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* Eldest Moorland agrees to the Whistlers’ offer of two thousand crowns for Cullen when the usual offer is twice that amount.

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* Eldest Moorland agrees to the Whistlers’ Whistlers' offer of two thousand crowns for Cullen when the usual offer is twice that amount.amount. And her reason for accepting: Her uncle marrying into the royal family helped the Moorland family rise in prominence, but also led to him eventually being assassinated. Eldest Moorland doesn't want to put her brother in that same kind of danger, and knows he'll be safer with a less important family.
-->'''Ren:''' Why did you say yes? You know it's unlikely we'll be able to marry Jerin.\\
'''Moorland:''' Mother calls your father her sacrificial lamb sometimes. He bought us a lot of power, at the cost of being poisoned at the age of thirty-five. I don't want to spend the rest of my life with the same guilt my mother carries.
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'''Eldest''': She's a princess. All her life people have obeyed her commands. You're a boy. All your life you have listened to others. It was up to her to stop at any no you have, even if it was whispered."

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'''Eldest''': She's a princess. All her life people have obeyed her commands. You're a boy. All your life you have listened to others. It was up to her to stop at any no you have, gave, even if it was whispered."
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* Eldest Whistler, for all that she's an AloofOlderSister, causes a lot of these with her intense familial loyalty and her kindness to her insecure, vulnerable brother Jerin.

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* Eldest Whistler, for all that she's an AloofOlderSister, AloofBigSister, causes a lot of these with her intense familial loyalty and her kindness to her insecure, vulnerable brother Jerin.
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* Eldest Whistler, for all that she's an [[AloofOlderBrother Aloof Eldest Sister]], causes a lot of these with her intense familial loyalty and her kindness to her insecure, vulnerable brother Jerin.

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* Eldest Whistler, for all that she's an [[AloofOlderBrother Aloof Eldest Sister]], AloofOlderSister, causes a lot of these with her intense familial loyalty and her kindness to her insecure, vulnerable brother Jerin.



** The distressing tangle of what to do with [[spoiler: Eldie Porter]] is covered on CycleOfRevenge and YouKilledMyFather, but Eldest [[TakeAThirdOption comes up with]] [[HappilyAdopted a third option]].

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** The distressing tangle of what to do with [[spoiler: Eldie Porter]] is covered on CycleOfRevenge and YouKilledMyFather, but Eldest [[TakeAThirdOption comes up with]] a [[HappilyAdopted a third option]].
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* Eldest Moorland agrees to the Whistlers’ offer of two thousand crowns for Cullen when the usual offer is twice that amount.
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'''Jerin''': She's a princess. All her life people have obeyed her commands. You're a boy. All your life you have listened to others. It was up to her to stop at any no you have, even if it was whispered."

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'''Jerin''': '''Eldest''': She's a princess. All her life people have obeyed her commands. You're a boy. All your life you have listened to others. It was up to her to stop at any no you have, even if it was whispered."
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--> "We don't blame you, honey."
--> "[[QuestionableConsent I could have fought.]]"
--> "She's a princess. All her life people have obeyed her commands. You're a boy. All your life you have listened to others. It was up to her to stop at any no you have, even if it was whispered."

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--> "We --->'''Eldest''': We don't blame you, honey."
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'''Jerin''': She's
a princess. All her life people have obeyed her commands. You're a boy. All your life you have listened to others. It was up to her to stop at any no you have, even if it was whispered."



--> "There is redemption for the innocent."

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--> "There -->'''Eldest ''': There is redemption for the innocent."



--> "Chin up. Eyes front. Show no fear. You're a Whistler - [[CallOnMe and your family will always be there if you need us]]."

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--> "Chin -->'''Eldest''': Chin up. Eyes front. Show no fear. You're a Whistler - [[CallOnMe Whistler--[[CallOnMe and your family will always be there if you need us]]."



--> "You can't make good decisions as an adult if you were never allowed to make any decisions while you were a child."

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--> "You -->'''Mother Elder''': You can't make good decisions as an adult if you were never allowed to make any decisions while you were a child."



