History Literature / TheMovolreilenSaga

30th Apr '16 5:36:47 PM nombretomado
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** The order of the first five Goddesses of the Nileniran Cycle is a ShoutOut to CaptainPlanet, with "Souls" instead of "Heart".

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** The order of the first five Goddesses of the Nileniran Cycle is a ShoutOut to CaptainPlanet, ''WesternAnimation/{{Captain Planet|and the Planeteers}}'', with "Souls" instead of "Heart".
23rd Feb '15 10:02:19 PM PaulA
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** A long line of pirates named "Roblos" is a reference to ThePrincessBride, specifically the Dread Pirate Roberts.

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** A long line of pirates named "Roblos" is a reference to ThePrincessBride, specifically the Dread Pirate Roberts.Roberts in ''Film/ThePrincessBride''.
3rd Jul '13 5:02:06 AM SeptimusHeap
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* InstantPlunderJustAddPirates : The weak central government of Cusubolm causes a large number of powerful pirate clans to thrive.



* {{Pirate}}: Common in Cusubolm.

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* {{Pirate}}: Common in Cusubolm.The weak central government of Cusubolm causes a large number of powerful pirate clans to thrive.
22nd Feb '13 11:43:26 AM SeptimusHeap
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* AntiHero : Relbacia eln Roblos ([[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type IV-V]]). Fourth Roblos could probably be considered at least Type III for being OK with his sister's [[KickTheDog dog-kicking]].
16th Dec '12 9:00:43 AM Makoyi
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* CapitalCity : Nilenbay for Nilenira
4th Dec '12 11:39:56 AM nombretomado
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* CrystalDragonJesus : The "Scarlet Circle God" Religion of Cusubolm is actually based on [[UsefulNotes/CollegiateAmericanFootball Ohio State Football]] and the Vecendish Religion is based on [[ClevelandRocks Cleveland Sports]].

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* CrystalDragonJesus : The "Scarlet Circle God" Religion of Cusubolm is actually based on [[UsefulNotes/CollegiateAmericanFootball Ohio State Football]] and the Vecendish Religion is based on [[ClevelandRocks [[UsefulNotes/{{Cleveland}} Cleveland Sports]].



* SignificantAnagram : Cusubolm = Columbus and Vecendall = [[ClevelandRocks Cleveland]]. Sports fans may notice something familiar about the religions of these countries.

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* SignificantAnagram : Cusubolm = Columbus and Vecendall = [[ClevelandRocks Cleveland]].UsefulNotes/{{Cleveland}}. Sports fans may notice something familiar about the religions of these countries.
4th Nov '12 3:07:00 PM TVRulezAgain
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* EvilAlbino : Dralnea ler Reltrea appears to be a CompleteMonster at first, as her first act in the story is killing a lower-class girl for [[DisproportionateRetribution not saluting her]]. [[spoiler: This will be subverted in later chapters.]]

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* EvilAlbino : Dralnea ler Reltrea appears to be a CompleteMonster villain at first, as her first act in the story is killing a lower-class girl for [[DisproportionateRetribution not saluting her]]. [[spoiler: This will be subverted in later chapters.]]
14th Apr '12 3:18:54 AM movie007
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[[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2971550/1/The_Movolreilen_Saga The Movolreilen Saga]] is a fantasy story written by Roberts2028 on fictionpress.com concerning five countries: [[{{Matriarchy}} The Nation of Nilenira]], [[TheKingdom The Kingdom of Vecendall]], [[PeoplesRepublicOfTyranny The Confederation of Beosachuth]], [[TheKingdom The Maerplion Empire]], and [[TheChurch The Kingdom of Cusubolm]].

