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* NotQuiteFlight: A few variants. Freefall teleports directly up and [[CaptainObvious freefalls]], Comet makes herself into a projectile over and over with charge times in between, [[spoiler:and Void makes herself light enough to be pulled along by the wind her vacuums create.]]
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* NotQuiteFlight: A few variants. Freefall teleports directly up and [[CaptainObvious freefalls]], freefalls, Comet makes herself into a projectile over and over with charge times in between, [[spoiler:and Void makes herself light enough to be pulled along by the wind her vacuums create.]]
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* SuperheroPackingHeat: Ricochet, who acts as the Outliers' overwatch with a heavy-calibre sniper rifle. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that her power seems to have something to do with... well, [[CaptainObvious ricochets]], and by the existence of stun rounds in the setting.
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* SuperheroPackingHeat: Ricochet, who acts as the Outliers' overwatch with a heavy-calibre sniper rifle. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that her power seems to have something to do with... well, [[CaptainObvious ricochets]], ricochets, and by the existence of stun rounds in the setting.
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** "[[http://outlierswebserial.blogspot.com.au/2016/01/party-7-ii.html ...and I did not like it]], [[DrSeuss Sam-I-am]]."
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** "[[http://outlierswebserial.blogspot.com.au/2016/01/party-7-ii.html ...and I did not like it]], [[DrSeuss [[Creator/DrSeuss Sam-I-am]]."
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** The high school in (New) Chicago is called [[TheDresdenFiles Dresden]] High.
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** The high school in (New) Chicago is called [[TheDresdenFiles [[Literature/TheDresdenFiles Dresden]] High.
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin."''
->''"Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
->''"Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin."''
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->''Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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->''Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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''"Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin.
Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin. \n\nNot "''
''"Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
''"Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin. Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin.
Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way."''
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin. Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way.."''
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->''"Now, at this point, you might be thinking that I'm being a little too paranoid, and you might be right. But we're a group of unregistered supers running a technically-criminal vigilante operation out of an abandoned warehouse. I have a supervillain ex-girlfriend, Ivan probably won't be allowed back in South America for the rest of his life, George is sworn enemies with the British government and I'm pretty sure at least one of Lis' parents is an assassin. Not only are they actually all out to get us, but they're also out to get each other and don't particularly care if we get in the way..way."''
