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--> "But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"
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--> "But '''Kolenkhov:''' But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"''eat''?
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-->'''Henderson:''' (suspiciously) "How much money did you make last year?"
-->'''Ed:''' "Well, let's see: I think it was about eighty-five dollars, wasn't it?"
-->'''Ed:''' "Well, let's see: I think it was about eighty-five dollars, wasn't it?"
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-->'''Henderson:''' (suspiciously) "How ''[suspiciously]]'' How much money did you make last year?"
year?
-->'''Ed:'''"Well, Well, let's see: I think it was about eighty-five dollars, wasn't it?"it?
-->'''Ed:'''
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** The IRS agent then quickly loses interest in Ed.
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** The IRS agent then quickly loses interest in Ed.Ed.
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* The phone rings, but Tony won't let go of Alice's hands. So Alice picks up receiver with her teeth.
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* The phone rings, but Tony won't let go of Alice's hands. So So, Alice picks up receiver with her teeth.
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* Almost every moment Kolenkhov is on screen:
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* Almost every moment Kolenkhov [[LargeHam Kolenkhov]] is on screen:
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** The IRS agent then quickly looses interest in Ed.
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** The IRS agent then quickly looses loses interest in Ed.
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* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco are priceless. The fireworks start exploding and most everyone starts wildly shouting at each other. It doesn't take long for everybody to start panicking, everyone save Mr. Sycamore and Kolenkhov. Mr. Sycamore tries to stay calm and keep everybody else relaxed, Kolenkhov meanwhile is clapping his hands and cheering.
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* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco are priceless. The fireworks start exploding and most everyone starts wildly shouting at each other. It doesn't take long for everybody to start panicking, everyone save Mr. Sycamore Vanderhoff and Kolenkhov. Mr. Sycamore Vanderhoff tries to stay calm and keep everybody else relaxed, Kolenkhov meanwhile is clapping his hands and cheering.
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-->'''Ed:''' "Well, let's see: I think it was about eighty-five dollars, wasn't it?"
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-->'''Ed:''' "Well, let's see: I think it was about eighty-five dollars, wasn't it?"it?"
** The IRS agent then quickly looses interest in Ed.
** The IRS agent then quickly looses interest in Ed.
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** He then covers for her by claiming she saw "A mouse...no a rat! With hair on it! And it was ''this'' big! And there were six of them! And they just ran under that table!"
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** He then covers for her by claiming she saw "A mouse...no a rat! With hair on it! And it was ''this'' big! And there were six of them! [[HilarityEnsues And they just ran under that table!"table!]]"
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Changed line(s) 12 (click to see context) from:
--> "But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"
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--> "But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"''eat''?"
* When Mr. Henderson the IRS agent suspects Ed of being delinquent on his taxes:
-->'''Henderson:''' (suspiciously) "How much money did you make last year?"
-->'''Ed:''' "Well, let's see: I think it was about eighty-five dollars, wasn't it?"
* When Mr. Henderson the IRS agent suspects Ed of being delinquent on his taxes:
-->'''Henderson:''' (suspiciously) "How much money did you make last year?"
-->'''Ed:''' "Well, let's see: I think it was about eighty-five dollars, wasn't it?"
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* When Mr. Kirby wrestles Kolenkhov to the floor at the end of the movie.
** A nice CallBack to when Kolenkhov took Mr. Kirby by surprise earlier and did the same to him.
* When Tony (Creator/JimmyStewart) tells Alice how much he loves her.
** A nice CallBack to when Kolenkhov took Mr. Kirby by surprise earlier and did the same to him.
* When Tony (Creator/JimmyStewart) tells Alice how much he loves her.
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* When Mr. Kirby wrestles Kolenkhov to the floor at the end of the movie.
** Amovie, a nice CallBack to when Kolenkhov took Mr. Kirby by surprise earlier and did the same to him.
*When Tony (Creator/JimmyStewart) tells Alice how much he loves her.
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* The bit when the phone rings. Tony won't let go of Alice's hands. So Alice picks up receiver with her teeth.
