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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Wren's parents lost her brother years prior during the {{mystical plague}} in the Year of Darkness. It left both wounded, hating magic as the cause of the plague, and thus witches as welll due to this.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Although [[AlwaysIdenticalTwins identical]], Tamsin and Marlena were very different otherwise. Tamsin is the most powerful witch in her generation, able to do spells with ease which exhaust others. Marlena though was very weak, and doing even simple spells put her in the infirmary, even into a coma. She grew to hate Tamsin for accidentally killing a friend of hers. Tamsin though had caused this as a result of a spell to save Marlena because of how much she loved her, which caused her to risk everything.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Although [[AlwaysIdenticalTwins identical]], Tamsin and Marlena were very different otherwise. Tamsin is the most powerful witch in her generation, able to do spells with ease which exhaust others. Marlena though was very weak, and doing even simple spells put her in the infirmary, even into a coma. She grew to hate Tamsin for accidentally killing a friend of hers. Tamsin though had caused this as a result of a spell to save Marlena because of how much she loved her, which caused her to risk everything.
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* OutlivingOnesOffspring: Wren's parents lost her brother years prior during the {{mystical plague}} in the Year of Darkness. It left both wounded, hating magic as the cause of the plague, and thus witches as welll well due to this.
* PolarOppositeTwins: Although [[AlwaysIdenticalTwins identical]], Tamsin and Marlena were very different otherwise. Tamsin is the most powerful witch in her generation, able to do spells with ease which exhaust others. Marlena though was very weak, and doing even simple spells put her in the infirmary, even into a coma.She [[spoiler:She grew to hate Tamsin for accidentally killing a friend of hers. Tamsin though had caused this as a result of a spell to save Marlena because of how much she loved her, which caused her to risk everything. ]]
* PolarOppositeTwins: Although [[AlwaysIdenticalTwins identical]], Tamsin and Marlena were very different otherwise. Tamsin is the most powerful witch in her generation, able to do spells with ease which exhaust others. Marlena though was very weak, and doing even simple spells put her in the infirmary, even into a coma.
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* ShoutOut: There are references to classic fairy tales. One is of a wicked stepmother who had a nymph cast a spell to poison a golden apple she wanted for her stepdaughter (something like ''Literature/SnowWhite'') but it backfired, poisoning an entire apple crop. Wren meets a toad who claims he's a lord turned into this by a witch, with a kiss turning him back (''Literature/TheFrogPrince''). It turns out he's a sprite who wants to trick her though, and if she kissed him ''she'd'' turn into a toad too. There's also mention of a creature called a "[[Literature/Rumpelstiltskin stiltzkin]]" that girls can trade their names for the ability to turn straw into gold.
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* ShoutOut: There are references to classic fairy tales. One is of a wicked stepmother who had a nymph cast a spell to poison a golden apple she wanted for her stepdaughter (something like ''Literature/SnowWhite'') but it backfired, poisoning an entire apple crop. Wren meets a toad who claims he's a lord turned into this by a witch, with a kiss turning him back (''Literature/TheFrogPrince''). It turns out he's a sprite who wants to trick her though, and if she kissed him ''she'd'' turn into a toad too. There's also mention of a creature called a "[[Literature/Rumpelstiltskin "[[Literature/{{Rumpelstiltskin}} stiltzkin]]" that girls can trade their names for the ability to turn straw into gold.
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* ShoutOut: There are references to classic fairy tales. One is of a wicked stepmother who had a nymph cast a spell to poison a golden apple she wanted for her stepdaughter (something like ''Literature/SnowWhite'') but it backfired, poisoning an entire apple crop. Wren meets a toad who claims he's a lord turned into this by a witch, with a kiss turning him back (''Literature/TheFrogPrince''). It turns out he's a sprite who wants to trick her though, and if she kissed him ''she'd'' turn into a toad too. There's also mention of a creature called a "[[Literature/Rumpelstiltskin stiltzkin]]" that girls can trade their names for the ability to turn straw into gold
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* ShoutOut: There are references to classic fairy tales. One is of a wicked stepmother who had a nymph cast a spell to poison a golden apple she wanted for her stepdaughter (something like ''Literature/SnowWhite'') but it backfired, poisoning an entire apple crop. Wren meets a toad who claims he's a lord turned into this by a witch, with a kiss turning him back (''Literature/TheFrogPrince''). It turns out he's a sprite who wants to trick her though, and if she kissed him ''she'd'' turn into a toad too. There's also mention of a creature called a "[[Literature/Rumpelstiltskin stiltzkin]]" that girls can trade their names for the ability to turn straw into goldgold.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Marlena resented Tamsin's constant coddling, but never actually revealed this to her. This lead her to push herself further and further until she nearly killed herself trying to prove she didn't need Tamsin, which in turn lead Tamsin to cast dark magic to try and save her, [[spoiler:a process that killed Amma, nearly killed Marlena, and laid a curse on the land]].
