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* TangledFamilyTree: [[spoiler:Teri is Mikey's mother and half-sister, because he was conceived when their father raped her.]]
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* TangledFamilyTree: [[spoiler:Teri [[spoiler:Because Mikey was conceived when Teri's father raped her, Teri is Mikey's both his mother and half-sister, because he was conceived when their and his father raped her.is also his grandfather.]]
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** In a more general sense, not being able to achieve a goal isn't the end of the world. There's always other things you can put time and energy into.
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** In a more general sense, not being able to achieve a goal isn't the end of the world. There's There are always other things you can put that are worth putting your time and energy into. into.
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* AnAesop: Have safety schools when applying for college! They're called safety schools for a reason.
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* AnAesop: AnAesop:
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** In a more general sense, not being able to achieve a goal isn't the end of the world. There's always other things you can put time and energy into.
** Have safety schools when applying for college! They're called safety schools for a
** In a more general sense, not being able to achieve a goal isn't the end of the world. There's always other things you can put time and energy into.
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* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: Jack Malone's job doesn't leave much time for spending time with his daughter, leaving her to her own devices when she gets rejected from MIT. He doesn't even know that she had no safety schools. He spends more time trying to help Teri and her mother after [[spoiler:Mikey dies and Teri starts destroying her house]].
** To be fair, Jack ''does'' try to help Kate at first, before the Litches take up his attention, but his idea of help is discussing Kate's safety schools and she doesn't want to tell him she never applied for any.
** To be fair, Jack ''does'' try to help Kate at first, before the Litches take up his attention, but his idea of help is discussing Kate's safety schools and she doesn't want to tell him she never applied for any.
* TangledFamilyTree: [[spoiler:Teri is Mikey's mother and half-sister, because he was conceived when their father raped her.]]
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* TheCobblersChildrenHaveNoShoes: Jack Malone's job doesn't leave much time for spending time with his daughter, leaving her to her own devices when she gets rejected from MIT. He doesn't even know that she had no safety schools. He spends more time trying to help Teri and her mother after [[spoiler:Mikey dies and Teri starts destroying her house]].
** To be fair, Jack ''does'' try to help Kate at first, before the Litches take up his attention, but his idea of help is discussing Kate's safety schools and she doesn't want to tell him she never applied for any.
** To be fair, Jack ''does'' try to help Kate at first, before the Litches take up his attention, but his idea of help is discussing Kate's safety schools and she doesn't want to tell him she never applied for any.
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* DeadAnimalWarning: Teri once left a dead skunk in the car of a cheerleader who told her she should bathe more often.
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* [[IllGirl Ill Boy:]] Kate's brother, Toby, is implied to have been plagued with respiratory problems since he was very young.
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* AdultFear:
** Everything about Charlie Litch. Teri explains to Kate that the reason Mrs. Litch is the way she is is because "My mom got hit in the head with a bat once. My dad was holding the bat." [[spoiler:And then there's Mikey, who exists as a result of ParentalIncest.]]
** Mikey [[spoiler:wanders off during construction and gets electrocuted. What's worse is that it could have happened at any time]].
** Everything about Charlie Litch. Teri explains to Kate that the reason Mrs. Litch is the way she is is because "My mom got hit in the head with a bat once. My dad was holding the bat." [[spoiler:And then there's Mikey, who exists as a result of ParentalIncest.]]
** Mikey [[spoiler:wanders off during construction and gets electrocuted. What's worse is that it could have happened at any time]].
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* FormallyNamedPet: Kate's dog is named [[Franchise/StarTrek Mr. Spock.]]
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* RealityEnsues: Kate is rejected from MIT, and her attempts to push for an appeal do not work to help her overturn that ruling. She's able to at least get a clear explanation as to why they turned her down, but in the end she has to face the fact that she's not getting in though the admissions office wishes her luck.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Kate is rejected from MIT, and her attempts to push for an appeal do not work to help her overturn that ruling. She's able to at least get a clear explanation as to why they turned her down, but in the end she has to face the fact that she's not getting in though the admissions office wishes her luck.
