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the previous edit's reduction made this make less sense. added some of what was removed for clarity
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A troubled, brooding, sometimes selfish outcast whose passions and strive towards a goal cause drama.
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A troubled, brooding, sometimes selfish outcast whose passions and strive towards a goal cause who strives for an unattainable (or what they perceive as an unattainable) goal, which often causes drama.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what they perceive as an unattainable goal, usually love. Almost always a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], troubled, brooding, (sometimes selfish) sometimes selfish outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what they perceive as an unattainable goal, usually love. Almost always passions and strive towards a tragic character.goal cause drama.
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fixing some clunky stuff
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it percives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Almost always a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it percives they perceive as an unattainable goal, usually love. Almost always a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it peecives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Almost always a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it peecives percives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Almost always a tragic character.
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Almost always is better fitting here due to the lack of subversions of this trope
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it peecives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Usually a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it peecives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Usually Almost always a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it peecives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Whitch usually makes him/her/it a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it peecives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Whitch usually makes him/her/it Usually a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama.
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A [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama. Strives for an unattainable or what he/she/it peecives as an unattainable goal, usually love. Whitch usually makes him/her/it a tragic character.
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A [[DarkAndToubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama.
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A [[DarkAndToubledPast [[DarkAndTroubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama.
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A brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama.
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A [[DarkAndToubledPast troubled]], brooding, (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama.
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A brooding, selfish outcast whose passion causes drama.
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A brooding, selfish (sometimes selfish) outcast whose passion causes drama.
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A troubled, brooding character whose passion causes drama.
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A troubled, brooding character brooding, selfish outcast whose passion causes drama.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[ByronicHero HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[ByronicHero HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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A troubled, brooding character whose passion causes A LOT of drama: some good, the rest...not so much.
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A troubled, brooding character whose passion causes A LOT of drama: some good, the rest...not so much.drama.
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A troubled, brooding character whose passion causes A LOT of drama, some good, the rest... not so much.
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A troubled, brooding character whose passion causes A LOT of drama, drama: some good, the rest... rest...not so much.
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A troubled, brooding character whose passion causes A LOT of drama, some good, the rest... [[{{Understatement}} not so much.]]
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A troubled, brooding character whose passion causes A LOT of drama, some good, the rest... [[{{Understatement}} not so much.]]
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, very flawed (but still sympathetic), and hard to summarize villain Protagonist
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, very flawed (but still sympathetic), and hard to summarize Protagonist
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, very flawed (but still sympathetic), and hard to summarize villain Protagonist
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize {{Protagonist}}
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] very flawed (but still sympathetic) sympathetic), and hard to summarize {{Protagonist}}Protagonist
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero / Villain.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero / Villain. {{Protagonist}}
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero (Or Villain).
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero (Or Villain)./ Villain.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero.AntiHero (Or Villain).
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawled (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawled flawed (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawled and hard to summarize AntiHero.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, charming, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawled (but still sympathetic) and hard to summarize AntiHero.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawled, hard to summarize AntiHero.
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An unique type of brooding, romantic, tragic, [[Laconic/{{Understatement}} very]] flawled, flawled and hard to summarize AntiHero.AntiHero.
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This [[TheHero hero]] has ''[[Laconic/{{Understatement}} many]]'' flaws.
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This [[TheHero hero]] has flaws. A ''[[Laconic/{{Understatement}} lot]]'' of them.
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This [[TheHero hero]] has flaws. A ''[[Laconic/{{Understatement}} lot]]'' of them.many]]'' flaws.
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This [[TheHero hero]] has flaws. A ''lot''.
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This [[TheHero hero]] has flaws. A ''lot''.
''[[Laconic/{{Understatement}} lot]]'' of them.
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If he weren't TheHero by WordOfGod, you'd think he's the villain.
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If he weren't TheHero by WordOfGod, you'd really believe he's the villain.
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If he weren't TheHero by WordOfGod, you'd really believe think he's the villain.
