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* HeroicAlbino: Zoe calls him "[[PunnyName Al]]".
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he worked with Michaelangelo on the Sistine Chapel and mentions that he's "[[UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]" and [[UndergroundRailroad helped runaway slaves]].
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he worked with Michaelangelo on the Sistine Chapel Art/SistineChapel and mentions that he's "[[UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]" and [[UndergroundRailroad helped runaway slaves]].
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** In the course of the series it is mentioned that [[StanLee with great power comes great responsibility]].
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** In the course of the series it is mentioned that [[StanLee [[Creator/StanLee with great power comes great responsibility]].
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* PsychoExGirlfriend: Latrodecta, who tries to basically torture the protagonist when he won't get back together with her when she cheats on him.
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* PsychoExGirlfriend: Latrodecta, who tries to basically torture the protagonist when he won't get back together with her when she cheats on him.him by ensuring the occurrence of a large, fatal car accident and wants to eventually destroy the universe.
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* BrickJoke: The above-mentioned fossilized footprints.
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* BrickJoke: The above-mentioned fossilized footprints.footprints show up three times, if you count when they were first made. The other two are when the protagonist lives through their discovery.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Al, as he preps his nuclear grenade.
* CrazyPrepared: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] – Being able to go back in time a bit and prepare beforehand, and the necessity of the goals of the plot.
* DeadpanSnarker: Zoe, when she's not raging. The protagonist also gets a few in.
* DeusExMachina: When one of the altnerate protagonists grabs him and saves him from Latrodecta, taking him into the In-Between.
* CrazyPrepared: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] – Being able to go back in time a bit and prepare beforehand, and the necessity of the goals of the plot.
* DeadpanSnarker: Zoe, when she's not raging. The protagonist also gets a few in.
* DeusExMachina: When one of the altnerate protagonists grabs him and saves him from Latrodecta, taking him into the In-Between.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Al, Al contributes some as he preps his nuclear grenade.
* CrazyPrepared: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] – Being able to go back in time a bit and preparebeforehand, and the necessity of the goals of the plot.
beforehand allows this.
* DeadpanSnarker:Zoe, Zoe is one when she's not raging. The protagonist also gets a few in.
* DeusExMachina:When One occurs when one of the altnerate protagonists grabs him and saves him from Latrodecta, taking him into the In-Between.
* CrazyPrepared: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] – Being able to go back in time a bit and prepare
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* DrowningMySorrows: The protagonist, on occasion. This is not recommended for time-travelers, as they can drunkenly travel back in time and then change history and be unable to return to the present—as happens to our hero.
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* DrowningMySorrows: The protagonist, protagonist has been known to do this on occasion. This It is not recommended for time-travelers, as they can drunkenly travel back in time and then change history and be unable to return to the present—as happens to our hero.
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* FieryRedhead: Zoe.Zoe is sassy and has red hair.
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* HeroicAlbino: Zoe calls him "Al".
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* HeroicAlbino: Zoe calls him "Al"."[[PunnyName Al]]".
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* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: For Latrodecta, the protagonist's sociopathic ex-girlfriend, it seems.
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* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: For Latrodecta, the protagonist's sociopathic ex-girlfriend, it seems.seems this is the case. Also implied to have held for the protagonist before the incident that caused his amnesia.
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* MindScrew: Just ''try'' making sense of the plot…
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* MindScrew: Just ''try'' making sense of the plot…plot. Its format (flash fiction contributed to by multiple authors) has a bit to do with this aspect of the story.
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** One of the hero's alternate selves in the In-Between. Notably, he does not merely rehash things the protagonist and audience already know. [[spoiler:A lot of what he said was a lie.]]
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** One of the hero's alternate selves in the In-Between.In-Between serves as one for the protagonist and, indirectly (or directly, depending on how you look at things), the audience. Notably, he does not merely rehash things the protagonist and audience already know. [[spoiler:A lot of what he said was a lie.]]
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* NoNameGiven: The protagonist. Al starts out this way but is given a name out of convenience.
* OntologicalInertia: Present. Used to the protagonists' advantage with respect to winning the lottery.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Zoe kisses the protagonist. [[spoiler:It's actually an AlternateUniverse version of Zoe. Aside from their personalities the main difference between them is the side on which they part their hair.]]
