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* Harry's reaction to Sirius bring acquitted is [[CallBack the same thing he said]] when Sirius escaped
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* Harry's reaction to Sirius bring being acquitted is [[CallBack the same thing he said]] when Sirius escaped
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-->'''Moony:''' My Kitten. My own little Kitten, for all the world to see...
-->'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]
* Many, in general, from [[spoiler: finding out that Draco wasn't actually dead, to Neville's true reunion with his parents.]]
* [[spoiler: After Hermione has been mind-controlled and assaulted by Death Eaters, who is the one human male in whose presence she can be without overpowering terror? Not either of her fathers, not her brother Harry, not even her blood-bound twin. No, the one man who inspires no fear at all in Hermione is Ronald Weasley.]]
-->'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]
* Many, in general, from [[spoiler: finding out that Draco wasn't actually dead, to Neville's true reunion with his parents.]]
* [[spoiler: After Hermione has been mind-controlled and assaulted by Death Eaters, who is the one human male in whose presence she can be without overpowering terror? Not either of her fathers, not her brother Harry, not even her blood-bound twin. No, the one man who inspires no fear at all in Hermione is Ronald Weasley.]]
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-->'''Moony:''' My Kitten. My own little Kitten, for all the world to see...
-->'''Hermione:'''see...\\
'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]
* Many, in general, from [[spoiler: finding out that Draco wasn't actually dead, to Neville's true reunion with hisparents.]]
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*[[spoiler: After Hermione has been mind-controlled [[spoiler:mind-controlled and assaulted by Death Eaters, who is the one human male in whose presence she can be without overpowering terror? Not either of her fathers, not her brother Harry, not even her blood-bound twin. No, the one man who inspires no fear at all in Hermione is Ronald Weasley.]]
-->'''Hermione:'''
'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]
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* [[spoiler: After Hermione has been mind-controlled and assaulted by Death Eaters, who is the one human male in whose presence she can be without overpowering terror? Not either of her fathers, not her brother Harry, not even her blood-bound twin. No, the one man who inspires no fear at all in Hermione is Ronald Weasley.]]
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* [[spoiler: During the final battle, as Harry starts the process of a HeroicSacrifice to defeat Voldemort, the spirit of his future daughter with Ginny notices that Ginny is sad about the tie between her and Harry being pulled away. She doesn't want Ginny sad so she latches onto said tie and ''yanks'' Harry back into life. Also qualifies as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.]]
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* [[spoiler: During the final battle, as Harry starts the process of a HeroicSacrifice to defeat Voldemort, the spirit of his future daughter with Ginny notices that Ginny is sad about the tie between her and Harry being pulled away. She doesn't want Ginny sad so she latches onto said tie and ''yanks'' Harry back into life. Also qualifies as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome.]]
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* [[spoiler: During the final battle, as Harry starts the process of a HeroicSacrifice to defeat Voldemort, the spirit of his future daughter with Ginny notices that Ginny is sad about the tie between her and Harry being pulled away. She doesn't want Ginny sad so she latches onto said tie and ''yanks'' Harry back into life. Also qualifies as a CrowningMomentOfAwesome.]]
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* The entirety of [[spoiler:Blaise and Colleen]]'s romance. It's just adorable.
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* The entirety of [[spoiler:Blaise [[spoiler: Blaise and Colleen]]'s romance. It's just adorable.
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* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.]]
* [[spoiler:Draco and Luna]] returning to the Pack, [[spoiler:five months after Draco faked his death]].
* [[spoiler:Remus and Danger are alive!]]
* [[spoiler:Marcus returns from the dead.]]
* [[spoiler:Nadia, Remus' and Danger's daughter, is born on July 31st.]]
* [[spoiler:Draco and Luna]] returning to the Pack, [[spoiler:five months after Draco faked his death]].
* [[spoiler:Remus and Danger are alive!]]
* [[spoiler:Marcus returns from the dead.]]
* [[spoiler:Nadia, Remus' and Danger's daughter, is born on July 31st.]]
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* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding [[spoiler: wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.]]
*[[spoiler:Draco [[spoiler: Draco and Luna]] returning to the Pack, [[spoiler:five months after Draco faked his death]].
*[[spoiler:Remus [[spoiler: Remus and Danger are alive!]]
*[[spoiler:Marcus [[spoiler: Marcus returns from the dead.]]
*[[spoiler:Nadia, [[spoiler: Nadia, Remus' and Danger's daughter, is born on July 31st.]]
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--> For the first time in thirty-five years, [[spoiler:Remus John Lupin stood human in the full moon's brilliant light.]]
