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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]] claims this upon his return, though [[CaptainObvious he didn't really die]].
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* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]] claims this upon his return, though [[CaptainObvious he didn't really die]].die.
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** A stain is at one point compared to the likeness of [[Creator/ElvisPresley Elvis]], a reference to a similar incident in ''ComicStrip/BloomCounty''.
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** A stain is at one point compared to the likeness of [[Creator/ElvisPresley [[Music/ElvisPresley Elvis]], a reference to a similar incident in ''ComicStrip/BloomCounty''.
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** The title of "[[Film/TheWizardOfOz Pay No Attention To That Man Behind The Curtain]]".
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** The title of "[[Film/TheWizardOfOz Pay "Pay No Attention To That Man Behind The Curtain]]".Curtain" is a reference to ''[[Film/TheWizardOfOz]]''.
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* ApocalypticLog: Several, especially in the beginning.
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* ApocalypticLog: Several, There are several, especially in the beginning.beginning. [[spoiler:The way the story is currently shaping up, the captain's log of the ''Hope'' may be turning into one.]]
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* BlatantLies: The news report of the death of Patrick Scott.
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* CorruptChurch: Though two of its officials actually aren't.
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* BlatantLies: The news report of the death of Patrick Scott.
Scott is at odds with the official findings.
* CorruptChurch:Though two One springs up on the ''Hope'', although three of its officials actually aren't.
* CorruptChurch:
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* DrivenToSuicide: The maintenance character in "Survivor's Guilt".
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** Backyard Bob deserves special mention. First, jury-rigs a personal spaceship to escape from the Earth before it explodes and ends up making it to Mars before meeting up with the ''Hope''. Second, [[spoiler:he cuts his chest open and hides a key piece of evidence ''inside of his body'' when the CorruptChurch tries to off him]].
* DrivenToSuicide: The maintenance character in "Survivor'sGuilt".Guilt" experiences, well, survivor's guilt.
* DrivenToSuicide: The maintenance character in "Survivor's
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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]].
* HearingVoices: Backyard Bob after blasting off.
* HearingVoices: Backyard Bob after blasting off.
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* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]].
[[spoiler:Archbishop Tertius somehow escaped being recycled.]]
* HearingVoices: Backyard Bob hears the remnants of the Earth talking to him afterblasting he blasts off.
* HearingVoices: Backyard Bob hears the remnants of the Earth talking to him after
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* HopeSpot: The cloud detected in transit. Turns out it was [[spoiler:faked so that the population would be thinned down and resources could be hogged by a select group]].
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* HopeSpot: The [[spoiler:The cloud detected in transit. Turns transit turns out it was [[spoiler:faked to have been faked so that the population would be thinned down and resources could be hogged by a select group]].
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Pastor Norton's death. Backyard Bob sees through it, though.
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Pastor Norton's death.death is covered up by the CorruptChurch. Backyard Bob sees through it, though.
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** Pastor '''[[Theatre/{{Macbeth}} Banquo]]''' Thomas Norton and his son Conor '''Fleance''' Norton. Also, Seward, Jr., who dies fighting [[spoiler:Archbishop Tertius]].
* MillionToOneChance: Averted. Even though they knew that the generation ship would likely not be able to make the course correction, the contingent of survivors left in the Solar System sent a message to the ship, telling them that the remaining colonies would be more than happy to take them in.
* MillionToOneChance: Averted. Even though they knew that the generation ship would likely not be able to make the course correction, the contingent of survivors left in the Solar System sent a message to the ship, telling them that the remaining colonies would be more than happy to take them in.
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** Pastor '''[[Theatre/{{Macbeth}} Banquo]]''' Thomas Norton and his son Conor '''Fleance''' Conor Norton. Also, Seward, Jr., who dies fighting [[spoiler:Archbishop Tertius]].
* MillionToOneChance: Averted. Even though they knew that the generation ship would likely not be able to make the course correction, the contingent of survivors left in the Solar System sent a message to the ship, telling them that the remaining colonies would be more than happy to take them in.Tertius]].
