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* AccidentalProposal: Tremaine tries to preempt this trope early in ''Storm Rising''. When he puts out a call for volunteers among his troops to help with the harvest (which means his soldiers working side by side with farm women), he realizes he will need to have the volunteers briefed on local courting customs. Otherwise, it's too likely one person might think they're in a casual relationship when the other thinks they're engaged.
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** The reasons and political maneuvering behind the various forms of arranged marriage among the nobility are a theme of ''Closer to Home''. Many of the young ladies (and, more to the point, their parents) are hoping to land [[NobilityMarriesMoney wealthy merchants]] who will parade them at social functions, instead of older nobles merely looking for someone to provide an [[SpareToTheThrone heir and a spare]]. The DoubleStandard between ladies, who are expected to be faithful at least until the aforementioned heirs are produced, and young men, for whom mistresses and visits to brothels are winked at, is explored. The more sexually liberated Heralds decide that something ought to be done about a culture that raises girls to aspire to no more than a good match.

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** The reasons and political maneuvering behind the various forms of arranged marriage among the nobility are a theme of ''Closer to Home''. Many of the young ladies (and, more to the point, their parents) are hoping to land [[NobilityMarriesMoney wealthy merchants]] who will parade them at social functions, instead of older nobles merely looking for someone to provide an [[SpareToTheThrone [[HeirClubForMen heir and a spare]]. The DoubleStandard between ladies, who are expected to be faithful at least until the aforementioned heirs are produced, and young men, for whom mistresses and visits to brothels are winked at, is explored. The more sexually liberated Heralds decide that something ought to be done about a culture that raises girls to aspire to no more than a good match.

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* {{Teleportation}}: "Gates", spells that allow people to travel long distance instantly, are the primary form. The "Fetching" mind-magic gift is a much shorter-ranged and smaller-payload version.



* TeleportersAndTransporters: "Gates", spells that allow people to travel long distance instantly, are the primary form. The "Fetching" mind-magic gift is a much shorter-ranged and smaller-payload version.

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* CallToAdventure: Delivered without fail by Companions; their Chosen may [[JumpedAtTheCall jump at the Call]] or try to [[RefusalOfTheCall refuse the Call]], depending on their situation at the time. All accept eventually, though on one notable occasion the Call repudiated one of the Called.

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* CallToAdventure: CallToAdventure:
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Delivered without fail by Companions; their Chosen may [[JumpedAtTheCall jump at the Call]] or try to [[RefusalOfTheCall refuse the Call]], depending on their situation at the time. All accept eventually, though on one notable occasion the Call repudiated one of the Called.Called.
** Subverted in one of the short stories. The FirstPersonSmartass narrator, Don, lampshades at one point that that's the point when some meddling Companion is supposed to Choose him. [[spoiler: Instead, he meets a [=MindHealer=] who reveals that he has a less-adventurous - but still important - job to do as another [=MindHealer=].]]


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* IncompletelyTrained: Talia's Gift training in ''Arrows of the Queen'' amounted to the other Heralds realizing that she had full Empathy. Since they didn't have any other Heralds with the Gift and she seemed to have it under control, they shrugged it off and let her go - a mistake that nearly had dire repercussions later and went into the Chronicles "for sheer wrongheadedness."
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** ''Spy, Spy Again'' (forthcoming)

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** ''Spy, Spy Again'' (forthcoming)
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* ParrotPetPosition: Used by some but not all Tayledras bondbirds. The determining factor appears to be the size of the bird; Darkwind often carries Vree this way, but Starblade doesn't even ''try'' carrying the much larger Hyllar on his shoulder (he can barely carry Hyllar on his arm).

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** A less sympathetic example in the Tedrels who are so desperate for a country that there are no depths to which they will not sink to get one.

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** A less sympathetic example in is the Tedrels Tedrels, who are so desperate for a country that there are no depths to which they will not sink to get one.



* TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest: Vanyel after losing Tylendal. His deeply romantic (and deeply in denial) mother likes to tell young women "he lost his first love tragically" -- fortunately by the time Stef comes along she seems to have accepted things.

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* TheFirstCutIsTheDeepest: Vanyel after losing Tylendal.Tylendel. His deeply romantic (and deeply in denial) mother likes to tell young women "he lost his first love tragically" -- fortunately by the time Stef comes along she seems to have accepted things.



