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30th Nov '16 10:08:08 AM FF32
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* Throughout the ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'' fic ''RespawnOfTheDead'', the Soldier goes steadily insane as he dodges Medic's attempts to give him medication for his schizophrenia. As a result of this, his shovel ends up talking to him and making his behavior more and more paranoid. This actually manages to be quite creepy... before it quickly barrels into the ridiculous, as the shovel starts to [[spoiler:hit on Soldier, and he eventually [[CargoShip has sex with it]].]] While it's obvious that this was intended to be [[{{Squick}} disgusting]] and disturbing, the whole situation is so mind-bendingly silly that it's hard to take it seriously. Trying not to think too hard about how it would be physically possible (which is a funny thought in and of itself), let's put it bluntly - try and say "[[spoiler:He fucked a shovel]]" while still keeping a straight face. Made even funnier by Soldier asking the shovel [[spoiler:if it was a boy shovel or a girl shovel, just so he could avoid being gay. With a ''shovel''.]]

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* Throughout the ''VideoGame/TeamFortress2'' fic ''RespawnOfTheDead'', ''FanFic/RespawnOfTheDead'', the Soldier goes steadily insane as he dodges Medic's attempts to give him medication for his schizophrenia. As a result of this, his shovel ends up talking to him and making his behavior more and more paranoid. This actually manages to be quite creepy... before it quickly barrels into the ridiculous, as the shovel starts to [[spoiler:hit on Soldier, and he eventually [[CargoShip has sex with it]].]] While it's obvious that this was intended to be [[{{Squick}} disgusting]] and disturbing, the whole situation is so mind-bendingly silly that it's hard to take it seriously. Trying not to think too hard about how it would be physically possible (which is a funny thought in and of itself), let's put it bluntly - try and say "[[spoiler:He fucked a shovel]]" while still keeping a straight face. Made even funnier by Soldier asking the shovel [[spoiler:if it was a boy shovel or a girl shovel, just so he could avoid being gay. With a ''shovel''.]]



** ''VideoGame/SonicExe'', which is now known to be a ClicheStorm of creepypasta points, such as noting when something looked "hyper-realistic," the narrator noting things to the exact number of seconds they occured in, and comparing an EvilLaugh to... Kefka's. In addition, there's the narrator listing up Sonic characters that died in the game alongside his actual friend, and in the end, [[spoiler:he's confronted by a Sonic.exe ''plushie'']].

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** ''VideoGame/SonicExe'', which is now known to be a ClicheStorm of creepypasta points, such as noting when something looked "hyper-realistic," the narrator noting things to the exact number of seconds they occured occurred in, and comparing an EvilLaugh to... Kefka's. In addition, there's the narrator listing up Sonic characters that died in the game alongside his actual friend, and in the end, [[spoiler:he's confronted by a Sonic.exe ''plushie'']].
6th Oct '16 8:25:47 PM ImperialMajestyXO
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12033847/1/Warriors-Rewritten Warriors Rewritten]]'', the BigBad starts singing "Eenie meeny mini mo". It's meant to be creepily dissonant, but it just comes off as hilarious.

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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12033847/1/Warriors-Rewritten Warriors Rewritten]]'', the BigBad starts singing "Eenie meeny mini mo". It's meant to be [[IronicNurseryTune creepily dissonant, dissonant]], but it just comes off as hilarious.hilarious.
3rd Aug '16 3:44:07 PM IchigoMontoya
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11573965/1/Insomniac Insomniac]]'', a character just randomly runs into the lake and drowns herself. [BigLippedAlligatorMoment There's no foreshadowing of this, no emotional reaction by other characters; the act has absolutely nothing to do with previous events or characterization.]] It happens solely because the author wanted to shoehorn in a 'tragic' ending.

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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11573965/1/Insomniac Insomniac]]'', a character just randomly runs into the lake and drowns herself. [BigLippedAlligatorMoment [[BigLippedAlligatorMoment There's no foreshadowing of this, no emotional reaction by other characters; the act has absolutely nothing to do with previous events or characterization.]] It happens solely because the author wanted to shoehorn in a 'tragic' ending.
3rd Aug '16 3:42:58 PM IchigoMontoya
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11573965/1/Insomniac Insomniac]]'', a character just randomly runs into the lake and drowns herself. There's no foreshadowing of this, no emotional reaction by other characters; the act has absolutely nothing to do with previous events or characterization. It happens solely because the author wanted to shoehorn in a 'tragic' ending.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tfbw1y_mvA This]] [[IncestYayShipping Elsa/Anna]] [[Main/MikuMikuDance MMD]] ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' video set to "Love Me Harder" has an unintentionally hilarious moment where Anna as a teenager pounces Elsa and screams "Touch Me, Elsa!". The slap Elsa gives her otherwise is the icing on the cake. The scene is really awkward and yet sad at the same time due to how much Anna craves her sister's attention (both romantically and in a general sense). The MMD in general suffers from making Elsa look perpetually like she's angry or that she always has bedroom eyes as well, which is also hilarious because it contrasts with Elsa's canon persona so hard.