* PlaceBeyondTime: The In-Between.
* PsychoExGirlfriend: Latrodecta.
* OntologicalInertia: Present. Used to the protagonists' advantage with respect to winning the lottery.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: When Zoe kisses the protagonist. [[spoiler:It's actually an AlternateUniverse version of Zoe. Aside from their personalities the main difference between them is the side on which they part their hair.]]
* PlaceBeyondTime: The In-Between.
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* NoNameGiven: The protagonist. NoNameGiven:
** So far, the protagonist has not been named.
** Al starts out thisway way, but is given ends up with a name nickname out of convenience.
* OntologicalInertia: Present.Used It is used to the protagonists' advantage with respect to winning when they play the lottery.
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: WhenZoe [[FieryRedhead Zoe]] kisses the protagonist.protagonist, you know something's off. [[spoiler:It's actually an AlternateUniverse version of Zoe. Aside from their personalities the main difference between them is the side on which they part their hair.]]
* PlaceBeyondTime: TheIn-Between.
In-Between is basically a theater that either exists outside spacetime or in its own alternate universe.
* PsychoExGirlfriend:Latrodecta.Latrodecta, who tries to basically torture the protagonist when he won't get back together with her when she cheats on him.
** So far, the protagonist has not been named.
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** Theprotagonist. Al. Latrodecta.protagonist is a time traveler from the future and has lived through many, many lifetimes.
** Latrodecta is a time traveler from the future and has lived through many, many lifetimes.
** Al is a time traveler from the future, though it's unclear how many lifetimes he's lived through.
** The
** Latrodecta is a time traveler from the future and has lived through many, many lifetimes.
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* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: But of course. There's even [[http://ficly.com/stories/26776 a chapter]] named after the trope, although the main plot point isn't exactly an example of it.
* TrappedInThePast: What happens if you change something significantly enough.
* TrappedInThePast: What happens if you change something significantly enough.
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* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: But of course.course, especially for the protagonist. There's even [[http://ficly.com/stories/26776 a chapter]] named after the trope, although the main plot point isn't exactly an example of it.
* TrappedInThePast:What This happens if you change something significantly enough.enough—say, cussing out your future ex, or assaulting a police officer.
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* YouAreNotAlone: When the protagonist meets Zoe.Zoe, he is the first time traveler she has met.
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-->“Yeah, we have an ex worthy of [[{{Maury}} Maury Povich]],” Me₂ retorted. “What are ''you'' doing here? And why did you stop me?” Me₂ glared at me—that is, the Real Me. “And don’t get me started on ''you''.”
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-->“Yeah, we have an ex worthy of [[{{Maury}} [[Series/{{Maury}} Maury Povich]],” Me₂ retorted. “What are ''you'' doing here? And why did you stop me?” Me₂ glared at me—that is, the Real Me. “And don’t get me started on ''you''.”
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* TheWarOnTerror: Zoe finds out she can travel through time while running for her life on 9/11.
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** The series is named as a ShoutOut to {{Muse}} (who did a song called "Supermassive Black Hole").
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-->My apartment was, as it had been for so long a time, perpetually a mess. My desk was a case in point, littered with various 5D-[=DVD=]s: ''Film/{{Primer}}'', ''Film/{{Millennium}}'', the ''Franchise/{{Terminator}}'' movies (except [[Film/Terminator3RiseOfTheMachines the third]]), the ''Film/BackToTheFuture'' ''Franchise/BackToTheFuture'' trilogy, ''Film/TwelveMonkeys'', ''[[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer The]] TimeChanger'', Film/TimeChanger'', ''Film/StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome'', ''Film/BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure'', ''Film/DonnieDarko'', ''et multa cetera''.
