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* BerserkButton: Don't try to harm Redrick's family. When his father turned into a zombie and they came to take him for study, Red threw two orderlies and three doctors out of his home. When he comes back for the van driver, he finds the van empty, since the driver's already run away in fear during the commotion.

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* BerserkButton: Don't try to harm Redrick's family. When his father turned into a zombie and they came to take him for study, Red threw two orderlies and three doctors out of his home.home, chasing them for a couple of blocks on foot. When he comes back for the van driver, he finds the van empty, since the driver's already run away in fear during the commotion.
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* BerserkButton: Don't try to harm Redrick's family. When his father turned into a zombie and they came to take him for study, Red threw two orderlies and three doctors out of his home.

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* BerserkButton: Don't try to harm Redrick's family. When his father turned into a zombie and they came to take him for study, Red threw two orderlies and three doctors out of his home. When he comes back for the van driver, he finds the van empty, since the driver's already run away in fear during the commotion.
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*[[spoiler:NoEnding]]: [[spoiler:Redrick sacrifices Arthur by allowing the latter to run into the meat grinder, without any warnings, setting it off and killing him almost instantly. With a few minutes to spare before the trap reactivates, Redrick sits and sadly contemplates his actions, debating his supposed morality versus the town's wickedness. He then makes a final decision by walking down to the golden ball, selflessly repeating Arthur's wish for 'happiness for everybody'. The story abruptly ends without showing what happens next, and with the Strugatsky brothers having passed away without leaving any clues, it's left open-ended.]]
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* KidsAreCruel: Because of her horrible condition, it's implied that Redrick's daughter was being bullied by the other children in their neighbourhood. To help her, he bribes them by building playsets in the park as long as they stop.
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* ETGaveUsWiFi: Here, this trope is transferred into the future: Humanity makes considerable progress by studying and finding uses for the artifacts found in the Zone -- even if scientists admit that they understand little about how and why these artifacts work, they have found out what some of them do and invented ways to put them to use.

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* ETGaveUsWiFi: Here, this trope is transferred into the future: Humanity makes considerable progress by studying and finding uses for the artifacts found in the Zone -- even if scientists admit that they understand little about how and why these artifacts work, they have found out what some of them do and invented ways to put them to use. Some characters ponder this, wondering if there is a better way to use the artifacts we just can't see, and if the use we're putting them to is equivalent to using a computer screen as a night light.

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* AliensAreBastards: Some characters take this point of view. For them, the aliens radically altered human history then left them on their own to deal with the Zones.



* AmputationStopsSpread: Burbridge comes in contact with [[GreyGoo Witches Jelly]] while in the Zone which starts to slowly dissolve his leg bones. A doctor amputates them below the knee to stop the Jelly from eventually killing him.
* ArtificialLimbs: After his stint with Witches Jelly that cost him the lower halves of his legs, Burbridge gets a pair of prosthetic legs made with technology developed by research in the Zone.



* BerserkButton: Don't try to harm Redrick's family. When his grandfather turned into a zombie and they came to take him for study, Red threw two orderlies and three doctors out of his home.

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* BerserkButton: Don't try to harm Redrick's family. When his grandfather father turned into a zombie and they came to take him for study, Red threw two orderlies and three doctors out of his home.



* BodyHorror: [[GreyGoo Witches Jelly]] dissolved the leg bones of Burbridge. The description of what it did to the flesh isn't pretty either.



* EvilOldFolks: Burbridge 'The Vulture' is mostly described with two characteristics: he's old, and he's a complete bastard.



* ForHappiness: [[spoiler: "HAPPINESS FOR EVERYBODY, FREE, AND NO ONE WILL GO AWAY UNSATISFIED!"]]



* IDidWhatIHadToDo: This is Redrick's reasoning for taking some highly dangerous "Witches Jelly" out of the Zone and selling it to the military. They'll pay really well and he needs to [[PapaWolf support his family]].



* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Redrick does a lot of very questionable things. He also does some good, genuinely cares for his family, and eventually makes a [[spoiler: SelflessWish ForHappiness]].



* {{Mutants}}: Red's daughter has fur and a tail; his friend's butler is severely deformed (and mentally disabled) by exposure to the Zone.

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* {{Mutants}}: Red's daughter has fur and a tail; his friend's butler is severely deformed (and mentally disabled) by exposure to the Zone. It's stated that the children of Stalkers are born with various anomalies, another side effect of the Zone.


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* PapaWolf: Redrick is very protective of his {{mutant}} daughter. Also, in an inversion, he's very protective of his zombie father (who's harmless) and became physically violent when scientists came to grab him for experiments.
* RagnarokProofing: PlayedWith: It's been years since the Zone appeared, and most of the manmade structures inside decayed as expected, but certain areas still remain pristine in spite of the complete lack of maintenance. Just another unexplained weirdness of the Zone.


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* SelflessWish: [[spoiler: The very ending.]]
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A licensed TabletopRpg called ''TabletopGame/STALKERTheSciFiRoleplayingGame'' published by the Finnish Burger Games was released in 2008 with an English translation released in 2012.

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A licensed TabletopRpg called ''TabletopGame/STALKERTheSciFiRoleplayingGame'' published by the Finnish Burger Games was released in 2008 2008, with an English translation released in 2012.
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: The Visitation changed everything for humanity, but for the aliens that caused it, it was just a [[TitleDrop Roadside Picnic]].
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* AmbigiouslyHuman: The children of stalkers suffer from mutations, but no one knows why. Richard Noonan wonders if it's a form of AlienInvasion, with the visitors intent on changing humanity to their liking. He's drunk off his ass when he think this, however.

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* AmbigiouslyHuman: AmbiguouslyHuman: The children of stalkers suffer from mutations, but no one knows why. Richard Noonan wonders if it's a form of AlienInvasion, with the visitors intent on changing humanity to their liking. He's drunk off his ass when he think this, however.
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* AmbigiouslyHuman: The children of stalkers suffer from mutations, but no one knows why. Richard Noonan wonders if it's a form of AlienInvasion, with the visitors intent on changing humanity to their liking. He's drunk off his ass when he think this, however.


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* TheGhost: The visitors. By the time humanity realized aliens had visited Earth, the aliens had already continued on their merry way.
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A licensed TabletopRpg called ''TabletopGame/STALKERTheSciFiRoleplayingGame'' published by the Finnish Burger Games was released in 2008 with an English translation released in 2012.
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* {{Mutants}}: Red's daughter has fur and a tail; his friend's butler is severely deformed (and mentally disabled) by exposure to the Zone.

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%% * EldritchLocation: The Zone itself. %% Zero Context Example. Please provide context.

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%% * EldritchLocation: The Zone itself. %% Zero Context Example. Please provide context.Whatever the Visitation was, it left the region filled with bizarre entities, patches of lethally broken physics, and the artifacts with their own strange properties.



* ImportedAlienPhlebotinum: Arguably a [[DeconstructedTrope deconstruction of the trope]].

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* ImportedAlienPhlebotinum: Arguably a [[DeconstructedTrope deconstruction of the trope]].trope]], via [[PossessionImpliesMastery Possession not implying mastery]]. Just because they can study the artifacts and put some of them to use doesn't mean they've made any progress understanding how they work. One of the biggest breakthroughs during the story is figuring out what the "Empties" ''might'' have been used for.


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* MikeNelsonDestroyerOfWorlds: a deconstruction, with the aliens being Mike and the humans being stuck dealing with the aftermath of whatever they did through accident or indifference.


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* SufficientlyAdvancedAlien: The general theory on the origin of the Zone; a collection of scraps and residue from unfathomably advanced technology scattered throughout the Zone, left behind either by a crashed alien spacecraft...or by one dumping its trash on an InsignificantLittleBluePlanet after "a picnic" in the countryside.

