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* Generally, anything Spooky says during the interlude.
* Tsunami's facial expressions make it even better.
* Tsunami's facial expressions make it even better.
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and gay, express when reading typical Yaoi and BL.
* A meta Funny from the commenters about [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-int1-page-13/ Interlude one, Page 13]][[note]]Technically SFW, but the website name & adverts might draw attention[[/note]]: A hypothetical conversation between [[SummonMagic Spooky]] and the [[TeamMom Commander]]:
--> '''Commenter 1''':"But Mummmmm... You never let me summon demons to eat our equipment!. :-( "
--> "I said No, Spooky!"
--> '''Commenter 2''': "But ALL my friends are allowed to summon demons [[InnocentInnuendo to eat their equipment]]!" [[note]]...this sounds so wrong, somehow... :D[[/note]]
--> '''Commenter 3''': "[A]nd if All your friends jumped off a bridge.... we'd just be down to [[{{Flight}} [F]lyboy]]."
--> '''Commenter 2''': "Okay, okay, I get it. No bridge diving, check. ...[B]ut can I summon that demon, now?" *innocent look*
* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch4-page-32/ On page 32 of chapter 4]], we see Fluke throw one of Spooky's flasks to try and stop Annihilator or Platinum Priestess somehow. Something huge, brown, and mysterious erupts from the flask just in time to block PP's attack from striking Commander. And on [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch4-page-33/ page 33]], we find out what it was: ''A twenty-foot-tall bear. '''That shoots laser beams from its eyes'''.'' It's so utterly bizarre that it's hard not to burst into hysterical laughter. Needless to say, the reaction in the comments was... further confusion.
** To make it even better, the bear's backside is smoking when we see it clearly. Yes, that's right. Sircea shot a giant bear ''in the ass.'' It is understandably pissed.
** Possibly the cherry on top is, per Amanda, the fact that Spooky ''was not'' supposed to keep that thing. Of course, ''why'' she trusted Spooky of all people to ''not'' keep a massive bear demon that shoots lasers from its eyes is another matter entirely...
* A meta Funny from the commenters about [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-int1-page-13/ Interlude one, Page 13]][[note]]Technically SFW, but the website name & adverts might draw attention[[/note]]: A hypothetical conversation between [[SummonMagic Spooky]] and the [[TeamMom Commander]]:
--> '''Commenter 1''':"But Mummmmm... You never let me summon demons to eat our equipment!. :-( "
--> "I said No, Spooky!"
--> '''Commenter 2''': "But ALL my friends are allowed to summon demons [[InnocentInnuendo to eat their equipment]]!" [[note]]...this sounds so wrong, somehow... :D[[/note]]
--> '''Commenter 3''': "[A]nd if All your friends jumped off a bridge.... we'd just be down to [[{{Flight}} [F]lyboy]]."
--> '''Commenter 2''': "Okay, okay, I get it. No bridge diving, check. ...[B]ut can I summon that demon, now?" *innocent look*
* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch4-page-32/ On page 32 of chapter 4]], we see Fluke throw one of Spooky's flasks to try and stop Annihilator or Platinum Priestess somehow. Something huge, brown, and mysterious erupts from the flask just in time to block PP's attack from striking Commander. And on [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch4-page-33/ page 33]], we find out what it was: ''A twenty-foot-tall bear. '''That shoots laser beams from its eyes'''.'' It's so utterly bizarre that it's hard not to burst into hysterical laughter. Needless to say, the reaction in the comments was... further confusion.
** To make it even better, the bear's backside is smoking when we see it clearly. Yes, that's right. Sircea shot a giant bear ''in the ass.'' It is understandably pissed.
** Possibly the cherry on top is, per Amanda, the fact that Spooky ''was not'' supposed to keep that thing. Of course, ''why'' she trusted Spooky of all people to ''not'' keep a massive bear demon that shoots lasers from its eyes is another matter entirely...
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* A meta Funny from the commenters about [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-int1-page-13/ Interlude one, Page 13]][[note]]Technically SFW, but the website name & adverts might draw attention[[/note]]: A hypothetical conversation between [[SummonMagic Spooky]] and the [[TeamMom Commander]]:
--> '''Commenter 1''':"But Mummmmm... You never let me summon demons to eat our equipment!. :-( "
--> "I said No, Spooky!"
--> '''Commenter 2''': "But ALL my friends are allowed to summon demons [[InnocentInnuendo to eat their equipment]]!" [[note]]...this sounds so wrong, somehow... :D[[/note]]
--> '''Commenter 3''': "[A]nd if All your friends jumped off a bridge.... we'd just be down to [[{{Flight}} [F]lyboy]]."
