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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/11/05/teneral-e-1/ e.1]], Legend says this:
-->'''Legend:''' I'm direct, like my lasers.
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-->'''Legend:''' I'm direct, like my lasers.
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--> '''Grue''': Exactly. Same with [Bitch]. Word gets around that you’re someongoateee who hurts dogs, she’ll fuck you up. It’s kind of common knowledge here.
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--> '''Grue''': Exactly. Same with [Bitch]. Word gets around that you’re someongoateee someone who hurts dogs, she’ll fuck you up. It’s kind of common knowledge here.
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** Prompting the squad leader to inform her that under ''no circumstances'' is she to smother people with butterflies.
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--> '''Grue''': Exactly. Same with [Bitch]. Word gets around that you’re someone who hurts dogs, she’ll fuck you up. It’s kind of common knowledge here.
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** She declines to dignify his comment with a response and just eats him.
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/10/20/colony-15-2/ Colony 15.2]] After our hero shoes pity for poor [[spoiler:Mind controlled]] Shatterbird. Regent gives them a reason on why not to pity her.
-->'''Shatterbird:''' “Hi! I’ve killed hundreds of people and maimed thousands.”
-->'''Taylor:''' “I get your point, Regent. Stop that.”
-->Shatterbird smiled wide, the expression so fake and cheery it was disturbing to see. I tried to ignore her as she continued staring at me
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2011/11/08/hive-5-2/ Hive 5.2]], Kaiser of all people gets one:
--> '''Grue''': Exactly. Same with [Bitch]. Word gets around that you’re someone who hurts dogs, she’ll fuck you up. It’s kind of common knowledge here.
--> '''Kaiser''': Not something I’d pay attention to. I’m more of a cat person.
--> '''Grue''': Exactly. Same with [Bitch]. Word gets around that you’re someone who hurts dogs, she’ll fuck you up. It’s kind of common knowledge here.
--> '''Kaiser''': Not something I’d pay attention to. I’m more of a cat person.
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/06/15/crushed-24-3/24.3]], Weaver updates Tattletale on the situation, which is getting worse by the second. Tattletale, who at that point is communicating by writing messages, spends a fair bit of time writing a response. What's the response?
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/06/15/crushed-24-3/24.com/2013/06/15/crushed-24-3/ 24.3]], Weaver updates Tattletale on the situation, which is getting worse by the second. Tattletale, who at that point is communicating by writing messages, spends a fair bit of time writing a response. What's the response?
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/06/15/crushed-24-3/24.3], Weaver updates Tattletale on the situation, which is getting worse by the second. Tattletale, who at that point is communicating by writing messages, spends a fair bit of time writing a response. What's the response?
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/06/15/crushed-24-3/24.3], 3]], Weaver updates Tattletale on the situation, which is getting worse by the second. Tattletale, who at that point is communicating by writing messages, spends a fair bit of time writing a response. What's the response?
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/06/15/crushed-24-3/24.3], Weaver updates Tattletale on the situation, which is getting worse by the second. Tattletale, who at that point is communicating by writing messages, spends a fair bit of time writing a response. What's the response?
-->FUCK\\
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-->FUCK\\
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* In [[https://parahumans.wordpress.com/2011/09/24/shell-4-1/ Shell 4.1]], we find out that there is an in-universe fast-food restaurant called Fugly Bob's.
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** The Chicago Wards and Weaver manage to build a giant lightning rod in the shape of a hand with the fingers making a big V. Regent's response?
-->"I get it. You’re calling Behemoth a big vagina.”
-->"I get it. You’re calling Behemoth a big vagina.”
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** Tattletale repeatedly telling Doctor Mother that Cauldron fucked the dog.
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* Then Taylor runs into [[OlderThanTheyLook Bambina]] in the field, who mentions part of her incentive for the attack: her patron, a body snatcher, is providing her a favor, which means she can have him enter a hunky Hollywood celeb and do what she wants. Which she proceeds to describe in explicit detail. Taylor shuts off her senses as best she can, only paying attention again when Bambina finishes, "...with my feet."
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/category/stories-arcs-11/arc-20-chrysalis/20-05/ 20.5]], the PRT's reaction to spotting a ''single butterfly'' in Taylor's house is to ''instantly scramble in all directions to hunt her down''. [[ProperlyParanoid They're right, of course]], but its still ''hilarious'' that the PRT's reaction to spotting a single insect is to instantly go to full alert.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/category/stories-arcs-11/arc-20-chrysalis/20-05/ 20.5]], the PRT's reaction to spotting a ''single butterfly'' in Taylor's house is to ''instantly scramble in all directions to hunt her down''. [[ProperlyParanoid They're right, of course]], but its it's still ''hilarious'' that the PRT's reaction to spotting a single insect is to instantly go to full alert.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/11/05/teneral-e-2/ e.2]], Imp uses her power to set up an elaborate fish-themed deathtrap for a supervillain named Nero. Why? She thought his name was [[Film/FindingNemo Nemo.]] Imp's reaction when she realizes the mistake is priceless.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/11/05/teneral-e-2/ e.2]], Imp uses her power to set up an elaborate fish-themed deathtrap for a supervillain named Nero. Why? She thought his name was [[Film/FindingNemo [[WesternAnimation/FindingNemo Nemo.]] Imp's reaction when she realizes the mistake is priceless.