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--> For the first time in thirty-five years, [[spoiler:Remus John Lupin stood human in the full moon's brilliant light.]]]]
* In the epilogue, the Defense professor teaching about werewolves and how they're cured is referred to as "Professor Snape". It turns out that she is Remus and Danger's younger daughter meaning that the old animosity between Snape and the Marauders is dead and buried.
* In the epilogue, the Defense professor teaching about werewolves and how they're cured is referred to as "Professor Snape". It turns out that she is Remus and Danger's younger daughter meaning that the old animosity between Snape and the Marauders is dead and buried.
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* [[spoiler:Remus and Danger are alive!]]
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* [[spoiler:Remus and Danger are alive!]]alive!]]
* [[spoiler:Marcus returns from the dead.]]
* [[spoiler:Nadia, Remus' and Danger's daughter, is born on July 31st.]]
* The first full moon after the above happens, [[spoiler:Remus manages to break the curse of the werewolf.]]
--> For the first time in thirty-five years, [[spoiler:Remus John Lupin stood human in the full moon's brilliant light.]]
* [[spoiler:Marcus returns from the dead.]]
* [[spoiler:Nadia, Remus' and Danger's daughter, is born on July 31st.]]
* The first full moon after the above happens, [[spoiler:Remus manages to break the curse of the werewolf.]]
--> For the first time in thirty-five years, [[spoiler:Remus John Lupin stood human in the full moon's brilliant light.]]
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* Colleen and the Pride sticking up for the Slytherins, because they never get that kind of love in canon.
* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.]]
* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.]]
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* Colleen and the Pride sticking up for the Slytherins, because they never hardly ever get that kind of love in canon.
* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.]]]]
* [[spoiler:Draco and Luna]] returning to the Pack, [[spoiler:five months after Draco faked his death]].
* [[spoiler:Remus and Danger are alive!]]
* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.
* [[spoiler:Draco and Luna]] returning to the Pack, [[spoiler:five months after Draco faked his death]].
* [[spoiler:Remus and Danger are alive!]]
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* Colleen and the Pride sticking up for the Slytherins, because they never get that kind of love in canon.
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* Colleen and the Pride sticking up for the Slytherins, because they never get that kind of love in canon.canon.
* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.]]
* Harry and Ginny's [[spoiler:wedding night. Complete with visit from three ghosts: George, James and Lily, all of whom wish them to be happy.]]
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* The entirety of [[spoiler:Blaise and Colleen]]'s romance. It's just adorable.
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* The entirety of [[spoiler:Blaise and Colleen]]'s romance. It's just adorable.adorable.
* Colleen and the Pride sticking up for the Slytherins, because they never get that kind of love in canon.
* Colleen and the Pride sticking up for the Slytherins, because they never get that kind of love in canon.
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* The way Harry confesses his feelings for Ginny in book five is really heartwarming. Also funny.
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* The way Harry confesses his feelings for Ginny in book five is really heartwarming. Also funny.funny.
* The entirety of [[spoiler:Blaise and Colleen]]'s romance. It's just adorable.
* The entirety of [[spoiler:Blaise and Colleen]]'s romance. It's just adorable.
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* Many, in general, from [[spoiler: finding out that Draco wasn't actually dead, to Neville's true reunion with his parents.]]
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* Many, in general, from [[spoiler: finding out that Draco wasn't actually dead, to Neville's true reunion with his parents.]]]]
* The way Harry confesses his feelings for Ginny in book five is really heartwarming. Also funny.
* The way Harry confesses his feelings for Ginny in book five is really heartwarming. Also funny.
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** Harry's reaction to Sirius bring acquitted is [[CallBack the same thing he said]] when Sirius escaped
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** Hagrid's reunion with Norbert.
** Harry and Ginny sculpting with different coloured fire.
** Hermione and Moony's reunion.
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** Hermione and Moony's reunion.
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-->'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]
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-->'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]sobbing]
* Many, in general, from [[spoiler: finding out that Draco wasn't actually dead, to Neville's true reunion with his parents.]]
* Many, in general, from [[spoiler: finding out that Draco wasn't actually dead, to Neville's true reunion with his parents.]]
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** Harry and Ginny sculpting with different coloured fire.
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** Harry and Ginny sculpting with different coloured fire.fire.
** Hermione and Moony's reunion.
-->'''Moony:''' My Kitten. My own little Kitten, for all the world to see...
-->'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]
** Hermione and Moony's reunion.
-->'''Moony:''' My Kitten. My own little Kitten, for all the world to see...
-->'''Hermione:''' Daddy - [cue sobbing]
