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When something is {{retool}}ed to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]" and/or frothier than the original source.
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When something is {{retool}}ed Laconic/{{retool}}ed to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel "[[Laconic/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]" and/or frothier than the original source.
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When something is {{retool}}ed to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]" and frothier than the original source.
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When something is {{retool}}ed to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]" and and/or frothier than the original source.
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This can involve adaptations and I didn't see anything stating the work had to be dark in the first place. I also fixed a grammar mistake.
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is {{retool}}ed to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] something is {{retool}}ed to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]".
family-friendly]]" and frothier than the original source.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[LighterAndSofter HERE]]. Now with more humor, candies and kitties!-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[LighterAndSofter HERE]]. Now with more humor, candies and kitties!-]
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simplify markup
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} retooled]] to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} retooled]] {{retool}}ed to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel family-friendly]]".
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Revert to old Laconic per ATT: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/query.php?parent_id=75462&type=att
and reformatted it a little
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An adaptation which is much [[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel lighter in tone]] than its source material.
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An adaptation which is much [[SweetDreamsFuel lighter in tone]] than its source material.
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An adaptation which is much [[SweetDreamsFuel [[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel lighter in tone]] than its source material.
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel Family-Friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel?from=Main.SweetDreamsFuel Family-Friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel?from=Main.SweetDreamsFuel "[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel Family-Friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel?from=Main.SweetDreamsFuel Family-Friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel?from=Main."[[SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel?from=Main.SweetDreamsFuel Family-Friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier dark and gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly"."[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/SugarWiki/SweetDreamsFuel?from=Main.SweetDreamsFuel Family-Friendly]]".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier Dark dark and Gritty]] gritty]] is [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is [[ReTool Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is [[ReTool [[{{Retool}} Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is [[Laconic/ReTool Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is [[Laconic/ReTool [[ReTool Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is [[ReTool Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a work that started out as [[DarkerAndEdgier [[Laconic/DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is [[ReTool [[Laconic/ReTool Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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great now I\'m a Serial Tweaker
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When a Work that Started out as [[DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is Re-Tooled to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a Work work that Started started out as [[DarkerAndEdgier Dark and Gritty]] is Re-Tooled [[ReTool Re-Tooled]] to be more "Family-Friendly".
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no wait
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[LighterAndSofter HERE]]. Now with more humor, candies and kitties.-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[LighterAndSofter HERE]]. Now with more humor, candies and kitties.-]kitties!-]
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Removed old index thing :3
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[LighterAndSofter HERE]]. Now with more humor, candies and kitties-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[LighterAndSofter HERE]]-]HERE]]. Now with more humor, candies and kitties-]
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When a Work that Started out as [[DarkerAndEdgier Dark]] is Re-Tooled to be more "Family-Friendly".
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When a Work that Started out as [[DarkerAndEdgier Dark]] Dark and Gritty]] is Re-Tooled to be more "Family-Friendly".
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Less blood, more sugar.
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A lighter and softer tone.
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