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** Just after Burgelkutt's exclamation, the High Aldwin has a hilarious "Are you kidding me?"look on his face.
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** Just after Burgelkutt's exclamation, the High Aldwin has a hilarious "Are you kidding me?"look me?" look on his face.
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* You'd think a queen, even an [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen evil queen]] like Bavmorda, would be above calling Willow "Peck". [[NotSoAboveItAll Nope]].
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* You'd think a queen, even an [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen evil queen]] like Bavmorda, would be above calling Willow "Peck". [[NotSoAboveItAll "[[FantasticSlur Peck]]". [[EvilIsPetty Nope]].
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** Just the fact that Madmartigan actually feels badly enough about the incident that he tries the explain to Sorsha what happened, while she's their prisoner...
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** Just the fact that Madmartigan actually feels badly enough about the incident that he tries the to explain to Sorsha what happened, while she's their prisoner...
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** There's a scene earlier where Madmartigan is making kissy faces at Elora Danan to try and charm Willow into letting him be a good father figure for her. In an amazing moment of serendipity[[note]]since you're limited to a baby's natural expressions, as they [[RealityEnsues can't be directed to act]][[/note]], Elora makes a facial expression that basically screams, "Can you ''believe'' this guy?"
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** There's a scene earlier where Madmartigan is making kissy faces at Elora Danan to try and charm Willow into letting him be a good father figure for her. In an amazing moment of serendipity[[note]]since you're limited to a baby's natural expressions, as they [[RealityEnsues can't be directed to act]][[/note]], act[[/note]], Elora makes a facial expression that basically screams, "Can you ''believe'' this guy?"
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'''High Aldwin''':(Slyly) All this expedition needs is a leader!And according to the bones...that leader is....YOU, Burglekutt!\\
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'''High Aldwin''':(Slyly) All this expedition needs is a leader!And leader! And according to the bones...that leader is....YOU, Burglekutt!\\
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* Rool and Franjean's {{Facepalm}} when Madmartigan is distracted by a combination of Sorsha and the Dust of Broken Hearts.
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* Rool and Franjean's {{Facepalm}} when Madmartigan is distracted by a combination of Sorsha and the Dust of Broken Hearts.Heart.
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** Just the fact that Madmartigan actually feels badly enough about the incident that the tries the explain to Sorsha what happened, while she's their prisoner...
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** Just the fact that Madmartigan actually feels badly enough about the incident that the he tries the explain to Sorsha what happened, while she's their prisoner...
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* When Madmartigan comes to Willow's rescue from a troll attacking him, the troll roars at Madmartigan, who proceeds to roar back at it, scaring it before booting it into the castle moat.
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-->'''Raziel''': Baaaaa! Take tha-a-a-at!
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-->'''Raziel''': Baaaaa! Take tha-a-a-at!tha-a-a-at!
* When Willow returns to his village with true magical abilities, he produces the dove spell of the High Aldwin...with the dove proceeding to crap on the head of Burglekutt.
* When Willow returns to his village with true magical abilities, he produces the dove spell of the High Aldwin...with the dove proceeding to crap on the head of Burglekutt.
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* This scene after Willow accepts the duty of taking Elora, with the derisive village prefect Burglekutt attempting to keep the best warrior from going with Willow.
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* This scene after Willow accepts the duty of taking Elora, with the derisive village prefect Burglekutt attempting to keep the best warrior warrior, Vohnkar, from going with Willow.Willow. Also leads to the High Aldwin tricking Burglekutt into allowing it.
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(Vohnkar does, giving Burgelkutt a look.)
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'''Burgelcutt''': It's going back to the village!\\
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* This scene after Willow accepts the duty of taking Elora, with the derisive village prefect Burglekutt attempting to keep the best warrior from going with Willow.
-->'''High Aldwin''': Who has the courage to protect our brave fellow on his journey?\\
'''Meegosh''': I'll go with him.\\
'''Burgelkutt''':(Satisfied) Ah, Meegosh! Excellent choice!\\
'''Vohnkar''': I'll go!!!\\
'''Burgelkutt''':(Does a double take) NO! Not Vohnkar! He's the best warrior in the village!!! We need him HERE!!! Vohnkar, STEP BACK!!!\\
(Vohnkar does, giving Burgelkutt a look.)