--> '''Commenter 2''': "Okay, okay, I get it. No bridge diving, check. ...[B]ut can I summon that demon, now?" *innocent look*
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* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ch5-page-61/ Gordon cracks a joke]]. No one laughs not because it isn't funny, but because no one thought he ''could'' tell a joke.
** Also it's hilarious to imagine yourself as a hostage just sitting there for all this time taking in all this ridiculousness and the heroes are ''too busy making out and gawking to set you free.''
** Also it's hilarious to imagine yourself as a hostage just sitting there for all this time taking in all this ridiculousness and the heroes are ''too busy making out and gawking to set you free.''
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* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ch5-page-61/ Gordon cracks a joke]]. No one laughs not because it isn't funny, but because no one thought he ''could'' tell a joke.
**joke. Also it's hilarious to imagine yourself as a hostage just sitting there for all this time taking in all this ridiculousness and the heroes are ''too busy making out and gawking to set you free.''
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and gay, express when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and gay, express when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].BL.
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* When fighting the demon king, the heroes draw on their [[HeroicSecondWind final wind to try to defeat him]]. The first move made by the team? Fluke throws the Annihilator's kunai into the King's [[GroinAttack always covered in shadow member.]]
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** Possibly the cherry on top is, per Amanda, the fact that Spooky ''was not'' supposed to keep that thing. Of course, ''why'' she trusted Spooky of all people to ''not'' keep a massive bear demon that shoots lasers from its eyes is another matter entirely...
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** Possibly the cherry on top is, per Amanda, the fact that Spooky ''was not'' supposed to keep that thing. Of course, ''why'' she trusted Spooky of all people to ''not'' keep a massive bear demon that shoots lasers from its eyes is another matter entirely...entirely...
* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ch5-page-61/ Gordon cracks a joke]]. No one laughs not because it isn't funny, but because no one thought he ''could'' tell a joke.
** Also it's hilarious to imagine yourself as a hostage just sitting there for all this time taking in all this ridiculousness and the heroes are ''too busy making out and gawking to set you free.''
* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ch5-page-61/ Gordon cracks a joke]]. No one laughs not because it isn't funny, but because no one thought he ''could'' tell a joke.
** Also it's hilarious to imagine yourself as a hostage just sitting there for all this time taking in all this ridiculousness and the heroes are ''too busy making out and gawking to set you free.''
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** To make it even better, the bear's backside is smoking when we see it clearly. Yes, that's right. Sircea shot a giant bear ''in the ass.'' It is understandably pissed.
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** To make it even better, the bear's backside is smoking when we see it clearly. Yes, that's right. Sircea shot a giant bear ''in the ass.'' It is understandably pissed.pissed.
** Possibly the cherry on top is, per Amanda, the fact that Spooky ''was not'' supposed to keep that thing. Of course, ''why'' she trusted Spooky of all people to ''not'' keep a massive bear demon that shoots lasers from its eyes is another matter entirely...
** Possibly the cherry on top is, per Amanda, the fact that Spooky ''was not'' supposed to keep that thing. Of course, ''why'' she trusted Spooky of all people to ''not'' keep a massive bear demon that shoots lasers from its eyes is another matter entirely...
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* [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch4-page-32/ On page 32 of chapter 4]], we see Fluke throw one of Spooky's flasks to try and stop Annihilator or Platinum Priestess somehow. Something huge, brown, and mysterious erupts from the flask just in time to block PP's attack from striking Commander. And on [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/typ/ete-ch4-page-33/ page 33]], we find out what it was: ''A twenty-foot-tall bear. '''That shoots laser beams from its eyes'''.'' It's so utterly bizarre that it's hard not to burst into hysterical laughter. Needless to say, the reaction in the comments was... further confusion.
** To make it even better, the bear's backside is smoking when we see it clearly. Yes, that's right. Sircea shot a giant bear ''in the ass.'' It is understandably pissed.
** To make it even better, the bear's backside is smoking when we see it clearly. Yes, that's right. Sircea shot a giant bear ''in the ass.'' It is understandably pissed.
