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* When Rod sees Flora being assaulted by a King Kong {{Expy}} (really just a simulation, of course), he rushes off to the rescue, knocking the hand of the ape way. Then, when the hand comes back, Rod swings his fist back to strike again and ''accidentally knocks Flora out stone cold!'' Rod mistakingly assumes the monster was the one to hit Flora.
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* When Rod sees Flora being assaulted by a King Kong {{Expy}} (really just a simulation, of course), he rushes off to the rescue, knocking the hand of the ape way. Then, when the hand comes back, Rod swings his fist back to strike again and ''accidentally knocks Flora out stone cold!'' Rod mistakingly mistakenly assumes the monster was the one to hit Flora.Flora.
* Flora has enough of Rod and leaves his base, which is a football-shaped blimp floating thousands of feet off the ground. As she plummets to her doom, Rod swoops in to rescue her... right after he's washed and ironed his cape. They both end up crashing on top of a monster about to attack Ralph and Mumford, saving them by sheer accident.
* Flora has enough of Rod and leaves his base, which is a football-shaped blimp floating thousands of feet off the ground. As she plummets to her doom, Rod swoops in to rescue her... right after he's washed and ironed his cape. They both end up crashing on top of a monster about to attack Ralph and Mumford, saving them by sheer accident.
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* Mumford's reaction upon seeing Botch's accidental use of a half-naked woman in his slide show.
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* The sequence after Mumford accidentally broke the main lever in the Cosmic Clock before the spring is released.
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* Everything out of Ralph's mouth, thanks to Music's delivery.
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* Everything out of Ralph's mouth, thanks to Music's Creator/LorenzoMusic's delivery.
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** The reveal that the bomb is actually Mumford in a CoincidentalAccidentalDisguise.
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** The reveal that the bomb is actually Mumford in a CoincidentalAccidentalDisguise.CoincidentalAccidentalDisguise.
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* Mumford vs. the computer in the Garbagery. "Don't press my buttons."
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* Everything out of Ralph's mouth, thanks to Music's delivery.
-->'''Ralph:''' ''(on the Garbagerie)'' Well, it does kinda stink but then again, it ''is'' garbage.
* Mumford vs. the computer in theGarbagery.Garbagerie. "Don't press my buttons."
-->'''Ralph:''' ''(on the Garbagerie)'' Well, it does kinda stink but then again, it ''is'' garbage.
* Mumford vs. the computer in the
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-->'''Botch:''' I just wanna say a few words to you scumbags before you deliver those nightmares. I know some of you have girlfriends and old ladies, and all that kind of crap, and you're probably expecting to get into their feathers tonight! Well, let me just say... '''[[PrecisionFStrike tough shit!]]''' And for you jerk-offs who think you can hang around here on your fat asses, I have one last thing to say... go suck an egg!
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-->'''Botch:''' I just wanna say a few words to you scumbags before you deliver those nightmares. I know some of you have girlfriends and old ladies, and all that kind of crap, and you're probably expecting to get into their feathers tonight! Well, let me just say... '''[[PrecisionFStrike tough shit!]]''' And for you jerk-offs who think you can hang around here on your fat asses, I have one last thing to say... go suck an egg!egg! So let's get out there and kick some butt! ''(the vultures do nothing)'' Okay, slimeballs! Off your keesters! ''(the vultures still do nothing)'' Get going! Gung ho! I wanna smell your wind! Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!
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* The Fairy Godmother's dry delivery while pretending to be a "DamselInDistress, currently on fire."
** Rod sucking up the flames... only to [[EpicFail blow them right into her face]] when he says thank you.
** Rod sucking up the flames... only to [[EpicFail blow them right into her face]] when he says thank you.
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* The Fairy Godmother's [[BadBadActing dry delivery delivery]] while pretending to be a "DamselInDistress, currently on fire."
** Rod sucking up the flames... only to [[EpicFail blow them right intoher FGM's face]] when he says thank you.you. She only gives him the job afterward to get him out of her office.
** Rod sucking up the flames... only to [[EpicFail blow them right into
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* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
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* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.afterwards.
* Botch's VillainousBreakdown when he sees a nightmare bomb rolling towards him.
-->'''Synonamess Botch:''' No! Never! It's too much to bear! [[SecurityBlanket I want my blankie!]] [[IWantMyMommy I want my momma!]]
** The reveal that the bomb is actually Mumford in a CoincidentalAccidentalDisguise.
* Botch's VillainousBreakdown when he sees a nightmare bomb rolling towards him.
-->'''Synonamess Botch:''' No! Never! It's too much to bear! [[SecurityBlanket I want my blankie!]] [[IWantMyMommy I want my momma!]]