* FounderOfTheKingdom: Baron Valdemar, fleeing the corruption of the Eastern Empire [[TheMigration with his followers]], founded both his namesake kingdom and the Heralds. According to what is told in ''The Mage Storms'' the crown was half forced on him because his people didn't want a mere ''Baron'' as their ruler while everyone else around them was declaring themselves kings, no matter how small a place they have.
** Urtho's were split up after the Cataclysm and groups and companies went on to found k'Leshya, the Shin'a'in, the Tayledras, [[spoiler: Iftel and possibly Karse]]

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* FounderOfTheKingdom: Baron Valdemar, fleeing the corruption of the Eastern Empire [[TheMigration with his followers]], founded both his namesake kingdom and the Heralds. According to what is told in ''The Mage Storms'' the crown was half forced on him because his people didn't want a mere ''Baron'' as their ruler while everyone else around them was declaring themselves kings, no matter how small a place they have.
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** Urtho's were split up after the Cataclysm and groups and companies went on to found k'Leshya, the Shin'a'in, the Tayledras, [[spoiler: Iftel and possibly Karse]]Karse]].
* FourElementEnsemble: As of ''Mage Storms'', the major countries in the setting correspond to one of these elements (although a Water country has not shown up yet).
** Valdemar is Air. Its sigil is a winged horse, its ideology emphasizes freedom above all else, and its people specialize in 'mind-magic', which is invisible to the naked eye. Valdemaran spirit guardians are white horses that can run as fast as the wind.
** Karse is Fire. Its tutelary deity is a sun god, and its spirit guardians are great cats with thick red fur. Most Karsites with magic are pyromancers, [[PersonalityPowers typically passionate]] about their religion and duty to the state.
** Hardorn (and the Eastern Empire its laws are based off of) is Earth. It unifies many races and religions under a ideology that emphasizes humility and practicality. With the magical Gates that Hardonen mages specialize in, they can link almost anyone on earth together. Additionally, their king has strong earth-sense.



* FullFrontalAssault: In ''The White Gryphon'', Hadanelith, a SerialKiller and [[MindRape Mind-Rapist]], conducts a series of assassinations against prominent members of Haighlei society... by climbing into their windows nude. This has several purposes: it shocks the victims, who are mainly high-class females, into being unable to resist; it avoids leaving evidence in the form of scraps of clothing or shoe-prints; it helps frame the White Gryphon delegation since no Haighlei would ever consider such an act; and [[ForTheEvulz it amuses him]].

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* FullFrontalAssault: In ''The White Gryphon'', Hadanelith, a SerialKiller and [[MindRape Mind-Rapist]], mind-rapist]], conducts a series of assassinations against prominent members of Haighlei society... by climbing into their windows nude. This has several purposes: it shocks the victims, who are mainly high-class females, into being unable to resist; it avoids leaving evidence in the form of scraps of clothing or shoe-prints; it helps frame the White Gryphon delegation since no Haighlei would ever consider such an act; and [[ForTheEvulz it amuses him]].



* GenkiGirl: Natoli, almost to the point of being a ManicPixieDreamGirl for Karal, if she weren't important to the story in many other ways.
* GeniusLoci: The Forest of Sorrows
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* GenkiGirl: Natoli, almost to the point of being a ManicPixieDreamGirl for Karal, if she weren't important to the story in many other ways.
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* GeniusLoci: The Forest of Sorrows
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Sorrows. [[spoiler: Leave it Vanyel to turn himself into this in death.]]]]
* GenreShift: Over time the franchise shifts from epic fantasy to slice-of-life. Most of the ''Mage Storms'' trilogy is about political debates and Tremane's reconstruction of Shonar, and the ''Spy'' series rarely involve any crisis worse than sexual harassment.



* GoodFeelsGood: Heralds in general and especially Skif, who does a HeelFaceTurn because of it, not that he was all that bad to start with.

