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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!problems!
**Simply, the author has no real grasp of physics.
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
**Simply, the author has no real grasp of physics.
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...problems!
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!problems!
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
* So what exactly did [[spoiler: Chapter 102/71]] invalidate? As in, what has [[spoiler: no longer happened]]? Everything was already getting very complicated, and now...
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma phocusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
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* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma phocusing focusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
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** To be fair, Season Four was the one where things got really out of hand compared to the others. The author may not have come to that conclusion until late into the season, and after all that, there wouldn't have been a way to reasonably backpedal all of it without another dozen chapters and even more radical changes. Making it all a dream might just be his way of saying "Okay, I screwed up. Let's fix this up and get back to the good stuff."
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** To be fair, Season Four was the one where things got really out of hand compared to the others. The author may not have come to that conclusion until late into the season, and after all that, there wouldn't have been a way to reasonably backpedal all of it without another dozen chapters and even more radical changes. Making it all a dream might just be his way of saying "Okay, I screwed up. Let's fix this up and get back to the good stuff.""
* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma phocusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
* Alright, I know this is already there under ArtMajorPhysics, bbut I gotta go over it again: ''plasma phocusing crystals?'' how can that POSSIBLY work? I guess you could say that it's simply a crystaline solid with vents running through it that focus the plasma into a coherent stream, but that causes a whole bunch of other problems!
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* Why do I get the feeling a [[{{House}} certain diagnostics team]] will be the people that will determine Director Lorenz's fate, and one member is just going to pull the plug on him, unless he has [[JokerImmunity villainous protection]]?
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* Why do I get the feeling a [[{{House}} [[Series/{{House}} certain diagnostics team]] will be the people that will determine Director Lorenz's fate, and one member is just going to pull the plug on him, unless he has [[JokerImmunity villainous protection]]?
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**** Your second interpretation is basically what I read it as. Basically, she seems to be making a statement, and then breaking apart the statement as she's saying it, and revealing her inner feelings.
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* What ever happened to half of the story arcs, anyhow? Why did Bardiel go dormant for so long and not reappear. What happened to Arrmisael in the Amazon. Why are all they boys of Tokyo 3 infertile?
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* Given that Rei keeps a dead Angel in the closet, where ''does'' she keep her clothes?
* The whole [[spoiler: Arael caused the characters to dream the last 30 chapters]] bugs the hell out of me. It really felt like a way to fix the problems that were beginning to really plague ND, without actually having to bother fixing the problems. It really wasn't foreshadowed particularly well at all, and simply lasted far too long.
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** Her dresser, most likely.
* The whole [[spoiler: Arael caused the characters to dream the last 30 chapters]] bugs the hell out of me. It really felt like a way to fix the problems that were beginning to really plague ND, without actually having to bother fixing the problems. It really wasn't foreshadowed particularly well at all, and simply lasted far too
** To be fair, Season Four was the one where things got really out of hand compared to the others. The author may not have come to that conclusion until late into the season, and after all that, there wouldn't have been a way to reasonably backpedal all of it without another dozen chapters and even more radical changes. Making it all a dream might just be his way of saying "Okay, I screwed up. Let's fix this up and get back to the good stuff."
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* The whole [[spoiler: Arael caused the characters to dream the last 30 chapters]] bugs the hell out of me. It really felt like a way to fix the problems that were beginning to really plague ND, without actually having to bother fixing the problems. It really wasn't foreshadowed particularly well at all, and simply lasted far too long.
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* Given that Rei keeps a dead Angel in the closet, where ''does'' she keep her clothes?
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** [[spoiler:Jossed, I'm afraid. Lorenz got smothered to death by Kei, only for it all to have turned out to be a dream and for him to still be alive]]. They could always turn up later, however, awesome as that would be. ;)
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** Lesse then... Bardiel finally shows up in a recent chapter, and was dealt with by the Ree in an... unconventional way. The Armisael sublot, as mentioned above, seems to be resolved. He was actually involved in a recent battle that resulted in his almost-death and his apparent [[TookALevelInBadass upgrade]]. The boys being infertile hasn't been mentioned, but it was pointed out in-story as being looked at, meaning that it could still be important enough to make an appearance later. ''However'', none of this could apply anymore since [[spoiler:the last seven weeks were apparently a dream caused by Arael. Meaning that everything since Zeruel may very well have not happened. However, Armisael showed up in his new form after the dream ended, so it's up in the air whether Bardiel has been dealt with, and whether the boys really are still infertile]].
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* So...where exactly are these so-called JumpedTheShark complaints? I've heard nothing but praise for this fic until those edits on the YMMV page appeared.