** The reveal that the bomb is actually Mumford in a CoincidentalAccidentalDisguise.
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'''Rod:''' Rod Rescueman.\\
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'''Rod:''' Hello, I'm Rod Rescueman.\\
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* Rod introducing himself to Ralph and Mum.
-->'''Rod:''' Would I fail you?\\
'''Ralph:''' ''(genuinely unsure)'' ... I don't ''know''!
-->'''Rod:''' Would I fail you?\\
'''Ralph:''' ''(genuinely unsure)'' ... I don't ''know''!
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* Mumford vs. the computer in the Garbagery. "Please do not press my buttons."
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* Mumford vs. the computer in the Garbagery. "Please do not "Don't press my buttons."
* Ralph's first impression of the Cosmic Clock. "This might take a while. In fact, this might take... a lot of whiles."
* Ralph's first impression of the Cosmic Clock. "This might take a while. In fact, this might take... a lot of whiles."
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* When Rod sees Flora being assaulted by a King Kong {{Expy}} (really just a simulation, of course), he rushes off to the rescue, knocking the hand of the ape way. Then, when the comes back, Rod swings his fist back, ''accidentally knocking Flora out stone cold!'' Rod mistakingly assumes the monster was the one to hit Flora.
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* When Rod sees Flora being assaulted by a King Kong {{Expy}} (really just a simulation, of course), he rushes off to the rescue, knocking the hand of the ape way. Then, when the hand comes back, Rod swings his fist back, back to strike again and ''accidentally knocking knocks Flora out stone cold!'' Rod mistakingly assumes the monster was the one to hit Flora.
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* When Rod sees Flora being assaulted by a King Kong {{Expy}} (really just a simulation, of course), he rushes off to the rescue, knocking the hand of the ape way. Then, when the comes back, Rod swings his fist back, ''accidentally knocking Flora out stone cold!'' Rod mistakingly assumes the monster was the one to hit Flora.
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* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
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* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
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** Rod sucking up the flames... only to [[EpicFail blow them right into her face]] when he says thank you.
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* This exchange, after Rod barges through the door to Greensleeves' cell, [[TheDoorSlamsYou knocking it onto Greensleeves]].
-->'''Flora:''' Uncle Greeny, where are you?\\
'''Greensleeves:''' I'm under the door, ya twits!\\
'''Rod Rescueman:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint That's a pretty stupid place to be when people are knocking doors down.]]
-->'''Flora:''' Uncle Greeny, where are you?\\
'''Greensleeves:''' I'm under the door, ya twits!\\
'''Rod Rescueman:''' [[ComicallyMissingThePoint That's a pretty stupid place to be when people are knocking doors down.]]
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* Synonamess Botch's "inspiring" speech to his vultures near the start of the movie:
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* Synonamess Botch's "inspiring" speech to his vultures near in the start more-profane Bill Couterie cut of the movie:film:
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* The Fairy Godmother's dry delivery while pretending to be a DamselInDistress on fire.
* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
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* The Fairy Godmother's dry delivery while pretending to be a DamselInDistress "DamselInDistress, currently on fire.
fire."
* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
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'''Rod:''' [[LiteralMinded My name!]]
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'''Rod:''' [[LiteralMinded My name!]]name!]]
** Rod's resume. "It's a blank piece of paper, but it's notarized and legal size."
* The Fairy Godmother's dry delivery while pretending to be a DamselInDistress on fire.
* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
** Rod's resume. "It's a blank piece of paper, but it's notarized and legal size."
* The Fairy Godmother's dry delivery while pretending to be a DamselInDistress on fire.
* After Greensleeves, whom Flora describes as "short and bent", showers his niece with kisses, an envious Rod says "I should get short and bent." Bonus points for being hit over the head by Ibor immediately afterwards.
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'''Rod:''' [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder My name!]]
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'''Rod:''' [[RhetoricalQuestionBlunder [[LiteralMinded My name!]]
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* Synonamess Botch's "inspiring" speech to his vultures near the start of the movie:
-->'''Botch:''' I just wanna say a few words to you scumbags before you deliver those nightmares. I know some of you have girlfriends and old ladies, and all that kind of crap, and you're probably expecting to get into their feathers tonight! Well, let me just say... '''[[PrecisionFStrike tough shit!]]''' And for you jerk-offs who think you can hang around here on your fat asses, I have one last thing to say... go suck an egg!
-->'''Botch:''' I just wanna say a few words to you scumbags before you deliver those nightmares. I know some of you have girlfriends and old ladies, and all that kind of crap, and you're probably expecting to get into their feathers tonight! Well, let me just say... '''[[PrecisionFStrike tough shit!]]''' And for you jerk-offs who think you can hang around here on your fat asses, I have one last thing to say... go suck an egg!