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* GoodFeelsGood: Heralds in general and especially Skif, who does a HeelFaceTurn because of it, it- not that he was all that bad to start with.
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** Empaths know exactly what their partner is feeling and what they need to do to please them. As most Healers have at least a touch of Empathy, the profession has built up a reputation for being wondrous lovers. And Don works as a HookerWithAHeartOfGold before being recruited as a Mindhealer.
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* SignatureInstrument: The primary comfort of disabled Herald Jadus is his harp, which he calls [[ICallItVera "My Lady"]]. Talia first meets Jadus because she hears the music coming from his room, and the harp lessons he gives her teach her as much about his personality as the instrument. [[TragicKeepsake After Jadus dies, he wills "My Lady" to Talia]], who eventually overcomes her grief enough that she can use it again. [[spoiler:She discovers much later that Dirk has a harp almost completely identical to "My Lady", which symbolizes that he's her perfect soulmate.]] Since so many characters in ''Arrows'' play harps, it could be considered the Signature Instrument of the trilogy itself.
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** Several beings are worshipped that are clearly not a part of this pantheon. The Hundred Little Gods are the spirits of deceased emperors, although they grant no powers and may be fictitious; and Thalhkarsh is a demon who [[GodsNeedPrayerBadly gains actual power from worship]] and [[AGodAmI aspires to godhood]], though since he's stopped before his plans are complete it's never confirmed if he would have truly attained divinity or not. Demons and elemental spirits clearly come from somewhere, and it's unclear whether these are under the jurisdiction of the aforementioned gods or not. In addition, when the Star-Eyed puts in an appearance in ''Oathbreakers'' she comments with interest on the concept of Companions in a way that suggests she has no personal involvement in their creation or direction: she greets them as "children of my other self," but her wording leaves it unclear if she means that she and the force behind the Companions are actually separate facets of the same entity, or if she's simply recognizing their motives and values as aligned with her own.

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** Several beings are worshipped that are clearly not a part of this pantheon. The Hundred Little Gods are the spirits of deceased emperors, although they grant no powers and may be fictitious; and Thalhkarsh is a demon who [[GodsNeedPrayerBadly gains actual power from worship]] and [[AGodAmI [[GodhoodSeeker aspires to godhood]], though since he's stopped before his plans are complete it's never confirmed if he would have truly attained divinity or not. Demons and elemental spirits clearly come from somewhere, and it's unclear whether these are under the jurisdiction of the aforementioned gods or not. In addition, when the Star-Eyed puts in an appearance in ''Oathbreakers'' she comments with interest on the concept of Companions in a way that suggests she has no personal involvement in their creation or direction: she greets them as "children of my other self," but her wording leaves it unclear if she means that she and the force behind the Companions are actually separate facets of the same entity, or if she's simply recognizing their motives and values as aligned with her own.
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** Gets almost ridiculous in ''Winds of Change''. Darkwind likes Elspeth, Elspeth seems interested in return. Then Firesong shows up and Elspeth seems slightly more interested in him than in Darkwind. Firesong notices and has a talk with both of them "SorryImGay and happen to like Darkwind. But I know Darkwind likes Elspeth, so I won't try anything". But Elspeth is in the middle of learning about Tayledras customs, so her thoughts after the talk are "Could Darkwind be BiTheWay and interested in Firesong?" (he's not). Luckily that gets cleared up immediately after.

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** Gets almost ridiculous in ''Winds of Change''. Darkwind likes Elspeth, Elspeth seems interested in return. Then Firesong shows up and Elspeth seems slightly more interested in him than in Darkwind. Firesong notices and has a talk with both of them "SorryImGay and happen to like Darkwind. But I know Darkwind likes Elspeth, so I won't try anything". But Elspeth is in the middle of learning about Tayledras customs, so her thoughts after the talk are "Could Darkwind be BiTheWay bi and interested in Firesong?" (he's not). Luckily that gets cleared up immediately after.
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True, but most of the paragraph is criticism, not an example of the trope. I moved that part over to Headscratchers.


** Violetta's case is particularly aggravating, as it combines the pain with a huge dose of "Hymens Don't Work Like That" and extreme slut-shaming that goes against everything the series has built up about Valdemar to date. After Violetta's innocent letter of infatuation to Brand is found out, an enraged Lady Dia berates and shames Violetta over it, claiming that the letter is somehow proof of Violetta being wanton and sluttish, and topping it all off by stating that if Violetta had sex with Brand, everyone would somehow "know" she'd been "deflowered".[[note]]No, they wouldn't. Hymens can not only be easily torn by everyday exertion -- not to mention masturbation -- but often form as a ring of tissue that doesn't block anything. Not even a doctor can tell if a woman is a virgin.[[/note]] When the strict, repressed, isolated ''Holderkin''[[note]]who are polyamorous and have no problems with lesbian relationships[[/note]] come across as more accepting and open than people in Valdemar's main city, there's a major problem.