* MillionToOneChance: Averted. Even though they knew that the generation ship would likely not be able to make the course correction, the contingent of survivors left in the Solar System sent a message to the ship, telling them that the remaining colonies would be more than happy to take them in.
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-->[[[spoiler:Tertius]]' antics] incensed me enough to personally bash his head in. (The ([[ComicStrip/BloomCounty The stain, incidentally, looks a little like like]] [[Music/ElvisPresley Elvis]].)
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** The realization that [[spoiler:Tertius had beat the recycler]].recycler]] provides another.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Some egregious examples crop up on occasion.
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** The name of one of the Chinese ships in the Asteroid Belt is ''Lán Tàiyáng'', which translates to [[{{Series/Firefly}} Blue Sun]].
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** The name of one of the Chinese ships in the Asteroid Belt is ''Lán Tàiyáng'', which translates to was translated from [[{{Series/Firefly}} Blue Sun]].Sun]] using Google Translate.
* TwoLinesNoWaiting: The story has several different forks due to the nature of Ficly's prequel and sequel functions. Eventually two long-running threads emerge—one following the ''Hope'' and one following the remnants of humanity in the Solar System.
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** It was the Archbishop and his cronies (in-universe, anyway)!
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** In-universe: It was the Archbishop and his cronies (in-universe, anyway)!cronies!
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** The name of one of the Chinese ships in the Asteroid Belt is ''Lán Tàiyáng'', which translates to [[{{Firefly}} Blue Sun]].
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** The name of one of the Chinese ships in the Asteroid Belt is ''Lán Tàiyáng'', which translates to [[{{Firefly}} [[{{Series/Firefly}} Blue Sun]].
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* MeaningfulName: [[BenedictArnold Arnold Benedict]], who leaves a large portion of the populace in an orbital hotel so that he can escape.
** To a lesser extent, Backyard Bob, nicknamed after the place where he did most of his tinkering.
** To a lesser extent, Backyard Bob, nicknamed after the place where he did most of his tinkering.
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* MeaningfulName: MeaningfulName:
** [[BenedictArnold Arnold Benedict]], who leaves a large portion of the populace in an orbital hotel so that he canescape.
** To a lesser extent, Backyard Bob, nicknamed after the place where he did most of his tinkering.escape.
** [[BenedictArnold Arnold Benedict]], who leaves a large portion of the populace in an orbital hotel so that he can
** To a lesser extent, Backyard Bob, nicknamed after the place where he did most of his tinkering.
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* MoodWhiplash: Nobody listened when Backyard Bob predicted the destruction of the Earth! He jury-rigs a spaceship to escape. It works! But nobody who was on the Earth survived…
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* MoodWhiplash: MoodWhiplash:
** Nobody listened when Backyard Bob predicted the destruction of the Earth! He jury-rigs a spaceship to escape. It works! But nobody who was on the Earth survived…
** Nobody listened when Backyard Bob predicted the destruction of the Earth! He jury-rigs a spaceship to escape. It works! But nobody who was on the Earth survived…
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* OhCrap: The initial journey was slated at two hundred seventeen years. Then:
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** The initial journey was slated at two hundred seventeen years. Then:
** The initial journey was slated at two hundred seventeen years. Then:
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** A stain is at one point compared to the likeness of [[Creator/ElvisPresley Elvis]], a reference to a similar incident in ''ComicStrip/BloomCounty''.
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* IgnoredExpert: Backyard Bob, who is the only one who predicts the Earth's destruction, and is the only person who was on the surface near the time of the explosion to survive it.
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-->[[[spoiler:Tertius]]' antics] incensed me enough to personally bash his head in. (The stain, incidentally, looks a little like Music/ElvisPresley.[[Music/ElvisPresley Elvis]].)
