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* Her parents may be goofy, but when her dad comes upstairs to check on her after her conversation with Rhiannon, he makes a few jokes at first. But when he sees that she's genuinely upset, he nods and simply says "Give 'em hell." Olive's smile after he does so just sells it.
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* Her parents may be goofy, but when her dad comes upstairs to check on her after her conversation with Rhiannon, he makes a few jokes at first. But when he sees that she's genuinely upset, he nods and simply says says, "Give 'em hell." Olive's smile after he does so just sells it.
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--> Olive: "Who told you?"
--> Todd: "No one had to tell me. All I know is once upon a time, there was a scared little kid in a closet at a party who wasn’t ready for his first kiss and there was this amazing little girl who lied for him."
--> Todd: "No one had to tell me. All I know is once upon a time, there was a scared little kid in a closet at a party who wasn’t ready for his first kiss and there was this amazing little girl who lied for him."
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--> Todd: "No
-->'''Todd:''' No one had to tell me. All I know is once upon a time, there was a scared little kid in a closet at a party who wasn’t ready for his first
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* Her parents may be goofy, but when her dad comes upstairs to check on her after her conversation with Rhiannon, he makes a few jokes at first. But when he sees that she's upset, he nods and simply says "Give 'em hell." Olive's smile after he does so just sells it.
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* Her parents may be goofy, but when her dad comes upstairs to check on her after her conversation with Rhiannon, he makes a few jokes at first. But when he sees that she's genuinely upset, he nods and simply says "Give 'em hell." Olive's smile after he does so just sells it.
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* Olive comforting Marianne, despite the fact that Marianne has been horrible to her the entire movie. In turn, Marianne genuinely wants to be Olive's friend after this, and immediately changes her attitude towards her. It doesn't last, but it's due to circumstances out of both girls' control.
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* Olive comforting Marianne, despite the fact that Marianne has been horrible to her the entire movie. In turn, Marianne genuinely wants to be Olive's friend after this, and immediately changes her attitude towards her. It doesn't last, but it's due to circumstances out of both girls' control.control.
* Her parents may be goofy, but when her dad comes upstairs to check on her after her conversation with Rhiannon, he makes a few jokes at first. But when he sees that she's upset, he nods and simply says "Give 'em hell." Olive's smile after he does so just sells it.
* Her parents may be goofy, but when her dad comes upstairs to check on her after her conversation with Rhiannon, he makes a few jokes at first. But when he sees that she's upset, he nods and simply says "Give 'em hell." Olive's smile after he does so just sells it.
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* Olive refusing to kiss Todd in his car, because she wants her first kiss with him to be absolutely perfect...
** and then [[spoiler: the actual kiss at the end, which turns out just how she wanted it, after all the shit she went through - [[EarnYourHappyEnding very satisfying]] to see.]]
** and then [[spoiler: the actual kiss at the end, which turns out just how she wanted it, after all the shit she went through - [[EarnYourHappyEnding very satisfying]] to see.]]
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* Olive refusing to kiss Todd in his car, because she wants her first kiss with him to be absolutely perfect...
**perfect... and then [[spoiler: the actual kiss at the end, which turns out just how she wanted it, after all the shit she went through - [[EarnYourHappyEnding very satisfying]] to see.]]
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* Olive comforting Marianne, despite the fact that Marianne has been horrible to her the entire movie.
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* Olive comforting Marianne, despite the fact that Marianne has been horrible to her the entire movie. In turn, Marianne genuinely wants to be Olive's friend after this, and immediately changes her attitude towards her. It doesn't last, but it's due to circumstances out of both girls' control.
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* Todd telling Olive that he knows what's going on and that none of the rumours about her are true.
--> Olive: "Who told you?"
--> Todd: "No one had to tell me. All I know is once upon a time, there was a scared little kid in a closet at a party who wasn’t ready for his first kiss and there was this amazing little girl who lied for him."
--> Olive: "Who told you?"
--> Todd: "No one had to tell me. All I know is once upon a time, there was a scared little kid in a closet at a party who wasn’t ready for his first kiss and there was this amazing little girl who lied for him."
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* The entire reason Olive's reputation as a whore happens- because she was trying to help out Brandon, who was being constantly bullied.
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* The entire reason Olive's reputation as a whore happens- because happens--because she was trying to help out Brandon, who was being constantly bullied.
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** and then [[spoiler: the actual kiss at the end, which turns out just how she wanted it, after all the shit she went through - [[EarnYourHappyEnding very satisfying]] to see.]]
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** and then [[spoiler: the actual kiss at the end, which turns out just how she wanted it, after all the shit she went through - [[EarnYourHappyEnding very satisfying]] to see.]]]]
* Olive comforting Marianne, despite the fact that Marianne has been horrible to her the entire movie.
* Olive comforting Marianne, despite the fact that Marianne has been horrible to her the entire movie.
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* Olive's mother comforting her when Olive finally admits to the whole "pretending to have sex" thing.
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* Olive's mother comforting her when Olive finally admits to the whole "pretending to have sex" thing.thing.
* Olive refusing to kiss Todd in his car, because she wants her first kiss with him to be absolutely perfect...
** and then [[spoiler: the actual kiss at the end, which turns out just how she wanted it, after all the shit she went through - [[EarnYourHappyEnding very satisfying]] to see.]]
* Olive refusing to kiss Todd in his car, because she wants her first kiss with him to be absolutely perfect...
** and then [[spoiler: the actual kiss at the end, which turns out just how she wanted it, after all the shit she went through - [[EarnYourHappyEnding very satisfying]] to see.]]
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* The entire reason Olive's reputation as a whore happens- because she was trying to help out Brandon, who was being constantly bullied.
* Olive's mother comforting her when Olive finally admits to the whole "pretending to have sex" thing.
* Olive's mother comforting her when Olive finally admits to the whole "pretending to have sex" thing.