'''High Aldwin''':(Slyly) All this expedition needs is a leader!And according to the bones...that leader is....YOU, Burglekutt!\\
'''Burglekutt''':(immediately getting an OhCrap look on his face) VOHNNNNKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR!!!\\(Wipe goes to the next scene)
-->'''High Aldwin''': Who has the courage to protect our brave fellow on his journey?\\
'''Meegosh''': I'll go with him.\\
'''Burgelkutt''':(Satisfied) Ah, Meegosh! Excellent choice!\\
'''Vohnkar''': I'll go!!!\\
'''Burgelkutt''':(Does a double take) NO! Not Vohnkar! He's the best warrior in the village!!! We need him HERE!!! Vohnkar, STEP BACK!!!\\
(Vohnkar does, giving Burgelkutt a look.)
'''High Aldwin''':(Slyly) All this expedition needs is a leader!And according to the bones...that leader is....YOU, Burglekutt!\\
'''Burglekutt''':(immediately getting an OhCrap look on his face) VOHNNNNKKKKKKKAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRR!!!\\(Wipe goes to the next scene)
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--> '''High Aldwin''': "The BONES have SPOKEN!"
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--> '''High Aldwin''': *quietly, to Willow* ''"The bones tell me ''nothing''"''. *loudly, to the villagers* ..."The BONES have SPOKEN!"
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--> '''Willow''': See this acorn? [[ItMakesSenseInContext I'll throw it at you]] [[TakenForGranite and turn you to stone]]!
--> '''Madmartigan''': Ooh, I'm really scared. [[SarcasmMode No! Don't!]] There's a- a peck here with an acorn ''pointed at me''!
--> '''Madmartigan''': Ooh, I'm really scared. [[SarcasmMode No! Don't!]] There's a- a peck here with an acorn ''pointed at me''!
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-->'''Lug:''' '''''[[BrickJoke HE'S NOT A WOMAN!!!]]'''''
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-->The only successful tactic they might have used was a sneak attack on the heads, and no one but a foolhardy madman would conceive of such a thing. How fortunate, then, that Madmartigan was on the scene.
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-->'''Franjean:''' (to Madmartigan) Don't I knooow youuu? I stole the baby from you, Daikini! While you were taking a pee-pee!
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-->'''Rool:''' We'll never catch up with those horses!
-->'''Franjean:''' Then we will have to track them.
-->'''Rool:''' That would take forever. Besides, even if we find them, they'd only capture us, stick us in cages, torture us and finally devour us!
-->'''Franjean:''' Are you suggesting we go home?
-->'''Rool:''' Nah, this is more fun.
-->'''Franjean:''' Then we will have to track them.
-->'''Rool:''' That would take forever. Besides, even if we find them, they'd only capture us, stick us in cages, torture us and finally devour us!
-->'''Franjean:''' Are you suggesting we go home?
-->'''Rool:''' Nah, this is more fun.
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-->'''Franjean:'''
'''Franjean:''' Then we will have to track
-->'''Rool:'''
'''Rool:''' That would take forever. Besides, even if we find them, they'd only capture us, stick us in cages, torture us and finally devour us!
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'''Rool:''' Nah, this is more fun.
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-->'''Rool:''' ''That's'' Raziel?
-->'''Franjean:''' I don't know, I was expecting something a little more grand. A little less...
-->'''Rool:''' Fuzzy.
-->'''Franjean:''' I don't know, I was expecting something a little more grand. A little less...
-->'''Rool:''' Fuzzy.
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'''Franjean:''' I don't know, I was expecting something a little more grand. A little
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'''Rool:''' Fuzzy.
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-->'''Rool (asleep):''' Rats! Rats! Rats!
-->'''Franjean (wakes up):''' Rats? Where? (Panics and then realizes what's happening) Oh, Rool! You and that stupid rat dream!
-->'''Franjean (wakes up):''' Rats? Where? (Panics and then realizes what's happening) Oh, Rool! You and that stupid rat dream!
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-->'''Franjean
'''Franjean (wakes up):''' Rats? Where? (Panics and then realizes what's happening) Oh, Rool! You and that stupid rat dream!
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-->'''Franjean:''' Then we go that way ''(pointing)'', to the lake!
-->'''Rool:''' ''(Taps Franjean on shoulder, then points a different direction)'' ''That'' way.