* Preparing for a hot bath in the family bath house (a highly unusual amenity) Jerin reflects on how the said house was just one of the several ways his grandmothers turned themselves inside-out to please their captured husband. Basically what Alannon wanted he got - he seems to have been happy with his low-class soldier wives.

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* Preparing for a hot bath in the family bath house (a highly unusual amenity) Jerin reflects on how the said house was just one of the several ways his grandmothers turned themselves inside-out to please their captured husband. Basically what Alannon wanted he got - he got--he seems to have been happy with his low-class soldier wives.



* A more personal one for Cira/[[spoiler: Princess Halley]] comes after she and Jerin come up with their plan to escape with him dressed up as a whore on the morning porter. In the process of getting him ready, Jerin asks how Cira knows what she does about whores and she explains to him she once had a lover who was the daughter of one. Said lover left her after she got a scar on her face. While she is obviously upset by the scar, Jerin says it becomes her like an exotic piece of jewelry. Enraged she pulls her shirt off and shows him her back, which is described as a mass of puckered skin and silvery scars, calling herself repulsive. Jerin, who at this point has no idea who she is and is under no pressure to lie, just rubs her skin and tells her she's not. She actually does mount him in place from how moved she is, stopped only by two layers of clothes and his desperate cries about being faithful to his wives. [[spoiler: Of course she is one of his wives, he just doesn't know that yet.]]
* Cira's impulsive kiss when Jerin first arrives in Mayfair is triggered not by his beauty, she has every reason to distrust male beauty, but by Jerin's visible appreciation of her 'beautiful' eyes.
* Papa Whistler's advice on how to handle wives and make a happy home: 'Never tell a wife she's your favorite; always seem happy to be with whichever wife you're with; make a 'servicing' schedule based on seniority and stick to it.'
* It's sweet, and rather funny, how Jerin keeps falling for royal princesses - even the one he doesn't know is a princess! It's like they put out some kind of Jerin specific pheromone.

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* A more personal one for Cira/[[spoiler: Princess Halley]] comes after she and Jerin come up with their plan to escape with him dressed up as a whore on the morning porter. In the process of getting him ready, Jerin asks how Cira knows what she does about whores and she explains to him she once had a lover who was the daughter of one. Said lover left her after she got a scar on her face. While she is obviously upset by the scar, Jerin says it becomes her like an exotic piece of jewelry. Enraged she pulls her shirt off and shows him her back, which is described as a mass of puckered skin and silvery scars, calling herself repulsive. Jerin, who at this point has no idea who she is and is under no pressure to lie, just rubs her skin and tells her she's not. She actually does mount him in place from how moved she is, stopped only by two layers of clothes and his desperate cries about being faithful to his wives. [[spoiler: Of [[spoiler:Of course she is one of his wives, he just doesn't know that yet.]]
* Cira's impulsive kiss when Jerin first arrives in Mayfair is triggered not by his beauty, she has every reason to distrust male beauty, but by Jerin's visible appreciation of her 'beautiful' "beautiful" eyes.
* Papa Whistler's advice on how to handle wives and make a happy home: 'Never "Never tell a wife she's your favorite; always seem happy to be with whichever wife you're with; make a 'servicing' schedule based on seniority and stick to it.'
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* It's sweet, and rather funny, how Jerin keeps falling for royal princesses - even princesses--even the one he doesn't know is a princess! It's like they put out some kind of Jerin specific pheromone.
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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered be DefiledForever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.

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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered to be DefiledForever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.
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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered be RuinedForever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.

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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered be RuinedForever.DefiledForever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.
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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered be ruined forever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.