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The Earth explodes, and Backyard Bob, who was [[IgnoreExpert laughed down when he predicted it]], escapes. Meanwhile, the other survivors try and make for the Moon. Not all of them make it, and even fewer of them survive the resulting chaos. A posse of idealists leaves for Mars (the already-extant colonies of which get obliterated by a large chunk of Canada while they're traveling). Over the course of a few years, a small group of survivors manages to cobble together a generation ship. They launch, and it looks like Alpha Centauri is going to become the new home for mankind, almost three centuries hence.
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The Earth explodes, and Backyard Bob, who was [[IgnoreExpert [[IgnoredExpert laughed down when he predicted it]], escapes. Meanwhile, the other survivors try and make for the Moon. Not all of them make it, and even fewer of them survive the resulting chaos. A posse of idealists leaves for Mars (the already-extant colonies of which get obliterated by a large chunk of Canada while they're traveling). Over the course of a few years, a small group of survivors manages to cobble together a generation ship. They launch, and it looks like Alpha Centauri is going to become the new home for mankind, almost three centuries hence.
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''Diaries of the Disaster'' is a name that has come into use referring to a series of short stories dealing with TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt. Contributed to by a number of different authors, it begins with [[http://ficly.com/stories/597 "The Lonely Void"]], in which a backyard tinkerer manages to make it off the planet Earth after it explodes…and then runs with it from there.
The Earth explodes, and Backyard Bob, who was [[IgnoreExpert laughed down when he predicted it]], escapes. Meanwhile, the other survivors try and make for the Moon. Not all of them make it, and even fewer of them survive the resulting chaos. A posse of idealists leaves for Mars (the already-extant colonies of which get obliterated by a large chunk of Canada while they're traveling). Over the course of a few years, a small group of survivors manages to cobble together a generation ship. They launch, and it looks like Alpha Centauri is going to become the new home for mankind, almost three centuries hence.
…except that [[FromBadToWorse It Gets Worse]]. A group decides that they want to hoard resources for themselves, so they fake an inefficiency in the resource reclamation systems and end up causing the deaths of about three-quarters of the population on the ship for recycling…and they are perfectly willing to kill to keep their secrets.
In the middle of all this, there is another development. As it turns out, there actually ''were'' other survivors, scant and scattered though they be, in the Solar System, and the generation ship might not have needed to have been built in the first place. The story forks off on this tack, detailing the progress of the Martian terraformation project, thus ending up with two threads running in parallel.
!!This series presents examples of:
* ApocalypticLog: Several, especially in the beginning.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]] claims this upon his return, though [[CaptainObvious he didn't really die]].
* BlatantLies: The news report of the death of Patrick Scott.
* CorruptChurch: Though two of its officials actually aren't.
* DeTerminator: Everybody, really, to some extent or another.
* DrivenToSuicide: The maintenance character in "Survivor's Guilt".
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The story ''starts'' like this.
* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]].
* HearingVoices: Backyard Bob after blasting off.
* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Their Own Petard]]: All the corrupt church officials are sent to the recyclers.
* HopeSpot: The cloud detected in transit. Turns out it was [[spoiler:faked so that the population would be thinned down and resources could be hogged by a select group]].
* IncrediblyLamePun: The terraformation of Mars is described as "a project of astronomical proportions".
* InfoDump: "Under the Crust", describing the terraformation plan.
* [[LaserGuidedKarma Laser-Guided Karma]]: [[spoiler:Tertius]] is beat to death with a section of pipe that was used to kill another man on his orders.
* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Pastor Norton's death. Backyard Bob sees through it, though.
* MeaningfulName: [[BenedictArnold Arnold Benedict]], who leaves a large portion of the populace in an orbital hotel so that he can escape.
** To a lesser extent, Backyard Bob, nicknamed after the place where he did most of his tinkering.
** Bishops Mallard and Young are [[ShoutOut Shout Outs]] to two of the series contributors.
** Pastor '''[[Theatre/{{Macbeth}} Banquo]]''' Thomas Norton and his son Conor '''Fleance''' Norton. Also, Seward, Jr., who dies fighting [[spoiler:Archbishop Tertius]].
