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* "But what I have doesn't need to be in my Deck! For I have the power of George Michael!" Cue "Flawless (Go to the City)".
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* "But Jaden's EstablishingCharacterMoment during the duel with Crowler.
-->'''Jaden''': But what I have doesn't need to be in my Deck! For I have the power of GeorgeMichael!" Cue Michael!
-->''Cue "Flawless (Go to theCity)".City)"''
-->'''Jaden''': But what I have doesn't need to be in my Deck! For I have the power of George
-->''Cue "Flawless (Go to the
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* Blair and the [[ThisIndexTouchesItself strange things]] involving Zane's cards.
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* Blair and the [[ThisIndexTouchesItself strange things]] things involving Zane's cards.
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* [[SeriousBusiness "Poetry is always important!"]]
* "Never again am I staying up till four in the morning watching tutorials on how to build a pancake helicopter!"
* "Never again am I staying up till four in the morning watching tutorials on how to build a pancake helicopter!"
to:
* [[SeriousBusiness "Poetry Don't claim Poetry to be unimportant in front of Dr. Crowler, you'll get an earful.
* Jaden isalways important!"]]
* "Never again am I stayinglate for registration at Duel Academy because [[MakesAsMuchSenseInContext he was up till four in the morning watching tutorials all night following a tutorial on how to build make a pancake helicopter!"helicopter.]]
* Jaden is
* "Never again am I staying
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* This:
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* This:The Arrival to Duel Academy!
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* Your caller can not continue the conversation as they are just too rich
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* Your "Your caller can not continue the conversation as they are just too richrich."
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* This Call Back
-->'''Jaden''': How the hell did I find a boat so fast?
-->'''Jaden''': How the hell did I find a boat so fast?
to:
* This Call Back
Syrus calls Jaden... who promptly hangs up the call without answering before returning to his video game.
-->''(Game over sounds from his handheld)''
-->'''Jaden''': ...Screw it let's just go save Syrus.
* Jaden uses a convenient boat to go and save Syrus.
-->'''Jaden''': [[LampshadeHanging How the hell did I find a boat sofast?fast?]]
-->''(Game over sounds from his handheld)''
-->'''Jaden''': ...Screw it let's just go save Syrus.
* Jaden uses a convenient boat to go and save Syrus.
-->'''Jaden''': [[LampshadeHanging How the hell did I find a boat so
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* Jaden's lengthy insult towards Chazz.
-->'''Jaden''': Get bent Chazz you no good egocentric big tempered money loving Ojama humping butt munching asshole!
* This:
-->'''Crowler''': Didya see that Chanceller? Didya? Didya? Didya?
-->'''Jaden''': Get bent Chazz you no good egocentric big tempered money loving Ojama humping butt munching asshole!
* This:
-->'''Crowler''': Didya see that Chanceller? Didya? Didya? Didya?
to:
* Jaden's lengthy insult towards Chazz.
Chazz during the exam.
-->'''Jaden''': Get bent Chazz you no good egocentric big tempered money loving Ojama humping butt munchingasshole!
asshole! Even I haven't started my exam yet and there's not much time befor-
-->'''Banner''': Your exam is now over.
-->'''Jaden''' (Off-screen): GOD DAMMIT!
*This:
The antagonists are a little too excited by Jaden falling behind in the duel.
-->'''Crowler''': Didya see thatChanceller? Chancellor? Didya? Didya? Didya?
-->'''Jaden''': Get bent Chazz you no good egocentric big tempered money loving Ojama humping butt munching
-->'''Banner''': Your exam is now over.
-->'''Jaden''' (Off-screen): GOD DAMMIT!
*
-->'''Crowler''': Didya see that
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* "I'm a Syrus fangirl! Let's pair you up with Chumley!"
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* Syrus hearing Jaden's voice in his head, and including the time Jaden got drunk and thrown out of a bar.
to:
* After Crowler reads Jaden's letter...
-->'''Crowler''': Why this sounds like a marvelous idea! I'll get this through right away!
-->'''Jaden''': Really?
-->'''Crowler''': [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! *Rips up the letter*
-->'''Jaden''': Oh god why?
* Syrus hearing Jaden's voice in his head,and including the time which includes a [[NoodleIncident memory where Jaden got drunk and thrown out of a bar.]]
-->'''Crowler''': Why this sounds like a marvelous idea! I'll get this through right away!
-->'''Jaden''': Really?
-->'''Crowler''': [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! *Rips up the letter*
-->'''Jaden''': Oh god why?
* Syrus hearing Jaden's voice in his head,
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* Jaden's... questionable remark when he spots Syrus running away:
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* Jaden's... questionable remark when he spots Winged Kuriboh tells him where Syrus running away:ran off to:
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* After Crowler reads Jaden's letter...
-->'''Crowler''': Why this sounds like a marvelous idea! I'll get this through right away!
-->'''Jaden''': Really?
-->'''Crowler''': [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! *Rips up the letter*
-->'''Jaden''': Oh god why?
-->'''Crowler''': Why this sounds like a marvelous idea! I'll get this through right away!
-->'''Jaden''': Really?
-->'''Crowler''': [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! *Rips up the letter*
-->'''Jaden''': Oh god why?
to:
-->'''Crowler''': Why this sounds like a marvelous idea! I'll get this through right away!
-->'''Jaden''': Really?
-->'''Crowler''': [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! *Rips up the letter*
-->'''Jaden''': Oh god why?
* The Narrator gets tired of his RunningGag of cutting to the Tool Shed and [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere quits on the spot]].
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* This bit:
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* This bit:Professor Banner proceeds to explain that Chumley's father was a state duel champion for three years in a row. Jaden realizes he messed up royally.
-->'''Jaden''': Oh... Hahahahah! Oh, dude I'm so sorry I have totally screwed you over, but good luck anyway.
-->''([[DeathGlare Chumley stares back at Jaden angrily]])''
* Syrus fills in for the Narrator.
* After Chumley's dad heads outside and overhears Jaden and company playing a game:
-->'''Jaden''': Oh... Hahahahah! Oh, dude I'm so sorry I have totally screwed you over, but good luck anyway.
-->''([[DeathGlare Chumley stares back at Jaden angrily]])''
* Syrus fills in for the Narrator.
* After Chumley's dad heads outside and overhears Jaden and company playing a game:
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* Alexis getting Bastion's name wrong calling him, in order: ''Batman'', Bathtime, Bastard and [[OddNameOut John]]
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* Alexis constantly getting Bastion's name wrong calling him, in order: ''Batman'', Bathtime, Bastard and [[OddNameOut John]]John]]. She finally gets it right at the end of the episode, though.
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** That said, Syrus's epic rapping... followed by Jaden's not so epic rapping. Even better when you consider that ShadyVox (the voice of Jaden) [[HilariousInHindsight actually makes money writing and recording songs, including rap.]]
to:
** That said, Syrus's epic rapping... followed by Jaden's not so epic rapping. Even better when you consider that ShadyVox Shadyvox (the voice of Jaden) [[HilariousInHindsight actually makes money writing and recording songs, including rap.]]
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-->'''Jaden''': Aaaah, pen and paper is inconvenient because...?
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Aaaah, Aaaand pen and paper is inconvenient because...?
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-->1. "When I said I wanted a clean deck, I meant a new deck of new cards."
-->2. "Why, why the hell would you clean paper cards with water?"
-->3. "Even if you made points 1 and 2 somehow plausible, why, oh God why, would you clean them in the freaking ocean?"
** And her response?:
-->'''Alexis''': Tee hee, you have a funny voice!
-->2. "Why, why the hell would you clean paper cards with water?"
-->3. "Even if you made points 1 and 2 somehow plausible, why, oh God why, would you clean them in the freaking ocean?"
** And her response?:
-->'''Alexis''': Tee hee, you have a funny voice!
to:
** And her
-->'''Alexis''':
-->'''Alexis''': ...Tee hee, you have a funny voice!
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* This bit:
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* This bit:Jaden demands Jinzo to release Tory:
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-->'''Jaden''': ...only made things worse and it was rumored that Chazz and Bastion had a gay relationship and no-one believed him because...
-->'''Jaden''': ...think about dating and Syrus was convinced that he was pregnant and then made us go to the emergency room where... Wh-Where the heck are we?
-->'''Jaden''': ...think about dating and Syrus was convinced that he was pregnant and then made us go to the emergency room where... Wh-Where the heck are we?
to:
-->...only made things worse and it was rumored that Chazz and Bastion had a gay relationship and no-one believed him
-->'''Jaden''': ...
-->...think about dating and Syrus was convinced that he was pregnant and then made us go to the emergency room where... Wh-Where the heck are we?
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* This:
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* This:Jaden tries to convince Jinzo to take him instead of Tory:
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* This:
-->'''Jaden''': Fine, I end my turn. You big dick.
-->'''Jaden''': Fine, I end my turn. You big dick.
to:
* This:
Jaden gets fed up with Jinzo's yelling about Ectoplasma:
-->'''Jaden''':Fine, Fine. I end my turn. You ''You big dick.''
-->'''Jaden''':
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--> '''Fontaine:''' Alright, this might make your eyes water.
