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* Baraka's concern for the children at Peak 15. [[spoiler: Which leads to her offscreen HeelFaceTurn before Adam meets her.]]
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* Baraka's concern for the children at Peak 15. [[spoiler: Which leads to her offscreen HeelFaceTurn before Adam meets her.]]]]
* Chapter 46: Adam, [[spoiler:summarily fired from C-Sec by an egotistical, officious SmugSnake of an Asari matron(who only became his boss because [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Pallin]] died under "[[TheCoronerDothProtestTooMuch mysterious circumstances]]"), gets an unexpected send-off from Officer Chellick: ''A thirty-Turian salute.'']]
* Chapter 46: Adam, [[spoiler:summarily fired from C-Sec by an egotistical, officious SmugSnake of an Asari matron(who only became his boss because [[ReasonableAuthorityFigure Pallin]] died under "[[TheCoronerDothProtestTooMuch mysterious circumstances]]"), gets an unexpected send-off from Officer Chellick: ''A thirty-Turian salute.'']]
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-->Garrus: "NOPE. JUST DEVOTED."
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-->Garrus: "NOPE. JUST DEVOTED.""
* Baraka's concern for the children at Peak 15. [[spoiler: Which leads to her offscreen HeelFaceTurn before Adam meets her.]]
* Baraka's concern for the children at Peak 15. [[spoiler: Which leads to her offscreen HeelFaceTurn before Adam meets her.]]
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-->[[spoiler:"...By NOT giving into the tide of death and horror that threatened to swallow us whole. By defying it! If I accept your offer I would be desecrating her memory, all that she stood for!"]]
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-->[[spoiler:"...By NOT giving into the tide of death and horror that threatened to swallow us whole. By defying it! If I accept your offer I would be desecrating her memory, all that she stood for!"]]for!"]]
* Chapter 38: [[spoiler: As Garrus airdrops into heavy AA fire to save Adam we get this line.]]
-->Brea: "ARE YOU INSANE?!"
-->Garrus: "NOPE. JUST DEVOTED."
* Chapter 38: [[spoiler: As Garrus airdrops into heavy AA fire to save Adam we get this line.]]
-->Brea: "ARE YOU INSANE?!"
-->Garrus: "NOPE. JUST DEVOTED."
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** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/{{Dragnet}} Joe Friday]] got augmented.
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** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/{{Dragnet}} [[Franchise/{{Dragnet}} Joe Friday]] got augmented.
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* Chapter 21: [[spoiler:Adam breaking free of the Black Queen's mind control.]]
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* Chapter 21: 22: [[spoiler:Adam breaking free of the Black Queen's mind control.]]
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* Adam and Garrus taking time out of their investigation to find a girl who wandered off.
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* Adam and Garrus taking time out of their investigation to find a girl who wandered off.off.
* Chapter 21: [[spoiler:Adam breaking free of the Black Queen's mind control.]]
-->[[spoiler:"Fahl and I... we earned this, we earned this moment..."]]
-->[[spoiler:"Yesss... You deserve this, you've earned all of this..."]]
-->[[spoiler:"...By NOT giving into the tide of death and horror that threatened to swallow us whole. By defying it! If I accept your offer I would be desecrating her memory, all that she stood for!"]]
* Chapter 21: [[spoiler:Adam breaking free of the Black Queen's mind control.]]
-->[[spoiler:"Fahl and I... we earned this, we earned this moment..."]]
-->[[spoiler:"Yesss... You deserve this, you've earned all of this..."]]
-->[[spoiler:"...By NOT giving into the tide of death and horror that threatened to swallow us whole. By defying it! If I accept your offer I would be desecrating her memory, all that she stood for!"]]
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** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/{{Dragnet}} Joe Friday]] got augmented.
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** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/{{Dragnet}} Joe Friday]] got augmented.augmented.
* Adam and Garrus taking time out of their investigation to find a girl who wandered off.
* Adam and Garrus taking time out of their investigation to find a girl who wandered off.
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** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/Dragnet Joe Friday]] got augmented.
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** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/Dragnet [[Radio/{{Dragnet}} Joe Friday]] got augmented.
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* The aftermath of Tali's rescue in Chapter 7;
-->Beyond the glass she could make out the form of a human in a long blue coat, leaning back against a chair, his arms folded over his chest, which rose and fell in slow intervals. His eyes were shut. She recognized him, and she calmed herself. Tali went back to sleep, safe in the knowledge that no harm would come to her.
** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/Dragnet Joe Friday]] got augmented.
-->Beyond the glass she could make out the form of a human in a long blue coat, leaning back against a chair, his arms folded over his chest, which rose and fell in slow intervals. His eyes were shut. She recognized him, and she calmed herself. Tali went back to sleep, safe in the knowledge that no harm would come to her.
** Heh. Jensen seems to be what you'd get if [[Radio/Dragnet Joe Friday]] got augmented.