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* ForbiddenZoneForbiddenZone: Access to the Zones, which are deadly enough in their own right, is strictly controlled by the United Nations.
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''Roadside Picnic'' has been loosely adapted to film as ''Film/{{Stalker}}'' (1979). Both the book and the movie have inspired a video game, ''VideoGame/{{STALKER}}'' (2007).

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''Roadside Picnic'' has been loosely adapted to film as ''Film/{{Stalker}}'' (1979). Both the book and the movie have inspired a video game, the ''VideoGame/{{STALKER}}'' (2007).game series.
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: [[spoiler:Kirill Panov and Arthur Burbridge, the two young, nice and most idealistic characters in the book, die in the same chapters where they are introduced.]]
* TwentyMinutesInTheFuture: Apart from a few technological advances, the setting seems largely congruent with the time when the novel was written. Though from today's perspective, it possibly could be more adequately classified as an AlternateHistory setting.
* WeirdnessMagnet: Anyone who was near a Zone at the time of the Visitation became this. It takes twenty years for the authorities to notice because it's not immediately obvious. One case study is a barber who left the city, but his clients had a 90% mortality rate over the course of a year due to various freak accidents. At the beginning of the book they are paying people to leave the Zone so that they can build a military perimeter around it, but that policy is soon reversed.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The protagonist's daughter is born with fur and a monkey tail, and gradually becomes less human and more feral as the story proceeds, until his wife sobs, "The doctor says... She isn't human anymore."
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* TooGoodForThisSinfulEarth: [[spoiler:Kirill [[spoiler: Kirill Panov and Arthur Burbridge, the two young, nice and most idealistic characters in the book, die in the same chapters where they are introduced.]]
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* TwentyMinutesInTheFuture: Apart from a few technological advances, the setting seems largely congruent congruent, with the time when the novel was written. Though from today's perspective, it possibly could be more adequately classified as an AlternateHistory setting.
* WeirdnessMagnet: Anyone who was near a Zone at the time of the Visitation became this. It takes twenty years for the authorities to notice notice, because it's not immediately obvious. One case study is a barber who left the city, but his clients had a 90% mortality rate over the course of a year year, due to various freak accidents. At the beginning of the book they are paying people to leave the Zone Zone, so that they can build a military perimeter around it, but that policy is soon reversed.
* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The protagonist's daughter is born with fur and a monkey tail, and gradually becomes less human and more feral as the story proceeds, until his wife sobs, sobs: "The doctor says... She isn't human anymore."
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Some things in the Zone will kill people. Some things won't. One stalker loses the bones in his legs and becomes unable to walk, but survives because Red spends a day dragging him out of the Zone. When his son goes into the Zone, he brings along a pistol with one bullet in it, just in case.

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* FateWorseThanDeath: Some things in the Zone will kill people. Some things won't. One stalker loses the bones in his legs and becomes unable to walk, but survives because Red spends a day dragging him out of the Zone.Zone; one of his friends retains a butler heavily mutated by exposure to an unspecified anomaly. When his son goes into the Zone, he brings along a pistol with one bullet in it, just in case.
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* EldritchLocation: The Zone itself. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis So. Very. Much.]]

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* EldritchLocation: the Zone itself. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis So. Very. Much.]]

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* EldritchLocation: the The Zone itself. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis So. Very. Much.]]
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''Roadside Picnic'' (''Пикник на обочине''), like the above titles, focuses on the Zones of Alienation, where debris and items left behind by visiting extraterrestrials are concentrated. These Zones are filled with bizarre anomalies and physics-defying objects, ranging from the sun appearing to stand still all the time to two pieces of metal that forever repel and attract each other. Needless to say, scientists and collectors pay hefty prices to acquire the objects, but access to the Zones, which are deadly enough in their own right, is strictly controlled by the United Nations.