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-->My apartment was, as it had been for so long a time, perpetually a mess. My desk was a case in point, littered with various 5D-[=DVD=]s: ''Film/{{Primer}}'', ''Film/{{Millennium}}'', the ''[[Franchise/{{Terminator}} Terminator]]'' ''Franchise/{{Terminator}}'' movies (except [[Film/Terminator3RiseOfTheMachines the third]]), the ''Film/BackToTheFuture'' trilogy, ''TwelveMonkeys'', ''Film/TwelveMonkeys'', ''[[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer The]] TimeChanger'', ''Film/StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome'', ''Film/BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure'', ''Film/DonnieDarko'', ''et multa cetera''.
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-->My apartment was, as it had been for so long a time, perpetually a mess. My desk was a case in point, littered with various 5D-[=DVD=]s: ''Film/{{Primer}}'', ''Film/{{Millennium}}'', the ''[[Franchise/{{Terminator}} Terminator]]'' movies (except [[Film/Terminator3RiseOfTheMachines the third]]), the ''BackToTheFuture'' ''Film/BackToTheFuture'' trilogy, ''TwelveMonkeys'', ''[[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer The]] TimeChanger'', ''Film/StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome'', ''Film/BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure'', ''Film/DonnieDarko'', ''et multa cetera''.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he worked with Michaelangelo on the Sistine Chapel and mentions that he's "[[AmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]" and [[UndergroundRailroad helped runaway slaves]].
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he worked with Michaelangelo on the Sistine Chapel and mentions that he's "[[AmericanRevolution "[[UsefulNotes/TheAmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]" and [[UndergroundRailroad helped runaway slaves]].
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-->My apartment was, as it had been for so long a time, perpetually a mess. My desk was a case in point, littered with various 5D-[=DVD=]s: ''{{Primer}}'', ''Film/{{Millennium}}'', the ''[[Franchise/{{Terminator}} Terminator]]'' movies (except the third), the ''BackToTheFuture'' trilogy, ''TwelveMonkeys'', ''[[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer The]] TimeChanger'', ''StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome'', ''BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure'', ''DonnieDarko'', ''et multa cetera''.
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-->My apartment was, as it had been for so long a time, perpetually a mess. My desk was a case in point, littered with various 5D-[=DVD=]s: ''{{Primer}}'', ''Film/{{Primer}}'', ''Film/{{Millennium}}'', the ''[[Franchise/{{Terminator}} Terminator]]'' movies (except [[Film/Terminator3RiseOfTheMachines the third), third]]), the ''BackToTheFuture'' trilogy, ''TwelveMonkeys'', ''[[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer The]] TimeChanger'', ''StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome'', ''BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure'', ''DonnieDarko'', ''Film/StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome'', ''Film/BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure'', ''Film/DonnieDarko'', ''et multa cetera''.
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** In the course of the series it is mentioned that [[SpiderMan with great power comes great responsibility]].
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** In the course of the series it is mentioned that [[SpiderMan [[StanLee with great power comes great responsibility]].
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Cleaning up an errant \"j\".
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* MrExposition: One of the hero's alternate selves in the In-Between. Notably, he does not merely rehash things the protagonist and audience already know. [[spoiler:A lot of what he said was a lie.]]
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* MrExposition: MrExposition:j
** One of the hero's alternate selves in the In-Between. Notably, he does not merely rehash things the protagonist and audience already know. [[spoiler:A lot of what he said was a lie.]]]]
** Al also serves this function.
** One of the hero's alternate selves in the In-Between. Notably, he does not merely rehash things the protagonist and audience already know. [[spoiler:A lot of what he said was a lie.
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* CasualDangerDialogue: Al, as he preps his nuclear grenade.
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* SadisticChoice: [[spoiler:Kill Latrodecta as a baby, or let her ruin your life and destroy the universe.]]
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* TheNameless: When asked who he is, Al replies that he has no name. Zoe nicknames him "Al".
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he worked with {{Michaelangelo}} Michaelangelo on the SistineChapel Sistine Chapel and mentions that he's "[[AmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]" and [[UndergroundRailroad helped runaway slaves]].
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** When [[spoiler:the second
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* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: For Latrodecta, the protagonist's sociopathic ex-girlfriend, it seems.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he worked with {{Michaelangelo}} on the SistineChapel and mentions that he's "[[AmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]".Redcoats]]" and [[UndergroundRailroad helped runaway slaves]].