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, express when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, gay, express when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, express
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, expressexpress when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, express** A meta Funny from the commenters about [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-int1-page-13/ Interlude one, Page 13]][[note]]Technically SFW, but the website name & adverts might draw attention[[/note]]: A hypothetical conversation between [[SummonMagic Spooky]] and the [[TeamMom Commander]]:
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, express** express
* A meta Funny from the commenters about [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-int1-page-13/ Interlude one, Page 13]][[note]]Technically SFW, but the website name & adverts might draw attention[[/note]]: A hypothetical conversation between [[SummonMagic Spooky]] and the [[TeamMom Commander]]:
* A meta Funny from the commenters about [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-int1-page-13/ Interlude one, Page 13]][[note]]Technically SFW, but the website name & adverts might draw attention[[/note]]: A hypothetical conversation between [[SummonMagic Spooky]] and the [[TeamMom Commander]]:
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, express when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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** On a more meta level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb acts nothing like how the in-story slash artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, express express** A meta Funny from the commenters about [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-int1-page-13/ Interlude one, Page 13]][[note]]Technically SFW, but the website name & adverts might draw attention[[/note]]: A hypothetical conversation between [[SummonMagic Spooky]] and the [[TeamMom Commander]]:
--> '''Commenter 1''':"But Mummmmm... You never let me summon demons to eat our equipment!. :-( "
--> "I said No, Spooky!"
--> '''Commenter 2''': "But ALL my friends are allowed to summon demons [[InnocentInnuendo to eat their equipment]]!" [[note]]...this sounds so wrong, somehow... :D[[/note]]
--> '''Commenter 3''': "[A]nd if All your friends jumped off a bridge.... we'd just be down to [[{{Flight}} [F]lyboy]]."
--> '''Commenter 2''': "Okay, okay, I get it. No bridge diving, check. ...[B]ut can I summon that demon, now?" *innocent look*
when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
--> '''Commenter 1''':"But Mummmmm... You never let me summon demons to eat our equipment!. :-( "
--> "I said No, Spooky!"
--> '''Commenter 2''': "But ALL my friends are allowed to summon demons [[InnocentInnuendo to eat their equipment]]!" [[note]]...this sounds so wrong, somehow... :D[[/note]]
--> '''Commenter 3''': "[A]nd if All your friends jumped off a bridge.... we'd just be down to [[{{Flight}} [F]lyboy]]."
--> '''Commenter 2''': "Okay, okay, I get it. No bridge diving, check. ...[B]ut can I summon that demon, now?" *innocent look*
when reading [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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* On a more [[MetaHumor meta]] level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters are reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb nothing like how the in-story artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, view with regards to [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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-->'''Kyle''': You... uh... you seem to be saying "no" a lot. Like in every panel.
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-->'''Kyle''': You... uh... you seem to be saying "no" a lot. Like in every panel.panel.
* On a more [[MetaHumor meta]] level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters are reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb nothing like how the in-story artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, view with regards to [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
* On a more [[MetaHumor meta]] level, remember that this whole interlude is about a set of characters are reading an in-universe [[{{Lemon}} explicit]] SlashFic[=s=] about themselves. We already know that one of said characters [[StraightGay actually IS gay]] yet (of course) [[FanDumb nothing like how the in-story artist portrays him]]. The whole scene smacks strongly of the humor and bewilderment that many real-life men, both straight and queer, view with regards to [[BoysLoveTropes typical Yaoi and BL]].
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* On keeping the Young Protector's Protectors' 15 year old computer expert from accessing porn online:
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--> '''Commander''': NO!
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--> '''Commander''': NO!NO!
** Made even more humorous by the fact that Commander is in a different room, off-panel, the whole time.
* Generally, anything Spooky says during the interlude.
* Tsunami's facial expressions make it even better.
* Kyle, upon seeing fanart of him and Spooky together:
-->'''Kyle''': You... uh... you seem to be saying "no" a lot. Like in every panel.
** Made even more humorous by the fact that Commander is in a different room, off-panel, the whole time.
* Generally, anything Spooky says during the interlude.
* Tsunami's facial expressions make it even better.
* Kyle, upon seeing fanart of him and Spooky together:
-->'''Kyle''': You... uh... you seem to be saying "no" a lot. Like in every panel.
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*On keeping the Young Protector's 15 year old computer expert from accessing porn online:
--> '''Spooky''': I could summon a demon to eat the computer, if you want...
--> '''Commander''': No one is summoning anything to eat any of our equipment and that's final!
--> '''Spooky''': It would just be a very ''small'' demon.
--> '''Commander''': NO!
--> '''Spooky''': I could summon a demon to eat the computer, if you want...
--> '''Commander''': No one is summoning anything to eat any of our equipment and that's final!
--> '''Spooky''': It would just be a very ''small'' demon.
--> '''Commander''': NO!