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''Roadside Picnic'' (''Пикник на обочине''), like the above titles, обочине'') focuses on the Zones of Alienation, where debris and items left behind by visiting extraterrestrials are concentrated. These Zones are filled with bizarre anomalies and physics-defying objects, ranging from the sun appearing to stand still all the time to two pieces of metal that forever repel and attract each other. Needless to say, scientists and collectors pay hefty prices to acquire the objects, but access to the Zones, which are deadly enough in their own right, is strictly controlled by the United Nations.



''Roadside Picnic'' has been loosely adapted to film as ''Film/{{Stalker}}'' (1979). Both the book and the movie have inspired a videogame, ''VideoGame/{{STALKER}}'' (2007).

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''Roadside Picnic'' has been loosely adapted to film as ''Film/{{Stalker}}'' (1979). Both the book and the movie have inspired a videogame, video game, ''VideoGame/{{STALKER}}'' (2007).
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-->[[spoiler:So the Ball bit everyone's legs off. And nobody walked out.]]

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-->[[spoiler:So the Ball bit everyone's legs off. And nobody [[ExactWords walked out.out]].]]

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That\'s actually not very probable. Pretty sure that most people have neither read the book, nor watched the movie, nor played the game.


A novel by the Creator/{{Strugatsky brothers}}. If you haven't read it, you've probably seen the film it inspired (''Film/{{Stalker}}'') or played the game {{inspired by}} both of them (''VideoGame/{{STALKER}}'').

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A novel by the Creator/{{Strugatsky brothers}}. If you haven't read it, you've probably seen the film it inspired (''Film/{{Stalker}}'') or played the game {{inspired by}} both of them (''VideoGame/{{STALKER}}'').\n


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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Two characters [[{{Discussed}} discuss]] Xenology midway through the book. One an engineer, another a business man. It largely centers around classifying intelligence, and the closest humans can come up with a definition for it is "displays human reasoning".

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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Two characters [[{{Discussed}} discuss]] Xenology midway through the book. One an engineer, engineer (Pillman), another a business man.man (Noonan). It largely centers around classifying intelligence, and the closest humans can come up with a definition for it is "displays human reasoning".



* HumansAreCthulhu: {{Discussed}}. Dr. Pillman states that the Zone is something like a fieldmouse stumbling into an abandoned campsite and finding a burnt-out spark plug (swag), a candy wrapper (junk), and an oil slick (hazardous anomaly), but on human scale.

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* HumansAreCthulhu: {{Discussed}}. Dr. Pillman states that the Zone is something like a fieldmouse stumbling into an abandoned campsite and finding a burnt-out spark plug (swag), a candy wrapper page out of a comic book (junk), and an oil slick (hazardous anomaly), but on human scale.scale. In fact, the discussion is the page quote.
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* HumansAreCthulhu: {{Discussed}}. Dr. Pillman states that the Zone is something like a fieldmouse stumbling into an abandoned campsite and finding a burnt-out spark plug, a candy wrapper, and an oil slick, but on human scale.

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* HumansAreCthulhu: {{Discussed}}. Dr. Pillman states that the Zone is something like a fieldmouse stumbling into an abandoned campsite and finding a burnt-out spark plug, plug (swag), a candy wrapper, wrapper (junk), and an oil slick, slick (hazardous anomaly), but on human scale.
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Some cleanup; witch jelly to hell slime is not an example of de-censoring


''Roadside Picnic'' (''Пикник на обочине''), like the above titles, focuses on the Alienated Zones, where debris and items left behind by visiting extraterrestrials are concentrated. These Zones are filled with bizarre anomalies and physics-defying objects, ranging from the sun appearing to stand still all the time to two pieces of metal that forever repel and attract each other. Needless to say, scientists pay hefty prices to study the objects, but the United Nations controls access to the Zone.

These are where Stalkers come in, illegal intruders who brave the patrols and the dangers of the Zones to bring back the artifacts for sale and study. The story focuses on one particular Stalker, named Redrick.

