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* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: While on the train heading to Theodore's fortress, [[spoiler:Natalia]] and Jonathan both share the stories of their [[DarkAndTroubledPast]]s with each other (although Jonathans talks about Frederick's past rather than his own). However, [[spoiler:Simon Jones]] soon intervenes, leading to a fight that starts off inside the passenger train before ending up [[TraintopBattle on top of freight train]].
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* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: While on the train heading to Theodore's fortress, [[spoiler:Natalia]] and Jonathan both share the stories of their [[DarkAndTroubledPast]]s DarkAndTroubledPast with each other (although Jonathans talks about Frederick's past rather than his own). However, [[spoiler:Simon Jones]] soon intervenes, leading to a fight that starts off inside the passenger train before ending up [[TraintopBattle on top of freight train]].
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* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: While on the train heading to Theodore's fortress, [[spoiler:Natalia]] and Jonathan both share the stories of their DarkAndTroubledPasts [[DarkAndTroubledPast]]s with each other (although Jonathans talks about Frederick's past rather than his own). However, [[spoiler:Simon Jones]] soon intervenes, leading to a fight that starts off inside the passenger train before ending up [[TraintopBattle on top of freight train]].
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* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: While on the train heading to Theodore's fortress, [[spoiler:Natalia]] and Jonathan both share the stories of their DarkAndTroubledpasts DarkAndTroubledPasts with each other (although Jonathans talks about Frederick's past rather than his own). However, [[spoiler:Simon Jones]] soon intervenes, leading to a fight that starts off inside the passenger train before ending up [[TraintopBattle on top of freight train]].
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* ActionFilmQuietDramaScene: While on the train heading to Theodore's fortress, [[spoiler:Natalia]] and Jonathan both share the stories of their [[DarkAndTroublePast]]s DarkAndTroubledpasts with each other (although Jonathans talks about Frederick's past rather than his own). However, [[spoiler:Simon Jones]] soon intervenes, leading to a fight that starts off inside the passenger train before ending up [[TraintopBattle on top of freight train]].
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* BigBadDuumvirate: [[spoiler:Theodore Jager and Bethany Carer]] both serve as the two villains of the story, being being the murders. However have their own motives for their actions.
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''Fear the Night'' is a story written by [[tropers/{{Hyenaboy}} RedstonePrime]], and his first non-fanfiction story. It follows the adventure of two friends; a conservationist and a detective, as they try and solve a series of murders that have occured in the kingdom of Nova Fides.
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''Fear the Night'' is a story written by [[tropers/{{Hyenaboy}} [[Tropers/{{Hyenaboy}} RedstonePrime]], and his first non-fanfiction story. It follows the adventure of two friends; a conservationist and a detective, as they try and solve a series of murders that have occured in the kingdom of Nova Fides.
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** Jonathan has a moment of this when he sees [[spoiler:Matthew lying dead on the ground]], blaming himself for his death after he told him to [[GetOut leave the house]]. He has a second one later on when he [[spoiler:almost beats Simon to death in an UnstopableRage]].
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** Jonathan has a moment of this when he sees [[spoiler:Matthew lying dead on the ground]], blaming himself for his death after he told him to [[GetOut leave the house]]. He has a second one later on when he [[spoiler:almost beats Simon to death in an UnstopableRage]].UnstoppableRage]].
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''Fear the Night'' is a story written by [[tropers/Hyenaboy RedstonePrime]], and his first non-fanfiction story. It follows the adventure of two friends; a conservationist and a detective, as they try and solve a series of murders that have occured in the kingdom of Nova Fides.
The story can be read here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/52719145/chapters/133344487
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!!The story contains examples off:
*BigBadDuumvirate: [[spoiler:Theodore Jager and Bethany Carer]] both serve as the two villains of the story, being being the murders. However have their own motives for their actions.
*FantasticRacism: [[spoiler:Theodore Jager]] is prejudiced against werebeasts. This also serves as his motive for hunting them down.
