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* What we see of Sunset and Sci-Twi's marriage is quite happy and the two are rarely apart, until Sunset, [[spoiler:making Sci-twi's death and Sunset's depression afterwards all the sadder.]]
* The birth of Spike and Smolder's son, Grunt, and followed by fawning of the new born's extended family.
* The birth of Spike and Smolder's son, Grunt, and followed by fawning of the new born's extended family.
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* What we see of Sunset and Sci-Twi's marriage is quite happy and the two are rarely apart, until Sunset, Sunset decides to stay in Equestria for one cycle of the portal, [[spoiler:making Sci-twi's death and Sunset's depression afterwards all the sadder.]]
* The birth of Spike and Smolder's son, Grunt, and followed by the fawning of the newborn's born by their extended family.
* The birth of Spike and Smolder's son, Grunt, and followed by the fawning of the new
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* Due to the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset refuses to wear a crown, so Tempest Fury loans her a set of armour that once belonged to her great grandmother, Tempest Shadow.
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* Isabell telling Sunset while she never liked her or saw her as a friend, she now has her respect.
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* Isabell telling Sunset while she never liked her or saw her as a friend, she now has her respect.respect thanks from how well she handled the court while Twilight was asleep.
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** [[spoiler:Death without any prompting or asking, shows Luna what her father looked like and revealed that he tracked Aine down and passed himself off as a simple friendly merchant she knew growing up so he could keep an eye on her.]]
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** [[spoiler:Death without any prompting or asking, shows Luna what her father looked like and revealed that he tracked Aine down and passed himself off as a simple friendly merchant she knew growing up so he could keep an eye on her.in someway be apart of her life.]]
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** [[spoiler: Celestia also appears having been reunited Mirror Sombra now restored to his former self. Sunset finally meets her father who tells her not to be upset about their battle and has nothing but pride in her. Becomes a tearjerker however as Balius erases Sunset's memories and the backup at the end of the story was created before this meeting.]]
* Sunset's memories being restored and her telling Twilight herself that she loves her.
* Sunset's memories being restored and her telling Twilight herself that she loves her.
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** [[spoiler: Celestia also appears having been reunited Mirror Sombra now restored to his former self. Sunset finally meets her father who tells her not to be upset about their battle and that he has nothing but pride in her. Becomes a tearjerker however as Balius erases Sunset's memories and the backup at the end of the story was created before this meeting.]]
* Sunset's memories being restored and her telling Twilightherself that she loves her.
* Sunset's memories being restored and her telling Twilight
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** [[spoiler:The departed members of the Mane Six and Starlight appear on the other side of the River of Forgetfulness waving and shouting encouragements at Twilight.
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** Celestia also appears having been reunited Mirror Sombra now restored to his former self. Sunset finally meets her father who tells her not to be upset about their battle and has nothing but pride in her. Becomes a tearjerker however as Balius erases Sunset's memories and the backup at the end of the story was created before this meeting.]]
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** [[spoiler:The departed members of the Mane Six and Starlight appear on the other side of the River of Forgetfulness waving and shouting encouragements at Twilight. \n]]
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** [[spoiler: Celestia also appears having been reunited Mirror Sombra now restored to his former self. Sunset finally meets her father who tells her not to be upset about their battle and has nothing but pride in her. Becomes a tearjerker however as Balius erases Sunset's memories and the backup at the end of the story was created before this meeting.]]
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* [[spoiler:A few in the underworld.]]
** [[spoiler:Death without any prompting or asking, shows Luna what her father looked like and revealed that he tracked Aine down and passed himself off as a simple friendly merchant she knew growing up so he could keep an eye on her.]]
** [[spoiler:The departed members of the Mane Six and Starlight appear on the other side of the River of Forgetfulness waving and shouting encouragements at Twilight.
** Celestia also appears having been reunited Mirror Sombra now restored to his former self. Sunset finally meets her father who tells her not to be upset about their battle and has nothing but pride in her. Becomes a tearjerker however as Balius erases Sunset's memories and the backup at the end of the story was created before this meeting.]]
* Sunset's memories being restored and her telling Twilight herself that she loves her.
* Sunset's coronation.
** [[spoiler:Death without any prompting or asking, shows Luna what her father looked like and revealed that he tracked Aine down and passed himself off as a simple friendly merchant she knew growing up so he could keep an eye on her.]]
** [[spoiler:The departed members of the Mane Six and Starlight appear on the other side of the River of Forgetfulness waving and shouting encouragements at Twilight.
** Celestia also appears having been reunited Mirror Sombra now restored to his former self. Sunset finally meets her father who tells her not to be upset about their battle and has nothing but pride in her. Becomes a tearjerker however as Balius erases Sunset's memories and the backup at the end of the story was created before this meeting.]]
* Sunset's memories being restored and her telling Twilight herself that she loves her.
* Sunset's coronation.
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* Celestia is willing to stay in the human world with Sunset during the mirrors cycle and try being a better mother to her.
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* Celestia is willing declares she's planning to stay join Sunset in the human world with Sunset during the mirrors cycle and try being a better mother to her.
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* The birth of Spike and Smolder's
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** Celestia instructing Sunset how to raise and set the Sun and Moon, comparing the acts to putting a child to bed and waking them up.
* Due to the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset refuses to wear a crown, so Tempest Fury loans her a set of armour that once belonged to Tempest Shadow.
* Due to the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset refuses to wear a crown, so Tempest Fury loans her a set of armour that once belonged to Tempest Shadow.
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* Celestia instructing Sunset how to raise and set the Sun and Moon, comparing the acts to putting a child to bed and waking them up.
* Due to the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset refuses to wear a crown, so Tempest Fury loans her a set of armour that once belonged to her great grandmother, Tempest Shadow.
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* Sci-Twi's love confession to Sunset, telling the unicorn how much she means to her and how she helped her come to terms with who she was, ending it with telling her she's in love with her.
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* A small one, after defeating Mirror Sombra, Sunset takes a moment to offer a quick prayer for her father.
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* One of the first things Sunset wants to do with Celestia during her visit to the human world, hear stories about her father.
* The birth of Spike and Smolder's son.
* Sunset wakes up to the sight of Princess Twilight cuddling her in her sleep. Sunset pulls a [[NinjaLog Substitution Jutsu]] and swaps herself with a body pillow, covered in her scent. Twilight just cuddles into the body pillow. Before Sunset leaves to run the court for the day she whispers something in the sleeping princess's ear that makes her smile.
** Celestia instructing Sunset how to raise and set the Sun and Moon, comparing the acts to putting a child to bed and waking them up.
* Due to the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset refuses to wear a crown, so Tempest Fury loans her a set of armour that once belonged to Tempest Shadow.
* The birth of Spike and Smolder's son.
* Sunset wakes up to the sight of Princess Twilight cuddling her in her sleep. Sunset pulls a [[NinjaLog Substitution Jutsu]] and swaps herself with a body pillow, covered in her scent. Twilight just cuddles into the body pillow. Before Sunset leaves to run the court for the day she whispers something in the sleeping princess's ear that makes her smile.
** Celestia instructing Sunset how to raise and set the Sun and Moon, comparing the acts to putting a child to bed and waking them up.
* Due to the events of the Fall Formal, Sunset refuses to wear a crown, so Tempest Fury loans her a set of armour that once belonged to Tempest Shadow.
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* Isabell telling Sunset while she never liked her or saw her as a friend, she now respects her.has her respect.
* Celestia supporting Sunset and vouching for her to the nobles.
* Celestia supporting Sunset and vouching for her to the nobles.
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