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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered be ruined forever.RuinedForever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.
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** Seems to work in both directions, since even "Cira" reacted very strongly to Jerin, to the point of potentially endangering her own safety to kiss him (remember, his sisters and Raven would be there any moment) before having any idea her sisters wanted to court him.
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* It's sweet, and rather funny, how Jerin keeps falling for royal princesses - even the one he doesn't know is a princess! It's like they put out some kind of Jerin specific pheromone.
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* Cira's impulsive kiss when Jerin first arrives in Mayfair is triggered not by his beauty, she has every reason to distrust male beauty, but by Jerin's visible appreciation of her 'beautiful' eyes.
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* When Jerin is in the process of going catatonic with worry that the princesses will reject him after being kidnapped Cira reassures him that even if everyone else abandons him she will stay by his side, regardless of whether he is seen as unclean or not. Considering their society's views on male purity and the true nature of her identity this is a really big deal.

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* When Jerin is in the process of going catatonic with worry that the princesses will reject him after being kidnapped and he'll end up in a crib. Cira reassures assures him that even if everyone else abandons him she is in fact a wealthy noblewoman and ''she'' will stay by buy him from his side, sisters if the princesses don't want him, regardless of whether he is seen as unclean or not. Considering their society's views on male purity and the true nature of her identity this is a really big deal. Also the idea of a one man, one woman marriage is bizarre enough to make Jerin laugh helping him to calm down.
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* Papa Whistler's advice on how to handle wives and make a happy home: 'Never tell a wife she's your favorite; always seem happy to be with whichever wife you're with; make a 'servicing' schedule based on seniority and stick to it.'
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* A more personal one for Cira/[[spoiler: Princess Halley]] comes after she and Jerin come up with their plan to escape with him dressed up as a whore on the morning porter. In the process of getting him ready, Jerin asks how Cira knows what she does about whores and she explains to him she once had a lover who was the daughter of one. Said lover left her after she got a scar on her face. She is obviously upset by the scar, Jerin says it becomes her like an exotic piece of jewelry. Enraged she pulls her shirt off and shows him her back, which is described as a mass of puckered skin and silvery scars, calling herself repulsive. Jerin, who at this point has no idea who she is and is under no pressure to lie, just rubs her skin and tells her she's not. She nearly mounts him in place from how moved she is.

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* A more personal one for Cira/[[spoiler: Princess Halley]] comes after she and Jerin come up with their plan to escape with him dressed up as a whore on the morning porter. In the process of getting him ready, Jerin asks how Cira knows what she does about whores and she explains to him she once had a lover who was the daughter of one. Said lover left her after she got a scar on her face. She While she is obviously upset by the scar, Jerin says it becomes her like an exotic piece of jewelry. Enraged she pulls her shirt off and shows him her back, which is described as a mass of puckered skin and silvery scars, calling herself repulsive. Jerin, who at this point has no idea who she is and is under no pressure to lie, just rubs her skin and tells her she's not. She nearly mounts actually does mount him in place from how moved she is. is, stopped only by two layers of clothes and his desperate cries about being faithful to his wives. [[spoiler: Of course she is one of his wives, he just doesn't know that yet.]]

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* A more personal one for Cira/[[spoiler: Princess Halley]] comes after she and Jerin come up with their plan to escape with him dressed up as a whore on the morning porter. In the process of getting him ready, Jerin asks how Cira knows what she does about whores and she explains to him she once had a lover who was the daughter of one. Said lover left her after she got a scar on her face. She is obviously upset by the scar, Jerin says it becomes her like an exotic piece of jewelry. Enraged she pulls her shirt off and shows him her back, which is described as a mass of puckered skin and silvery scars, calling herself repulsive. Jerin, who at this point has no idea who she is and is under no pressure to lie, just rubs her skin and tells her she's not. She nearly mounts him in place from how moved she is.
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** Related to the above scene, Eldest's comment about she thinks her "family started when a group of women banded together and called themselves sisters." -- Her family started as a FamilyOfChoice!
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** Trini, period. She is very protective of Jerin, and just as keen on riding to his rescue when he is kidnapped as her sisters.
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* When Jerin is in the process of going catatonic with worry that the princesses will reject him after being kidnapped Cira reassures him that even if everyone else abandons him she will stay by his side, regardless of whether he is seen as unclean or not.