-->'''Franjean:''' You are drunk, and when you are drunk, you forget I am in charge.
-->'''Rool:''' ''(echoing)'' ... you are in charge. Fine! Then which way do we go?
-->'''Both:''' ... ''(pointing in the direction'' Rool ''indicated)'' THAT WAY!
-->'''Rool:''' ''(Taps Franjean on shoulder, then points a different direction)'' ''That'' way.
-->'''Franjean:''' You are drunk, and when you are drunk, you forget I am in charge.
-->'''Rool:''' ''(echoing)'' ... you are in charge. Fine! Then which way do we go?
-->'''Both:''' ... ''(pointing in the direction'' Rool ''indicated)'' THAT WAY!
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-->'''Rool:'''
'''Rool:''' ''(Taps Franjean on shoulder, then points a different direction)'' ''That''
-->'''Franjean:'''
'''Franjean:''' You are drunk, and when you are drunk, you forget I am in
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'''Rool:''' ''(echoing)'' ... you are in charge. Fine! Then which way do we
-->'''Both:''' ...
'''Both:''' ... ''(pointing in the direction'' Rool ''indicated)'' THAT WAY!
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-> '''Raziel''': ''(in her goat form)'' Willow! You i-i-i-i-diot!
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** And after the BarBrawl scene, as Madmartigan drives his wagon off into the background...
-->'''Lug:''' '''''[[BrickJoke HE'S NOT A WOMAN!!!]]'''''
-->'''Lug:''' '''''[[BrickJoke HE'S NOT A WOMAN!!!]]'''''
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* Madmartigan temporarily becoming a an absurdly massive HumanSnowball.
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* You'd think a queen, even an evil queen like Bavmorda, would be above calling Willow "Peck". [[NotSoAboveItAll Nope]].
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* You'd think a queen, even an [[GodSaveUsFromTheQueen evil queen queen]] like Bavmorda, would be above calling Willow "Peck". [[NotSoAboveItAll Nope]].
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*** He's so mad he doesn't even tackle Madmartigan, just the closest thing he can punch.
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* You'd think a queen, even an evil queen like Bavmorda, would be above calling Willow "Peck". [[NotSoAboveItAll Nope]].
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** Goat Raziel knocking down a soldier.
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** Just the fact that Madmartigan actually feels badly enough about the incident that the tries the explain tp Sorcha what happened, while she's their prisoner...
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** Just the fact that Madmartigan actually feels badly enough about the incident that the tries the explain tp Sorcha to Sorsha what happened, while she's their prisoner...
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** Just the fact that Madmartigan actually feels badly enough about the incident that the tries the explain tp Sorcha what happened, while she's their prisoner...
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* Goat Raziel knocking down a soldier.
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* Bavmorda's army and Madmartigan run away from the two-headed dragon. Madmartigan takes a breather then [[DoubleTake realizes he's with the army]]. He has a OhCrap look on his face, and runs back inside.
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* Both Bavmorda's army and Madmartigan run away from the a two-headed dragon. Madmartigan takes a breather then [[DoubleTake realizes he's with the army]]. He has a OhCrap look on his face, and runs back inside.
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-> '''Raziel''': Take tha-a-a-at!
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-> '''Raziel''': Baaaaa! Take tha-a-a-at!
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-> '''Raziel''': Willow! You i-i-i-i-diot!
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-> '''Raziel''': ''(in her goat form)'' Willow! You i-i-i-i-diot!
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-> '''Raziel''': Willow! You i-i-i-i-diot!
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** Fin Raziel's various [[BalefulPolymorph Baleful Polymorphs]] due to Willow's incompetence in magic.
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* Goat Raziel knocking down a soldier.
-> '''Raziel''': Take tha-a-a-at!
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* The entire scene at the crossroads where they meet Madmartigan; in fact most things Madmartigan says or does.
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** The roleplaying sourcebook's description of the dragon's defeat is classic:
-->The only successful tactic they might have used was a sneak attack on the heads, and no one but a foolhardy madman would conceive of such a thing. How fortunate, then, that Madmartigan was on the scene.
-->The only successful tactic they might have used was a sneak attack on the heads, and no one but a foolhardy madman would conceive of such a thing. How fortunate, then, that Madmartigan was on the scene.