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* At the end, the Thief has a small change of heart seeing Tack, Yum-Yum, King Nod, and the rest of the golden city eagerly awaiting the return of the balls, and he calmly gives them up with a smile. He even willingly serves his sentence, after which King Nod hires him as head of security.
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* In a very weird way, Zig Zag still considering Fido his best friend even as the bird is about to kill and eat him is rather bittersweet. It shows that despite his neglectfulness, Zig Zag loved Fido.
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* In a very weird way, Zig Zag still considering Fido his best friend even as the bird is about to kill and eat him is rather bittersweet. It shows that despite his neglectfulness, Zig Zag loved Fido.Fido.
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* When Zigzag tells King Nod that he can return the Golden Balls that protect the city, the King tells him he'll give him anything he wants if he just does it. Zigzag's request turns out to be Yum Yum's hand in marriage. Does the King relent? ''Hell no.'' Even with this being his only chance (as far as he knows) to get the balls back, [[PapaWolf he]] ''[[PapaWolf will not]]'' [[PapaWolf let this scumbag have his daughter]].
-->'''King Nod:''' (''shaking with fury'') You... ''want'' my ''daughter!?'' '''[[BigNever NEVER!]]'''
-->'''King Nod:''' (''shaking with fury'') You... ''want'' my ''daughter!?'' '''[[BigNever NEVER!]]'''
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** For that matter, Tack feeding a group of mice while imprisoned.
** Specifically, he tried to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice ate them, so he gave the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
** Specifically, he tried to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice ate them, so he gave the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
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* In a very weird way, [[spoiler: Zig Zag still considering Fido his best friend even as the bird is about to kill and eat him is rather bittersweet. It shows that despite his neglectfulness, Zig Zag loved Fido]].
* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, [[http://www.skwigly.co.uk/richard-williams-changes-tack/ he said as of 2013]], he has made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!
* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, [[http://www.skwigly.co.uk/richard-williams-changes-tack/ he said as of 2013]], he has made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!
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* In a very weird way, [[spoiler: Zig Zag still considering Fido his best friend even as the bird is about to kill and eat him is rather bittersweet. It shows that despite his neglectfulness, Zig Zag loved Fido]].
* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, [[http://www.skwigly.co.uk/richard-williams-changes-tack/ he said as of 2013]], he has made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!Fido.
* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, [[http://www.skwigly.co.uk/richard-williams-changes-tack/ he said as of 2013]], he has made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!
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* In a very weird way, [[spoiler: Zig Zag still considering Fido his best friend even as the bird is about to kill and eat him is rather bittersweet. It shows that despite his neglectfulness, Zig Zag loved Fido]].
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** Specifically, he tries to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice eat it all, so he gave the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
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** Specifically, he tries tried to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice eat it all, ate them, so he gave the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
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** Specifically, he tries to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice eat it all, so he give gave the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
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* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, he said as of 2013, he made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!
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* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, [[http://www.skwigly.co.uk/richard-williams-changes-tack/ he said as of 2013, 2013]], he has made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!
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* Princess Yum-Yum saving Tack from Zig Zag's unjust wrath by deliberating breaking one of her shoes.
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* Princess Yum-Yum saving Tack from Zig Zag's unjust wrath by deliberating breaking one of her shoes.shoes.
* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, he said as of 2013, he made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!
* Meta-example; while Williams' masterpiece will always technically remain unfinished, he said as of 2013, he made peace with the films sordid history, and theatrically screened his own directors cut of the film in late 2013, which he says he's satisfied with. And after that, he said he's working on ''another'' animated feature!
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** Specifically, he tries to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice eat it all, so he give the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
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** Specifically, he tries to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice eat it all, so he give the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.bread.
* Tack and Princess Yum-Yum make hearts for each other. To be specific, Tack shows off some of his cobbler skills by making a heart shape out of Yum-Yum's shoe strings. She in turn does the same by, albeit subconsciously, with her flowers. The two blush and it's ''adorable''.
* Princess Yum-Yum saving Tack from Zig Zag's unjust wrath by deliberating breaking one of her shoes.
* Tack and Princess Yum-Yum make hearts for each other. To be specific, Tack shows off some of his cobbler skills by making a heart shape out of Yum-Yum's shoe strings. She in turn does the same by, albeit subconsciously, with her flowers. The two blush and it's ''adorable''.
* Princess Yum-Yum saving Tack from Zig Zag's unjust wrath by deliberating breaking one of her shoes.
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** For that matter, Tack feeding a group of mice while imprisoned.imprisoned.
** Specifically, he tries to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice eat it all, so he give the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
** Specifically, he tries to feed the white mouse a few scraps of bread, but a bunch of black mice eat it all, so he give the white mouse the whole loaf of bread.
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* Tack giving a white mouse to Yum Yum before confronting Zig Zag and the war machine.machine.
**For that matter, Tack feeding a group of mice while imprisoned.
**For that matter, Tack feeding a group of mice while imprisoned.
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* ''"I...love you."''"''
* Tack giving a white mouse to Yum Yum before confronting Zig Zag and the war machine.
* Tack giving a white mouse to Yum Yum before confronting Zig Zag and the war machine.