-->'''Protagonist:''' Because drunken time-jumping is a lot like trying to slam on a car’s brakes, but your foot keeps slipping and you hit the accelerator instead. It’s terrifying. Eventually, I stopped myself, and wound up in a few years ago. Which is where I accidentally punched a poilceman, obliterated all chance of me going back to Letrodacta’s birth, and eventually wound up here.
-->My apartment was, as it had been for so long a time, perpetually a mess. My desk was a case in point, littered with various 5D-[=DVD=]s: ''{{Primer}}'', ''Film/{{Millennium}}'', the ''[[Franchise/{{Terminator}} Terminator]]'' movies (except the third), the ''BackToTheFuture'' trilogy, ''TwelveMonkeys'', ''[[CowboyBebopAtHisComputer The]] TimeChanger'', ''StarTrekIVTheVoyageHome'', ''BillAndTedsExcellentAdventure'', ''DonnieDarko'', ''et multa cetera''.
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->''The short of it is, I’m from the past but also the future, and I have an ex who makes that guy you told me about look like Ricky from I Love Lucy, and I’m on a mission to stop her from ever starting this chain of events.''
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->''The short of it is, I’m from the past but also the future, and I have an ex who makes that guy you told me about look like Ricky from I ''I Love Lucy, Lucy'', and I’m on a mission to stop her from ever starting this chain of events.''
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-->“What kind of a name is Latrodecta?” Me₂ asked.
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-->'''Latrodecta:''' You will try to jump back, but I will follow you. You will try to act, but I will prevent you. You will try to elude me, but I will outfox you. And every time you do, I will make this accident even worse. You will live with the full knowledge that you’re incapable of preventing this destruction. You will live in your own personal hell. Every waking moment of your immortal life will be your death.
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* ReallyNineHundredYearsOld: PunnyName: Zoe gives the unnamed albino character the nickname "Al".
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''Superhero Black Hole'' is a flash-fiction series that was started by J. A. Keane on the Web site Ficly and which has since taken multiple contributors. It centers around the (extremely long) life of an otherwise ordinary man who discovers that he can travel through time. However, it seems he's not the only one who can do so…
The series begins [[http://ficly.com/stories/12476 here]].
!! This series contains examples of the following tropes:
* AlternateSelf: Both played straight and averted, depending upon how far back and using what method one travels in time. The vanilla form of this power simply involves ending up in one's body at an earlier point, avoiding this trope, but the use of the In-Between, or a sufficiently-far jump backwards, can create an alternate.
* AlternateTimeline: Make a big enough change to the past, and you can't return to the future.
* [[spoiler:AlternateUniverse]]: [[spoiler:What the protagonist has been hidden away in to keep him from Latrodecta. It doesn't quite work…]]
* AxCrazy: Latrodecta. She doesn't give a moment's pause to emotionally torturing her ex-boyfriend for effectively forever, and she actively attempts to destroy the universe.
* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he mentions that he's "[[AmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]".
* BrickJoke: The above-mentioned fossilized footprints.
* CassandraTruth: Zoe ''thinks'' she's telling one when she informs our hero of her time-travel abilities…
* CrazyPrepared: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] – Being able to go back in time a bit and prepare beforehand, and the necessity of the goals of the plot.
* DeadpanSnarker: Zoe, when she's not raging. The protagonist also gets a few in.
* DeusExMachina: When one of the altnerate protagonists grabs him and saves him from Latrodecta, taking him into the In-Between.
* DisproportionateRetribution: The protagonist refuses to get back together with Latrodecta after she cheated on him. She therefore forces him to live in a reality where every time he tries to use his powers to stop a car accident, she'll turn around and make it worse.
* TheDitz: Our hero is a mild case, despite (or perhaps partially because of) having lived for literally millennia.
* DrowningMySorrows: The protagonist, on occasion. This is not recommended for time-travelers, as they can drunkenly travel back in time and then change history and be unable to return to the present—as happens to our hero.
* FateWorseThanDeath: The protagonist thinks Latrodecta will simply kill him. Nope—instead, she'll force him to be unable to stave off a horrific car accident, and the more he tries to avert it, the worse she'll make it.
* FieryRedhead: Zoe.
