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* Sette's bird lectures make a come back. Once more Duane and Sette find themselves in the Khert and Duane bemoans their situation, calling on Lady Ilganyag by her given name. Hearing this makes Sette (and the comic) pause for a moment before delivering this exchange.
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* Sette's bird lectures [[https://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch18/ch18_47.html make a come back.comeback]]. Once more Duane and Sette find themselves in the Khert and Duane bemoans their situation, calling on Lady Ilganyag by her given name. Hearing this makes Sette (and the comic) pause for a moment before delivering this exchange.
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--->'''Sette:''' World was more sensible when I reckoned that the case.
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--->'''Sette:''' World was more sensible when I reckoned that the case.case.
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* When Alds are attacking the secret bunker under the mayoral manor of Port Morstoben and trying to kill Queen Sonorie, some of the weapons they use are pymaric grenades. Ufal, panicking, smacks one into the corridor outside -- where the High Priestess of Cresce, apparently unaware of the pure chaos going on inside the chamber, is praying to Tirna to assuage her wrath. She and her acolytes are promptly blown to bits.
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* When Alds are attacking the secret bunker under the mayoral manor of Port Morstoben and trying to kill Queen Sonorie, some of the weapons they use are pymaric grenades. Ufal, panicking, smacks one into the corridor outside -- where the High Priestess of Cresce, apparently unaware of the pure chaos going on inside the chamber, is praying to Tirna to assuage her wrath. She and her acolytes are promptly blown to bits.bits.
* Sette's bird lectures make a come back. Once more Duane and Sette find themselves in the Khert and Duane bemoans their situation, calling on Lady Ilganyag by her given name. Hearing this makes Sette (and the comic) pause for a moment before delivering this exchange.
--->'''Sette:''' You did '''''SEX''''' with her.
--->'''Duane:''' '''''YOUSH'''''ould- '''I'''You- '''I'''You'''I'''don'teven'''KNOW'''whatsex'''''IS'''''!
--->'''Sette:''' World was more sensible when I reckoned that the case.
* Sette's bird lectures make a come back. Once more Duane and Sette find themselves in the Khert and Duane bemoans their situation, calling on Lady Ilganyag by her given name. Hearing this makes Sette (and the comic) pause for a moment before delivering this exchange.
--->'''Sette:''' You did '''''SEX''''' with her.
--->'''Duane:''' '''''YOUSH'''''ould- '''I'''You- '''I'''You'''I'''don'teven'''KNOW'''whatsex'''''IS'''''!
--->'''Sette:''' World was more sensible when I reckoned that the case.
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* When Alds are attacking the secret bunker under the mayoral manor of Port Morstoben and trying to kill Queen Sonorie, some of the weapons they use are pymaric grenades. Ufal, panicking, smacks one into the corridor outside -- where the High Priestess of Cresce, apparently unaware of the pure chaos going on inside the chamber, is praying to Tirna to assuage her wrath. The High Priestess and her acolytes are promptly blown to bits.
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* When Alds are attacking the secret bunker under the mayoral manor of Port Morstoben and trying to kill Queen Sonorie, some of the weapons they use are pymaric grenades. Ufal, panicking, smacks one into the corridor outside -- where the High Priestess of Cresce, apparently unaware of the pure chaos going on inside the chamber, is praying to Tirna to assuage her wrath. The High Priestess She and her acolytes are promptly blown to bits.
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* When Alds are attacking the secret bunker under the mayoral manor of Port Morstoben and trying to kill Queen Sonorie, one of the weapons they use are pymaric grenades. Ufal, panicking, smacks one into the corridor outside -- where the High Priestess of Cresce, apparently unaware of the pure chaos going on inside the chamber, is praying to Tirna to assuage her wrath. The High Priestess and her acolytes are promptly blown to bits.
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---> "Horrific! Dire! Nail-biting! I hope it gets worse!"
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---> "Horrific! Dire! Nail-biting! I hope it gets worse!"worse!"
* When Alds are attacking the secret bunker under the mayoral manor of Port Morstoben and trying to kill Queen Sonorie, some of the weapons they use are pymaric grenades. Ufal, panicking, smacks one into the corridor outside -- where the High Priestess of Cresce, apparently unaware of the pure chaos going on inside the chamber, is praying to Tirna to assuage her wrath. The High Priestess and her acolytes are promptly blown to bits.