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Marlena resented Tamsin's constant coddling, but never actually revealed this to her. This lead led her to push herself further and further until she nearly killed herself trying to prove she didn't need Tamsin, which in turn lead led Tamsin to cast dark magic to try and save her, [[spoiler:a process that killed Amma, nearly killed Marlena, and laid a curse on the land]].
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Tamsin, one of the two heroines, falls for the other, Wren (a redhead). In fact, one of the first things she does with her store of love is note how beautiful Wren's hair is.
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* RedheadsAreRavishing: Tamsin, one of the two heroines, falls for the other, Wren (a redhead). In fact, one of the first things she does with her store of love is note how beautiful Wren's hair is.
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* HeroesLoveRedheads: Tamsin, one of the two heroines, falls for the other, Wren (a redhead). In fact, one of the first things she does with her store of love is note how beautiful Wren's hair is.
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* HeroesLoveRedheads: HeroesWantRedheads: Tamsin, one of the two heroines, falls for the other, Wren (a redhead). In fact, one of the first things she does with her store of love is note how beautiful Wren's hair is.
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* FantasticRomance: A romance where one partner is cursed to be unable to love, making it nearly an ImpossibleTask.
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* HeroesWantRedheads: Tamsin, one of the two heroines, falls for the other, Wren (a redhead).
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* HeroesWantRedheads: HeroesLoveRedheads: Tamsin, one of the two heroines, falls for the other, Wren (a redhead).redhead). In fact, one of the first things she does with her store of love is note how beautiful Wren's hair is.
* LoopholeAbuse: [[spoiler:Tamsin's curse was that she could never love, and would have to steal love from others to feel emotions again. However, Wren growing to truly love her gives her a constant supply. It doesn't quite break it, but it does stave off the effects, allowing her to love Wren back.]]
* PoorCommunicationKills: Marlena resented Tamsin's constant coddling, but never actually revealed this to her. This lead her to push herself further and further until she nearly killed herself trying to prove she didn't need Tamsin, which in turn lead Tamsin to cast dark magic to try and save her, [[spoiler:a process that killed Amma, nearly killed Marlena, and laid a curse on the land]].
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* ShoutOut: There are references to classic fairy tales. One is of a wicked stepmother who had a nymph cast a spell to poison a golden apple she wanted for her stepdaughter (something like ''Literature/SnowWhite'') but it backfired, poisoning an entire apple crop. Wren also meets a toad who claims he's a lord turned into this by a witch, with a kiss turning him back (''Literature/TheFrogPrince''). It turns out he's a sprite who wants to trick her though, and if she kissed him ''she'd'' turn into a toad too.
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* ShoutOut: There are references to classic fairy tales. One is of a wicked stepmother who had a nymph cast a spell to poison a golden apple she wanted for her stepdaughter (something like ''Literature/SnowWhite'') but it backfired, poisoning an entire apple crop. Wren also meets a toad who claims he's a lord turned into this by a witch, with a kiss turning him back (''Literature/TheFrogPrince''). It turns out he's a sprite who wants to trick her though, and if she kissed him ''she'd'' turn into a toad too. There's also mention of a creature called a "[[Literature/Rumpelstiltskin stiltzkin]]" that girls can trade their names for the ability to turn straw into gold
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* TwinSwitch: Tamsin and her twin Marlena used to fool people doing this as a joke.
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* TwinSwitch: Tamsin and her twin Marlena used to fool people doing this as a joke. Once their magic manifested, it no longer became possible.
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain:
** Tamsin was expelled from Within on pain of death. She's eventually forced to return.
** [[spoiler:After losing her magic, Marlena chooses to leave Within, even knowing she can never come back.]]
** Tamsin was expelled from Within on pain of death. She's eventually forced to return.
** [[spoiler:After losing her magic, Marlena chooses to leave Within, even knowing she can never come back.]]
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* WizardsLiveLonger: Some of the witches have lived from one to three hundred years, which is not presented as usual.
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* WizardsLiveLonger: Some of the witches have lived from one to three hundred years, which is not presented as usual.unusual.
