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Swap {{Theatre/Faust}} for [[Literature/ParadiseLost Milton]]\\
Add a lot of {{Anime/Paprika}}\\
You get a cake song!
-->Nothing Productive
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It was the writers idea not mandated.
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[[ExecutiveMeddling execs]] fucked it up.
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Flame Bait and misuse (CD is unexplained changes not unpopular ones, the point of the movie was to explain the change).
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[[CharacterDerailment Is not]] a {{Yandere}} bitch\\
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[[CharacterDerailment Is not a]] {{Yandere}} bitch\\
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[[CharacterDerailment Is not a]] not]] a {{Yandere}} bitch\\
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Madohomu is\\
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%%Are they finally happy?\\
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-->[[{{Tropers/Kiikomi}} Kiikomi]]%%Kiikomi]]
Everything was set\\
For a happy ending; then\\
[[ExecutiveMeddling execs]] fucked it up.
My fave character\\
[[CharacterDerailment Is not a]] {{Yandere}} bitch\\
How could they do this?
Well if you ask me\\
[[FanonDiscontinuity That ending did not happen]]\\
Not in [[FixFic my version.]]
Madohomu is\\
Happy and in Valhalla\\
That’s how it ended.
-->Master N
Everything was set\\
For a happy ending; then\\
[[ExecutiveMeddling execs]] fucked it up.
My fave character\\
[[CharacterDerailment Is not a]] {{Yandere}} bitch\\
How could they do this?
Well if you ask me\\
[[FanonDiscontinuity That ending did not happen]]\\
Not in [[FixFic my version.]]
Madohomu is\\
Happy and in Valhalla\\
That’s how it ended.
-->Master N
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Not a haiku. It must follow the 5-7-5 format. Readd it when the format is correct.
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Are they finally happy?\\
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-->[[{{Tropers/Kiikomi}} Kiikomi]]Kiikomi]]%%
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[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super Saiyan]]\\
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[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super Saiyan]] \\
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Are they finally happy? \\
happy?\\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone SuperSaiyan]] \\Saiyan]]\\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super
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Are they finally happy?\\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super Saiyan]]\\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super Saiyan]]\\
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Are they finally happy?\\
happy? \\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone SuperSaiyan]]\\Saiyan]] \\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super
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Are they finally happy?\\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super Saiyan]]\\
[[DownerEnding Well shit, I'm out]]
[[{{Tropers/Kiikomi}} Kiikomi]]
Are they finally happy?\\
[[GodIsDead Homura's gone Super Saiyan]]\\
[[DownerEnding Well shit, I'm out]]
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[[spoiler: [[ParadiseLost Paradise]] was [[WholePlotReference Lost]]]]. \\
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[[spoiler: [[ParadiseLost [[Literature/ParadiseLost Paradise]] was [[WholePlotReference Lost]]]]. \\
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[[WhatDoYouMeanItsNotForLittleGirls Come along children]].\\
And let's watch a movie where \\
[[spoiler: [[ParadiseLost Paradise]] was [[WholePlotReference Lost]]]]. \\
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And let's watch a movie where \\
[[spoiler: [[ParadiseLost Paradise]] was [[WholePlotReference Lost]]]]. \\
--> WC-83
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[[spoiler: Well, it sure looks like
Bunnycat is still a dick.
Bunnycat is still a dick.
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[[spoiler: Well, it sure looks like
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Bunnycat is still a dick. \\
Bunnycat is still a dick. \\
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[[spoiler: Well, it sure looks like
Bunnycat is still a dick.
At least he gets his.]]
-->The Otaku Ninja
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Ain't a god anymore.]] Well \\
Thanks Homu-Homu.
Thanks Homu-Homu.
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Ain't a god anymore.]] Well \\
Thanks Homu-Homu.]]
Thanks Homu-Homu.]]
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Thanks HomuHomu.
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Thanks HomuHomu.Homu-Homu.
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Oh great, [[spoiler: Madoka \\
Ain't a god anymore.]] Well \\
Thanks HomuHomu.
-->CardboardLuigi
Oh great, [[spoiler: Madoka \\
Ain't a god anymore.]] Well \\
Thanks HomuHomu.
-->CardboardLuigi
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I guess this is it. \\
We're going to get a happy- \\
[[spoiler: DAMMIT HOMURA!]]
--> Secret Fan 14
I guess this is it. \\
We're going to get a happy- \\
[[spoiler: DAMMIT HOMURA!]]
--> Secret Fan 14
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Who is the round cake? \\
Is the round cake Madoka? \\
No, I'm the melon!
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Who is the round cake? \\
Is the round cake Madoka? \\
No, I'm the melon!
--> krimzonflygon2
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[[GodIsDead All Good to me lost.]] \\
[[{{Ubermensch}} Farewell hope, and farewell fear.]] \\
[[SelfInflictedHell My own Hell I reign.]]
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[[{{Ubermensch}} Farewell hope, and farewell fear.]] \\
[[SelfInflictedHell My own Hell I reign.]]
--> M.E.R.
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[[{{Ubermensch}} Farewell hope, and farewell fear.]] \\
[[SelfInflictedHell My own Hell I reign.]]
--> M.E.R.
[[{{Ubermensch}} Farewell hope, and farewell fear.]] \\
[[SelfInflictedHell My own Hell I reign.]]
--> M.E.R.
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[[{{Ubermensch}} Farewell hope, and farewell fear.]]]] \\
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