* When Alds are attacking the secret bunker under the mayoral manor of Port Morstoben and trying to kill Queen Sonorie, some of the weapons they use are pymaric grenades. Ufal, panicking, smacks one into the corridor outside -- where the High Priestess of Cresce, apparently unaware of the pure chaos going on inside the chamber, is praying to Tirna to assuage her wrath. The High Priestess and her acolytes are promptly blown to bits.
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%%* Sette and Duane hijack the Tirna's Day festival by rewriting the play to be Ssaelit-themed. Hilarity Ensues.
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%%* Sette and Duane hijack the Tirna's Day festival by rewriting the play to be Ssaelit-themed. Hilarity Ensues.Ensues.
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch17/ch17_112.html Knock's sarcastic commentary]] when Lady Emne shows up in the middle of all the chaos in the port.
--->'''Knock-Me-Down:''' (notices the sour look on Elka's face) That the wife?
--->'''Elka:''' Yeah.
--->'''Knock:''' Perils all about us. Shame and a pity if her lungs fell out.
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch17/ch17_134.html The cup of coffee made sentient by the Khert fire.]] A cheery little friend!
---> "Horrific! Dire! Nail-biting! I hope it gets worse!"
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch17/ch17_112.html Knock's sarcastic commentary]] when Lady Emne shows up in the middle of all the chaos in the port.
--->'''Knock-Me-Down:''' (notices the sour look on Elka's face) That the wife?
--->'''Elka:''' Yeah.
--->'''Knock:''' Perils all about us. Shame and a pity if her lungs fell out.
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch17/ch17_134.html The cup of coffee made sentient by the Khert fire.]] A cheery little friend!
---> "Horrific! Dire! Nail-biting! I hope it gets worse!"
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* When a teen prostitute is bugging Sette in Stockyard's brothel, Sette ''bites part of her finger off.'' Duane gently commands her to spit the finger out and catches it in a handkerchief, as if she's a toddler who's eaten something she shouldn't have. And then he hands it back to the prostitute, asking her to excuse Sette's behaviour because "[[TeamPet Boo]] has nerves."
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* When a teen prostitute is bugging Sette in Stockyard's brothel, brothel is rude and condescending towards Sette, Sette ''bites retaliates by ''[[{{Fingore}} biting part of her finger off.off]].'' Duane gently commands her to spit the finger out and catches it in a handkerchief, as if she's a toddler who's eaten something she shouldn't have. And then he hands it back to the prostitute, asking her to excuse Sette's behaviour because "[[TeamPet Boo]] has nerves."
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch11/ch11_20.html Duane talks with Sette about his time in the khert with Ilganyag]], leading to a rare moment when he utterly loses his composure:
--->'''Sette''': So that tittybird talked to ya, huh?
--->'''Duane''': At length.
--->'''Sette''': I can't believe she had so many titties, it's extraneous! Didja snog her?
--->'''Duane''': Yes. [[VerbalBackspace NO. WHAT]]
--->'''Sette''': Ugh, you're so ''disgustin''', birds don't even got ''lips''.
--->'''Sette''': So that tittybird talked to ya, huh?
--->'''Duane''': At length.
--->'''Sette''': I can't believe she had so many titties, it's extraneous! Didja snog her?
--->'''Duane''': Yes. [[VerbalBackspace NO. WHAT]]
--->'''Sette''': Ugh, you're so ''disgustin''', birds don't even got ''lips''.
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* When Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is [[ImStandingRightHere standing right there]]. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to [[PutTheirHeadsTogether knock their heads together]].
--->'''Quigley''': ...This makes sense. No ''legitimate'' human could be such a prancing ''twat''-
--->'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!
--->'''Quigley''': ...This makes sense. No ''legitimate'' human could be such a prancing ''twat''-
--->'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!
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* When [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch10/ch10_124.html When]] Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is [[ImStandingRightHere standing right there]]. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to [[PutTheirHeadsTogether knock their heads together]].
--->'''Quigley''': ...This makes sense. No ''legitimate'' human could be such a prancing''twat''-
--->'''Duane''':''twat''-\\
'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!
--->'''Quigley''': ...This makes sense. No ''legitimate'' human could be such a prancing
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'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!
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* When Quigley finds out that Matty isn't going to be in the holiday pageant, he immediately overreacts [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch15/ch15_104.html and demands to see the manager]], never mind that Matty's only not in it because he didn't ask to be.