** Haters gonna hate.
*** [[{{Inception}} Extractors gonna extract]].[[hottip:*:[[MemeticMutation sorry, couldn't help it.]]]]
** You can check the spacebattles.com forum pages for the complaints. It goes into much more detail about them than I can explain here.[[hottip:*:A lot of them I agree with]]
*** A truncated version of the spacebattles.com thread: a combination of FourLinesAllWaiting, inherent SeasonalRot and a general lack of focus recently.
**** If you check the Spacebattles forum, in fact, even a lot of users who are still fans are frustrated by the FourLinesAllWaiting nature of the story, and what they perceive to be a lack of focus.
* ...''Really''? A [[spoiler:ResetButton]]?! I love the fic and all, but was there really any point to ''that''?
** The 4th season was getting many complains, as above discuss. Now the only question is: did he do that to RetCon or [[StylisticSuck intentionally]]? And my concern is that how to show that this is or is not an AssPull.
** Haters gonna hate.
*** [[{{Inception}} Extractors gonna extract]].[[hottip:*:[[MemeticMutation sorry, couldn't help it.]]]]
** You can check the spacebattles.com forum pages for the complaints. It goes into much more detail about them than I can explain here.[[hottip:*:A lot of them I agree with]]
*** A truncated version of the spacebattles.com thread: a combination of FourLinesAllWaiting, inherent SeasonalRot and a general lack of focus recently.
**** If you check the Spacebattles forum, in fact, even a lot of users who are still fans are frustrated by the FourLinesAllWaiting nature of the story, and what they perceive to be a lack of focus.
* ...''Really''? A [[spoiler:ResetButton]]?! I love the fic and all, but was there really any point to ''that''?
** The 4th season was getting many complains, as above discuss. Now the only question is: did he do that to RetCon or [[StylisticSuck intentionally]]? And my concern is that how to show that this is or is not an AssPull.
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* ...''Really''? A [[spoiler:ResetButton]]?! I love the fic and all, but was there really any point to ''that''?
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* ...''Really''? A [[spoiler:ResetButton]]?! I love the fic and all, but was there really any point to ''that''?''that''?
** The 4th season was getting many complains, as above discuss. Now the only question is: did he do that to RetCon or [[StylisticSuck intentionally]]? And my concern is that how to show that this is or is not an AssPull.
** The 4th season was getting many complains, as above discuss. Now the only question is: did he do that to RetCon or [[StylisticSuck intentionally]]? And my concern is that how to show that this is or is not an AssPull.
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**** If you check the Spacebattles forum, in fact, even a lot of users who are still fans are frustrated by the FourLinesAllWaiting nature of the story, and what they perceive to be a lack of focus.
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**** If you check the Spacebattles forum, in fact, even a lot of users who are still fans are frustrated by the FourLinesAllWaiting nature of the story, and what they perceive to be a lack of focus.focus.
*...''Really''? A [[spoiler:ResetButton]]?! I love the fic and all, but was there really any point to ''that''?
*...''Really''? A [[spoiler:ResetButton]]?! I love the fic and all, but was there really any point to ''that''?
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**** Your second interpretation is basically what I read it as. Basically, she seems to be making a statement, and then breaking apart the statement as she's saying it, and revealing her inner feelings.
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*** The infertile subplot was name-dropped in 92, and implied that they were working on figuring it out. The second subplot seems to mostly be resolved.
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*** A truncated version of the spacebattles.com thread: a combination of FourLinesAllWaiting, inherent SeasonalRot and a general lack of focus recently.
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*** A truncated version of the spacebattles.com thread: a combination of FourLinesAllWaiting, inherent SeasonalRot and a general lack of focus recently.recently.
**** If you check the Spacebattles forum, in fact, even a lot of users who are still fans are frustrated by the FourLinesAllWaiting nature of the story, and what they perceive to be a lack of focus.
**** If you check the Spacebattles forum, in fact, even a lot of users who are still fans are frustrated by the FourLinesAllWaiting nature of the story, and what they perceive to be a lack of focus.
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** You can check the spacebattles.com forum pages for the complaints. It goes into much more detail about them than I can explain here.[[hottip:*:A lot of them I agree with]]
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** You can check the spacebattles.com forum pages for the complaints. It goes into much more detail about them than I can explain here.[[hottip:*:A lot of them I agree with]]with]]
*** A truncated version of the spacebattles.com thread: a combination of FourLinesAllWaiting, inherent SeasonalRot and a general lack of focus recently.
*** A truncated version of the spacebattles.com thread: a combination of FourLinesAllWaiting, inherent SeasonalRot and a general lack of focus recently.