* FreakLabAccident: The meltdown of the future power plant that causes time-traveling abilities to crop up in the first place.
* HeroicAlbino: Zoe calls him "Al".
* [[spoiler:ILied]]: [[spoiler:Al informs Zoe and our hero that much of the earlier exposition in the In-Between was a lie, albeit for the benefit and safety of the latter.]]
* {{Irony}}: The law-school student pays his tuition by selling drugs and setting up false identities.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:The protagonist is actually a really, really old time traveler. Latrodecta decided to use this as an opportunity to inject some new life into their relationship. Unfortunately it goes too slowly for her liking and she cheats with the protagonist's brother, kicking off the plot.]]
* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: Latrodecta basically uses time travelers to destroy the universe ForTheEvulz.
* MindScrew: Just ''try'' making sense of the plot…
* MeaningfulName: "Latrodecta" is a feminine form of the scientific name of the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Latrodectus black widow]].
* MrExposition: One of the hero's alternate selves in the In-Between. Notably, he does not merely rehash things the protagonist and audience already know. [[spoiler:A lot of what he said was a lie.]]
* MyFutureSelfAndMe: More like "two of my alternate selves and me".
* NoNameGiven: The protagonist. Al starts out this way but is given a name out of convenience.
* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: For Latrodecta, the protagonist's sociopathic ex-girlfriend, it seems.
* OntologicalInertia: Present. Used to the protagonists' advantage with respect to winning the lottery.
* PlaceBeyondTime: The In-Between.
* PsychoExGirlfriend: Latrodecta.
* ThePromise: Al gives one to the protagonist. [[spoiler:In the future. When the protagonist ''dies''.]]
* ReallyNineHundredYearsOld: The protagonist. Al. Latrodecta.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: The idea seems to be to kill Latrodecta or, at the very least, remove her time-traveling abilities.
* ShoutOut:
** In the protagonist's apartment are a bunch of movies—the named ones, naturally enough, all involve time travel in some way.
** In the course of the series it is mentioned that [[SpiderMan with great power comes great responsibility]].
** Pop culture references pop up from time to time in conversation.
* StalkerWithACrush: Latrodecta is a sort-of example in the early parts of the series, to the point that she changes her appearance and follows her mark back in time.
* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: But of course.
* TrappedInThePast: What happens if you change something significantly enough.
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: An important bit of the plot happens in the 2030s–2040s.
* TheWarOnTerror: Zoe finds out she can travel through time while running for her life on 9/11.
* WhamEpisode: The series is rife with them, though sometimes they play out over the course of several installments.
* WhichMe:
** When the protagonist finds three of himself in the In-Between. This even extends into the narration. Eventually the narrator ends up using subscripts.
** [[spoiler:When the second Zoe shows up. Eventually the protagonist realizes their hair is parted on the opposite sides of their heads and refers to the alternate as "Other!Zoe".]]
* YouAreNotAlone: When the protagonist meets Zoe.
The series begins [[http://ficly.com/stories/12476 here]].
!! This series contains examples of the following tropes:
* AlternateSelf: Both played straight and averted, depending upon how far back and using what method one travels in time. The vanilla form of this power simply involves ending up in one's body at an earlier point, avoiding this trope, but the use of the In-Between, or a sufficiently-far jump backwards, can create an alternate.
* AlternateTimeline: Make a big enough change to the past, and you can't return to the future.
* [[spoiler:AlternateUniverse]]: [[spoiler:What the protagonist has been hidden away in to keep him from Latrodecta. It doesn't quite work…]]
* AxCrazy: Latrodecta. She doesn't give a moment's pause to emotionally torturing her ex-boyfriend for effectively forever, and she actively attempts to destroy the universe.
* BeenThereShapedHistory: At one point the protagonist ends up in Precambrian-Era Earth; his shoeprints become fossilized and are later uncovered in Australia. He attempts to avoid this when he's first given the briefcase with the antidote and escapes into the past in order to escape from Latrodecta, though he mentions that he's "[[AmericanRevolution shot at a few Redcoats]]".
* BrickJoke: The above-mentioned fossilized footprints.