--> '''Crowler:''' [[TemptingFate Oh, come on. I'm a big bo-]] *Gets a NeckSnap from Fontaine, leading to zoom out from the hallway, to outside the academy, to the entire island* ''[[TheScream JEEEE-SUUUUSS]] [[DistantReactionShot CHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIST!]]''
--> '''Jaden:''' Are you feeling any better?
--> '''Crowler, with comically oversized ear:''' No. I've just deafened myself and now my ears are swollen!
--> '''Crowler:''' [[TemptingFate Oh, come on. I'm a big bo-]] *Gets a NeckSnap from Fontaine, leading to zoom out from the hallway, to outside the academy, to the entire island* ''[[TheScream JEEEE-SUUUUSS]] [[DistantReactionShot CHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIST!]]''
--> '''Jaden:''' Are you feeling any better?
--> '''Crowler, with comically oversized ear:''' No. I've just deafened myself and now my ears are swollen!
to:
--> '''Fontaine:''' '''Fontaine''': Alright, this might make your eyes water.
-->'''Crowler:''' '''Crowler''': [[TemptingFate Oh, come on. I'm a big bo-]] *Gets a NeckSnap from Fontaine, leading to zoom out from the hallway, to outside the academy, to the entire island* ''[[TheScream JEEEE-SUUUUSS]] [[DistantReactionShot CHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIST!]]''
-->'''Jaden:''' '''Jaden''': Are you feeling any better?
-->'''Crowler, with '''Crowler''' (With a comically oversized ear:''' ear): No. I've just deafened myself and now my ears are swollen!
-->
-->
-->
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-->'''Duel Giant''': I'll be taking those. You're lucky you cards are all I'm taking... and your wallet.
-->'''Obelisk Student''': [[BigWhat WHAT?]] You can't have my wallet!
-->'''Obelisk Student''': [[BigWhat WHAT?]] You can't have my wallet!
to:
-->'''Duel Giant''': I'll be taking those. You're lucky you your cards are all I'm taking... and your wallet.
-->'''Obelisk Student''': [[BigWhatWHAT?]] WHAT?!]] You can't have my wallet!
-->'''Obelisk Student''': [[BigWhat
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* "When you wake up, you'll be in a strange place. This card will help you." "There is NO scenario in which this card will be useful...wait, did you just say 'wake up'?" *gets knocked out cold with a brick*
to:
* "When Chazz meets a strange figure.
-->'''Figure:''' When you wake up, you'll be in a strange place. This card will helpyou." "There you.
-->''(The figure tosses a card of Ojama Yellow over to Chazz)''
-->'''Chazz:''' There is NO scenario in which this card will be useful...wait, did you just say'wake up'?" *gets ''wake up''?
-->'''Chazz:''' ''(Chazz gets knocked out cold with abrick*brick)''
-->'''Figure:''' When you wake up, you'll be in a strange place. This card will help
-->''(The figure tosses a card of Ojama Yellow over to Chazz)''
-->'''Chazz:''' There is NO scenario in which this card will be useful...wait, did you just say
-->'''Chazz:''' ''(Chazz gets knocked out cold with a
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-->'''Chazz:''' It's okay, I had some sea water!
-->'''Tim:''' [[ViolationOfCommonSense ARE YOU F***ING KIDDING ME!?]]
-->'''Tim:''' [[ViolationOfCommonSense ARE YOU F***ING KIDDING ME!?]]
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-->'''Chazz:''' [[ViolationOfCommonSense It's okay, I had some sea water!
water!]]
-->'''Tim:'''[[ViolationOfCommonSense [[YouHaveGotToBeKiddingMe ARE YOU F***ING KIDDING ME!?]]
-->'''Tim:'''
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-->{{Beat}}
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* "Because that's what friends do, we take advantage of your weakness, and then exploit it to make ourselves feel better. And then, we have the self-confidence to say, "Hey. Syrus. I'm better than you."
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* "Because Jaden's InsaneTrollLogic about being friends.
-->'''Jaden''': Because that's what friends do, we take advantage of your weakness, and then exploit it to make ourselves feel better. And then, we have the self-confidence to say, "Hey. Syrus. I'm better thanyou."you!"
-->'''Jaden''': Because that's what friends do, we take advantage of your weakness, and then exploit it to make ourselves feel better. And then, we have the self-confidence to say, "Hey. Syrus. I'm better than
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-->'''Zane''': No, you were not about to win. Because he had this card.
to:
-->'''Zane''': No, you were not about to win. Because he [Syrus' bully] had this card.
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* Crowler: [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer {Actual 4Kids Dialogue}]] Poor little Syrus. He'd be the weakest link on a plate of sausages. [[LampshadeHanging Wait...what?]]
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* Crowler: Crowler's [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer {Actual Actual 4Kids Dialogue}]] Dialogue]] Moment.
-->'''Crowler''': Poor little Syrus. He'd be the weakest link on a plate of sausages. [[LampshadeHanging Wait...what?]]
-->'''Crowler''': Poor little Syrus. He'd be the weakest link on a plate of sausages. [[LampshadeHanging Wait...what?]]
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* Alexis's [[BuxomBeautyStandard huge buns]].
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* Alexis's [[BuxomBeautyStandard [[VisualPun huge buns]].buns]].
-->'''Jaden''': I bet they taste AWESOME.
-->'''Syrus''': You know I tried one once and they DO?
-->'''Alexis''': ...You guys are talking about the sandwiches, right?
-->'''Jaden''': Yes.
-->'''Syrus''': No... I-I mean...!
-->''({{Beat}})''
-->'''Syrus''': BOOBIES!
* That poor man who somehow had a car on the island that got wrecked by Damian's huge jump out the building window.
-->'''Jaden''': I bet they taste AWESOME.
-->'''Syrus''': You know I tried one once and they DO?
-->'''Alexis''': ...You guys are talking about the sandwiches, right?
-->'''Jaden''': Yes.
-->'''Syrus''': No... I-I mean...!
-->''({{Beat}})''
-->'''Syrus''': BOOBIES!
* That poor man who somehow had a car on the island that got wrecked by Damian's huge jump out the building window.
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-->'''Jaden:''' I- it's like he's trying to tell me something I know it!
to:
-->'''Jaden:''' I- it's I-It's like he's trying to tell me something I know it!
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* "Aw bollocks, me cards are wet."
* Spinning the opponent into submission.
* Spinning the opponent into submission.
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* "Aw Damian practices his draws by plucking cards out of a waterfall.
-->"Aw bollocks, me cards are wet."
*Spinning the Jaden spinning his opponent into submission.submission by endlessly twirling a card in his hand.
-->"Aw bollocks, me cards are wet."
*
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-->'''Jaden''': No! He hasn't LEARNED YET!
* "Who the hell jumps off a thirty foot building on to my car!?"
* "Who the hell jumps off a thirty foot building on to my car!?"
to:
-->'''Jaden''': No! He hasn't LEARNED YET!
* "Who the hell jumps off a thirty foot building on to my car!?"
yet!
* "Who the hell jumps off a thirty foot building on to my car!?"
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-->'''Jaden''': You don't understand. I've tried trading it, I've tried selling it, I've tried yelling at it, I've tried mailing it to Australia. The damn thing is like Droopy, Syrus. It always ''finds me!''
to:
-->'''Jaden''': You don't understand. I've tried trading it, I've tried selling it, I've tried yelling at it, I've tried mailing it to Australia. The damn thing is like Droopy, {{WesternAnimation/Droopy}}, Syrus. It always ''finds me!''
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-->'''Alexis''': Hello.
to:
-->'''Banner:''' Are the nails [in the bat Jaden's holding] really necessary?
-->'''Jaden:''' ...Syrus? Are the nails necessary?
-->'''Syrus:''' Pretty damn crucial, Jaden!
-->''(Jaden's eyes slowly go back to Banner)''
-->'''Jaden:''' Syrus says yes.
-->'''Banner:''' ...Okay, have fun.
-->'''Jaden:''' ...Syrus? Are the nails necessary?
-->'''Syrus:''' Pretty damn crucial, Jaden!
-->''(Jaden's eyes slowly go back to Banner)''
-->'''Jaden:''' Syrus says yes.
-->'''Banner:''' ...Okay, have fun.
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* Blair and the [[ADateWithRosiePalms strange things]] involving Zane's cards.
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* Blair and the [[ADateWithRosiePalms [[ThisIndexTouchesItself strange things]] involving Zane's cards.
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-->'''Chumley:''' Naw, dawg, it all good.
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-->'''Chumley:''' ''(Suddenly with a much deeper voice)'' Naw, dawg, it all good.
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-->''(Queue another giant explosion)''
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-->''([[CurbstompBattle Queue Briar immediately losing the duel and collapsing]])''
to:
-->''([[CurbstompBattle Queue Cue Briar immediately losing the duel and collapsing]])''
* Jaden and the gang talk to Bastion when they find Beauregard speaking to Briar.
-->'''Syrus''': Woah check HIM out! He's big enough to be the duel giant!
-->'''Bastion''': Who, Beauregard? He's no-
-->'''Syrus''': Bigger than a frickin' house!
-->'''Bastion''': ''(Loudly laughs for an uncomfortably long time)''
-->'''Bastion''': ''(Instantly stops laughing)'' But seriously, he's no duelist. I know him. We play ''chess''.