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* AdultsAreUseless: Averted with the volunteers Jack pulled together to help rebuild the Litch home after the fire. .
* AdultFear: Everything about Charlie Litch. Teri explains to Kate that the reason Mrs. Litch is the way she is is because "My mom got hit in the head with a bat once. My dad was holding the bat." [[spoiler:And then there's Mikey, who exists as a result of ParentalIncest.]]
* AdultFear: Everything about Charlie Litch. Teri explains to Kate that the reason Mrs. Litch is the way she is is because "My mom got hit in the head with a bat once. My dad was holding the bat." [[spoiler:And then there's Mikey, who exists as a result of ParentalIncest.]]
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* AdultsAreUseless: Averted with the volunteers Jack pulled together to help rebuild the Litch home after the fire. .\n
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** Everything about Charlie Litch. Teri explains to Kate that the reason Mrs. Litch is the way she is is because "My mom got hit in the head with a bat once. My dad was holding the bat." [[spoiler:And then there's Mikey, who exists as a result of ParentalIncest.]]]]
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** Everything about Charlie Litch. Teri explains to Kate that the reason Mrs. Litch is the way she is is because "My mom got hit in the head with a bat once. My dad was holding the bat." [[spoiler:And then there's Mikey, who exists as a result of ParentalIncest.
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* BreakTheHaughty: At the start of the story, Kate is certain of her chances to get into MIT. Her world abruptly falls apart when she's rejected, but she gradually comes to learn that life could be much worse.
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* AnAesop: Have safety schools when applying for college! They're called safety schools for a reason.
* BreakTheHaughty: At the start of the story, Kate is certain of her chances to get into MIT. Her world abruptly falls apart when she's rejected, but she gradually comes to learn that life could be muchworse.worse when forced to help out Teri Litch.
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* RealityEnsues: Kate is rejected from MIT, and her attempts to push for an appeal do not work to help her overturn that ruling. She's able to at least get a clear explanation as to why they turned her down, but in the end she has to face the fact that she's not getting in.in though the admissions office wishes her luck.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Mitch calls out Teri for stealing Kate's things and using her as an emotional punching bag after [[spoiler:Mikey's death]].
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* SeniorYearStruggles: Kate's plot deals with her naive determination to go to MIT. She only applied to MIT and lied about it to her dad, leaving her in a very difficult and confusing position when MIT actually rejects her and she has to deal with the fallout.
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Kate is a preacher's daughter who excels in chemistry and is a star track athlete, with her sights dead-set on getting into the Massachusetts Institute of Technology once she graduates from Merryweather High School. She's so determined, in fact, that it's the only college she's applied to. Her getting rejected is just the tip of the iceberg, however, as soon afterwards a fire renders her neighbors - her abrasive school nemesis Teri Litch, Teri's mentally unstable mother, and her adorable toddler brother Mikey - homeless, and Kate's father arranges for Teri and Mikey to move in with his family. Kate must now struggle to deal with her rejection from MIT and a less-than-pleasant new roommate, all while maintaining her sanity.
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Kate is a preacher's daughter who excels in chemistry and is a star track athlete, with her sights dead-set on getting into the Massachusetts Institute of Technology once she graduates from Merryweather High School. She's so determined, and so sure of her chances, in fact, that it's the only college she's applied to. Her getting rejected is just the tip of the iceberg, however, as soon afterwards a fire renders her neighbors - her abrasive school nemesis Teri Litch, Teri's mentally unstable mother, and her adorable toddler brother Mikey - homeless, and Kate's father arranges for Teri and Mikey to move in with his family. Kate must now struggle to deal with her rejection from MIT and a less-than-pleasant new roommate, all while maintaining her sanity.
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* AdultsAreUseless: Jack Malone tries [[spoiler:and fails]] to help Teri Litch and Mikey, while ignoring that his daughter may need some guidance following her rejection from MIT.
* AdultFear: [[spoiler:Your husband beating you senseless and raping and impregnating your daughter; your young son wandering off and getting killed while you're not looking...]]