*HeroicBSOD: Jonathan falls into a massive one when [[spoiler:He sees the body of his brother lying on the ground, and then learns that half the wolf pack he's been studying has been wiped out]].
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
**[[spoiler:Matthew Franklin]] is horrified when he learns that the werebeasts he's been helping to hunt down were innocent people.
**[[spoiler:Natalia Jager]] Has one when [[spoiler:Matthew]] tells her she's responisble for turning him into a werebeast.
**Jonathan has a moment of this when he sees [[spoiler:Matthew lying dead on the ground]], blaming himself for his death after he told him to [[GetOut leave the house]]. He has a second one later on when he [[spoiler:almost beats Simon to death in an UnstopableRage]].
**[[spoiler:Jessica Franklin]] completely breaks down when she realises she [[spoiler:almost killed her own son in an attempt to cure him]].
**[[spoiler:Theodore]], of all people, has one when he [[spoiler:breaks free of Darkfears mind control]], and sees all the destruction his own actions have caused.
*NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: It's very inadvisable to mess with people name Vulfsmörder (German for Wolf Killer), and Darkfear.
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
**Jonathan gives one to a train guard and [[spoiler:Simon Jones]], calling them out for being easily manipulated by Vulfsmörder.
**[[spoiler:Theodore]] gets one from Frederick, who exposes his true motive for wanting the werebeasts killed off.
*TraintopBattle: Half of chapter 9 involves Jonathan, [[spoiler:Natalia, and Simon]] fighting on top of a freight train, that is heading in the direction of [[spoiler:Theodore's fortress]].
* WhatTheHellHero:
**After finding out that [[spoiler:his own mom has been working with Theodore]], Jonathan calls her out for being easily tricked by him.
**[[spoiler:Natalia ccompletely snaps at Jessica when the latter almost kills her own son]].
The story can be read here: https://archiveofourown.org/works/52719145/chapters/133344487
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!!The story contains examples off:
*BigBadDuumvirate: [[spoiler:Theodore Jager and Bethany Carer]] both serve as the two villains of the story, being being the murders. However have their own motives for their actions.
*FantasticRacism: [[spoiler:Theodore Jager]] is prejudiced against werebeasts. This also serves as his motive for hunting them down.
*HeroicBSOD: Jonathan falls into a massive one when [[spoiler:He sees the body of his brother lying on the ground, and then learns that half the wolf pack he's been studying has been wiped out]].
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone:
**[[spoiler:Matthew Franklin]] is horrified when he learns that the werebeasts he's been helping to hunt down were innocent people.
**[[spoiler:Natalia Jager]] Has one when [[spoiler:Matthew]] tells her she's responisble for turning him into a werebeast.
**Jonathan has a moment of this when he sees [[spoiler:Matthew lying dead on the ground]], blaming himself for his death after he told him to [[GetOut leave the house]]. He has a second one later on when he [[spoiler:almost beats Simon to death in an UnstopableRage]].
**[[spoiler:Jessica Franklin]] completely breaks down when she realises she [[spoiler:almost killed her own son in an attempt to cure him]].
**[[spoiler:Theodore]], of all people, has one when he [[spoiler:breaks free of Darkfears mind control]], and sees all the destruction his own actions have caused.
*NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: It's very inadvisable to mess with people name Vulfsmörder (German for Wolf Killer), and Darkfear.
*TheReasonYouSuckSpeech:
**Jonathan gives one to a train guard and [[spoiler:Simon Jones]], calling them out for being easily manipulated by Vulfsmörder.
**[[spoiler:Theodore]] gets one from Frederick, who exposes his true motive for wanting the werebeasts killed off.
*TraintopBattle: Half of chapter 9 involves Jonathan, [[spoiler:Natalia, and Simon]] fighting on top of a freight train, that is heading in the direction of [[spoiler:Theodore's fortress]].
* WhatTheHellHero:
**After finding out that [[spoiler:his own mom has been working with Theodore]], Jonathan calls her out for being easily tricked by him.
**[[spoiler:Natalia ccompletely snaps at Jessica when the latter almost kills her own son]].