-->'''Syrus''': Woah check HIM out! He's big enough to be the duel giant!
-->'''Bastion''': Who, Beauregard? He's no-
-->'''Syrus''': Bigger than a frickin' house!
-->'''Bastion''': ''(Loudly laughs for an uncomfortably long time)''
-->'''Bastion''': ''(Instantly stops laughing)'' But seriously, he's no duelist. I know him. We play ''chess''.
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** The fact that he freely throws it at the giant's face and [[spoiler:ends up getting it back.]]
* And right before that after Jaden voices his suspicions:
-->'''Bastion''': But seriously, he's no duelist. I know him. We play ''chess''.
* Jaden's rant:
-->'''Jaden''': No! I don't care! I knew it was you guys all along! I even said- I did say it was those guys Syrus.
* And right before that after Jaden voices his suspicions:
-->'''Bastion''': But seriously, he's no duelist. I know him. We play ''chess''.
* Jaden's rant:
-->'''Jaden''': No! I don't care! I knew it was you guys all along! I even said- I did say it was those guys Syrus.
to:
* And right before that
-->'''Bastion''':
-->'''Briar''': ''(Jumps out from behind the bushes, exposing himself as the person behind the Duel Giant)'' Woah woah woah! That's not how this is supposed to work! We're supposed to duel you then TAKE it from you! And Beauregard, take those jackets off you look ridiculous.
-->'''Beauregard/Duel Giant''': But
-->'''Briar''': I
* Jaden's rant:
-->''(Beauregard takes the jackets off)''
-->'''Beauregard''': Okay...
-->'''Jaden''': No! I don't care! I knew it was you guys all along! I even
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-->'''Bryan''': That's impossible!
-->'''Boregarde''': How did he know?!
-->'''Bryan''': I said take them (the jackets) off dammit!
-->'''Jaden''': Everybody knew! You would have to be a friggin' moron to not guess it were you two! Seriously! Why does this crap always happen here?! Yesterday it was tennis! Today it's a duel giant! Tomorrow it's Tarzan! This place is crazy! I quit.
-->'''Boregarde''': How did he know?!
-->'''Bryan''': I said take them (the jackets) off dammit!
-->'''Jaden''': Everybody knew! You would have to be a friggin' moron to not guess it were you two! Seriously! Why does this crap always happen here?! Yesterday it was tennis! Today it's a duel giant! Tomorrow it's Tarzan! This place is crazy! I quit.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Everybody knew! You would have to be a friggin' moron to not guess it were you two! Seriously! Why does this crap always happen here?! Yesterday it was tennis! Today it's a duel giant! Tomorrow it's Tarzan! This place is
* And then Briar somehow confuses Jaden quitting as a sign that they should quit their evil ways, to Jaden's complete bewilderment. Briar then says they will return every card they stole, ''starting with the one Jaden threw at them.''
-->'''Jaden''': '''[[RapidFireNo NO NO NO NO-]]'''
--> ''(Jaden gets smacked in the face with Winged Kuriboh's card)''
-->'''Jaden''': ...*Sigh* ''Thanks.''
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* This exchange:
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* The episode immediately starts [[StuffBlowingUp with an explosion caused from a duel.]]
-->'''Obelisk Student''': AHHHHH!! ''(Blown away by the explosion)''
-->'''Duel Giant''': I'll be taking those. You're lucky you cards are all I'm taking... and your wallet.
-->'''Obelisk Student''': [[BigWhat WHAT?]] You can't have my wallet!
-->'''Duel Giant''': GIMME YOUR YOUR WALLET!
-->''(Queue another giant explosion)''
-->'''Obelisk Student''': OKAY TAKE THE WALLET!!
* Thisexchange:exchange after Jaden approaches some Blue students:
-->'''Obelisk Student''': AHHHHH!! ''(Blown away by the explosion)''
-->'''Duel Giant''': I'll be taking those. You're lucky you cards are all I'm taking... and your wallet.
-->'''Obelisk Student''': [[BigWhat WHAT?]] You can't have my wallet!
-->'''Duel Giant''': GIMME YOUR YOUR WALLET!
-->''(Queue another giant explosion)''
-->'''Obelisk Student''': OKAY TAKE THE WALLET!!
* This
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-->'''Jaden''': ''What''? Wanna say that again?! You wanna repeat that?! You [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing prick?! ''Huh''?! You wanna [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing start something?! C'mon, let's go, three on three, Red versus Blue, no camp kills, we'll ''[[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] you up''!
-->'''Ted''': J-just calm down, guys -
-->'''Ted''': J-just calm down, guys -
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-->''(The Obelisk Blue students all laugh together)''
-->'''Jaden''':''What''? ''What''?! Wanna say that again?! You wanna repeat that?! You [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing prick?! ''Huh''?! You wanna [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing start something?! C'mon, let's go, three on three, Red versus Blue, no camp kills, we'll ''[[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] you up''!
-->'''Ted''': J-just calm down,guys - guy-
-->'''Jaden''':
-->'''Ted''': J-just calm down,
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-->'''Jaden''': ''Me too''.
-->'''Blues''': ''(run)''
-->'''Jaden''': Yeah, that's right! You better [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing walk away. You blue bastards! Huh! ''Huh?!'' ''({{Beat}})'' I wonder what those blue bastards were talking about.
-->'''Blues''': ''(run)''
-->'''Jaden''': Yeah, that's right! You better [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing walk away. You blue bastards! Huh! ''Huh?!'' ''({{Beat}})'' I wonder what those blue bastards were talking about.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': ''Me too''.
-->'''Blues''': ''(run)''
''Mee toooo''...
-->''([[ScrewThisImOuttaHere The Obelisk boys run like hell out of there]])''
-->'''Jaden''': Yeah, that's right! You better [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing walk away. You blue bastards! Huh!''Huh?!'' ''HUH?!'' ''({{Beat}})'' I wonder what those blue bastards were talking about.
-->'''Blues''': ''(run)''
-->''([[ScrewThisImOuttaHere The Obelisk boys run like hell out of there]])''
-->'''Jaden''': Yeah, that's right! You better [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing walk away. You blue bastards! Huh!
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-->'''Jaden''': ''(still whispering)'' I don't like you,
to:
-->'''Jaden''': ''(still whispering)'' I don't like you,you.
* Jaden tries to give Briar advice during his duel against a Blue student.
-->'''Jaden''' (in the distance): Hey!
-->'''Jaden''' (in the distance): ...Hey! Don't lose.
-->'''Syrus''' (in the distance): That's your advice??
-->'''Jaden''' (in the distance): Oh come on, that's premium advice!
-->''([[CurbstompBattle Queue Briar immediately losing the duel and collapsing]])''
-->'''Jaden''': ...Huh.
* Trying to get Beauregard to admit to being the duel giant:
-->'''Jaden''': DUEL! YOU! ME! NOW! TRIANGLES!
* Jaden tries to give Briar advice during his duel against a Blue student.
-->'''Jaden''' (in the distance): Hey!
-->'''Jaden''' (in the distance): ...Hey! Don't lose.
-->'''Syrus''' (in the distance): That's your advice??
-->'''Jaden''' (in the distance): Oh come on, that's premium advice!
-->''([[CurbstompBattle Queue Briar immediately losing the duel and collapsing]])''
-->'''Jaden''': ...Huh.
* Trying to get Beauregard to admit to being the duel giant:
-->'''Jaden''': DUEL! YOU! ME! NOW! TRIANGLES!
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-->'''Jaden''': Dude, if you randomly appear on me one more time, I'm going to hurt you. I'll go first, draw!
-->'''Kuriboh''': *Kuriiiii*
-->'''Kuriboh''': *Kuriiiii*
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Dude, Dude... if you randomly appear on me one more time, I'm time... ''I'm going to hurt you. you.''
-->'''Jaden''': I'll go first, draw!
-->'''Kuriboh''':*Kuriiiii*''(Cooes as his card is the first to get drawn)''
-->'''Jaden''': I'll go first, draw!
-->'''Kuriboh''':
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* Trying to get Beauregard to admit to being the duel giant:
-->'''Jaden''': DUEL! YOU! ME! NOW! TRIANGLES!
-->'''Jaden''': DUEL! YOU! ME! NOW! TRIANGLES!
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Changed line(s) 352 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Tori''': ''[[OverlyLongGag (Crashes through door)]]'' Okay, I think I'm okohmygod! ''(smash)'' Why would you have two doors there?!
to:
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-->'''Dog''': ''(growls)''
-->'''Jaden''': [[BrickJoke OH MY GOD NOT AGAIN!]]
-->'''Jaden''': [[BrickJoke OH MY GOD NOT AGAIN!]]
to:
-->'''Dog''': ''(growls)''
''(Growls)''
-->'''Jaden''': [[BrickJoke OH MY GOD NOTAGAIN!]]AGAAAAIN!]]
-->'''Jaden''': [[BrickJoke OH MY GOD NOT
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* Jinzo accidentally staying on the boat.
** "Martini, sir?" "Oh, yes please."
* The forest bit, where Jaden keeps going off screen.
** "Martini, sir?" "Oh, yes please."
* The forest bit, where Jaden keeps going off screen.
to:
* Jinzo accidentally staying on the boat.
