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* Ohawas, the Crow-Witch Woman, musing that the Native Americans and English settlers [[NotSoDifferent actually had a lot in common]]:
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* Ohawas, the Crow-Witch Woman, musing that the Native Americans and English settlers [[NotSoDifferent actually had a lot in common]]:common:
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* Wolkee, in "Before Thou Camest Forth," birthing his son, Wanral [[spoiler:a.k.a. Duke]], despite [[ScreamingBirth its visceral and harrowing description]], really does tug at the heartstrings:
--->He was perfect –- from the moment he was born, tiny, helpless, blind, with his little cries calling out the first defiance against doom and death, he was perfect…from the moment Wolkee held him to his teat, the unceasing, clenching aches of his abdomen washed over with the euphoria of seeing his newborn son, and he suckled at him, his first taste being his mother's milk, he was perfect.
** The constant refrain in the story, [[ArcWords "I will never let you go,"]] is both this and a {{Tearjerker}}.
--->He was perfect –- from the moment he was born, tiny, helpless, blind, with his little cries calling out the first defiance against doom and death, he was perfect…from the moment Wolkee held him to his teat, the unceasing, clenching aches of his abdomen washed over with the euphoria of seeing his newborn son, and he suckled at him, his first taste being his mother's milk, he was perfect.
** The constant refrain in the story, [[ArcWords "I will never let you go,"]] is both this and a {{Tearjerker}}.
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* Wolkee, in "Before Thou Camest Forth," birthing his son, Wanral [[spoiler:a.k.a. Duke]], despite [[ScreamingBirth its visceral and harrowing description]], really does tug at [[ADayInTheLimelight Pappy's story]] has several of these:
** Him playing theheartstrings:
--->He was perfect –- from the moment he was born, tiny, helpless, blind,fiddle with his little cries calling out cousin under the first defiance old oak tree their ancestor planted. [[spoiler:And then them kissing, which is why as an adult Pappy never preached against doom homosexuality.]]
** His romance anddeath, he was perfect…from the moment Wolkee held him to his teat, the unceasing, clenching aches of his abdomen washed over marriage with the euphoria of seeing Iris, particularly [[spoiler:when she agrees to rip out his newborn son, grown-out fangs he develops at thirty-five years old, but loves and he suckled at him, accepts him anyway]].
*** Although also a {{Tearjerker}}, hisfirst taste being acceptance of [[spoiler:her death]] as affirming his mother's milk, he was perfect.
Christian faith.
** Theconstant refrain climax of the story, when he takes Bligh up on the mountain and [[AsTheGoodBookSays quotes the Bible]] to explain to him how much he loves him.
*** And for that matter, earlier in the story,[[ArcWords "I will never let you go,"]] is both this we got perhaps ''the'' crowning moment of heartwarming: Bligh's first word as a baby. [[spoiler:"Pappy."]]
* Betsy realizing how much [[SpoiledSweet her father loves her]], anda {{Tearjerker}}.prepared her for ambitions of future success.
** Him playing the
--->He was perfect –- from the moment he was born, tiny, helpless, blind,
** His romance and
*** Although also a {{Tearjerker}}, his
** The
*** And for that matter, earlier in the story,
* Betsy realizing how much [[SpoiledSweet her father loves her]], and
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--->'''Pappy:''' "I'd never let nuthin happen ta ''my'' boy –- monster or no monster."
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--->'''Pappy:''' "I'd never let nuthin happen ta ''my'' boy –- - monster or no monster."
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--->'''Susan Anne:''' "You don't need to look out after me, anymore! You –- you can go, be with your own kind, now!"
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--->'''Susan Anne:''' "You don't need to look out after me, anymore! You –- – you can go, be with your own kind, now!"now!"
* Ohawas, the Crow-Witch Woman, musing that the Native Americans and English settlers [[NotSoDifferent actually had a lot in common]]:
--->"...not all of the whiteskins were bad, some of them, she told him, quite lovely, the mothers doting on their children and the husbands grieving those they lost, which was often, but such is the lot of Man, isn't it so, to lose as well as gain?"
* Ohawas, the Crow-Witch Woman, musing that the Native Americans and English settlers [[NotSoDifferent actually had a lot in common]]:
--->"...not all of the whiteskins were bad, some of them, she told him, quite lovely, the mothers doting on their children and the husbands grieving those they lost, which was often, but such is the lot of Man, isn't it so, to lose as well as gain?"
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* Wolkee, in "Before Thou Camest Forth," birthing his son, Wanral [[spoiler:a.k.a. Duke]], despite [[ScreamingBirth its visceral and harrowing description]], really does tug at the heartstrings:
--->He was perfect –- from the moment he was born, tiny, helpless, blind, with his little cries calling out the first defiance against doom and death, he was perfect…from the moment Wolkee held him to his teat, the unceasing, clenching aches of his abdomen washed over with the euphoria of seeing his newborn son, and he suckled at him, his first taste being his mother's milk, he was perfect.
** The constant refrain in the story, [[ArcWords "I will never let you go,"]] is both this and a {{Tearjerker}}.
* Pappy talking to Bligh in "Ask Now the Beasts" about [[spoiler:the strange owl-like creature]] he saw in the woods, reassuring his grandson nothing would happen as long as he was around:
--->'''Pappy:''' "I'd never let nuthin happen ta ''my'' boy –- monster or no monster."
* Susan Anne calling out to [[spoiler:Shane]] who had been watching over her in his new, [[HalfHumanHybrid half-flying squirrel]] form:
--->'''Susan Anne:''' "You don't need to look out after me, anymore! You –- you can go, be with your own kind, now!"
--->He was perfect –- from the moment he was born, tiny, helpless, blind, with his little cries calling out the first defiance against doom and death, he was perfect…from the moment Wolkee held him to his teat, the unceasing, clenching aches of his abdomen washed over with the euphoria of seeing his newborn son, and he suckled at him, his first taste being his mother's milk, he was perfect.
** The constant refrain in the story, [[ArcWords "I will never let you go,"]] is both this and a {{Tearjerker}}.
* Pappy talking to Bligh in "Ask Now the Beasts" about [[spoiler:the strange owl-like creature]] he saw in the woods, reassuring his grandson nothing would happen as long as he was around:
--->'''Pappy:''' "I'd never let nuthin happen ta ''my'' boy –- monster or no monster."
* Susan Anne calling out to [[spoiler:Shane]] who had been watching over her in his new, [[HalfHumanHybrid half-flying squirrel]] form:
--->'''Susan Anne:''' "You don't need to look out after me, anymore! You –- you can go, be with your own kind, now!"