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* The bit when the phone rings. rings, but Tony won't let go of Alice's hands. So Alice picks up receiver with her teeth.
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* Penny the PluckyComicRelief (not that shes the only one of course) had a funny running gag about her writing.
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* Penny the PluckyComicRelief (not that shes she's the only one of course) had a funny running gag about her writing.
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* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was all priceless. The fireworks start exploding and most everyone starts wildly shouting at each other. It doesn't take long for everybody to start panicking, everyone save Mr. Sycamore and Kolenkhov. Mr. Sycamore tries to stay calm and keep everybody else relaxed, Kolenkhov meanwhile is clapping his hands and cheering.
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* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was all fiasco are priceless. The fireworks start exploding and most everyone starts wildly shouting at each other. It doesn't take long for everybody to start panicking, everyone save Mr. Sycamore and Kolenkhov. Mr. Sycamore tries to stay calm and keep everybody else relaxed, Kolenkhov meanwhile is clapping his hands and cheering.
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* When Mr. Kirby wrestles Kolenkhov to the floor at the end of the movie!
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* When Mr. Kirby wrestles Kolenkhov to the floor at the end of the movie!movie.
** A nice CallBack to when Kolenkhov took Mr. Kirby by surprise earlier and did the same to him.
** A nice CallBack to when Kolenkhov took Mr. Kirby by surprise earlier and did the same to him.
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** Then he gets Alice to scream instead!
** He then covers for her by claiming she saw a mouse...no a rat! With hair on it! And it was ''this'' big! And there were six of them! And they just ran under that table!
* I like the bit when the phone rings. Tony won't let go of Alice's hands. So Alice picks up receiver with her teeth.
** He then covers for her by claiming she saw a mouse...no a rat! With hair on it! And it was ''this'' big! And there were six of them! And they just ran under that table!
* I like the bit when the phone rings. Tony won't let go of Alice's hands. So Alice picks up receiver with her teeth.
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** Then he gets Alice to scream instead!
instead.
** He then covers for her by claiming she sawa "A mouse...no a rat! With hair on it! And it was ''this'' big! And there were six of them! And they just ran under that table!
table!"
*I like the The bit when the phone rings. Tony won't let go of Alice's hands. So Alice picks up receiver with her teeth.
** He then covers for her by claiming she saw
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--> '''Penny Sycamore''': Were you ever in a monastery?
* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was all priceless!
* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was all priceless!
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--> '''Penny Sycamore''': [[RunningGag Were you ever in a monastery?
monastery?]]
* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was allpriceless!priceless. The fireworks start exploding and most everyone starts wildly shouting at each other. It doesn't take long for everybody to start panicking, everyone save Mr. Sycamore and Kolenkhov. Mr. Sycamore tries to stay calm and keep everybody else relaxed, Kolenkhov meanwhile is clapping his hands and cheering.
* Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was all
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--> "But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"
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--> "But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"
''eat''?"
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* When Tony (JimmyStewart) tells Alice how much he loves her.
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* When Tony (JimmyStewart) (Creator/JimmyStewart) tells Alice how much he loves her.
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* Everyones reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was all priceless!
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* Everyones Everyone's reactions to the fireworks fiasco. It was all priceless!
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--> '''Penny Sycamore''': Were you ever in a monestery?
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--> '''Penny Sycamore''': Were you ever in a monestery? monastery?
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** He then covers for her by claiming she saw a mouse...no a rat! One ''this'' big! No, six of them! And they ran under that table!
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** He then covers for her by claiming she saw a mouse...no a rat! One With hair on it! And it was ''this'' big! No, And there were six of them! And they just ran under that table!
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** He then covers for her by claiming she saw a mouse...no a rat! One ''this'' big! And it ran under that table!
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** He then covers for her by claiming she saw a mouse...no a rat! One ''this'' big! No, six of them! And it they ran under that table!
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* Almost every moment Kolenkhov is on screen:
--> "But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"
--> "But with you gone, and the grand duchess out of a job, where will I ''eat''?"
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** He then covers for her by claiming she saw a mouse...no a rat! One ''this'' big! And it ran under that table!
