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* Death gets one when he goes to collect [[spoiler: Mr. Pin]], whose spirit runs up to him, and, for the first time in Death's experience, ''looks back''.
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* Death gets one when he goes to collect [[spoiler: Mr. Pin]], Pin, whose spirit runs up to him, and, for the first time in Death's experience, ''looks back''.
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* Vimes knows his people; on hearing the Watch has a bet on how long it'll be 'till someone kills William, orders Angua to investigate who's running it, and, when she's found out it's Nobby, to stop him.
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* The longer-than-usual footnote dedicated to all those horrible, smug little gits who, just at the end of a meeting ''have'' to bring up the minutes of the last meeting, making everyone stay when they just want to get out. You get the inescapable feeling Sir Pterry might've been venting some personal feelings on the matter.
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* The longer-than-usual footnote dedicated to all those horrible, smug little gits who, just at the end of a meeting ''have'' to bring up the minutes of the last meeting, making everyone stay at least another hour when they just want to get out. You get the inescapable feeling Sir Pterry might've been venting some personal feelings on the matter.
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--> '''William:''' Of all the bone-headed, stubborn, self-centred, arrogant-"
--> '''Otto:''' "But you make up for it in other vays."
--> '''Otto:''' "But you make up for it in other vays."
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--> '''William:''' Of all the bone-headed, stubborn, self-centred, arrogant-"
arrogant-
--> '''Otto:'''"But But you make up for it in other vays."
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* The longer-than-usual footnote dedicated to all those horrible, smug little gits who, just at the end of a meeting ''have'' to bring up the minutes of the last meeting, making everyone stay when they just want to get out. You get the inescapable feeling Sir Pterry might've been venting some personal feelings on the matter.
--> '''Otto:'''
* The longer-than-usual footnote dedicated to all those horrible, smug little gits who, just at the end of a meeting ''have'' to bring up the minutes of the last meeting, making everyone stay when they just want to get out. You get the inescapable feeling Sir Pterry might've been venting some personal feelings on the matter.
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** William buys some steak to use as a blood source for Otto's resurrection. Then tells him its ''intended' use.
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** William buys some steak to use as a blood source for Otto's resurrection. Then tells him its ''intended' ''intended'' use.
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--> "Uh, why does your colleague keep saing 'ing?'"
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--> "Uh, why does your colleague keep saing saying 'ing?'"
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** Made all the funnier a few books later, when the "[=DoG=]" parrot makes a cameo appearance in one of the illustrations for ''Literature/TheLastHero''.
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** William buys some steak to use as a blood source for Otto's resurrection. Then tells him its ''intended' use.
-->"[[spoiler:Dog food]]?"
-->"You did say it was the finest steak."
-->"[[spoiler:Dog food]]?"
-->"You did say it was the finest steak."
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* William suffering a NotSoDifferent moment just after confronting the BigBad - his father.
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* William suffering a NotSoDifferent moment of similarity just after confronting the BigBad - his father.
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* William suffering a NotSoDifferent moment just after confronting the BigBad - his father.
--> '''William:''' Of all the bone-headed, stubborn, self-centred, arrogant-"
--> '''Otto:''' "But you make up for it in other vays."
--> '''William:''' Of all the bone-headed, stubborn, self-centred, arrogant-"
--> '''Otto:''' "But you make up for it in other vays."
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* When searching the recently deceased Mr. Pin's body, William finds a certain object:
-->'''William''': What? A personal Dis-organizer? A killer with a personal Dis-organizer?
-->'''Boddony''': The Things To Do Today section is going to be interesting, then.
-->'''William''': What? A personal Dis-organizer? A killer with a personal Dis-organizer?
-->'''Boddony''': The Things To Do Today section is going to be interesting, then.
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* Terry Pratchett waits until ''well'' into the book to let the readers know that Mr. Tulip isn't cursing like a sailor and does it with a single line of puzzled dialogue from one of the anti-Vetinari conspirators.
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* Terry Pratchett waits until ''well'' into the book ''after'' this exchange to let the readers know that Mr. Tulip isn't cursing like a sailor and does it with a single line of puzzled dialogue from one of the anti-Vetinari conspirators.
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* Terry Pratchett waits until ''well'' into the book to let the readers know that Mr. Tulip isn't cursing like a sailor and does it with a single line of puzzled dialogue from one of the anti-Vetinari conspirators.
--> "Uh, why does your colleague keep saing 'ing?'"
--> "Uh, why does your colleague keep saing 'ing?'"
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* Death wonders who knows what evils lurk inside people's hearts.
--> '''Death of Rats:''' [[AC: Squeak.]]
--> '''Death:''' [[AC: Well, yes, obviously me. I just wondered if there was anyone else.]]
--> '''Death of Rats:''' [[AC: Squeak.]]
--> '''Death:''' [[AC: Well, yes, obviously me. I just wondered if there was anyone else.]]
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** This is also a FandomNod, since Vetinari is acknowledged as having a strictly female fan club.
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* Death gets one when he goes to collect [[spoiler: Mr Pin]], whose spirit runs up to him, and, for the first time in Death's experience, ''looks back''.
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* Death gets one when he goes to collect [[spoiler: Mr Mr. Pin]], whose spirit runs up to him, and, for the first time in Death's experience, ''looks back''.back''.
* Saccharissa and the Dwarves talking down a relapsing Otto using a blood sausage and singing hymns.
* Saccharissa and the Dwarves talking down a relapsing Otto using a blood sausage and singing hymns.
