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** [[BigBrotherInstinct Daimen]] slashes his own wrists and uses all of his lifeforce to stabilize the dimensional prison.
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** [[BigBrotherInstinct Daimen]] slashes slashing his own wrists and uses using all of his lifeforce to stabilize the dimensional prison.
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* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeroicSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his body]].
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* In [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/53/Mother-of-Learning Chapter 53]], when Zach punches Zorian out of the blue, [[AnnoyingYoungerSibling Kirielle]] [[AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther immediately attacks the much older boy]] with a ferocity likened to that of a cornered lynx.
* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeroicSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with hisbody]].body]].
* Everyone giving their lives to hold off both Panaxeth and the Guardian of the Sovereign Gate so that Zorian can escape the time loop in [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/91/Mother-of-Learning Chapter 91]] is truly something to behold. Highlights include:
** [[BigBrotherInstinct Daimen]] slashes his own wrists and uses all of his lifeforce to stabilize the dimensional prison.
** [[TricksterMentor Xvim]] staying behind to maintain the portal.
** Several of the other loopers entirely [[HeroicSacrifice disregarding their own safety to protect Zorian.]]
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* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeroicSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his
* Everyone giving their lives to hold off both Panaxeth and the Guardian of the Sovereign Gate so that Zorian can escape the time loop in [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/91/Mother-of-Learning Chapter 91]] is truly something to behold. Highlights include:
** [[BigBrotherInstinct Daimen]] slashes his own wrists and uses all of his lifeforce to stabilize the dimensional prison.
** [[TricksterMentor Xvim]] staying behind to maintain the portal.
** Several of the other loopers entirely [[HeroicSacrifice disregarding their own safety to protect Zorian.]]
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* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeroicSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his body]]. Of course, it's not played for major drama, [[DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist since death is only a minor setback for Zorian]], but holy crap, Xvim is secretly badass.
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* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeroicSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his body]]. Of course, it's not played for major drama, [[DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist since death is only a minor setback for Zorian]], but holy crap, Xvim is secretly badass.
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* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeoricSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his body]]. Of course, it's not played for major drama, [[DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist since death is only a minor setback for Zorian]], but holy crap, Xvim is secretly badass.
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* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeoricSacrifice [[HeroicSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his body]]. Of course, it's not played for major drama, [[DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist since death is only a minor setback for Zorian]], but holy crap, Xvim is secretly badass.
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'''Zorian:''' ''[coldly]'' Well, isn't that nice for them. You know what, Kiri? [[MeaningfulEcho You're right. It's not the same.]] I had to defy mother and father all by myself ... you, on the other hand, have ''me.''
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'''Zorian:''' ''[coldly]'' Well, isn't that nice for them. You know what, Kiri? [[MeaningfulEcho You're right. It's not the same.]] I had to defy mother and father all by myself ... you, on the other hand, have ''me.''''
* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeoricSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his body]]. Of course, it's not played for major drama, [[DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist since death is only a minor setback for Zorian]], but holy crap, Xvim is secretly badass.
* When they try to interrupt the summoning ritual, Zorian finds himself in a tricky spot with a deadly spell headed straight towards him. Luckily, Xvim shields him. However, Xvim has run out of mana, [[HeoricSacrifice so he steps in front of the spell to shield Zorian with his body]]. Of course, it's not played for major drama, [[DeathIsASlapOnTheWrist since death is only a minor setback for Zorian]], but holy crap, Xvim is secretly badass.
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* In [[https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2961893/18/Mother-of-Learning Chapter 18]], when Zorian suddenly realizes that Kirielle not only ''isn't'' a SpoiledBrat, but that their parents are as or more repressive to her than to him.
-->'''Zorian:''' They aren't going to send you to a mage academy...\\
'''Kirielle:''' ''[shakes her head]'' They say I don't need it. They already have a marriage arranged for me when I turn 15.\\
'''Zorian:''' ''[coldly]'' Well, isn't that nice for them. You know what, Kiri? [[MeaningfulEcho You're right. It's not the same.]] I had to defy mother and father all by myself ... you, on the other hand, have ''me.''
-->'''Zorian:''' They aren't going to send you to a mage academy...\\
'''Kirielle:''' ''[shakes her head]'' They say I don't need it. They already have a marriage arranged for me when I turn 15.\\
'''Zorian:''' ''[coldly]'' Well, isn't that nice for them. You know what, Kiri? [[MeaningfulEcho You're right. It's not the same.]] I had to defy mother and father all by myself ... you, on the other hand, have ''me.''