** "Martini, sir?" "Oh,boat while stalking Tori to prevent him from leaving the island.
-->'''Jinzo''': Wait NO I'm supposed get off, [[BigNo NOOOOOO!]]
-->'''Serving Lady''': Martini, sir?
-->'''Jinzo''': Oh, yesplease."
please!
* The forest bit, where Jaden keeps going offscreen.screen and wrapping around to the other side while telling a hilariously over the top NoodleIncident.
** "Martini, sir?" "Oh,
-->'''Jinzo''': Wait NO I'm supposed get off, [[BigNo NOOOOOO!]]
-->'''Serving Lady''': Martini, sir?
-->'''Jinzo''': Oh, yes
* The forest bit, where Jaden keeps going off
Changed line(s) 369,370 (click to see context) from:
-->'''Jaden''': Oh, you watch me! I'll get this guy faster that that time I was invited to Crowler's birthday party and everybody got out the... (Goes off screen) ...only made things worse and it was rumored that Chazz and Bastion had a gay relationship and no-one believed him because... (Goes off screen) ...think about dating and Syrus was convinced that he was pregnant and then made us go to the emergency room where... Wh-Where the heck are we?
* Jaden thinking Tori is dead.
* Jaden thinking Tori is dead.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Oh, you watch me! I'll get this guy faster that that time I was invited to Crowler's birthday party and everybody got out the... (Goes off screen) ...
-->'''Jaden''': ...only made things worse and it was rumored that Chazz and Bastion had a gay relationship and no-one believed himbecause... (Goes off screen) ...because...
-->'''Jaden''': ...think about dating and Syrus was convinced that he was pregnant and then made us go to the emergency room where... Wh-Where the heck are we?
* Jaden thinkingTori Tory is dead.
-->'''Jaden''': ...only made things worse and it was rumored that Chazz and Bastion had a gay relationship and no-one believed him
-->'''Jaden''': ...think about dating and Syrus was convinced that he was pregnant and then made us go to the emergency room where... Wh-Where the heck are we?
* Jaden thinking
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-->'''Jaden''': Don't. Be. Silly. Of scourse I don't think Chumley is gay!
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Don't. Be. Silly. Of scourse Don't be silly, of course I don't think Chumley is gay!gay!
-->'''Chumley''': ''Buh???''
-->'''Chumley''': ''Buh???''
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-->'''Jinzo''': Uhhh, okay. (Picks up chainsaw and revs it)
-->'''Jaden''': Actually, let's have a duel.
-->'''Jinzo''': Awww.
-->'''Syrus''': Awww. Kick his ass Jinzo!
-->'''Jaden''': Actually, let's have a duel.
-->'''Jinzo''': Awww.
-->'''Syrus''': Awww. Kick his ass Jinzo!
to:
-->'''Jinzo''': Uhhh, okay. (Picks ''(Casually picks up chainsaw and revs it)
it up)''
-->'''Jaden''':Actually, A-Actually, let's have a duel.
-->'''Jinzo''':Awww.
Awww...
-->'''Syrus''':Awww.Awww... Kick his ass Jinzo!
-->'''Jaden''':
-->'''Jinzo''':
-->'''Syrus''':
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* ECTOPLASMA!
to:
* ECTOPLASMA![[RunningGag ECTOPLASMA!]]
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-->'''Jinzo''': Funny, that's your momma's nickname for me!
-->'''Syrus''': Oh no he di'nt!
* "Electricity makes me visible! ...somehow."
-->'''Syrus''': Oh no he di'nt!
* "Electricity makes me visible! ...somehow."
to:
-->'''Jinzo''': Funny, that's [[YourMom your momma's nickname for me!
me!]]
-->'''Jaden''': ''[[FlatWhat What.]]''
-->'''Syrus''':Oh Ohhhh no he di'nt!
* "Electricity makes me visible! ...somehow."somehow!"
-->'''Jaden''': ''[[FlatWhat What.]]''
-->'''Syrus''':
* "Electricity makes me visible! ...
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* Harrington meets Alexis:
--> "She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen! I can feel my heart swelling and getting bigger! And by my heart, I mean my ''penis''..."
* Crowler in the nurse's office.
--> "She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen! I can feel my heart swelling and getting bigger! And by my heart, I mean my ''penis''..."
* Crowler in the nurse's office.
to:
* Harrington meets Alexis:
--> "She'sAlexis for the first time:
-->'''Harrington''': She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen! I can feel my heart swelling and getting bigger! And by my heart, I mean my ''(suddenly wheezing)'' ''penis''..."
* Crowler gets hit in the face with a ball... [[RunningGag again.]]
-->'''Crowler''': [[TemptingFate And that was the last time I ever got hit with a ball!]]
-->''(A tennis ball that Harrington blocked goes careening towards Crowler and beans him hard)''
-->'''Crowler''': OH GOD NOT AGAIN!
* Later in the nurse's office.
--> "She's
-->'''Harrington''': She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen! I can feel my heart swelling and getting bigger! And by my heart, I mean my ''(suddenly wheezing)'' ''penis''..."
* Crowler gets hit in the face with a ball... [[RunningGag again.]]
-->'''Crowler''': [[TemptingFate And that was the last time I ever got hit with a ball!]]
-->''(A tennis ball that Harrington blocked goes careening towards Crowler and beans him hard)''
-->'''Crowler''': OH GOD NOT AGAIN!
* Later in the nurse's office.
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--> '''Crowler:''' [[TemptingFate Oh, come on. I'm a big bo-]] *Gets a NeckSnap from Fontaine, leading to zoom out from the hallway, to outside the academy, to the entire island* ''[[TheScream JEEEESUUUUSS]] [[DistantReactionShot CHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIST!]]''
to:
--> '''Crowler:''' [[TemptingFate Oh, come on. I'm a big bo-]] *Gets a NeckSnap from Fontaine, leading to zoom out from the hallway, to outside the academy, to the entire island* ''[[TheScream JEEEESUUUUSS]] JEEEE-SUUUUSS]] [[DistantReactionShot CHRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIST!]]''
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--> '''Jaden''': What does that- ''(smack)'' Owwwwww...
to:
--> '''Jaden''': What does that- ''(smack)'' Owwwwww...!
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Changed line(s) 295 (click to see context) from:
* After the duel
to:
* After the duelduel...
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-->'''Crowler''': Hahah, [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! Ahahahaha!
to:
-->'''Crowler''': Hahah, [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! Ahahahaha!
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* Actual 4kids dialogue:
-->'''Jaden''': Hey, he's got a duel disk! Either that or a really funny-looking banana.
-->'''Jaden''': Hey, he's got a duel disk! Either that or a really funny-looking banana.
to:
* [[NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer Actual 4kids dialogue:
dialogue]] on Jaden's reaction to seeing Wheeler the dueling monkey:
-->'''Jaden''': Hey,he's he's got a duel disk! Either that or a really funny-looking banana.
-->'''Jaden''': Hey,
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* "That's the Magic of TV Convenience!"
* When Jaden draws a card that gives him the upper hand in the duel.
--> '''Jaden''': This is exactly the card I need to spank that monkey! ...Heheheheh.
*
-->'''Doc''': Oh please, all the monkey did was make a mistake,
* When Jaden draws a card that gives him the upper hand in the duel.
--> '''Jaden''': This is exactly the card I need to spank that monkey! ...Heheheheh.
*
-->'''Doc''': Oh please, all the monkey did was make a mistake,
to:
* "That's At the Magic start of TV Convenience!"
the duel Jaden attempts to predict what kind of deck Wheeler will use, making some actually reasonable guesses (Gladiator Beasts, Lightsworn, etc.), until it's abruptly revealed that [[ShapedLikeItself the monkey's deck is just full of monkey themed monsters.]]
-->'''Jaden''': Fffffff...
* When Jadendraws a card that gives him gets the upper hand in the duel.
--> '''Jaden''': This is exactly the card I need to spank that monkey! ...Heheheheh.
*
duel.
-->'''Doc''': Oh please, all the monkey did was make amistake,mistake.
-->'''Jaden''': Fffffff...
* When Jaden
--> '''Jaden''': This is exactly the card I need to spank that monkey! ...Heheheheh.
*
-->'''Doc''': Oh please, all the monkey did was make a
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-->'''Jaden''': ''(off screen)'' Oh go to Hell Syrus!!
to:
-->'''Jaden''': ''(off screen)'' ''(Off-screen)'' Oh go to Hell Syrus!!
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* Jaden's lines during the duel in general hit pretty well.
-->'''Jaden''': Talk about bestiality! Heheheh.
-->'''Jaden''': Now give Back Jasmine before I assert my dominance! (''Beat'') [[WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy Giggity.]]
* At the start of the duel Jaden tries to guess what kind of deck Wheeler would be using, guessing decks that would be fun to duel with. Then Wheeler throws down Berserker Gorilla.
* Jaden looking all mad while the doc walk past him twice:
-->'''Doc 1''': Don't try to stop us. We are scientists, we have the ability to make time paradoxes.
-->'''Doc 2''': I agree. That's a very good argument, I think you should pay attention to what he says.
-->'''Jaden''': What the hell?
-->'''Jaden''': Talk about bestiality! Heheheh.
-->'''Jaden''': Now give Back Jasmine before I assert my dominance! (''Beat'') [[WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy Giggity.]]