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** Violetta's case is particularly aggravating, as it combines the pain with a huge dose of "Hymens Don't Work Like That" and extreme slut-shaming that goes against everything the series has built up about Valdemar to date. After Violetta's innocent letter of infatuation to Brand is found out, an enraged Lady That". Dia berates and shames Violetta over it, claiming that the letter is somehow proof of Violetta being wanton and sluttish, and topping it all off by stating rants that if Violetta had sex with Brand, everyone would somehow "know" she'd been "deflowered".[[note]]No, they wouldn't."deflowered". In actuality, '''they wouldn't'''. Hymens can not only be easily torn by everyday exertion -- not to mention masturbation -- but often form as a ring of tissue that doesn't block anything. Not even a doctor can tell if a woman is a virgin.[[/note]] When the strict, repressed, isolated ''Holderkin''[[note]]who are polyamorous and have no problems with lesbian relationships[[/note]] come across as more accepting and open than people in Valdemar's main city, there's a major problem.
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* PragmaticVillainy: The Eastern Empire's hat explaining how [[NobleDemon Grand Duke Tremaine]] could come from them. (also contrasting every other antagonist in the series). To list:
** The Empire allows free practice of any religion so long as you don't try to prevent the free practice of any other religion. It also fosters and encourages multiculturalism and actively exposes its citizens to other peoples. This is due to the Empire being so large and non-homogenous, it would be impossible to maintain if the Empire wasn't tolerant or pluralistic. Furthermore, being accepting of other cultures makes it easier for a country to accept being conquered.
** The Empire treats women better than most countries - there are laws protecting them from rape and they are allowed to own property and have careers if not encouraged to in practice.
** The Empire encourages [[AFatherToHisMen fair treatment of its soldiers]], not viewing them as expendable and always making sure they're paid properly and on time.
** Blood magic is highly frowned upon in the upper echelons of the Empire though not outright banned. The corrupting effects of blood magic often overrides a mage's good sense which in the DeadlyDecadentCourt could mean the difference between life and death.
** In general, the Emperor comes across as controlling and pragmatic but not wantonly cruel and cultivates a Machiavellian mindset.
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* LogicalWeakness: Valdemar's AntiMagic defense isn't absolute and there are major loopholes namely centered around Vanyel's original order to the vrondi, who are very literal.
** The defense only activates if a mage uses magic inside Valdemar, thus any mage who simply doesn't use magic doesn't trigger the vrondi. This is how [[spoiler: Hulda managed to operate for years in Valdemar]].
** The vrondi are only meant to watch and don't offer any other protection which means that a mage can still cast spells outside the borders and use them to attack Valdemar. The Sun-priests used to summon demons to attack Valdemar and the same with Hardornian mages. [[spoiler: That is how Leareth bypassed the webs protection]]
** A powerful, determined or crazy enough mage could simply ignore the vrondi long enough to accomplish an objective.
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** [[FriendsWithBenefits Talia and Kris]], who are involved during her internship but don't have serious romantic feelings for each other, are also shown to add a psychic dimension to their lovemaking.
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* LoopholeAbuse: Valdemaran law requires that the monarch be a Herald--but it doesn't say anything about ''regents''. So if you want to run the country, you ''could'' marry the monarch, have a baby, arrange an "accident" for your beloved, and rule in the child's stead for at least eighteen years, more if you play your cards right. [[spoiler: Which is exactly what Prince Thanel, Selenay's awful first husband, nearly manages--it doesn't work because Thanel is working on the plans of someone far smarter than him and falls apart when not being explicitly instructed, and Alberich spots the assassination attempt in time.]]
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* BadassGrandpa: Lord Jorthun, especially in ''Closer to the Chest.''