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-->'''Taylor:'''(thinking)[[RousingSpeech A pre-battle speech from Legend]]. It almost made the lousiest, most painful and dangerous situations I’d put up with since putting on my costume worth it.\\
'''Legend:'''[[GoYeHeroesGoAndDie “But you should know your chances going in. Given the statistics from our previous encounters with this beast, a ‘good day’ still means that one in four of the people in this room will probably be dead before this day is done.”]]\\
'''Taylor:'''Or not.
'''Legend:'''[[GoYeHeroesGoAndDie “But you should know your chances going in. Given the statistics from our previous encounters with this beast, a ‘good day’ still means that one in four of the people in this room will probably be dead before this day is done.”]]\\
'''Taylor:'''Or not.
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'''Taylor:'''Or
'''Taylor:''' Or not.
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-->'''Weaver:''' “Go, my pretties,” I said, monotone. “Go, seek out my enemies and smother them.”\\
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-->'''Weaver:''' “Go, ''[in a monotone]'' Go, my pretties,” I said, monotone. “Go, pretties. Go, seek out my enemies and smother them.”\\
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--->'''Taylor:''' I always hated the speeches when I was in school, the preaching in auditoriums, the one-note message. Stuff like saying ''drugs are bad''. It’s ''wrong''. Drugs are fantastic. \\
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--->'''Taylor:''' I always hated the speeches when I was in school, the preaching in auditoriums, the one-note message. Stuff like saying ''drugs are bad''. It’s It's ''wrong''. Drugs are fantastic. \\
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* Shortly after this Taylor opens the boxes containing her new butterflies (and only butterflies) and there is the following priceless quote:
-->'''Weaver:''' “Go, my pretties,” I said, monotone. “Go, seek out my enemies and smother them.”\\
-->'''Weaver:''' “Go, my pretties,” I said, monotone. “Go, seek out my enemies and smother them.”\\
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-->'''Taylor:'''(thinking)[[RousingSpeech A pre-battle speech from Legend]]. It almost made the lousiest, most painful and dangerous situations I’d put up with since putting on my costume worth it.\\
'''Legend:'''[[GoYeHeroesGoAndDie “But you should know your chances going in. Given the statistics from our previous encounters with this beast, a ‘good day’ still means that one in four of the people in this room will probably be dead before this day is done.”]]\\
'''Taylor:'''Or not.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/12/08/monarch-16-5/ Monarch 16.5]], Skitter tries hitting Dragon with a random [[LogicBomb paradox.]] In response, Dragon [[ShoutOut quotes]] [[{{VideoGame/Portal2}} Wheatley.]]
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2012/12/08/monarch-16-5/ Monarch 16.5]], Skitter tries hitting Dragon Azazel (the latest of Dragon's AI suits) with a random [[LogicBomb paradox.]] In response, Dragon Azazel [[ShoutOut quotes]] [[{{VideoGame/Portal2}} Wheatley.]]
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** Right off the bat, the implications of Weaver's response to Cuff's complaint:
--->'''Cuff:''' You're doing that crazy mastermind thing again.\\
'''Weaver:''' Which crazy mastermind thing?
--->'''Cuff:''' You're doing that crazy mastermind thing again.\\
'''Weaver:''' Which crazy mastermind thing?
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** Right off the bat, the implications of Weaver's response to Cuff's complaint:
--->'''Cuff:''' You're doingwhen Cuff tells Weaver that she's "doing that crazy mastermind thing again.\\
'''Weaver:''' Which crazy mastermind thing?again", Weaver's response is to ask ''which one.''
--->'''Cuff:''' You're doing
'''Weaver:''' Which crazy mastermind thing?
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/09/19/venom-29-1/ 29.1]], when Imp comes up with a plan to mess with "Dr. Babytalk"'s head by having Rachel rattle off scientific jargon from a notepad.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/09/19/venom-29-1/ 29.1]], when Imp comes up with a plan to mess with "Dr. Babytalk"'s Baby-talk"'s head by having Rachel rattle off scientific jargon from a notepad.
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* ...and ''then'', when that plan is interrupted by the army moving out:
-->'''Imp:''' No. No, no. We had such a good joke going, don't you ''dare'' ruin it.
-->'''Imp:''' No. No, no. We had such a good joke going, don't you ''dare'' ruin it.
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* [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/05/04/cell-22-1/ 22.1]]: When the Wards, including their newest member, Crucible, discuss Skitter's plan.
-->'''Crucible:''' But she can't know she'll escape. What if we ''did'' have Dragon and Defiant move her halfway across the country?\\
-->'''Crucible:''' But she can't know she'll escape. What if we ''did'' have Dragon and Defiant move her halfway across the country?\\
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** In a very black-humor sort of way, when Skitter is eavesdropping on the PRT planning session while being strip-searched and is disappointed by what she hears:
--->Back in the cell, I sighed. I could see the uniform flinch in reaction. She had her fingers in my mouth, feeling beneath my tongue and around the base of my gums. When I didn't bite like she'd feared, she finished and removed her fingers from my mouth.