* CassandraTruth: Zoe ''thinks'' she's telling one when she informs our hero of her time-travel abilities…
* CrazyPrepared: [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] – Being able to go back in time a bit and prepare beforehand, and the necessity of the goals of the plot.
* DeadpanSnarker: Zoe, when she's not raging. The protagonist also gets a few in.
* DeusExMachina: When one of the altnerate protagonists grabs him and saves him from Latrodecta, taking him into the In-Between.
* DisproportionateRetribution: The protagonist refuses to get back together with Latrodecta after she cheated on him. She therefore forces him to live in a reality where every time he tries to use his powers to stop a car accident, she'll turn around and make it worse.
* TheDitz: Our hero is a mild case, despite (or perhaps partially because of) having lived for literally millennia.
* DrowningMySorrows: The protagonist, on occasion. This is not recommended for time-travelers, as they can drunkenly travel back in time and then change history and be unable to return to the present—as happens to our hero.
* FateWorseThanDeath: The protagonist thinks Latrodecta will simply kill him. Nope—instead, she'll force him to be unable to stave off a horrific car accident, and the more he tries to avert it, the worse she'll make it.
* FieryRedhead: Zoe.
* FreakLabAccident: The meltdown of the future power plant that causes time-traveling abilities to crop up in the first place.
* HeroicAlbino: Zoe calls him "Al".
* [[spoiler:ILied]]: [[spoiler:Al informs Zoe and our hero that much of the earlier exposition in the In-Between was a lie, albeit for the benefit and safety of the latter.]]
* {{Irony}}: The law-school student pays his tuition by selling drugs and setting up false identities.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:The protagonist is actually a really, really old time traveler. Latrodecta decided to use this as an opportunity to inject some new life into their relationship. Unfortunately it goes too slowly for her liking and she cheats with the protagonist's brother, kicking off the plot.]]
* MakeWrongWhatOnceWentRight: Latrodecta basically uses time travelers to destroy the universe ForTheEvulz.
* MindScrew: Just ''try'' making sense of the plot…
* MeaningfulName: "Latrodecta" is a feminine form of the scientific name of the [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Latrodectus black widow]].
* MrExposition: One of the hero's alternate selves in the In-Between. Notably, he does not merely rehash things the protagonist and audience already know. [[spoiler:A lot of what he said was a lie.]]
* MyFutureSelfAndMe: More like "two of my alternate selves and me".
* NoNameGiven: The protagonist. Al starts out this way but is given a name out of convenience.
* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: For Latrodecta, the protagonist's sociopathic ex-girlfriend, it seems.
* OntologicalInertia: Present. Used to the protagonists' advantage with respect to winning the lottery.
* PlaceBeyondTime: The In-Between.
* PsychoExGirlfriend: Latrodecta.
* ThePromise: Al gives one to the protagonist. [[spoiler:In the future. When the protagonist ''dies''.]]
* ReallyNineHundredYearsOld: The protagonist. Al. Latrodecta.
* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: The idea seems to be to kill Latrodecta or, at the very least, remove her time-traveling abilities.
* ShoutOut:
** In the protagonist's apartment are a bunch of movies—the named ones, naturally enough, all involve time travel in some way.
** In the course of the series it is mentioned that [[SpiderMan with great power comes great responsibility]].
** Pop culture references pop up from time to time in conversation.
* StalkerWithACrush: Latrodecta is a sort-of example in the early parts of the series, to the point that she changes her appearance and follows her mark back in time.
* TimeTravelTenseTrouble: But of course.
* TrappedInThePast: What happens if you change something significantly enough.
* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: An important bit of the plot happens in the 2030s–2040s.
* TheWarOnTerror: Zoe finds out she can travel through time while running for her life on 9/11.
* WhamEpisode: The series is rife with them, though sometimes they play out over the course of several installments.
* WhichMe:
** When the protagonist finds three of himself in the In-Between. This even extends into the narration. Eventually the narrator ends up using subscripts.
** [[spoiler:When the second Zoe shows up. Eventually the protagonist realizes their hair is parted on the opposite sides of their heads and refers to the alternate as "Other!Zoe".]]
* YouAreNotAlone: When the protagonist meets Zoe.