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Tweak~ :3
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On SNES?\\
[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/ScanVisor ->-- ScanVisor ]]
[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/ScanVisor ->-- ScanVisor ]]
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On SNES?\\
[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/ScanVisorSNES?
->--ScanVisor ]]
[[@/ScanVisor ScanVisor]]
[[http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Tropers/ScanVisor
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Everything is fine.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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Everything is fine.\\
-fine.
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->-- Kajotex
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A fate is unsealed.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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A fate is unsealed.\\
-unsealed.
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->-- Kajotex
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The five dark towers.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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The five dark towers.\\
-towers.
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->-- Kajotex
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a tear in his eye.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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a tear in his eye.\\
-eye.
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->-- Kajotex
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The longest journey.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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The longest journey.\\
-journey.
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->-- Kajotex
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The parasite waits.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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The parasite waits.\\
-waits.
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->-- Kajotex
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the plants reign again.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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the plants reign again.\\
-again.
->-- Kajotex
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->-- Kajotex
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Showdown on Grecliff.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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Showdown on Grecliff.\\
-Grecliff.
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->-- Kajotex
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The birds are soaring.\\
- Kajotex
- Kajotex
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The birds are soaring.\\
- Kajotexsoaring.
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- Kajotex
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Paradise on earth,\\
the warmth of the healing sun,\\
the plants reign again.\\
- Kajotex
His mission goes on,\\
as Ark leaves garden Eden.\\
Showdown on Grecliff.\\
- Kajotex
The crack of an egg,\\
a shell is shed for new life.\\
The birds are soaring.\\
- Kajotex
the warmth of the healing sun,\\
the plants reign again.\\
- Kajotex
His mission goes on,\\
as Ark leaves garden Eden.\\
Showdown on Grecliff.\\
- Kajotex
The crack of an egg,\\
a shell is shed for new life.\\
The birds are soaring.\\
- Kajotex
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The parasite waits.\\
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Dead leafes on the ground,\\
an underground labyrinth.\\
The parasite waits.\\\\
- Kajotex
an underground labyrinth.\\
The parasite waits.
- Kajotex
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- Kajotex
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- KajotexKajotex
A rift in space-time,\\
a leap of faith awaits him,\\
a tear in his eye.\\
- Kajotex
Red earth on his feet.\\
A desert devoid of life.\\
The longest journey.\\
- Kajotex
A rift in space-time,\\
a leap of faith awaits him,\\
a tear in his eye.\\
- Kajotex
Red earth on his feet.\\
A desert devoid of life.\\
The longest journey.\\
- Kajotex
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Added a few haikus
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Peaceful, quiet town.\\
A boy is living his life.\\
Everything is fine.\\
- Kajotex
Terrified, grown men.\\
Begging voices from the deep.\\
A fate is unsealed.\\
- Kajotex
Leaving his birthplace,\\
a quest for his loved ones.\\
The five dark towers.\\
- Kajotex
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Aesthetic edit.
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Wow, [[BestLevelEver level design!]]
And a [[TearJerker moving story too?]]
On SNES?
And a [[TearJerker moving story too?]]
On SNES?
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Wow, [[BestLevelEver level design!]]
design!]]\\
And a [[TearJerker moving storytoo?]]
too?]]\\
OnSNES?SNES?\\
And a [[TearJerker moving story
On