* At the start of the duel Jaden tries to guess what kind of deck Wheeler would be using, guessing decks that would be fun to duel with. Then Wheeler throws down Berserker Gorilla.
* Jaden looking all mad while the doc walk past him twice:
-->'''Doc 1''': Don't try to stop us. We are scientists, we have the ability to make time paradoxes.
-->'''Doc 2''': I agree. That's a very good argument, I think you should pay attention to what he says.
-->'''Jaden''': What the hell?
to:
* Jaden's lines during not so subtle innuendos.
-->'''Jaden''': This is exactly theduel in general hit pretty well.
card I need to spank that monkey! ...Heheheheh.
-->''(When the trap card DNA Surgery transforms all monsters into Beast Types)''
-->'''Jaden''': Talk aboutbestiality! bestiality! ...Heheheh.
-->''(After the duel)''
-->'''Jaden''': Now give Back Jasmine before I assertmy dominance! (''Beat'') ''my'' dominance! ...[[WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy Giggity.]]
* At the start of the duel Jaden tries to guess what kind of deck Wheeler would be using, guessing decks that would be fun to duel with. Then Wheeler throws down Berserker Gorilla.
* Jaden looking all mad while the doc walk walks past him twice:
-->'''Doc 1''':him.
-->'''Doctor''': Don't try to stop us. We are scientists, we have the ability to make time paradoxes.
-->'''Doc 2''': -->''(Somehow an exact copy of the doctor is seen walking in tandem behind the first one)''
-->'''Doctor Clone''': I agree. That's a very good argument, I think you should pay attention to what he says.
-->'''Jaden''': -->'''Jaden''': ...What the hell?
-->'''Jaden''': This is exactly the
-->''(When the trap card DNA Surgery transforms all monsters into Beast Types)''
-->'''Jaden''': Talk about
-->''(After the duel)''
-->'''Jaden''': Now give Back Jasmine before I assert
-->'''Doc 1''':
-->'''Doctor''': Don't try to stop us. We are scientists, we have the ability to make time paradoxes.
-->'''Doctor Clone''': I agree. That's a very good argument, I think you should pay attention to what he says.
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-->''(cocks gun)''
to:
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-->'''Jaden''': Gee, Professor, you wanna reveal the whole freakin' season to us as well?! ''(boom)'' Aaaah ahaha ow, yeah I deserved that.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Gee, Professor, [[SarcasmMode you wanna reveal the whole freakin' season to us as well?! ''(boom)'' Aaaah ahaha ow, yeah well??]]
-->''(Shotgun firing)''
-->'''Jaden''': AAHHH! AHAH! OW. Yeah, I deserved that.
-->''(Shotgun firing)''
-->'''Jaden''': AAHHH! AHAH! OW. Yeah, I deserved that.
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-->'''Tori''': ''[[OverlyLongGag (crashes through door)]]''' Okay, I think I'm okohmygod! ''(smash)'' Why would you have two doors there?!
to:
-->'''Tori''': ''[[OverlyLongGag (crashes (Crashes through door)]]''' door)]]'' Okay, I think I'm okohmygod! ''(smash)'' Why would you have two doors there?!
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* After Jaden gets too close...
-->'''Jaden''': Ow my pancreas!
-->'''Syrus''': Take that you friggin' looney!
-->'''Jaden''': Ow my pancreas!
-->'''Syrus''': Take that you friggin' looney!
* And happens once more after Chumley loses the duel in explosive fashion...
-->'''Jaden''': ''(Once again, gets up in Syrus' face)'' [[LampshadeHanging Why do all duels end with an explosion, Syrus??]]
-->'''Syrus''': Why do ''you'' insist on getting so close to me?!
-->''(Syrus punches Jaden again)''
-->'''Jaden''': Ow, my pancreas!
-->'''Syrus''': TAKE THAT YOU FRIGGIN' LOONEY!
-->'''Jaden''': ''(Once again, gets up in Syrus' face)'' [[LampshadeHanging Why do all duels end with an explosion, Syrus??]]
-->'''Syrus''': Why do ''you'' insist on getting so close to me?!
-->''(Syrus punches Jaden again)''
-->'''Jaden''': Ow, my pancreas!
-->'''Syrus''': TAKE THAT YOU FRIGGIN' LOONEY!
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* We like to refer to this as the '[[ButtMonkey Jaden Ownage]]' episode. Remember. Never play 'Nuts On The Table'. Professor Banner required 17 stitches. Syrus had filed for a restraining order. His court case is in October.
to:
* We "We like to refer to this as the '[[ButtMonkey Jaden Ownage]]' episode. Remember. Never play 'Nuts On The Table'. Professor Banner required 17 stitches. Syrus had filed for a restraining order. His court case is in October. \n"
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* Syrus's epic rapping... and Jaden's not so epic rapping. Even better when you consider that Shadyvox actually makes his money with writing and recording songs, including rap. Just google Stronger by Shadyvox, it makes this HilariousInHindsight.
to:
* [[RageBreakingPoint Syrus getting so fed up with the Paradox Brothers' cheesy rhymes]] that he decides to turn the duel into a rap battle.
** That said, Syrus's epic rapping...and followed by Jaden's not so epic rapping. Even better when you consider that Shadyvox ShadyVox (the voice of Jaden) [[HilariousInHindsight actually makes his money with writing and recording songs, including rap. Just google Stronger by Shadyvox, it makes this HilariousInHindsight.rap.]]
** That said, Syrus's epic rapping...
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* "Okay! I get it! You have a boner for math!"
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-->'''Chazz''': Who said that? Who the [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] said that?
-->'''Guy''': Duhhh it was me. ''(phage yellow arrow pings in)''
-->'''Guy''': Duhhh it was me. ''(phage yellow arrow pings in)''
to:
-->'''Chazz''': Who said that? Who the [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] said that?
that?!
-->'''Guy''': Duhhh it wasme. ''(phage me... ''(A yellow arrow pings in)''in on a student way in the background of the shot)''
-->'''Guy''': Duhhh it was
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-->'''Jaden''': ''(genuinely shocked)'' What?!
-->'''Syrus''': Oh no, he di'nt!
* "Duuuuude, you have so lost your security deposit."
* After Syrus knocks Jaden off his paint platform:
-->'''Syrus''': Oh no, he di'nt!
* "Duuuuude, you have so lost your security deposit."
* After Syrus knocks Jaden off his paint platform:
to:
-->'''Jaden''': ''(genuinely ''(Genuinely shocked)'' What?!
-->'''Syrus''':Oh no, Ohhhh no he di'nt!
*"Duuuuude, Bastion asks Jaden and Syrus to help him repaint his dorm room... because it's filled to the brim with equations on the walls and ceiling.
-->'''Jaden''': Duuuuude, you have so lost your securitydeposit."
deposit.
* After Syrus knocks Jaden off his paintplatform:platform, which causes paint to spill onto his jacket.
-->'''Syrus''':
*
-->'''Jaden''': Duuuuude, you have so lost your security
* After Syrus knocks Jaden off his paint
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-->'''Bastion''': Limey?! How dare you! *punches Jaden*
-->'''Jaden''': Ah! Ok. Mild racism. Got it.
-->'''Jaden''': Ah! Ok. Mild racism. Got it.
to:
-->'''Bastion''': Limey?! How dare you! *punches Jaden*
you!
-->''(Bastion punches Jaden)''
-->'''Jaden''':Ah! Agh..! Ok. Mild racism. Got it.
-->''(Bastion punches Jaden)''
-->'''Jaden''':
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-->'''Alexis''': Tee hee you have a funny voice!
-->'''Bastion''': That's it, I can't take it any more!(reveals dynamite strapped to his chest and explodes.)
-->'''Bastion''': That's it, I can't take it any more!(reveals dynamite strapped to his chest and explodes.)
to:
-->'''Alexis''': Tee hee hee, you have a funny voice!
-->'''Bastion''':That's it, '''[[SuddenlyShouting AHHH, I can't take it any more!(reveals CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!]]'''
-->''(Bastion reveals what looks to be dynamite strapped to hischest and chest, [[StuffBlowingUp which promptly explodes.)]])''
-->'''Bastion''':
-->''(Bastion reveals what looks to be dynamite strapped to his
Deleted line(s) 282 (click to see context) :
* "Water water everywhere [[ThisIsForEmphasisBitch bitch]]!
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-->'''Crowler''': [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! Ahahahaha!
to:
-->'''Crowler''': Hahah, [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! Ahahahaha!
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-->'''Crowler''': Yeah? Well, It sucks to be you!
to:
-->'''Crowler''': Yeah? Well, It sucks to be you!
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* Professor Banner asks if Jaden and Syrus understand why they should not go to the abandoned dorm... after thoroughly spooking the crap out of them with his story... [[BringMyBrownPants literally.]]
-->'''Jaden''': ''(Meekly)'' ...Yes.
-->'''Jaden''': ''(Meekly)'' ...Yes.
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--> '''Jaden''': [[BerserkButton WHERE THE]] [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] [[BerserkButton ARE MY CHEETOS?!]]
to:
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* After an unnecessarily long story about dissecting a worm:
--> {{Beat}}
-->'''Crowler''': Why the hell did we even accept you?
