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Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
-->Jane012
to:
Our hero quests\\
Yet he doesn't seem to need\\
To sit down and shave.\\
-->Tropers/{{Jaketroper}}
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->Character hasn't
->Shaved in weeks,
->Yet not one hair
->Grows on his cheeks:
->''[[Advertising/BurmaShave Perma-Shave]]''
--> -- @/{{bluepenguin}}
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->Shaved in weeks,
->Yet not one hair
->Grows on his cheeks:
->''[[Advertising/BurmaShave Perma-Shave]]''
--> -- @/{{bluepenguin}}
----
to:
->Shaved in weeks,
->Yet not one hair
->Grows on his cheeks:
->''[[Advertising/BurmaShave Perma-Shave]]''
--> -- @/{{bluepenguin}}
----
-->they find never have to
-->remove facial hair.
-->Jane012
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Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
->''[[BurmaShave Perma-Shave]]''
to:
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So this was supposed to be a joke based on Burma Shave? Never heard of it. Still, reverting to the original posted in the YKTTW. It may not be \'\'quite\'\' haiku, but rules can be bent for a clever laugh.
Changed line(s) 1,5 (click to see context) from:
->He hasn't shaved in weeks,
->Yet not one hair dares to grow
->Anywhere on his cheeks:
--> -- @/{{bluepenguin}} (who would like to note that putting this in haiku form ruined [[BurmaShave the joke]])
->Yet not one hair dares to grow
->Anywhere on his cheeks:
--> -- @/{{bluepenguin}} (who would like to note that putting this in haiku form ruined [[BurmaShave the joke]])
to:
->Shaved in weeks,
->Yet not one
->Anywhere
->Grows on his cheeks:
->''[[BurmaShave Perma-Shave]]''
--> --