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''Roadside Picnic'' (''Пикник на обочине''), like the above titles, focuses on the Alienated Zones, Zones of Alienation, where debris and items left behind by visiting extraterrestrials are concentrated. These Zones are filled with bizarre anomalies and physics-defying objects, ranging from the sun appearing to stand still all the time to two pieces of metal that forever repel and attract each other. Needless to say, scientists and collectors pay hefty prices to study acquire the objects, but the United Nations controls access to the Zone.

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Zones, which are deadly enough in their own right, is strictly controlled by the United Nations.

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where the Stalkers come in, in -- illegal intruders who brave the patrols and the dangers of the Zones to bring back the artifacts for sale and study. The story focuses on one particular Stalker, named Redrick.



* ChangingOfTheGuard: Zig-zagged. Redrick's the POV character for the first two chapters, only to be replaced by a middle-aged engineer named Richard Noonan in the third chapter, who, in-turn, is replaced with Redrick in the final chapter.

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* ChangingOfTheGuard: Zig-zagged. Redrick's the POV character for the first two chapters, only to be replaced by a middle-aged engineer named Richard Noonan in the third chapter, who, in-turn, who is in turn replaced with Redrick in the final chapter.



* EvenEvilHasStandards: Subverted. In the first chapter Redrick states that no one stalker (including SmugSnake Burbridge 'The Vulture') will never bring [[GreyGoo "witches jelly"]] out from Zone (Other [read De-censored] translations call it "hell slime"). [[spoiler: In the second chapter Redrick and Burbridge are doing exactly that.]]
* EverythingTryingToKillYou: "Alien" here means "mostly incompatible with Terran life". Where to start? There's a heavy fog that turns your bones into jelly. A spider-web that gives you a heart attack hours after you've touched it. Spots where [[GravitySucks gravity is hundredfolds stronger than normal]] (in other words, step in and go splat on the floor)... The "meat grinder" that... um... well, take a guess... The Zone is littered with the bodies of scavengers that serve as marks for where you shouldn't go.
* ETGaveUsWiFi: Here, this trope is transferred into the future: Humanity makes considerable progress by studying and finding uses for the artifacts found in the Zone -- even if scientists admit that they understand little about how and why these artifacts work, they have found out what they do and invented ways to put them to use.

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* EvenEvilHasStandards: Subverted. In the first chapter Redrick states that no one stalker (including SmugSnake Burbridge 'The Vulture') will never ever bring [[GreyGoo "witches jelly"]] out from Zone (Other [read De-censored] (other translations call it "hell slime"). [[spoiler: In the second chapter Redrick and Burbridge are doing exactly that.]]
* EverythingTryingToKillYou: "Alien" here means "mostly incompatible with Terran terrestrial life". Where to start? There's a heavy dense fog that turns your bones into jelly. A spider-web that gives you a heart attack hours after you've touched it. Spots where [[GravitySucks gravity is hundredfolds hundred times stronger than normal]] (in other words, step in and go splat on the floor)... The "meat grinder" that... um... well, take a guess... The Zone is littered with the bodies of scavengers that serve as marks markers for places where you really shouldn't go.
* ETGaveUsWiFi: Here, this trope is transferred into the future: Humanity makes considerable progress by studying and finding uses for the artifacts found in the Zone -- even if scientists admit that they understand little about how and why these artifacts work, they have found out what they some of them do and invented ways to put them to use.



* OurZombiesAreDifferent: They're mostly intact, except for the brain. Rather than being inimical to humans, they"exude good health".

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* AdaptationDisplacement: Both the film and the game series are more well known than the novel; though this is turning around a bit since the original novel began replacing the mangled release that the Soviet Union allowed in the first publication.



* ETGaveUsWiFi: Here, this trope is transferred into the future: Humanity makes considerable progress by studying and finding uses for the artefacts found in the Zone -- even if scientists admit that they understand little about how and why these artifacts work, they have found out what they do and invented ways to put them to use.

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* ETGaveUsWiFi: Here, this trope is transferred into the future: Humanity makes considerable progress by studying and finding uses for the artefacts artifacts found in the Zone -- even if scientists admit that they understand little about how and why these artifacts work, they have found out what they do and invented ways to put them to use.