--> {{Beat}}
-->'''Crowler''': Why the hell did we even accept you?
to:
* After an unnecessarily long story about Syrus dissecting a worm:
--> {{Beat}}
-->'''Crowler''':-->{{Beat}}
-->'''Crowler''': ...Why the hell did we even accept you?
-->'''Crowler''':
-->'''Crowler''': ...Why the hell did we even accept you?
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* Jaden: [[HoYay What if I kiss you?]]
to:
* Jaden: Jaden is thoroughly shocked when Chumley finally speaks for the first time.
-->'''Jaden''': WHAT THE FU-
-->''[[StuffBlowingUp (Stock Explosion Clip)]]''
-->'''Jaden''': ''(Getting very close to Syrus' face)'' Syrus did you see that?! Chumley talked! Didja? Didja? Didja?
-->'''Syrus''': Uh... [[GratuitousJapanese hai.]]
-->'''Jaden''': Is it uncomfortable when I'm this close to you?
-->'''Syrus''': Uh, Jaden? Get the hell away from me.
-->'''Jaden''': [[HoYay What if I kissyou?]] you?]]
-->''(Syrus punches Jaden)''
-->'''Jaden''': WHAT THE FU-
-->''[[StuffBlowingUp (Stock Explosion Clip)]]''
-->'''Jaden''': ''(Getting very close to Syrus' face)'' Syrus did you see that?! Chumley talked! Didja? Didja? Didja?
-->'''Syrus''': Uh... [[GratuitousJapanese hai.]]
-->'''Jaden''': Is it uncomfortable when I'm this close to you?
-->'''Syrus''': Uh, Jaden? Get the hell away from me.
-->'''Jaden''': [[HoYay What if I kiss
-->''(Syrus punches Jaden)''
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Changed line(s) 12,13 (click to see context) from:
-->''gun cocks''
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-->'''Captain (over pa system)''': This is your captain. If you look to your left you'll see your home for the next four years, filled with shadow riders, a white dorm, alternate universes and the main character turning inexplicably evil.
-->'''Syrus''': Did that guy just ruin 4 whole seasons?
-->'''Syrus''': Did that guy just ruin 4 whole seasons?
to:
-->'''Captain (over pa PA system)''': This is your captain. If you look to your left you'll see your home for the next four years, filled with shadow riders, a white dorm, alternate universes and the main character turning inexplicably evil.
-->'''Syrus''': -->'''Guy''': Did that guy just ruin 4 whole seasons?
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-->'''Guy''': Ruined four what now?
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Ruined four what now?
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-->'''BGM''': Absolutely Flawless...
to:
-->'''BGM''': Absolutely Flawless..."Absolutely Flawless"
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-->'''BGM''': Absolutely-
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-->'''BGM''': Absolutely-"Absolutely-"
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-->'''Others''': Elite-sounding laughter
to:
-->'''Others''': Elite-sounding laughter''(Haughty laughter and applause)''
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-->'''Others''': "Ahhh..." "That sucks." "Did someone take my beans?"
* '''Computer''': Choosing battle music. (Barbie Girl plays and then stops) I apologize, that isn't my music. I don't know how it got there. My sister came over on the weekend and uploaded her songs into my database. Sincere apologies. I swear to God, I don't listen to that stuff. I like Foo Fighters. They're cool. Choosing new battle music.
* '''Computer''': Choosing battle music. (Barbie Girl plays and then stops) I apologize, that isn't my music. I don't know how it got there. My sister came over on the weekend and uploaded her songs into my database. Sincere apologies. I swear to God, I don't listen to that stuff. I like Foo Fighters. They're cool. Choosing new battle music.
to:
-->'''Others''': "Ahhh..." "That sucks." "Did "...Did someone take my beans?"
*'''Computer''': Wrong battle music.
-->'''Computer''': Choosing battlemusic. (Barbie music.
-->''(Barbie Girl plays and thenstops) stops)''
-->'''Computer''': I apologize, that isn't my music. I don't know how it got there. My sister came over on the weekend and uploaded her songs into my database. Sincere apologies. I swear to God, I don't listen to that stuff. I like Foo Fighters. They're cool. Choosing new battle music.
*
-->'''Computer''': Choosing battle
-->''(Barbie Girl plays and then
-->'''Computer''': I apologize, that isn't my music. I don't know how it got there. My sister came over on the weekend and uploaded her songs into my database. Sincere apologies. I swear to God, I don't listen to that stuff. I like Foo Fighters. They're cool. Choosing new battle music.
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** Which is followed up by his dad's appearance: "Has anyone seen my son around here? Whiny little putz."
to:
-->"Has anyone seen my son around here? Whiny little putz."
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--->'''Alexis:''' Well excuse me for being open.
to:
--->'''Alexis:''' Well excuse me for being open.open!
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* Narrator: And so after a ridiculously short duel the Alexis and Syrus shipping began.
to:
* Narrator: And The Narrator at the end.
--> "And so after a ridiculously short duel the Alexis and Syrus shippingbegan.
began."
--> "And so after a ridiculously short duel the Alexis and Syrus shipping
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* "[[CaptainObvious Syrus]], we can play state the obvious later..."
* Shortly, after getting the hell out of there...
* Shortly, after getting the hell out of there...
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-->'''Syrus''': You sound like my mother!
to:
-->'''Syrus''': You sound like my mother!mother...
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* Jaden's stunned reaction to Syrus traumatizing childhood
* After their duel:
* After their duel:
to:
* Syrus's flashback with his older brother Zane.
-->'''Zane''': No, you were not about to win. Because he had this card.
-->''(Zane holds up the Japanese version of Spellbinding Circle)''
-->'''Syrus''': Oh my god! A Japanese Spellbinding Circle!
-->'''Zane''': That's right, he would have made up unbelievable amounts of crap about its effect and you would have no way of knowing if any of it was true.
* Jaden's stunned reactionto Syrus traumatizing childhood
after the fact.
* Aftertheir Jaden [[CurbstompBattle thoroughly beats Syrus]] in a practice duel:
-->'''Zane''': No, you were not about to win. Because he had this card.
-->''(Zane holds up the Japanese version of Spellbinding Circle)''
-->'''Syrus''': Oh my god! A Japanese Spellbinding Circle!
-->'''Zane''': That's right, he would have made up unbelievable amounts of crap about its effect and you would have no way of knowing if any of it was true.
* Jaden's stunned reaction
* After
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--> '''Jaden''': Man I hate these submission forms. Hmm..."reasons I want to duel Zane..." He's a Douche...and I bet he smells bad too.
to:
--> '''Jaden''': Man I hate these submission forms. Hmm..."reasons I want to duel Zane..." He's a Douche...douche... and I bet he smells bad too.
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* whenever Zane is seen brooding by the pier:
to:
* whenever Whenever Zane is seen brooding by the pier:
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* "Don't you even ''dare'' try to run away from me Syrus, you can't win. I've been playing [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]] all day!" ''(video game sound as he jumps on the "perfect raft")'' "Holy crap, this raft sucks!"
to:
* "Don't Jaden catches up with Syrus, who is on a makeshift raft to run away from the academy.
-->'''Jaden''': Don't you even ''dare'' try to run away from me Syrus, you can't win. I've been playing [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]] allday!" ''(video game day!"
-->''(Sonic jumping sound plays as he jumpson onto the "perfect raft")'' "Holy raft, which quickly breaks apart)''
-->'''Jaden''': Holy crap, this raftsucks!"sucks!
-->'''Jaden''': Don't you even ''dare'' try to run away from me Syrus, you can't win. I've been playing [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog Sonic]] all
-->''(Sonic jumping sound plays as he jumps
-->'''Jaden''': Holy crap, this raft
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--> '''Sparkman''': 'Yer talkin' shit!
to:
--> '''Sparkman''': [[TemptingFate 'Yer talkin' shit!shit.]]
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--> '''Burstinatrix''': Two!
to:
--> '''Burstinatrix''': Two!Two...
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-->'''Jaden:''' {{Beat}}
to:
-->'''Jaden:''' {{Beat}} ({{Beat}})
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-->'''Jaden''': (mockingly) "Shut up Jaden." That's Dimitri, that's what he sounds like.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': (mockingly) "Shut up Jaden." Jaden!" That's Dimitri, that's what he sounds like.
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-->'''Jaden''': "Diminitri would never blah blah blah."
to:
-->'''Jaden''': "Diminitri "Dimitri would never blah blah blah."
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-->'''Jaden''': My name's Dimitri and I suck balls.
-->'''Dimitri''': *Breaks out of his Yugi impersonation* I don't even sound anything like that!
-->'''Dimitri''': *Breaks out of his Yugi impersonation* I don't even sound anything like that!
to:
-->'''Jaden''': My "My name's Dimitri and I suck balls.
balls!"
-->'''Dimitri''': *Breaks out of his Yugi impersonation* I don't even sound anything likethat!that!!
-->'''Dimitri''': *Breaks out of his Yugi impersonation* I don't even sound anything like
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-->'''Dimitri:''' *copying Jaden* Yo what's up dog?
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, Jesus Christ...
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, Jesus Christ...
to:
-->'''Dimitri:''' *copying *Copying Jaden* Yo what's Yo! What's up dog?
-->'''Jaden:''' [[HereWeGoAgain Oh, Jesus Christ...]]