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!! The Movolreilen Saga Contains Examples Of:

* ActionGirl : [[AmazonBrigade Pretty much every female character from Nilenira]]. Tends to happen when you combine TheSpartanWay and {{Matriarchy}}
** [[PirateGirl Relbacia and Nitsircia eln Roblos]], likely due to their Nileniran mother.
* AntiHero : Relbacia eln Roblos ([[SlidingScaleOfAntiHeroes Type IV-V]]). Fourth Roblos could probably be considered at least Type III for being OK with his sister's [[KickTheDog dog-kicking]].
* ArcNumber : The number nine is important in Nileniran culture, due to their nine goddesses.
* AsskickingEqualsAuthority : The appointment of High Commanders in Nilenira is supposed to be this, but tend to be more based on winning the favor of powerful families. However, this trope is still played straight in Nilenira due to the fact that inheritence only goes to girls who have completed the TrainingFromHell.
* AuthorAvatar : Nehpeus iln Roblos, the youngest and least important member of the Roblos Clan.
* BlackSheep : Dilsinet ler Paldrea. Also, Jirdrea's sister Belisdrea.
* CapitalCity : Nilenbay for Nilenira
* ChurchMilitant : The Holy Soldiers of the Scarlet Circle God.
* CrystalDragonJesus : The "Scarlet Circle God" Religion of Cusubolm is actually based on [[UsefulNotes/CollegiateAmericanFootball Ohio State Football]] and the Vecendish Religion is based on [[ClevelandRocks Cleveland Sports]].
* CloudCuckoolander : High Commander Dilsinet ler Paldrea.
* CurseCutShort : Jirdrea's Grandmother is about to use a [[CountryMatters certain word]] when suddenly a bell rings.
* EarlyBirdCameo : Sir Benlor Mesalgil is mentioned in the first chapter. [[LawOfConservationOfDetail It doesn't even warrant a spoiler to say he'll be important later.]]
* ElementalEmbodiment : Several of Nilenira's Goddesses (See FantasyPantheon below).
* EvilAlbino : Dralnea ler Reltrea appears to be a CompleteMonster at first, as her first act in the story is killing a lower-class girl for [[DisproportionateRetribution not saluting her]]. [[spoiler: This will be subverted in later chapters.]]
* ExactWords : Relbacia invokes this when she promises to let the crew of a merchant ship that she and her brother capture live. [[spoiler: She promises that she will not kill them, but reminds them that ordering them overboard will cause the water to kill them, not her.]]
* FalseFlagOperation : [[InvokedTrope Invoked]]. Sir Benlor Mesalgil [[GeneralRipper believes]] that the group referred to as "Benrothor's Legion" is really a Nileniran military force pretending to be Beosach.
* FamilyThemeNaming : There are Four Robloses in a row in the Roblos Clan of Pirates, and, in Nilenira, there are several Jirdreas in Jirdrea's line, along with several Dilsinets in Rilsent and Dilsinet's line.
* FantasyPantheon:
** In Nilenira:
*** Nilensent, [[DishingOutDirt Goddess of Earth]]
*** Gilserea, [[PlayingWithFire Goddess of Fire]]
*** Prelsient, [[BlowYouAway Goddess of Wind]]
*** Tarilsea, [[MakingASplash Goddess of Water]]
*** Felnisent, [[TheGrimReaper Goddess of Souls]]
*** Jirdrisent, [[TopGod Goddess of Justice]]
*** Bilasent, [[LoveGoddess Goddess of Desire]]
*** Relterea, [[GreenThumb Goddess of the Harvest]]
*** Desarlea, [[WarGod Goddess of War]]
*** In Addition, there is the [[GodOfEvil Demon Lord]], but isn't considered an actual deity.
* GeneralRipper : Sir Benlor Mesalgil [[HeManWomanHater really doesn't like]] Nilenirans
* GirlOnGirlIsHot : Jorslor heard some "intriguing" rumors about Nileniran women.
* TheGloriousWarOfSisterlyRivalry : [[HolierThanThou Supreme Commander Rilsent]] and her little sister, [[CloudCuckoolander High Commander Dilsinet]].
* TheHero : Jirdrea ler Bilandra, of her storyline.
* IAmXSonOfY : Nilenirans uses matronymics instead of true last names (For example, "Jirdrea ler Bilandra" means "Jirdrea, daughter of Bilandra").