-->[[spoiler:— Happines for everyone, for free, and so that nobody would walk out disappointed!]]

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-->[[spoiler:— Happines Happiness for everyone, for free, and so that nobody would walk out disappointed!]]
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->'''Pilman''': Imagine a picnic. Picture a forest, a country road, a meadow. A car drives off the country road into the meadow, a group of young people get out of the car carrying bottles, baskets of food, transistor radios, and cameras. They light fires, pitch tents, turn on the music. In the morning they leave. The animals, birds and insects that watched in horror through the long night creep out from their hiding places. And what do they see? Gas and oil spilled on the grass. Old spark plugs and old filters strewn around. Rags, burn out bulbs, and a monkey wrench left behind. Oil slicks on the pond. And of course, the usual mess- apple cores, candy wrappers, charred remains of the campfire cans, bottles, somebody's handkerchief, somebody's penknife, torn newspapers, comic, faded flowers picked in another meadow.

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->'''Pilman''': Imagine a picnic. Picture a forest, a country road, a meadow. A car drives off the country road into the meadow, a group of young people get out of the car carrying bottles, baskets of food, transistor radios, and cameras. They light fires, pitch tents, turn on the music. In the morning they leave. The animals, birds and insects that watched in horror through the long night creep out from their hiding places. And what do they see? Gas and oil spilled on the grass. Old spark plugs and old filters strewn around. Rags, burn out bulbs, and a monkey wrench left behind. Oil slicks on the pond. And of course, the usual mess- mess -- apple cores, candy wrappers, charred remains of the campfire cans, bottles, somebody's handkerchief, somebody's penknife, torn newspapers, comic, faded flowers picked in another meadow.



''Roadside Picnic'', like the above titles, focus on the Alienated Zones, where debris and items ejected by visiting extraterrestrials are concentrated. These Zones are filled with bizarre anomalies and physics-defying objects, ranging from having the sun appear to stay still all the time, to two pieces of metal that forever repel and attract each other. Needless to say, scientists pay hefty prices to study the objects, but the United Nations controls access to the Zone.

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''Roadside Picnic'', Picnic'' (''Пикник на обочине''), like the above titles, focus focuses on the Alienated Zones, where debris and items ejected left behind by visiting extraterrestrials are concentrated. These Zones are filled with bizarre anomalies and physics-defying objects, ranging from having the sun appear appearing to stay stand still all the time, time to two pieces of metal that forever repel and attract each other. Needless to say, scientists pay hefty prices to study the objects, but the United Nations controls access to the Zone.



* EverythingTryingToKillYou: "Alien" here means "mostly incompatible with Terran life". Where to start? There's a heavy fog that turns your bones into jelly. A spider-web that gives you a heart attack hours after you've touched it. Spots where [[GravitySucks gravity is hundredfolds stronger than normal]] (in other words, step in and go splat on the floor)... A "meat grinder" that... um... well, guess... The Zone is littered with the bodies of scavengers that serve as marks for where you shouldn't go.

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* EverythingTryingToKillYou: "Alien" here means "mostly incompatible with Terran life". Where to start? There's a heavy fog that turns your bones into jelly. A spider-web that gives you a heart attack hours after you've touched it. Spots where [[GravitySucks gravity is hundredfolds stronger than normal]] (in other words, step in and go splat on the floor)... A The "meat grinder" that... um... well, take a guess... The Zone is littered with the bodies of scavengers that serve as marks for where you shouldn't go.



* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The protagonist's daughter is born with fur and a monkey tail, and gradually becomes less human and more feral as the story proceeds, until his wife sobs, "The doctor says... She isn't a person any-more."

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* WhatMeasureIsANonHuman: The protagonist's daughter is born with fur and a monkey tail, and gradually becomes less human and more feral as the story proceeds, until his wife sobs, "The doctor says... She isn't a person any-more.human anymore."

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