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* FisherKing: Inverted and invoked in ''Mage Storms''. After years of misrule by Ancar, who ruined the land with magic, the people of Hardorn insist their new king go through a ceremony to magically bind him to the land in such a way that he will personally feel the effects of any abuses inflicted upon it.
* FishOutOfWater: Newly-Chosen Heralds almost always have to go through a dramatic adjustment phase when they arrive at the Palace for training.

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* FisherKing: Inverted and invoked in ''Mage Storms''. After years of misrule by Ancar, who ruined the land with magic, the people of Hardorn insist their new king go through a ceremony to magically bind him to the land in such a way so that he will personally feel the effects of any abuses inflicted upon it.
it. Later in the series, all of the allied lands get a monarch Earth-bound to help set the last wave of defenses against the Final Storm.
* FishOutOfWater: Newly-Chosen Heralds almost always have to go through a dramatic an adjustment phase when they arrive at the Palace for training.



** In ''Arrows of the Queen'', when first describing Companions, Talia remarks that they transcend horses in the way that "panthers transcend cats, or '''[[spoiler:angels transcend men]]'''. Yeah, about that...

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** In ''Arrows of the Queen'', when first describing Companions, Talia remarks that they transcend horses in the way that "panthers transcend cats, or '''[[spoiler:angels ''"angels transcend men]]'''.men"''. Yeah, about that...



* {{Geas}}: The magic sword [[EmpathicWeapon Need]], [[spoiler:before it awakens]], compels its bearers to go to the aid of women in trouble. Many of Tarma and Kethry's adventures are due to this effect, but Kerowyn uses her Mindspeech to get it to back off a bit so she can make her own choices in life.

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* {{Geas}}: The magic sword [[EmpathicWeapon Need]], [[spoiler:before it awakens]], Need]] (before she awakens), compels its her bearers to go to the aid of women in trouble. Many of Tarma and Kethry's adventures are due to this effect, but Kerowyn uses her Mindspeech to get it Need to back off a bit so she can make her own choices in life.



* GeniusLoci: The Forest of Sorrows. [[spoiler: Leave it Vanyel to turn himself into this in death.]]

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* HealingHands: The Healers generally have this as an ability, though it's stressed that it has limitations and it's best to use normal medicine as much as possible.

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* HealingHands: The Healers generally have this as an ability, though it costs energy that comes from the Healer's personal magical reserves, so it's stressed that it has limitations and it's best better to use normal medicine as much as and care whenever possible.



** Notably {{averted}} by the Valdemaran royal family; with Companions Choosing as many girls as boys, the Heralds know better than to think a Queen would be less effective a ruler than a King. Queen Selenay rules both before and during her marriages (and her husbands remain Princes, even though Daren legally ''could'' have been crowned King if he and Selanay wanted to do that, as unlike his brother Thanel, he had been Chosen), and her daughter Elspeth remains Heir even after her younger half-brother is born, until she explicitly {{abdicate|TheThrone}}s. Valdemar's nobility, however, is not so enlightened, preferring male heirs strongly.
** A side plot in the ''Literature/LastHeraldMageTrilogy'' is that [[spoiler:King Randale is sterile. To hide this fact, Vanyel sires a child on Randale's lifebonded mate (at her request)]].

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** Notably {{averted}} by the Valdemaran royal family; with Companions Choosing as many girls as boys, the Heralds know better than to think a Queen would be less effective a ruler than a King. Queen Selenay rules both before and during her marriages (and her husbands remain Princes, even though Daren legally ''could'' have been crowned King if he and Selanay wanted to do that, as unlike his brother Thanel, he had been Chosen), wanted), and her daughter Elspeth remains Heir even after her younger half-brother is born, until she explicitly {{abdicate|TheThrone}}s. born. Valdemar's nobility, however, is not so enlightened, preferring male heirs strongly.
** A side plot in the ''Literature/LastHeraldMageTrilogy'' is that [[spoiler:King King Randale is sterile. sterile -- an obstacle to any possible alliance marriage. To hide this fact, Vanyel sires his consort Shavri conceives a child on with Herald Vanyel, with Randale's lifebonded mate (at her request)]].full knowledge and consent.