** Cusubolmis use [[{{Patronymic}} patronymics]], with "iln" meaning "son of" and "eln" meaning "daughter of".
* InstantPlunderJustAddPirates : The weak central government of Cusubolm causes a large number of powerful pirate clans to thrive.
* KickTheDog : Relbacia eln Roblos murdering the merchant crew in the beginning of Chapter 2.
* KlingonScientistsGetNoRespect : Any girl that doesn't finish her TrainingFromHell is looked down on by her peers and, in upper-class families, tend to get disowned by their mothers.
* KnightTemplar : Ernalk Osarbin has yet to appear, but his actions forty years before the story in trying to eliminate the Cusubolmi pirates turned the Roblos pirate clan into in-universe [[DracoInLeatherPants Dracos in Leather Pants]] and Osarbin into TheDreaded in Cusubolm, which suggests this trope.
* {{Matriarchy}}: Nilenira is the "Patriarchy Flip" variety.
* OneSteveLimit : Averted. The name "Velsara" is very common in Vecendall.
* {{Pirate}}: Common in Cusubolm.
* PirateGirl: Relbacia eln Roblos, along with her sister Nitsircia.
* PrecisionFStrike : Paldrea delivers one to her daughter [[BlackSheep Dilsinet]].
* RedBaron : Nileniran High Commanders are referred to as [[TheMagnificent "Your Ferocity"]].
* RedOniBlueOni : Dilsinet (Red), Rilsent (Blue).
* ReligiousRussianRoulette : Fourth Roblos prays to both his father's Scarlet Circle God and his mother's Nileniran Goddesses, to be safe.
* RetiredBadass : Jirdrea's grandmother, [[FamilyThemeNaming Jirdrea]], and High Commander Filanea. Both are war heroes from the Second Maerplio War (And, for Jirdrea's Grandmother, the Third Maerplio War).
* {{Room 101}} : Fort Ernalk
* SacrificialLamb : Nelsildra ler Tirsent's sister, Ralinea.
* ShiningCity : Nilenbay is considered to be this by some people, but is considered a WretchedHive by others.
* ShoutOut :
** Nilenirans use [[MemeticMutation Over Nine Thousand]] in a lot of their exclamations.
** The order of the first five Goddesses of the Nileniran Cycle is a ShoutOut to CaptainPlanet, with "Souls" instead of "Heart".
** A long line of pirates named "Roblos" is a reference to ThePrincessBride, specifically the Dread Pirate Roberts.
* SiblingYinYang : Supreme Commander Rilsent is TheFundamentalist with NoSenseOfHumor, while her younger sister, High Commander Dilsinet, is a CloudCuckooLander with a hint of DeadpanSnarker.
* SignificantAnagram : Cusubolm = Columbus and Vecendall = [[ClevelandRocks Cleveland]]. Sports fans may notice something familiar about the religions of these countries.
** Also, Movolreilen = Monroeville, a small town in Ohio where the author grew up, but this is more of an EasterEgg than a "Significant" Anagram.
* TheSpartanWay : Nileniran training takes up every girl's second cycle (ages 9-18) and is so difficult, only about 5 in every hundred girls complete it (though, unlike most examples, failure is usually not fatal, [[KlingonScientistsGetNoRespect though you lose most of your social standing.]])
* ATankardOfMooseUrine : Nileniran alcohol, to non-Nilenirans.
* TransparentCloset : Talisent ler Geltrinea, Jirdrea's friend, is obviously attracted to her.
* TrytoFitThatOnABusinessCard : All of the High Commanders of Nilenira have rather long titles, but the Supreme Commander takes the cake: Her Grand Ferocity, Supreme Commander Rilsent ler Paldrea ler Freldea ler Rilsea ler Dilsinet ler Tilnidea ler Paldrinet ler Rilsent ler Nilsinet ler Dilsinet ler Drelsea ler Freldea ler Dilsinet Vecendishbane ler Jirsent ler Paldrea, Defender of Nilenbay and all of Nilenira, Sword of Prelsient, Goddess of Wind, of Nilensent, Goddess of Earth, of Gilserea, Goddess of Fire, of Tarilsea, Goddess of Water, of Felnisent, Goddess of Souls, of Jirdrisent, Goddess of Justice, of Bilasent, Goddess of Desire, of Relterea, Goddess of the Harvest, of Desarlea, Goddess of War, and of the Nileniran people, Queen of Nilenira, and Commander of all Nileniran armies and navies. (105 Words, according to Works Word Processor)
* WideEyedIdealist: Talisent ler Geltrinea and Nitsircia eln Roblos
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