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* The introduction of new Black-Tongue character and Bastion's self-appointed rival... ''[[AtrociousAlias Darkest Paul.]]''
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* The introduction of new Black-Tongue character and Bastion's self-appointed rival... ''[[AtrociousAlias Darkest Paul.]]'']]''
%%* Sette and Duane hijack the Tirna's Day festival by rewriting the play to be Ssaelit-themed. Hilarity Ensues.
%%* Sette and Duane hijack the Tirna's Day festival by rewriting the play to be Ssaelit-themed. Hilarity Ensues.
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.you.
* The introduction of new Black-Tongue character and Bastion's self-appointed rival... ''[[AtrociousAlias Darkest Paul.]]''
* The introduction of new Black-Tongue character and Bastion's self-appointed rival... ''[[AtrociousAlias Darkest Paul.]]''
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!!'''As a Moments subpage, all spoilers are unmarked [[Administrivia/SpoilersOff as per policy.]] Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.'''
!!'''As a Moments subpage, all spoilers are unmarked [[Administrivia/SpoilersOff as per policy.]] Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned.'''
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-->'''Toma:''' It was our Aldishmen. [[spoiler: We can conclude dismemberment is habitual for him. He eats people.]]
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-->'''Toma:''' It was our Aldishmen. [[spoiler: We can conclude dismemberment is habitual for him. He eats people.]]
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** Matty then has doll Duane murder doll Quigley, much to real Quigley's dismay.
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.
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--->'''Matty (as Duane)''': Tacit casters don't have to pyew!
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--->'''Matty (as Duane)''': Tacit casters don't have to pyew!pyew!
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.you.
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_23.html Matty plays pretend]] with doll versions of Duane and his father
--->'''Matty (as Quigley)''': Nooo! You didn't pyew!
--->'''Matty (as Duane)''': Tacit casters don't have to pyew!
* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_23.html Matty plays pretend]] with doll versions of Duane and his father
--->'''Matty (as Quigley)''': Nooo! You didn't pyew!
--->'''Matty (as Duane)''': Tacit casters don't have to pyew!
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* Pay close attention to the left of panel 4. [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.]]
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* Pay close attention to the left of panel 4. [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Pay close attention to the left of panel 4]]. Sorry, storm bringer, but she's just not into you.]]
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* Pay close attention to the left of panel 4. [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Guess not all the water women are into storm bringers.]]
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* Pay close attention to the left of panel 4. [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Guess not all the water women are into Sorry, storm bringers.bringer, but she's just not into you.]]
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch11/ch11_31.html Poof.]]
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch11/ch11_31.html Poof.]]
* Pay close attention to the left of panel 4. [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Guess not all the water women are into storm bringers.]]
* Pay close attention to the left of panel 4. [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch12/ch12_40.html Guess not all the water women are into storm bringers.]]
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* After the events of the Nevergreen, Duane and Sette follow Quigley back to Iori's home. Sette she doesn't seem to mind, but Duane winds up... [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch10/ch10_163.html shooed out.]] He ''has'' to be [[TheComicallySerious maintaining that deadpan look under the broom.]]
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* [[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch07/ch07_69.html O-oi, careful! It only goes to my elbow!]]
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--->'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!
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--->'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!''cliff''?!
*[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch11/ch11_31.html Poof.]]
*[[http://www.casualvillain.com/Unsounded/comic/ch11/ch11_31.html Poof.]]
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--->'''Duane''': That is not a talent of mine.
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--->'''Duane''': That is not a talent of mine.mine.
* When Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is [[ImStandingRightHere standing right there]]. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to [[PutTheirHeadsTogether knock their heads together]].
--->'''Quigley''': ...This makes sense. No ''legitimate'' human could be such a prancing ''twat''-
--->'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!
* When Duane's nature is revealed to Toma and Quigley, they immediately disregard the pressing threat in order to engage in IKnewIt with each other and theorize that he's a mindless plod under someone else's control while Duane is [[ImStandingRightHere standing right there]]. Eventually he gets fed up and uses pymary to [[PutTheirHeadsTogether knock their heads together]].
--->'''Quigley''': ...This makes sense. No ''legitimate'' human could be such a prancing ''twat''-
--->'''Duane''': 'Legitimate?!' Plat, shall I ''legitimately'' drop you from another ''cliff''?!