** Iftel was a Hidden Elf ''Nation State''. For hundreds of years it showed up on maps, but few ever went in or out. It was well known that trying to invade or sneak over the border would lead to instant death, but sometimes people were ''permitted'' in and came back out reporting that it was otherwise a ''very'' boring place which there was no real reason to visit, ever... [[spoiler:In reality it contained a people (true Kaled'a'in) and even an entire sentient species (the Gryphons) that virtually everyone in the setting would have been ''floored'' to learn still existed in the world. Why visitors reported otherwise isn't quite explained, but it's implied to be because the same magic that guarded the borders also imposed a PerceptionFilter.]]
** Valdemar itself is a downplayed example after Vanyel's era up until the ''Mage Winds'' trilogy. While they trade with their neighbors and maintain good relations with everyone except Karse, they generally don't have much to do with the world outside their borders unless things have gone totally pear-shaped, in part because Vanyel's web and the gods are working to keep Valdemar secluded (being in a corner of the map, with nigh-impassible barriers on two borders, helps). Outsiders see Valdemar as a strange (but harmless) hermit kingdom, and a saying in Rethwellan is that "when the wind blows folk from Valdemar, prepare for heavy weather."

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** Iftel was a Hidden Elf ''Nation State''. For hundreds of years it showed up on maps, but few ever went in or out. It was well known that trying to invade or sneak over the border would lead to instant death, but sometimes people were ''permitted'' in and came back out reporting that it was otherwise a ''very'' boring place which there was no real reason to visit, ever... [[spoiler:In reality it contained a people (true Kaled'a'in) and even an entire sentient species (the Gryphons) that virtually everyone in the setting would have been ''floored'' to learn still existed in the world. Why visitors reported otherwise isn't quite explained, but it's implied to be because the same magic that guarded the borders also imposed a PerceptionFilter.WeirdnessCensor.]]
** Valdemar itself is a downplayed example after Vanyel's era up until the ''Mage Winds'' trilogy. While they trade with their neighbors and maintain good relations with everyone except Karse, they generally don't have much to do with the world outside their borders unless things have gone totally pear-shaped, in part because Vanyel's web and the gods are working to keep Valdemar secluded (being in a corner of the map, with nigh-impassible barriers on two borders, helps). Outsiders see Valdemar as a strange (but harmless) but harmless hermit kingdom, and a saying in Rethwellan is that "when the wind blows folk from Valdemar, prepare for heavy weather."



* HotDrinkCure: In the first book of "The Collegium Chronicles", a severe blizzard hits Haven. Some people barely make it to the shelter in time and are treated for hypothermia, with some of the treatments being heated alcoholic drinks.

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* HotDrinkCure: In the first book of "The the Collegium Chronicles", Chronicles, a severe blizzard hits Haven. Some people barely make it to the shelter in time and are treated for hypothermia, with some of the treatments being heated alcoholic drinks.



** The one between Dirk, Kris and Talia was one also. Talia did have an affair with Kris during her internship, but it had ended by the time she realized she actually liked Dirk. Dirk picked up on remanents of their past relationship, deduced they were ''still'' together, leading to his attempt at IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy. Everyone considers him an idiot for this.

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** The one between Dirk, Kris and Talia: Talia was one also. Talia did have had an affair with Kris during her internship, but it had ended by the time she realized she actually liked Dirk. Dirk picked up on remanents remnants of their past relationship, deduced they were ''still'' together, leading to his attempt at IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy. Everyone considers him an idiot for this.and abandoned any pursuit of Talia because he was certain she'd never want him. The result is a tangle of misery that doesn't resolve until things have become truly terrible.



* IntentionalHeartbreaker: ''Arrows of the Queen'' mentions a cruel noblewoman who pretended to love Dirk so as to get close to his handsome best friend. When said friend rejected her attempt to cheat on Dirk, she went and tore into the latter, telling him to kill himself. Unfortunately, since the woman ''technically'' didn't break any laws, all the authorities could do was ban her from the Collegium.