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* AdultsAreUseless: Averted with the volunteers Jack Malone tries [[spoiler:and fails]] pulled together to help Teri rebuild the Litch and Mikey, while ignoring that his daughter may need some guidance following her rejection from MIT.
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* AdultFear:[[spoiler:Your husband beating you senseless and raping and impregnating your daughter; your young son wandering off and getting killed while you're not looking...Everything about Charlie Litch. Teri explains to Kate that the reason Mrs. Litch is the way she is is because "My mom got hit in the head with a bat once. My dad was holding the bat." [[spoiler:And then there's Mikey, who exists as a result of ParentalIncest.]]
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: Mikey. He's too young to understand his turbulent family history or what's going on with his house, and every time he's around the tone of the story shifts to the more lighthearted side. The biggest problem he ever ends up causing is an exceptionally filthy diaper.
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* CheerfulChild: Three-year-old Mikey Litch is perpetually adorable.
* ChildByRape: [[spoiler:Mikey is both Teri's brother ''and'' [[ParentalIncest her son.]]]]
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* ChildByRape: [[spoiler:Mikey is both Teri's brother ''and'' [[ParentalIncest her son.]]]]adorable.
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* DisappearedDad: Teri's father is not in the picture, having died in jail after attacking his wife with a baseball bat [[spoiler:and impregnating his daughter.]]
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* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:Still in shock immediately following Mikey's death, Kate and her friends stay at the Litch house after everyone else has left, lighting candles and fingerpainting the walls. A few chapters later, Mikey's funeral is attended by dozens of people, some of whom Kate wouldn't have expected to see there.]]
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* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: Kate thinks back on her mother quite a lot, and it's strongly implied that her drive to get into MIT no matter what stems from her mother having gone there.
* DisappearedDad: Teri's father isnot in the picture, absent, having died in jail after attacking his wife with a baseball bat [[spoiler:and impregnating his their daughter.]]
* DueToTheDead: [[spoiler:Still in shock immediately following Mikey's death, Kate and her friends stay at the Litch house after everyone else has left, lighting candles andfingerpainting drawing with paint on the walls. A few chapters later, Later, Mikey's funeral is attended by dozens of people, some of whom Kate wouldn't have hadn't expected to see there.]]
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* StickyFingers: Teri, who unabashedly steals (and wears) Kate's watch, and later the necklace her boyfriend Mitch gave her. [[spoiler:Mitch takes offense to this, on Kate's behalf.]]
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* StickyFingers: Teri, who Teri has a habit of just grabbing things belonging to other people, be it personal belongings or even food right off people's plates. She steals (and unabashedly steals (and wears) Kate's watch, and later the necklace her boyfriend Mitch gave her. [[spoiler:Mitch takes offense [[spoiler:She gives them both back later, but Kate allows her to this, on Kate's behalf.keep the watch.]]
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* Foreshadowing: At one point in the story, Mikey asks for "Mommy". Toby brings Teri instead, since it's Teri who takes care of Mikey. [[spoiler:Mikey doesn't ask for his mother again. Why? Because Toby got it right the first time.]]
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* Foreshadowing: At one point in the story, Mikey asks for "Mommy". Toby brings Teri instead, since it's Teri who takes care of Mikey. [[spoiler:Mikey doesn't ask for his mother again. Why? Because Toby got it right the first time.]]
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* PromotionToParent: Teri has largely taken on the role of caring for Mikey, seeing as Mrs. Litch is...not entirely there. [[spoiler:Ultimately averted - Teri ''is'' the parent.]]
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* PromotionToParent: Teri has largely taken on the role of caring Mrs. Litch's mental state doesn't really allow for her to be an adequate mother to Mikey, seeing as Mrs. Litch is...not entirely there. [[spoiler:Ultimately averted - so most of that role falls to Teri. [[spoiler:Or so it seems. In reality, Teri ''is'' the parent.]] looks after Mikey because ''she'' is his mother.]]
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* [[WhatTheHellHero What The Hell Bully]]: WhatTheHellHero: Mitch calls out Teri for stealing Kate's things and using her as an emotional punching bag after [[spoiler:Mikey's death]].