-->'''Jaden:''' [[HereWeGoAgain Oh, Jesus Christ...]]
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-->'''Jaden:''' I DON'T EVEN SOUND ANYTHING LIKE THAT!
to:
-->'''Jaden:''' [[SuddenlyShouting I DON'T EVEN SOUND ANYTHING LIKE THAT!THAT!]]
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-->'''Jaden:''' {{Beat}} {{Gilligan Cut}} Well, we got Yugi's deck back and Dimitri's in the hospital! Everything turned out great!
to:
-->'''Jaden:''' {{Beat}} {{Gilligan Cut}} {{Beat}}
-->(GilliganCut to the Exhibition Room)
-->'''Jaden:''' Well, we got Yugi's deck back and Dimitri's in the hospital! Everything turned out great!
-->(GilliganCut to the Exhibition Room)
-->'''Jaden:''' Well, we got Yugi's deck back and Dimitri's in the hospital! Everything turned out great!
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-->'''Jaden:''' {{Beat}} Fu-
to:
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-->'''Guy''': Duh, you're not the best!
to:
-->'''Guy''': Duh, Duhhh... you're not the best!
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-->'''Guy''': Duh it was me. ''(phage yellow arrow pings in)''
to:
-->'''Guy''': Duh Duhhh it was me. ''(phage yellow arrow pings in)''
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-->'''Jaden''': ''(genuinely shocked)''' What?!
to:
-->'''Jaden''': ''(genuinely shocked)''' shocked)'' What?!
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-->'''Syrus:''' Me, Syrus!
to:
-->'''Syrus:''' Me, Syrus!ME! SYRUS!
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-->'''Syrus:''' Frieeeeend-uh!
to:
-->'''Syrus:''' Frieeeeend-uh!FUHRIEEEEND-UH!
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-->'''Bastion''': That's because we never TALK!
to:
-->'''Bastion''': That's because we never TALK![[SuddenlyShouting THAT'S BECAUSE WE NEVER TALK!]]
* There's also this exchange:
-->'''Dimitri:''' Would Dimitri summon the almighty Dark Magician of Chaos?
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, you mean that banned ca- the card that's banned? Dark Magician of Chaos? Yeah, the one that Yugi ''wouldn't'' summon cause he knows it's banned? Yeah, Dimitri ''would'' summon that card, because Dimitri's a [[SoundEffectBleep f*ckin']] idiot!
-->'''Dimitri:''' ''{{beat}}'' ...Well, would Dimitri summon Kuriboh in attack mode?
-->'''Jaden:''' Yeah he would, cause Dimitri's a [[SoundEffectBleep f*ckin']] idiot!
-->'''Dimitri:''' Would Dimitri summon the almighty Dark Magician of Chaos?
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, you mean that banned ca- the card that's banned? Dark Magician of Chaos? Yeah, the one that Yugi ''wouldn't'' summon cause he knows it's banned? Yeah, Dimitri ''would'' summon that card, because Dimitri's a [[SoundEffectBleep f*ckin']] idiot!
-->'''Dimitri:''' ''{{beat}}'' ...Well, would Dimitri summon Kuriboh in attack mode?
-->'''Jaden:''' Yeah he would, cause Dimitri's a [[SoundEffectBleep f*ckin']] idiot!
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-->'''Jaden''': Yeah well I didn't struggle fitting into his momma.
-->'''Dimitri''': E- Excuse me.
-->'''Jaden''': I. Plowed. Your. Mother.
-->'''Dimitri''': E- Excuse me.
-->'''Jaden''': I. Plowed. Your. Mother.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Yeah well I didn't struggle fitting into [[YourMom his momma.
momma.]]
-->'''Dimitri''':E- Excuse me.
E-Excuse me?
-->'''Jaden''': [[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Plowed. Your. Mother.]]
-->'''Dimitri''':
-->'''Jaden''': [[PunctuatedForEmphasis I. Plowed. Your. Mother.]]
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-->'''Dimitri''': I don't even sound anything like that!
* There's also this exchange:
-->'''Dimitri:''' Would Dimitri summon the almighty Dark Magician of Chaos?
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, you mean that banned ca- the card that's banned? Dark Magician of Chaos? Yeah, the one that Yugi ''wouldn't'' summon cause he knows it's banned? Yeah, Dimitri ''would'' summon that card, because Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!
-->'''Dimitri:''' ''{{beat}}'' Well, would Dimitri summon Kuriboh in attack mode?
-->'''Jaden:''' Yeah he would, cause Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!
* There's also this exchange:
-->'''Dimitri:''' Would Dimitri summon the almighty Dark Magician of Chaos?
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, you mean that banned ca- the card that's banned? Dark Magician of Chaos? Yeah, the one that Yugi ''wouldn't'' summon cause he knows it's banned? Yeah, Dimitri ''would'' summon that card, because Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!
-->'''Dimitri:''' ''{{beat}}'' Well, would Dimitri summon Kuriboh in attack mode?
-->'''Jaden:''' Yeah he would, cause Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!
to:
-->'''Dimitri''': *Breaks out of his Yugi impersonation* I don't even sound anything like that!
* There's also this exchange:
-->'''Dimitri:''' Would Dimitri summon the almighty Dark Magician of Chaos?
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, you mean that banned ca- the card that's banned? Dark Magician of Chaos? Yeah, the one that Yugi ''wouldn't'' summon cause he knows it's banned? Yeah, Dimitri ''would'' summon that card, because Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!
-->'''Dimitri:''' ''{{beat}}'' Well, would Dimitri summon Kuriboh in attack mode?
-->'''Jaden:''' Yeah he would, cause Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!that!
* There's also this exchange:
-->'''Dimitri:''' Would Dimitri summon the almighty Dark Magician of Chaos?
-->'''Jaden:''' Oh, you mean that banned ca- the card that's banned? Dark Magician of Chaos? Yeah, the one that Yugi ''wouldn't'' summon cause he knows it's banned? Yeah, Dimitri ''would'' summon that card, because Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!
-->'''Dimitri:''' ''{{beat}}'' Well, would Dimitri summon Kuriboh in attack mode?
-->'''Jaden:''' Yeah he would, cause Dimitri's a f''bleep''kin' idiot!
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* Meanwhile at the tool shed...
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* Meanwhile "Meanwhile at the tool shed..."
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* Meanwhile in the tool shed... At Night! Oooooo.
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* Meanwhile "Meanwhile in the tool shed... At Night! Oooooo.''night!''"
-->'''Audience''': Oooooo...
-->'''Audience''': Oooooo...
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-->'''Narrator''': So to clarify: everytime I say "tool shed", [[RunningGag I get a watermelon.]]
to:
-->'''Narrator''': So to clarify: everytime [[RunningGag Every time I say "tool shed", [[RunningGag shed," I get a watermelon.]]
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-->'''Narrator''': Okay then, let's do this! Meanwhile, in the tool shed! Hahaha! It's good to be back!
to:
-->'''Narrator''': Okay then, let's do this! Meanwhile, in the tool shed! TOOL SHED! Hahaha! It's good to be back!
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-->The next day. ''({{Beat}})'' ...[[RunningGag Tool shed.]]
--> Ugh. Someone get him a watermelon please.
--> Yes!
--> Ugh. Someone get him a watermelon please.
--> Yes!
to:
-->
-->'''Narrator''': Yes!
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* After another trip to the hospitaltoolshed...
-->DAMN IT!
-->DAMN IT!
to:
* After "After another trip to the hospitaltoolshed...
-->DAMNhospital-[[RunningGag tool shed.]]"
-->'''Backstage Guy''': DAMN IT!
-->DAMN
-->'''Backstage Guy''': DAMN IT!
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* Meanwhile, at Duel Acadatoolshed!
-->Oh come on, that one didn't count!
-->Oh come on, that one didn't count!
to:
* Meanwhile, "Meanwhile, at Duel Acadatoolshed!
-->OhAcada[[RunningGag toolshed!]]"
-->'''Backstage Guy''': Oh come on, that one didn't count!
-->Oh
-->'''Backstage Guy''': Oh come on, that one didn't count!
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* The narrator agrees to come back... on one condition:
-->'''Narrator''': So to clarify: everytime I say "tool shed", [[RunningGag I get a watermelon.]]
-->'''Guy''': ''(sigh)'' Yes. Yes, you do.
-->'''Narrator''': Good. Then that's one watermelon please!
-->'''Guy''': But--! ''(sigh)'' Fine.
-->'''Narrator''': Okay then, let's do this! Meanwhile, in the tool shed! Hahaha! It's good to be back!
-->'''Narrator''': So to clarify: everytime I say "tool shed", [[RunningGag I get a watermelon.]]
-->'''Guy''': ''(sigh)'' Yes. Yes, you do.
-->'''Narrator''': Good. Then that's one watermelon please!
-->'''Guy''': But--! ''(sigh)'' Fine.
-->'''Narrator''': Okay then, let's do this! Meanwhile, in the tool shed! Hahaha! It's good to be back!
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* The narrator is back:
-->'''Narrator''': So to clarify: everytime I say "tool shed", I get a watermelon.
-->'''Guy''': ''(sigh)'' Yes. Yes, you do.
-->'''Narrator''': Good. Then that's one watermelon please!
