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* InterspeciesRomance: Cesei and Koral, given that she's a raptereon and he's, at the very least, a hybrid.
** Also seems to be rife in the desert communities.
* JerkassGod: Lorric.
** Also seems to be rife in the desert communities.
* JerkassGod: Lorric.
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* InterspeciesRomance: InterspeciesRomance:
** Cesei and Koral, given that she's a raptereon and he's, at the very least, a hybrid.
**Also seems Seems to be rife in the desert communities.
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* SnakePeople: The Sssstamne. Who also...
* SssssnakeTalk: Any hissing sound is denoted by three S's.
* SssssnakeTalk: Any hissing sound is denoted by three S's.
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* SnakePeople: The Sssstamne. Who also...
* SssssnakeTalk:[[SssssnakeTalk Any hissing sound is denoted by three S's.]]
* SssssnakeTalk:
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: How Koral gains his status as the Rogue King.
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* CoveredWithScars: It's mentioned a numbers of times that Veng has a lot of scars.
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* CoveredWithScars: It's mentioned a numbers number of times that Veng has a lot of scars.numerous scars thanks to having to constant fight for his life.
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* AfterActionPatchup: When Veng is attacked and injured whilst trying to save Lasil, she's one the who tends to the wound.
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* AfterActionPatchup: When Veng is attacked and injured whilst trying to save Lasil, she's one the who tends to the wound.wound and then attempts to seduce him. [[spoiler: It doesn't work as planned]].
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* AfterActionPatchup: When Veng is attacked and injured whilst trying to save Lasil, she's one the who tends to the wound.
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* CoveredWithScars: It's mentioned a numbers of times that Veng has a lot of scars.
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* MotherlyScientist: Amelia not only genetically makes Koral, but also gives birth to and raises him. Literally saying "He is my son".
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* TheGreatWall: Two walls hem in the continents desert, designed to keep out the natives.