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** You can check the spacebattles.com forum pages for the complaints. It goes into much more detail about them than I can explain here.
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** You can check the spacebattles.com forum pages for the complaints. It goes into much more detail about them than I can explain here.[[hottip:*:A lot of them I agree with]]
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** They were 'forgotten'. Seriously, they were 'forgotten' due to the shear size of this fic.
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** The spacebattles.com forum pages.
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** The You can check the spacebattles.com forum pages.pages for the complaints. It goes into much more detail about them than I can explain here.
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** The SB forum pages.
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** The SB spacebattles.com forum pages.
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** The SpaceBattles forum pages.
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** The SpaceBattles SB forum pages.
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*** [[{{Inception}} Extractors gonna extract]].[[hottip:*:[[MemeticMutation sorry, couldn't help it.]]]]
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*** [[{{Inception}} Extractors gonna extract]].[[hottip:*:[[MemeticMutation sorry, couldn't help it.]]]]]]]]
** The SpaceBattles forum pages.
** The SpaceBattles forum pages.
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** I think I read a manga (or possibly a doujin) where after Instrumentality, Asuka tried to go back in time (or maybe forward so far it looped back to the beginning) and fix everything, but she was incorporeal in that one. That was my best guess.
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** I think I read a manga (or possibly a doujin) where after Instrumentality, Asuka tried to go back in time (or maybe forward so far it looped back to She's from [[spoiler: Taking Sights]], one of the beginning) and fix everything, but she was incorporeal other Evangelion fanfics involved in that one. That was my best guess.
the long Leliel crossover story arc.
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** Haters gonna hate.
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** Haters gonna hate.hate.
*** [[{{Inception}} Extractors gonna extract]].[[hottip:*:[[MemeticMutation sorry, couldn't help it.]]]]
*** [[{{Inception}} Extractors gonna extract]].[[hottip:*:[[MemeticMutation sorry, couldn't help it.]]]]
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** I think I read a manga (or possibly a doujin) where after Instrumentality, Asuka tried to go back in time (or maybe forward so far it looped back to the beginning) and fix everything, but she was incorporeal in that one. That was my best guess.
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* So...where exactly are these so-called JumpedTheShark complaints? I've heard nothing but praise for this fic until those edits on the YMMV page appeared.
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* So...where exactly are these so-called JumpedTheShark complaints? I've heard nothing but praise for this fic until those edits on the YMMV page appeared.appeared.
** Haters gonna hate.
** Haters gonna hate.
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*So...where exactly are these so-called JumpedTheShark complaints? I've heard nothing but praise for this fic until those edits on the YMMV page appeared.
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**That's kinda like laughing at Jerry Louis as Secretary of Defense. According to 1950s! Doc, he serve under Ronald Reagan in the 80s.
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* Sorry if I missed the explanation in the story, but where did the "Survived The Heat Death of the Universe"!Asuka come from?
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* Is it just me or did this story start going to hell after the author decided that his characters had to travel the multiverse? Ha ha, funny - all of the characters are more fucked up in parallel universes - but ever since then bringing in shit like [[MassEffect Tali]], thing sjust got WAY bogged down?
* What ever happened to half of the story arcs, anyhow? Why did Bardiel go dormant for so long and not reappear. What happened to Arrmisael in the Amazon. Why are all they boys of Tokyo 3 infertile?
* What ever happened to half of the story arcs, anyhow? Why did Bardiel go dormant for so long and not reappear. What happened to Arrmisael in the Amazon. Why are all they boys of Tokyo 3 infertile?
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* If Stephen Colbert is President of the United States in this reality, does that mean John Hurt is the Prime Minister of England? Or is that going too far?
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* If Stephen Colbert is President of the United States in this reality, does that mean John Hurt is the Prime Minister of England? Or is that going too far?far?
*Is it just me or did this story start going to hell after the author decided that his characters had to travel the multiverse? Ha ha, funny - all of the characters are more fucked up in parallel universes - but ever since then bringing in shit like [[MassEffect Tali]], thing sjust got WAY bogged down?
*What ever happened to half of the story arcs, anyhow? Why did Bardiel go dormant for so long and not reappear. What happened to Arrmisael in the Amazon. Why are all they boys of Tokyo 3 infertile?
*Is it just me or did this story start going to hell after the author decided that his characters had to travel the multiverse? Ha ha, funny - all of the characters are more fucked up in parallel universes - but ever since then bringing in shit like [[MassEffect Tali]], thing sjust got WAY bogged down?
*What ever happened to half of the story arcs, anyhow? Why did Bardiel go dormant for so long and not reappear. What happened to Arrmisael in the Amazon. Why are all they boys of Tokyo 3 infertile?