* MillionToOneChance: Averted. Even though they knew that the generation ship would likely not be able to make the course correction, the contingent of survivors left in the Solar System sent a message to the ship, telling them that the remaining colonies would be more than happy to take them in.
* MoodWhiplash: Nobody listened when Backyard Bob predicted the destruction of the Earth! He jury-rigs a spaceship to escape. It works! But nobody who was on the Earth survived…
** This:
-->[[[spoiler:Tertius]]' antics] incensed me enough to personally bash his head in. (The stain, incidentally, looks a little like {{Elvis}}.)
* NuclearOption: The terraformation of Mars requires restarting its magnetosphere. The approved plan calls for nukes.
* OhCrap: The initial journey was slated at two hundred seventeen years. Then:
--> This isn’t good. I just got a preliminary report from Chief Engineer Dutch. In order to survive we need to recycle everything. We took twice the consumables we thought we would need. We should achieve a 99.99% efficiency with our recycling. Dutch said we are actually only getting 99.7% over the past 90 days. If this rate doesn’t change we will run out in 181 years.
** This was also the general reaction to the fact that [[spoiler:the resource cloud was fake]].
** The realization that [[spoiler:Tertius had beat the recycler]].
* {{Retcon}}: Hobson was originally named Williams. The original story was reëdited after a subsequent user posted a sequel mistakenly referring to the captain as "Hobson".
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Some egregious examples crop up on occasion.
* PlotHole: Just how exactly did Backyard Bob make it to Mars in a two-seater spaceship?
* ShoutOut:
** An important section of the plot is analogous to ''Theatre/{{Macbeth}}''.
** The title of "[[Film/TheWizardOfOz Pay No Attention To That Man Behind The Curtain]]".
** "The Matador"'s title is a reference to the movie version of ''Fail-Safe''.
** The name of one of the Chinese ships in the Asteroid Belt is ''Lán Tàiyáng'', which translates to [[{{Firefly}} Blue Sun]].
* TimeSkip: Several.
** The first skip comes between the building and launching of the ship.
** The Captain's Log goes from Ship's Day 007 to 113, and then the story shifts about three decades.
* TogetherInDeath: Captain Hobson volunteers to go to the recyclers because of his family.
* WhamEpisode: Several.
** [[spoiler:The cloud was fake]]!
** There are survivors in the asteroid belt!
** It was the Archbishop and his cronies (in-universe, anyway)!
** [[spoiler:Tertius escaped]]!
The Earth explodes, and Backyard Bob, who was [[IgnoreExpert laughed down when he predicted it]], escapes. Meanwhile, the other survivors try and make for the Moon. Not all of them make it, and even fewer of them survive the resulting chaos. A posse of idealists leaves for Mars (the already-extant colonies of which get obliterated by a large chunk of Canada while they're traveling). Over the course of a few years, a small group of survivors manages to cobble together a generation ship. They launch, and it looks like Alpha Centauri is going to become the new home for mankind, almost three centuries hence.
…except that [[FromBadToWorse It Gets Worse]]. A group decides that they want to hoard resources for themselves, so they fake an inefficiency in the resource reclamation systems and end up causing the deaths of about three-quarters of the population on the ship for recycling…and they are perfectly willing to kill to keep their secrets.
In the middle of all this, there is another development. As it turns out, there actually ''were'' other survivors, scant and scattered though they be, in the Solar System, and the generation ship might not have needed to have been built in the first place. The story forks off on this tack, detailing the progress of the Martian terraformation project, thus ending up with two threads running in parallel.
!!This series presents examples of:
* ApocalypticLog: Several, especially in the beginning.
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]] claims this upon his return, though [[CaptainObvious he didn't really die]].
* BlatantLies: The news report of the death of Patrick Scott.
* CorruptChurch: Though two of its officials actually aren't.
* DeTerminator: Everybody, really, to some extent or another.