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* When Jerin is in the process of going catatonic with worry that the princesses will reject him after being kidnapped Cira reassures him that even if everyone else abandons him she will stay by his side, regardless of whether he is seen as unclean or not. Considering their society's views on male purity and the true nature of her identity this is a really big deal.
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* When Jerin is in the process of going catatonic with worry that the princesses will reject him after being kidnapped Cira reassures him that even if everyone else abandons him she will stay by his side, regardless of whether he is seen as unclean or not.
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* Preparing for a hot bath in the family bath house (a highly unusual amenity) Jerin reflects on how the said house was just one of the several ways his grandmothers turned themselves inside-out to please their captured husband. Basically what Allanon wanted he got - he seems to have been happy with his low-class soldier wives.

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* Preparing for a hot bath in the family bath house (a highly unusual amenity) Jerin reflects on how the said house was just one of the several ways his grandmothers turned themselves inside-out to please their captured husband. Basically what Allanon Alannon wanted he got - he seems to have been happy with his low-class soldier wives.
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* Preparing for a hot bath in the family bath house (a highly unusual amenity) Jerin reflects on how the said house was just one of the several ways his grandmothers turned themselves inside-out to please their captured husband. Basically what Allanon wanted he got - he seems to have been happy with his low-class soldier wives.
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* Sometimes it's the little things, such as when reluctant bride Trini finally takes Jerin's hand and addresses him affectionately. She doesn't have a problem with him as a person, she just didn't really want to remarry. Given how brutal the princesses' first husband was toward her, her attitude is understandable. It's still really nice when she does warm up to her new husband, though.
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* The Whistler sisters are too proud to admit total ignorance of the bell-pull system. Without being told, Jerin knows to ask for them.

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* The Whistler sisters are too proud to admit total ignorance of the bell-pull system. Without being told, Jerin knows to ask for them.them.

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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered RuinedForever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.

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** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered RuinedForever.be ruined forever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.
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** The distressing tangle of what to do with [[spoiler: Eldie Porter]] is covered on CycleOfRevenge and YouKilledMyFather, but Eldest [[TakeAThirdOption comes up with]] [[HappilyAdopted a third option]].
--> "There is redemption for the innocent."
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Heartwarming Moments of ''Literature/ABrothersPrice''.

* Eldest Whistler, for all that she's an [[AloofOlderBrother Aloof Eldest Sister]], causes a lot of these with her intense familial loyalty and her kindness to her insecure, vulnerable brother Jerin.
** She finds a [[ShamefulStrip stripped]] and murdered man she vaguely knew and takes her coat off [[YouMustBeCold to cover him with]], "her eyes furious". She's then desperately afraid for her little brothers and has to go back [[BigBrotherInstinct to protect them]].
** This is a world where a man who's had premarital sex is often considered RuinedForever. Eldest is ''enraged'' when she believes Ren raped her brother, but cools to hear his explanations and is gentle when he bursts into tears.
--> "We don't blame you, honey."
--> "[[QuestionableConsent I could have fought.]]"
--> "She's a princess. All her life people have obeyed her commands. You're a boy. All your life you have listened to others. It was up to her to stop at any no you have, even if it was whispered."
** Eldest pretty much constantly insisting that her brother is not ''livestock''.
** How she gradually sheds her hatred of Ren and comes to see her as a good woman.
** That EffortlessAmazonianLift, and the first time Jerin ever sees her blush.
** "Rescuing" Cullen from his family, especially since Jerin, hearing the plan, says, "Ah, a husband raid. What us Whistlers do best." Eldest's indulgent affection for Cullen.
** The letter she writes to Jerin. He may be a boy and she may condescend to him a little, but she does believe in his competence and some ability to take care of himself.
** The BigDamnHeroes moment at the end of the book.
** The wedding.
--> "Chin up. Eyes front. Show no fear. You're a Whistler - [[CallOnMe and your family will always be there if you need us]]."
* Mother Elder giving Corelle a chance to make up for her poor decisions.
--> "You can't make good decisions as an adult if you were never allowed to make any decisions while you were a child."
* The Whistler sisters are too proud to admit total ignorance of the bell-pull system. Without being told, Jerin knows to ask for them.

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