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OH GOD! *Slams the door.
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--> yugi195
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OH GOD! *Slams [=*Slams the door.
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door*=].
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--> yugi195
->--yugi195
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--> The Dread Gazebo
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--> The Dread Gazebo
yugi195
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yugi195
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The Dread Gazebo
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--> Yugi195
The Dread Gazebo
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Kyaa! ''[[JapaneseStockPhrases Doko sawatteru no]]?!'' Get out of my room and go back to AccidentalPervert, you moron!
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Kyaa! ''[[JapaneseStockPhrases ''[[UsefulNotes/JapaneseStockPhrases Doko sawatteru no]]?!'' Get out of my room and go back to AccidentalPervert, you moron!
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Coming out of bath,\\
Some stupid boy opens the door.\\
I scream, he slams it.
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Some stupid boy opens the door.\\
I scream, he slams it.
--> Yugi195
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OH GOD! I'M SORRY!
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OH GOD! I'M SORRY!*Slams the door.
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This one?... No, it must be this...
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This one?... No, it must be this...\\
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--> Yugi195
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So, which door was it?\\
This one?... No, it must be this...
OH GOD! I'M SORRY!
This one?... No, it must be this...
OH GOD! I'M SORRY!
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[[{{MarilynManeuver}} A wind blew in here]]\\
[[{{MaleGaze}} Thought I saw paradise]]; then\\
[[{{UnprovokedPervertPayback}} I was sent to one]].
->--@/{{Tropers/Dezastico}}
[[{{MaleGaze}} Thought I saw paradise]]; then\\
[[{{UnprovokedPervertPayback}} I was sent to one]].
->--@/{{Tropers/Dezastico}}
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Don’t look at it! It’s [[FanService naked!]]\\
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Don’t look at it! It’s [[FanService [[{{Fanservice}} naked!]]\\
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[[PlanesTrainsAndAutomobiles It feels like two pillows...]]\\
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Kyaa! ''[[JapaneseStockPhrases Doko sawatteru no]]?!'' Get out of my room and go back to AccidentalPervert, you {{baka}}!
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Kyaa! ''[[JapaneseStockPhrases Doko sawatteru no]]?!'' Get out of my room and go back to AccidentalPervert, you {{baka}}!moron!
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[[{{MarilynManeuver}} A wind blew in here]]\\
[[{{MaleGaze}} Thought I saw paradise]]; then\\
[[{{UnprovokedPervertPayback}} I was sent to one]].
->--@/{{Tropers/Dezastico}}
[[{{MaleGaze}} Thought I saw paradise]]; then\\
[[{{UnprovokedPervertPayback}} I was sent to one]].
->--@/{{Tropers/Dezastico}}
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Hands on something... soft?\\
[[PlanesTrainsAndAutomobiles It feels like two pillows...]]\\
Wait... SHIT! I'M SORRY!
->--@/Zblayde
[[PlanesTrainsAndAutomobiles It feels like two pillows...]]\\
Wait... SHIT! I'M SORRY!
->--@/Zblayde
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I did not look where\\
I was reaching, next thing I\\
Knew, arm was twisted.
I was reaching, next thing I\\
Knew, arm was twisted.
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I did reached, not look where\\
I was reaching, next thing I\\
Knew, arm was twisted.looking,\\
Felt something soft, startled, then\\
She twisted my arm.
I was reaching, next thing I\\
Knew, arm was twisted.
Felt something soft, startled, then\\
She twisted my arm.
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I did not look where\\
I was reaching, next thing I\\
Knew, arm was twisted.
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I was reaching, next thing I\\
Knew, arm was twisted.
->--@/SoWeAteThem
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Again and again,
I walk in on you changing.
I walk in on you changing.
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Again and again,
again,\\
I walk in on you changing.\\
I walk in on you changing.\\
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Again and again,
I walk in on you changing.
Please stop hitting me.
->--{{Tropers/Bozozoku}}
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Kyaa! ''[[JapaneseStockPhrases Doko sawatteru no]]?!'' Get out of my room and go back to AccidentalPervert, you {{baka}}!
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Kyaa! ''[[JapaneseStockPhrases Doko sawatteru no]]?!'' Get out of my room and go back to AccidentalPervert, you {{baka}}!
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