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* IntentionalHeartbreaker: Lady Naril in ''Arrows of the Queen'' mentions a cruel noblewoman who pretended to love Dirk so as to she could get close closer to his handsome best friend. When said friend Kris. When Kris rejected her attempt to cheat on Dirk, her, she went and tore into the latter, telling him to kill himself. Unfortunately, since the Dirk for believing a beautiful woman ''technically'' like her would want a homely man like him. Dirk's self-esteem was so shattered that he didn't break any laws, all the authorities could do was ban her from the Collegium.believe ''any'' woman would want him, complicating his relationship with Talia.
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* {{Clingy MacGuffin}}:CircusOfMagic: In ''Winds of Fury'', the protagonists, who have a variety of magic, PsychicPowers, and BondCreatures in the shape of large white horses, sneak into an enemy nation using a NeedleInAStackOfNeedles approach--they use their illusions and showy magic to disguise themselves as carnival performers, hucksters, and charlatans, and travel towards the capital as part of an actual carnival troupe. Performing in carnivals seems to be a common occupation for low-power mages, making it an excellent disguise.
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* ''Mage Winds'': Elspeth, the RoyalBrat [[NeverLiveItDown a decade earlier]], has come of age and is [[BecauseDestinySaysSo foretold]] to become Valdemar's first Herald-Mage in six hundred years. But she's not about to be [[ScrewDestiny controlled by destiny]] and ends up unexpectedly making allies of the magical Hawkbrothers, just as an ancient enemy returns and threatens to destroy both the Tayledras and Valdemar.

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* ''Mage Winds'': Elspeth, the RoyalBrat [[NeverLiveItDown [[OnceDoneNeverForgotten a decade earlier]], has come of age and is [[BecauseDestinySaysSo foretold]] to become Valdemar's first Herald-Mage in six hundred years. But she's not about to be [[ScrewDestiny controlled by destiny]] and ends up unexpectedly making allies of the magical Hawkbrothers, just as an ancient enemy returns and threatens to destroy both the Tayledras and Valdemar.
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* StockMedievalMeal:
** Higher-class inns have more variety, but the "menu" at poorer inns/taverns like the Hollybush from Take A Thief is stew made from better inns' scraps, coarse bread, and stale beer.
** The Collegium Chronicles novels have a lot of "traveler's pies", at one inn visited in Bastion different versions of these pies are the only things on the menu.
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* IntentionalHeartbreaker: ''Arrows of the Queen'' mentions a cruel noblewoman who pretended to love Dirk so as to get close to his handsome best friend. When said friend rejected her attempt to cheat on Dirk, she went and tore into the latter, telling him to kill himself. Unfortunately, since the woman ''technically'' didn't break any laws, all the authorities could do was ban her from the Collegium.
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* AgeGapRomance: Vanyel (35) and Stefan (17), Talia (18) and Dirk (mid-30s).
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* CommonHollywoodSexTraits: Over and over, the stories seem to have no clue how female sexuality actually works. Having sex for the first time is always painful and bloody, no matter how skilled the partner or how turned on the woman is. Talia, Amily, and Violetta all fall prey to this, with the text of first-time intercourse all describing the "stab of pain", despite their partners taking time and care.
** Violetta's case is particularly aggravating, as it combines the pain with a huge dose of "Hymens Don't Work Like That" and extreme slut-shaming that goes against everything the series has built up about Valdemar to date. After Violetta's innocent letter of infatuation to Brand is found out, an enraged Lady Dia berates and shames Violetta over it, claiming that the letter is somehow proof of Violetta being wanton and sluttish, and topping it all off by stating that if Violetta had sex with Brand, everyone would somehow "know" she'd been "deflowered".[[note]]No, they wouldn't. Hymens can not only be easily torn by everyday exertion -- not to mention masturbation -- but often form as a ring of tissue that doesn't block anything. Not even a doctor can tell if a woman is a virgin.[[/note]] When the strict, repressed, isolated ''Holderkin''[[note]]who are polyamorous and have no problems with lesbian relationships[[/note]] come across as more accepting and open than people in Valdemar's main city, there's a major problem.
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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: The ''Arrows'' trilogy includes a detailed description of Heraldic arrow code, a coded system of communication which is heavily used by Heralds and serves a plot-critical purpose on several occasions. This code is never mentioned again in subsequent books.

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* EarlyInstallmentWeirdness: The ''Arrows'' trilogy includes a detailed description of Heraldic arrow code, a coded system of communication which is heavily used by Heralds and serves a plot-critical purpose on several occasions. This code is never mentioned again in subsequent books. This is discussed in more detail on the Headscratchers page.