-->'''Guy''': But--! ''(sigh)'' Fine.
-->'''Narrator''': Okay then, let's do this! Meanwhile, in the tool shed! Hahaha! It's good to be back!
-->'''Narrator''': So to clarify: everytime I say "tool shed", I get a watermelon.
-->'''Guy''': ''(sigh)'' Yes. Yes, you do.
-->'''Narrator''': Good. Then that's one watermelon please!
-->'''Guy''': But--! ''(sigh)'' Fine.
-->'''Narrator''': Okay then, let's do this! Meanwhile, in the tool shed! Hahaha! It's good to be back!
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-->The next day. ''({{Beat}})'' Tool shed.
to:
-->The next day. ''({{Beat}})'' ''({{Beat}})'' ...[[RunningGag Tool shed.]]
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-->'''Bastion''': Because I got it from your Momma.
to:
-->'''Bastion''': [[YourMom Because I got it from your Momma.]]
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-->'''Tim:''' [[WhatAnIdiot And your first thought was to EAT it!?]]
to:
-->'''Tim:''' [[WhatAnIdiot And your first thought was to EAT it!?]]it!?
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* Alexis's [[BuxomIsBetter huge buns]].
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* Alexis's [[BuxomIsBetter [[BuxomBeautyStandard huge buns]].
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* Hell Bastard... and brothers! "Hey Bob." "Hey Jerry." "Hey Jim." What's new?" "Oh you know, the usual." '''"We don't have fatherrrrrs!"'''
to:
* Hell Bastard... and brothers! "Hey Bob." "Hey Jerry." "Hey Jim." brothers!
-->'''HB 1''': Hey Bob.
-->'''HB 2''': Hey Jerry.
-->'''HB 3 ''': Hey Jim.
-->'''HB 1''': What'snew?" "Oh new?
-->'''HB 3''': Oh you know, theusual." '''"We don't have fatherrrrrs!"'''usual...
-->'''All three HB at once''': '''[[SuddenlyShouting WE DON'T HAVE ANY FATHERRRS!!]]'''
-->'''HB 1''': Hey Bob.
-->'''HB 2''': Hey Jerry.
-->'''HB 3 ''': Hey Jim.
-->'''HB 1''': What's
-->'''HB 3''': Oh you know, the
-->'''All three HB at once''': '''[[SuddenlyShouting WE DON'T HAVE ANY FATHERRRS!!]]'''
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--> '''Burstinatrix''': Awright, you get home NOW!
to:
--> '''Burstinatrix''': Awright, you [[SoundEffectBleep f*ckin']] get home NOW!
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--> '''Avian''': You weren't really gonna torch our balls off, were you?
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--> '''Avian''': You weren't really gonna torch scorch our balls off, were you?
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-->'''Jaden''': You got any other obvious things you wanna point out?
-->'''Syrus''': You're a dick.
-->'''Syrus''': You're a dick.
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* Any time Zane is scene brooding by the pier:
to:
* Any time whenever Zane is scene seen brooding by the pier:
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-->'''Syrus''': [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] you! That's why!
to:
-->'''Syrus''': [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] F*ck]] you! That's why!
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-->'''Jaden''': You don't understand. I've tried trading it, I've tried selling it, I've tried yelling at it, I've tried mailing it to Australia. The damn thing is like droopies, Syrus. It always ''finds me!''
to:
-->'''Jaden''': You don't understand. I've tried trading it, I've tried selling it, I've tried yelling at it, I've tried mailing it to Australia. The damn thing is like droopies, Droopy, Syrus. It always ''finds me!''
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-->'''Jaden''': Let's go find a big person and tell someone!
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Let's go find a big person and tell someone!them!
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--> '''Jaden''': [[BerserkButton WHERE THE [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] ARE MY CHEETOS?!]]
to:
--> '''Jaden''': [[BerserkButton WHERE THE THE]] [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] [[BerserkButton ARE MY CHEETOS?!]]
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-->'''Chazz''': Uh- b- y- FUCK YOU JADEN!
to:
-->'''Chazz''': Uh- b- y- FUCK [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] YOU JADEN!
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--> '''Jaden''': [[BerserkButton WHERE THE FUCK ARE MY CHEETOS?!]]
to:
--> '''Jaden''': [[BerserkButton WHERE THE FUCK [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] ARE MY CHEETOS?!]]
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-->'''Syrus''': [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck you!]] That's why!
to:
-->'''Syrus''': [[PrecisionFStrike Fuck you!]] [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] you! That's why!
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-->'''Crowler''': FUCK NO! *Rips up the letter*
to:
-->'''Crowler''': FUCK NO! [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! *Rips up the letter*
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-->'''Syrus''': Fuck you, that's why!
to:
-->'''Syrus''': Fuck [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] you, that's why!
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-->'''Crowler''': FUCK NO!
to:
-->'''Crowler''': FUCK [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] NO!
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-->'''Chazz''': Who said that? Who the fuck said that?
to:
-->'''Chazz''': Who said that? Who the fuck [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] said that?
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-->'''Crowler''': [[RunningGag FUCK NO!]]! Ahahahaha!
to:
-->'''Crowler''': [[RunningGag FUCK NO!]]! [[SoundEffectBleep F*ck]] no! Ahahahaha!
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-->'''Jaden''': ''What''? Wanna say that again?! You wanna repeat that?! You fucking prick?! ''Huh''?! You wanna fucking start something?! C'mon, let's go, three on three, Red versus Blue, no camp kills, we'll ''fuck you up''!
to:
-->'''Jaden''': ''What''? Wanna say that again?! You wanna repeat that?! You fucking [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing prick?! ''Huh''?! You wanna fucking [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing start something?! C'mon, let's go, three on three, Red versus Blue, no camp kills, we'll ''fuck ''[[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] you up''!
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-->'''Jaden''': Shut the fuck up, Ted! We're all pumped! We're ready to fucking go! ''Let's do this!''
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Shut the fuck [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] up, Ted! We're all pumped! We're ready to fucking [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing go! ''Let's do this!''
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-->'''Jaden''': Yeah, that's right! You better fucking walk away. You blue bastards! Huh! ''Huh?!'' ''({{Beat}})'' I wonder what those blue bastards were talking about.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': Yeah, that's right! You better fucking [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]ing walk away. You blue bastards! Huh! ''Huh?!'' ''({{Beat}})'' I wonder what those blue bastards were talking about.
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-->'''Jaden''': No, nononononononononono. Chumley. What the fuck. Is that your gimmick? You think you're funny? ''Huh?'' You fat fuck. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Look me. In the eye. And say one sentence.]] ''(whispers)'' One sentence.
to:
-->'''Jaden''': No, nononononononononono. Chumley. What the fuck. [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]. Is that your gimmick? You think you're funny? ''Huh?'' You fat fuck.[[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]]. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Look me. In the eye. And say one sentence.]] ''(whispers)'' One sentence.
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-->'''Jaden''': ''What the fuck do you want from me?!''
to:
-->'''Jaden''': ''What the fuck do you want from me?!''''WHAT THE [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] DO YOU WANT FROM ME?!''
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-->'''Jaden:''' Get the fuck out of here, bitch.
to:
-->'''Jaden:''' Get the fuck [[SoundEffectBleep f*ck]] out of here, bitch.
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* Chazz overhears Crowler singing to the tune of [[Music/TheBeeGees Stayin' Alive]]:
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* Crowler singing to the tune of "Staying Alive".
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-->*Crowler gets beans in the face with a baseball*
to:
-->*Crowler gets beans beaned in the face with a baseball*
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* Bastion is late
to:
* When Bastion is latelate:
-->'''Bastion''': I was busy solving equations when I lost track of time!
-->'''Bastion''': I was busy solving equations when I lost track of time!
Changed line(s) 216 (click to see context) from:
* "Okay, who's getting a Crowler bitchslap?!"
to:
* "Okay, who's getting Do NOT sing [[Film/HighSchoolMusical High School Musical]] in front of Jaden:
-->'''Syrus''': HEY BATTER BATTER, HEY BATTER BATTER S-
-->'''Jaden''': Syrus SHUT UP!!
-->'''Syrus''': ...Swing!
-->'''Jaden''': God DAMMIT! Seriously, if I hear that again I'm gonna frickin' lose it!
-->*Meanwhile up on the rafters*
-->'''Crowler''': Oh how I love High School Musical! "Hey batter batter, hey-"
-->'''Jaden''': '''SHUT THE [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] UP!!!'''
-->*Crowler gets beans in the face with aCrowler bitchslap?!"baseball*
-->'''Syrus''': HEY BATTER BATTER, HEY BATTER BATTER S-
-->'''Jaden''': Syrus SHUT UP!!
-->'''Syrus''': ...Swing!
-->'''Jaden''': God DAMMIT! Seriously, if I hear that again I'm gonna frickin' lose it!
-->*Meanwhile up on the rafters*
-->'''Crowler''': Oh how I love High School Musical! "Hey batter batter, hey-"
-->'''Jaden''': '''SHUT THE [[SoundEffectBleep F*CK]] UP!!!'''
-->*Crowler gets beans in the face with a
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Changed line(s) 208 (click to see context) from:
--> *Clapping slows down*
to:
--> *Clapping slows down*down awkwardly when he realizes he's the only one applauding*