprecation And sometimes]], the rewrite even [[BlackComedy embraces it]].

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help.
** The story is being revised in order to fix some of the Narm.

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* ''FanFic/SonicXDarkChaos'' has quite a lot, from the silly over-the-top DarkerAndEdgier setting to the various references to ''TeamFortress2'' and [[MemeticMutation Internet memes]]. The overuse of Bible references doesn't help.
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help. The story is being revised original in order to fix some of particular was so narmy that the Narm.author decided to completely rewrite it, and the rewrite removes most (if not all) the narm.
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* In the otherwise sad final chapter of the ''Franchise/Digimon'' fanfic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/685662/38/Don-t-fall-asleep Don't Fall Asleep]]'', [[spoiler: Alice is killed by the fusion of MoonMilleniummon and Dark Ryo in front of the heroes]]. Unfortunately, their YouMonster reactions are... ''unimpressive'':

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* In the otherwise sad final chapter of the ''Franchise/Digimon'' ''{{Franchise/Digimon}}'' fanfic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/685662/38/Don-t-fall-asleep Don't Fall Asleep]]'', [[spoiler: Alice is killed by the fusion of MoonMilleniummon and Dark Ryo in front of the heroes]]. Unfortunately, their YouMonster reactions are... ''unimpressive'':
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* In the otherwise sad final chapter of the ''Franchise/Digimon'' fanfic ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/685662/38/Don-t-fall-asleep Don't Fall Asleep]]'', [[spoiler: Alice is killed by the fusion of MoonMilleniummon and Dark Ryo in front of the heroes]]. Unfortunately, their YouMonster reactions are... ''unimpressive'':
-->'''Female Tai''': "You worse [[RougeAnglesofSatin then]] any monster on television!"
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* A PapaLouieArcade fanfiction gives us this:

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* A PapaLouieArcade ''VideoGame/PapaLouieArcade'' fanfiction gives us this:

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* Dakari-King Mykan:
** Several things in ''FanFic/TheEndOfEnds'', though what takes the cake is [[spoiler:Beast Boy's tombstone]] saying: "Driven insane by the negligence of humanity and fate", as it sounds less dramatic and more like something out of a SoBadItsGood VideoGame/HalfLife fanfic.
** In ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic III]]'', [[spoiler: Twilight's death]] is presumably supposed to be a TearJerker moment, and is built up to be tragic. So naturally, Lightning responds thusly.
--> "And he threw his head high up into the air and let out [[SkywardScream a very loud and mournful NEIGH]]… just like the pony he was."




* In ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic III]]'', [[spoiler: Twilight's death]] is presumably supposed to be a TearJerker moment, and is built up to be tragic. So naturally, Lightning responds thusly.
--> "And he threw his head high up into the air and let out [[SkywardScream a very loud and mournful NEIGH]]… just like the pony he was."
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* In ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic III]]'', [[spoiler: Twilight's death]] is presumably supposed to be a TearJerker moment, and is built up to be a tragic moment. So naturally, Lightning responds thusly.

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* In ''[[FanFic/MyLittleUnicorn My Brave Pony: Star Fleet Magic III]]'', [[spoiler: Twilight's death]] is presumably supposed to be a TearJerker moment, and is built up to be a tragic moment.tragic. So naturally, Lightning responds thusly.
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-->'''Ron:''' ''I'm evoking pureblood law so you mudblood can get down on your knees and attend to my needs now, the half blood can have the pleasure of watching.''

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-->'''Ron:''' ''I'm ''[[CrossesTheLineTwice I'm evoking pureblood law so you mudblood can get down on your knees and attend to my needs now, the half blood can have the pleasure of watching.'']]''
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* The bondage!Ron scene in ''More Important Things'' is ''meant'' to be shocking and show us just how bad the Voldemort-ruled wizarding world is, but it's hard to take it seriously when RonTheDeathEater (who at this point is leading a pair of naked women on leashes like something from ''Literature/{{Gor}}'') might as well be [[DastardlyWhiplash twirling his moustache]]:
-->'''Ron:''' ''I'm evoking pureblood law so you mudblood can get down on your knees and attend to my needs now, the half blood can have the pleasure of watching.''

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