** When the Wards, including their newest member, Crucible, discuss Skitter's plan.
-->'''Crucible:''' --->'''Crucible:''' But she can't know she'll escape. What if we ''did'' have Dragon and Defiant move her halfway across the country?\\
** In a very black-humor sort of way, when Skitter is eavesdropping on the PRT planning session while being strip-searched and is disappointed by what she hears:
--->Back in the cell, I sighed. I could see the uniform flinch in reaction. She had her fingers in my mouth, feeling beneath my tongue and around the base of my gums. When I didn't bite like she'd feared, she finished and removed her fingers from my mouth.
** When the Wards, including their newest member, Crucible, discuss Skitter's plan.
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course.]]
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There\'s gotta be a trope for that, but I can\'t find it.
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/10/01/venom-29-6/ 29.6]], Rachel getting fed up with the Vegas capes:
-->'''Rachel''' [''whispering to Taylor'']: I don't like him.\\
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* In [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/10/01/venom-29-6/ 29.6]], 6]]:
** Right off the bat, the implications of Weaver's response to Cuff's complaint:
--->'''Cuff:''' You're doing that crazy mastermind thing again.\\
'''Weaver:''' Which crazy mastermind thing?
** When Rachel is getting fed up with the Vegas capes:
-->'''Rachel''' --->'''Rachel''' [''whispering to Taylor'']: I don't like him.\\
** Right off the bat, the implications of Weaver's response to Cuff's complaint:
--->'''Cuff:''' You're doing that crazy mastermind thing again.\\
'''Weaver:''' Which crazy mastermind thing?
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* At the very end of the chapter, it is revealed why Imp was dropping so many literary references after the TimeSkip: she's been on a project of giving herself a classical education, a project that she returns to by picking up the next book on her list: ''Literature/TwentyThousandLeaguesUnderTheSea''.[[note]]i.e. the novel that introduced Captain Nemo, for whom the fish in ''Finding Nemo'' was named.[[/note]]
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* 21.6 has this little moment when Skitter is swarming an apartment full of unsuspecting Teeth with bugs, just as dinner gets ready:
--> “No!” Hemorrhagia shouted, trying to cover her chili with a lid, “No, no, fuck you, no!”
--> “No!” Hemorrhagia shouted, trying to cover her chili with a lid, “No, no, fuck you, no!”
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* In the same interlude, [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/04/06/interlude-20/#comment-16936 the theorizing as to how Accord planned to end world hunger.]] Highlights:
--> '''Dustin''': End World Hunger, 23 Year Plan: Go to world where there is not hunger, thus there is no world hunger.
-->'''Fake Name''': Alternatively: stay in this world, kill all the hungry people.
--> '''The Sandman''': Alternatively alternatively: feed the hungry people to the other hungry people.
--> '''frozen chicken''': Alternate alternate alternative: Create a never-ending set of Slaughterhouse 9 clones as a renewable resource, to be harvested for food. That is why they’re called the slaughterhouse 9, right?
--> '''Veloren''': The Crawler Combo is a bit chewy, but the Mannequin Meal is quite lovely, after you pop it out of the shell…
--> '''Dustin''': End World Hunger, 23 Year Plan: Go to world where there is not hunger, thus there is no world hunger.
-->'''Fake Name''': Alternatively: stay in this world, kill all the hungry people.
--> '''The Sandman''': Alternatively alternatively: feed the hungry people to the other hungry people.
--> '''frozen chicken''': Alternate alternate alternative: Create a never-ending set of Slaughterhouse 9 clones as a renewable resource, to be harvested for food. That is why they’re called the slaughterhouse 9, right?
--> '''Veloren''': The Crawler Combo is a bit chewy, but the Mannequin Meal is quite lovely, after you pop it out of the shell…
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** Canary innocently asking Parian and Foil if she can go with them for their alone time. The exact wording is [[AccidentalInnuendo ''come with'' ]] them. She is then slow on the uptake, despite being only recently released from the part of the Birdcage ruled by a man-hating militant lesbian.
--> “I don’t follow the cape scene. I don’t know how close teammates get. I just figured, shitty situation, life and death, maybe you cling tighter to any buoy in a storm… oh god. I asked if I could ‘come with’ them.”
--> Imp: “I can see where you’d get confused. We’re very close, here, after all.”
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--> Imp: “Lustrum the feminazi was in charge of your cell block and you still didn’t pick up on the thing between Parian and Foil. Isn’t that, like, Sappho central?”
--> ''Sappho?'' Canary blushed again. “I… uh.”
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--> “I don’t follow the cape scene. I don’t know how close teammates get. I just figured, shitty situation, life and death, maybe you cling tighter to any buoy in a storm… oh god. I asked if I could ‘come with’ them.”
--> Imp: “I can see where you’d get confused. We’re very close, here, after all.”
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--> Imp: “Lustrum the feminazi was in charge of your cell block and you still didn’t pick up on the thing between Parian and Foil. Isn’t that, like, Sappho central?”
--> ''Sappho?'' Canary blushed again. “I… uh.”
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