** A type of mushroom is weaponized in ''Arrow's Fall'' [[spoiler: to mess with Talia's Empathy.]] This is never mentioned or used again.

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** A type of mushroom is weaponized in ''Arrow's Fall'' [[spoiler: to mess with Talia's Empathy.]] This is never mentioned or used again. (However, it only grows in Valdemar and Hardorn. Presumably the Heralds went on a search and destroy mission in Valdemar, and given the wreckage that's left of Hardorn by the Mage Storms Trilogy, it may very well have been rendered extinct. Or more practically, Heralds are taught how to recognise and avoid it!)
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* {{Bishonen}}: Vanyel and Firesong in particular. Especially Firesong, who is described as though he stepped right out of a medieval fantasy anime.

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* {{Bishonen}}: Vanyel and Firesong in particular. Especially Firesong, who is described as though he stepped right out of a medieval fantasy anime. Very few readers were surprised to find out that Firesong is Vanyel's descendant.



* CombatPragmatist: The main philosophy of both Alberich and Kerowyn -- forget grace, dignity, or any illusions about a "fair fight"; just attack for maximum damage with whatever you've got on hand.

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* CombatPragmatist: The main philosophy of both Alberich and Kerowyn -- forget grace, dignity, or any illusions about a "fair fight"; just attack for maximum damage with whatever you've got on hand. It's probably not a coincidence that they were both successful professional warriors [[note]] Alberich was the youngest ever Captain in the Karsite Army, despite having no connections or wealth to fuel his rise, and Kerowyn was the Captain of a successful mercenary company [[/note]] before they were Chosen



** Alberich himself does this afterwards because he's been "rescued" by his sworn enemy, which earns him the undying(ish) hatred of his countrymen. He gets over it later.

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** Alberich himself does this afterwards because he's been "rescued" by his sworn enemy, which earns him the undying(ish) hatred of his countrymen. [[note]]Particularly when he reasons out, and Kantor admits, that Kantor triggered his [=ForeSight=] to occur especially strongly in public to bring matters to a head - Alberich also comes to agree with Kantor's statement that he couldn't have hidden his Gift much longer anyway [[/note]] He gets over it later.
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** ''Eye Spy'' (forthcoming July 2019)

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** ''Eye Spy'' (forthcoming July (July 2019)
** ''Spy, Spy Again'' (forthcoming)
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* HighlyConspicuousUniform: Heralds (white), Bards (red), and Healers (green) all wear these in their normal duties. In each case it's because it's their job to be highly visible, even when being visible is sometimes a liability, like on the battlefield.

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* HighlyConspicuousUniform: Valdemaran Heralds (white), Bards (red), and Healers (green) all wear these in their normal duties. In each case it's because it's their job to be highly visible, even when being visible is sometimes a liability, like on the battlefield.
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* ColorCodedCharacters: Heralds (white), Bards (red), and Healers (green) wear distinct, {{Highly Conspicuous Uniform}}s because being highly visible is part of their jobs. It's also observed that the colors in question are difficult to counterfeit: red and green dye are expensive and white cloth is hard to keep white. Each group's trainees also wear distinctively-colored (but less conspicuous) uniforms: Heraldic trainees in grey instead of white, Bardic trainees in rust-red instead of scarlet, and Healers in pale green instead of forest green. In addition, the Collegium's Armsmaster wears Hearld's "Whites" done in grey darker than the trainee uniforms. This started as a personal habit of Alberich, but his successor Kerowyn did the same thing, cementing it into a tradition that seems likely to last.

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* ColorCodedCharacters: Valdemaran Heralds (white), Bards (red), and Healers (green) wear distinct, {{Highly Conspicuous Uniform}}s because being highly visible is part of their jobs. It's also observed that the colors in question are difficult to counterfeit: red and green dye are expensive and white cloth is hard to keep white. Each group's trainees also wear distinctively-colored (but less conspicuous) uniforms: Heraldic trainees in grey instead of white, Bardic trainees in rust-red instead of scarlet, and Healers in pale green instead of forest green. In addition, the Collegium's Armsmaster wears Hearld's "Whites" done in grey darker than the trainee uniforms. This started as a personal habit of Alberich, but his successor Kerowyn did the same thing, cementing it into a tradition that seems likely to last.

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