* DrivenToSuicide: The maintenance character in "Survivor's Guilt".
* TheEndOfTheWorldAsWeKnowIt: The story ''starts'' like this.
* FakingTheDead: [[spoiler:Tertius]].
* HearingVoices: Backyard Bob after blasting off.
* [[HoistByHisOwnPetard Hoist By Their Own Petard]]: All the corrupt church officials are sent to the recyclers.
* HopeSpot: The cloud detected in transit. Turns out it was [[spoiler:faked so that the population would be thinned down and resources could be hogged by a select group]].
* IncrediblyLamePun: The terraformation of Mars is described as "a project of astronomical proportions".
* InfoDump: "Under the Crust", describing the terraformation plan.
* [[LaserGuidedKarma Laser-Guided Karma]]: [[spoiler:Tertius]] is beat to death with a section of pipe that was used to kill another man on his orders.
* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Pastor Norton's death. Backyard Bob sees through it, though.
* MeaningfulName: [[BenedictArnold Arnold Benedict]], who leaves a large portion of the populace in an orbital hotel so that he can escape.
** To a lesser extent, Backyard Bob, nicknamed after the place where he did most of his tinkering.
** Bishops Mallard and Young are [[ShoutOut Shout Outs]] to two of the series contributors.
** Pastor '''[[Theatre/{{Macbeth}} Banquo]]''' Thomas Norton and his son Conor '''Fleance''' Norton. Also, Seward, Jr., who dies fighting [[spoiler:Archbishop Tertius]].
* MillionToOneChance: Averted. Even though they knew that the generation ship would likely not be able to make the course correction, the contingent of survivors left in the Solar System sent a message to the ship, telling them that the remaining colonies would be more than happy to take them in.
* MoodWhiplash: Nobody listened when Backyard Bob predicted the destruction of the Earth! He jury-rigs a spaceship to escape. It works! But nobody who was on the Earth survived…
** This:
-->[[[spoiler:Tertius]]' antics] incensed me enough to personally bash his head in. (The stain, incidentally, looks a little like {{Elvis}}.)
* NuclearOption: The terraformation of Mars requires restarting its magnetosphere. The approved plan calls for nukes.
* OhCrap: The initial journey was slated at two hundred seventeen years. Then:
--> This isn’t good. I just got a preliminary report from Chief Engineer Dutch. In order to survive we need to recycle everything. We took twice the consumables we thought we would need. We should achieve a 99.99% efficiency with our recycling. Dutch said we are actually only getting 99.7% over the past 90 days. If this rate doesn’t change we will run out in 181 years.
** This was also the general reaction to the fact that [[spoiler:the resource cloud was fake]].
** The realization that [[spoiler:Tertius had beat the recycler]].
* {{Retcon}}: Hobson was originally named Williams. The original story was reëdited after a subsequent user posted a sequel mistakenly referring to the captain as "Hobson".
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: Some egregious examples crop up on occasion.
* PlotHole: Just how exactly did Backyard Bob make it to Mars in a two-seater spaceship?
* ShoutOut:
** An important section of the plot is analogous to ''Theatre/{{Macbeth}}''.
** The title of "[[Film/TheWizardOfOz Pay No Attention To That Man Behind The Curtain]]".
** "The Matador"'s title is a reference to the movie version of ''Fail-Safe''.
** The name of one of the Chinese ships in the Asteroid Belt is ''Lán Tàiyáng'', which translates to [[{{Firefly}} Blue Sun]].
* TimeSkip: Several.
** The first skip comes between the building and launching of the ship.
** The Captain's Log goes from Ship's Day 007 to 113, and then the story shifts about three decades.
* TogetherInDeath: Captain Hobson volunteers to go to the recyclers because of his family.
* WhamEpisode: Several.
** [[spoiler:The cloud was fake]]!
** There are survivors in the asteroid belt!
** It was the Archbishop and his cronies (in-universe, anyway)!
** [[spoiler:Tertius escaped]]!