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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11573965/1/Insomniac Insomniac]]'', a character just randomly runs into the lake and drowns herself. [BigLippedAlligatorMoment There's no foreshadowing of this, no emotional reaction by other characters; the act has absolutely nothing to do with previous events or characterization. characterization.]] It happens solely because the author wanted to shoehorn in a 'tragic' ending.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tfbw1y_mvA This]] [[IncestYayShipping Elsa/Anna]] [[Main/MikuMikuDance MMD]] ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' video set to [[Music/ArianaGrande "Love Me Harder" Harder"]] has an unintentionally hilarious moment where Anna as a teenager pounces Elsa and screams "Touch Me, Elsa!". The slap Elsa gives her otherwise is the icing on the cake. The scene is really awkward and yet sad at the same time due to how much Anna craves her sister's attention (both romantically and in a general sense). The MMD in general suffers from making Elsa look perpetually like she's angry or that she always has bedroom eyes as well, which is also hilarious because it contrasts with Elsa's canon persona so hard.
11th Jul '16 1:24:32 AM Argon2
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* In ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12033847/1/Warriors-Rewritten Warriors Rewritten]]'', the BigBad starts singing "Eenie meeny mini mo". It's meant to be creepily dissonant, but it just comes off as hilarious.
8th Jul '16 7:31:27 AM Pichu-kun
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* A ''BabysittersClub'' fanfic ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/487459/1/Fighting_to_Live this one, to be exact]]) features this gem: "My heart is failuring me!"

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* A ''BabysittersClub'' ''Literature/TheBabysittersClub'' fanfic ([[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/487459/1/Fighting_to_Live this one, to be exact]]) features this gem: "My heart is failuring me!"


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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3tfbw1y_mvA This]] [[IncestYayShipping Elsa/Anna]] [[Main/MikuMikuDance MMD]] ''Disney/{{Frozen}}'' video set to "Love Me Harder" has an unintentionally hilarious moment where Anna as a teenager pounces Elsa and screams "Touch Me, Elsa!". The slap Elsa gives her otherwise is the icing on the cake. The scene is really awkward and yet sad at the same time due to how much Anna craves her sister's attention (both romantically and in a general sense). The MMD in general suffers from making Elsa look perpetually like she's angry or that she always has bedroom eyes as well, which is also hilarious because it contrasts with Elsa's canon persona so hard.
10th May '16 8:38:44 AM EricNeoMatrix
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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. And Muhammed's [[OverlyLongName full name]] is even more narmy, simply due to its shameless AsLongAsItSoundsForeign and the fact that it ''uses the names of real-life Al Qaeda leaders''.
** The ''extremely'' grimdark setting is so over the top and trying so hard to be "edgy" that it comes off as silly; this is probably why the rewrite plays a lot of the darkness for BlackComedy and NarmCharm.

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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. And Muhammed's [[OverlyLongName full name]] is even more narmy, simply due to its shameless AsLongAsItSoundsForeign and the fact that it ''uses the names of real-life Al Qaeda leaders''.
Beelzebub would be a lot scarier as a villain if he didn't call himself ''Mister Fudgeicle''.
** The ''extremely'' extremely grimdark setting in general is so over the top and trying so hard to be "edgy" that it comes off as silly; this is probably why the rewrite plays a lot most of the darkness it for BlackComedy and NarmCharm.
13th Apr '16 3:22:00 PM KamenRiderOokalf
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--> "And he threw his head high up into the air and let out [[SkywardScream a very loud and mournful NEIGH]] just like the pony he was."

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--> ---> "And he threw his head high up into the air and let out [[SkywardScream a very loud and mournful NEIGH]] just like the pony he was."
18th Feb '16 11:19:32 AM EricNeoMatrix
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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. Jesus actually lampshades it in the rewrite.

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** Allysion and Muhammad are such blatant anti-religious [[StrawCharacter Straw Characters]] that it's difficult to take their depictions seriously. Jesus actually lampshades it in And Muhammed's [[OverlyLongName full name]] is even more narmy, simply due to its shameless AsLongAsItSoundsForeign and the rewrite.fact that it ''uses the names of real-life Al Qaeda leaders''.
14th Feb '16 1:41:52 AM bwburke94
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** Richard crying [[PleaseWakeUp "Pah pah, up pah pah, up"]] when the DiabolusExMachina has left Snape chained to the floor becomes funny rather than heartrending for three reasons: Firstly, he's ''completely unharmed''. Secondly, it's hard not to hear it as the "oompa-oompa-oompa-pa" trombone from TheMusicMan. Thirdly, it's more than a bit reminiscent of the "Profesor [=McGoogle=] did a spell so that we were all chained up" scene in ''MyImmortal''.

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** Richard crying [[PleaseWakeUp "Pah pah, up pah pah, up"]] when the DiabolusExMachina has left Snape chained to the floor becomes funny rather than heartrending for three reasons: Firstly, he's ''completely unharmed''. Secondly, it's hard not to hear it as the "oompa-oompa-oompa-pa" trombone from TheMusicMan. Thirdly, it's more than a bit reminiscent of the "Profesor [=McGoogle=] did a spell so that we were all chained up" scene in ''MyImmortal''.''Fanfic/MyImmortal''.
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