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* Then when Sophie lists off the reasons why Agatha is "different," among them that she once wrote a story where Snow White got eaten by vultures, that she gave Sophie a dead frog for her birthday and that she dressed as a bride for Halloween.
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* Then when Sophie lists off the reasons why Agatha is "different," among them that she once wrote a story where Snow White got eaten by vultures, that she gave Sophie a dead frog for her birthday and that she dressed as a bride for Halloween.Halloween because "weddings are scary." Notably it's the last one which horrifies Sophie the most.
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* Agatha making her way to Sophie's dorm with great difficulty, fighting off gargoyles and wolves, only to find Sophie singing to her reflection, having flooded the room so she can apply her makeup. Meanwhile Anadil, Dot, Hester and three of Anadil's rats are watching silently, as in shock as Agatha.
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* Agatha making her way to Sophie's dorm with great difficulty, fighting off gargoyles and wolves, wolves and nearly falling to her death a few times - only to find Sophie placidly singing to her reflection, having flooded the room so she can apply her makeup. Meanwhile Anadil, Dot, Hester and three of Anadil's rats are watching silently, her in silence, as in shock as Agatha.
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* Agatha making her way to Sophie's dorm with great difficulty, fighting off gargoyles and wolves, only to find Sophie singing to her reflection, having flooded the room so she can apply her makeup.
--> Three bunk mates and three rats watched from across the room, mouths open in shock.
--> Three bunk mates and three rats watched from across the room, mouths open in shock.
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* Agatha making her way to Sophie's dorm with great difficulty, fighting off gargoyles and wolves, only to find Sophie singing to her reflection, having flooded the room so she can apply her makeup.
--> Three bunk matesmakeup. Meanwhile Anadil, Dot, Hester and three of Anadil's rats watched from across the room, mouths open are watching silently, as in shock.
shock as Agatha.
--> Three bunk mates
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** Anadil is actually reading a book called ''Killing Pretty Girls'' while Hester is reading a book called''Killing Even Prettier Girls.''
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** Anadil is actually reading a book called ''Killing Pretty Girls'' while Girls''. Meanwhile Hester is reading a book called''Killing called ''Killing Even Prettier Girls.''
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** Anadil is actually reading a book called ''Killing Pretty Girls'' while Hester is reading a book called''Killing Even Prettier Girls.''
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open in shock.
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* Agatha making her way to Sophie's dorm with great difficulty, fighting off gargoyles and wolves, only to find Sophie singing to her reflection, having flooded the room so she can apply her makeup.
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* Then when Sophie lists off the reasons why Agatha is "different," among them that she once wrote a story where Snow White got eaten by vultures, that she gave Sophie a dead frog for her birthday and that she dressed as a bride for Halloween.
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"Maybe it smells ulterior motives."
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* In the beginning, when Agatha does ''not'' buy Sophie's schtick:
-->"Agatha, let me in-"
-->"You'll say I smell."
-->"You don't smell."
-->"Then why'd you say it last time?"
-->"Because you smelled last time! Agatha, the cat's hissing-"
"Maybe it smells ulterior motives."
-->"Agatha, let me in-"
-->"You'll say I smell."
-->"You don't smell."
-->"Then why'd you say it last time?"
-->"Because you smelled last time! Agatha, the cat's hissing-"
"Maybe it smells ulterior motives."
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** She plunks her Never's lunch -- a bucket of pig's feet -- down next to him and offers to share it.
** How blatantly she throws Dot under the bus.
** Afterward, with Agatha, she says she thinks it went well. [[InstantlyProvenWrong Then Dot runs up and spills the rumors about how terribly it went.]]
** How blatantly she throws Dot under the bus.
** Afterward, with Agatha, she says she thinks it went well. [[InstantlyProvenWrong Then Dot runs up and spills the rumors about how terribly it went.]]
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** She plunks Against Agatha's protests, Sophie goes up to Tedros where he's shooting marbles and offers to share her Never's lunch -- a bucket of pig's feet -- down feet.
--->"What are you--YOU'LL RUIN EVERYTHI--"\\
But Sophie had already flounced to the Evers' side, plopped next tohim Tedros, and offers to share it.
held out her pail.\\
"Hello, handsome. Want some of my . . . feet?"\\
Tedros misfired his marble into Chaddick's eye. The entire Clearing went silent.
** How blatantly she throws Dot under thebus.
bus to try and cover for herself.
--->'''Sophie:''' You know Dot. Always making things up.\\
'''Tedros:''' She doesn't seem like a liar to me.\\
'''Sophie:''' Oh, she's always lying. Just to get attention. Since she's, you know...\\
'''Tedros:''' ''[raises eyebrows]'' Since she's...\\
'''Sophie:''' Fat.
** Afterward, with Agatha, she saysshe thinks that Tedros didn't say no, so [[TemptingFate maybe it went well. didn't go that badly]]. [[InstantlyProvenWrong Then Dot runs up and spills the rumors about how terribly it went.]]went]]. Somehow, the details of Sophie calling Dot a liar, bringing up the time Tedros landed in poo, and offering him her pig's feet [[GossipEvolution have evolved into]]:
--->'''Dot:''' Everyone's saying you called Tedros a liar, threw poo in his face, and licked his feet!
--->"What are you--YOU'LL RUIN EVERYTHI--"\\
But Sophie had already flounced to the Evers' side, plopped next to
"Hello, handsome. Want some of my . . . feet?"\\
Tedros misfired his marble into Chaddick's eye. The entire Clearing went silent.
** How blatantly she throws Dot under the
--->'''Sophie:''' You know Dot. Always making things up.\\
'''Tedros:''' She doesn't seem like a liar to me.\\
'''Sophie:''' Oh, she's always lying. Just to get attention. Since she's, you know...\\
'''Tedros:''' ''[raises eyebrows]'' Since she's...\\
'''Sophie:''' Fat.
** Afterward, with Agatha, she says
--->'''Dot:''' Everyone's saying you called Tedros a liar, threw poo in his face, and licked his feet!
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* The whole goblin debacle, in which Sophie and Agatha are turned into identical ugly goblins and Tedros has to pick which one is Good. [[spoiler: He picks Agatha, and Sophie goes ballistic.]] The highlights of the fight include Agatha kicking Tedros in the groin and Tedros getting thrown into a pile of manure.
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* The whole goblin debacle, in which Sophie and Agatha are turned into identical ugly goblins and Tedros has to pick which one is Good. [[spoiler: He picks Agatha, and Sophie goes ballistic.]] ballistic. The highlights of the fight include Agatha kicking Tedros in the groin and Tedros getting thrown into a pile of manure.
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** Later, when Tedros confronts Agatha about [[spoiler: how she got him to pick her]], she makes up a curse that turns people as dumb as a donkey's arse.
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* In ''The Last Ever After'', [[spoiler:after Sophie and Agatha learn the history of Vanessa and Callis, as well as the fact that they're twin sisters, they are frozen with shock. Then a hidden door opens, and a recording of Lady Lesso tells the students in the crypt to return to their respective schools in an orderly fashion.]] It's funny in a MoodWhiplash sort of way.
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* In ''The Last Ever After'', [[spoiler:after after Sophie and Agatha learn the history of Vanessa and Callis, as well as the fact that they're twin sisters, they are frozen with shock. Then a hidden door opens, and a recording of Lady Lesso tells the students in the crypt to return to their respective schools in an orderly fashion.]] It's funny in a MoodWhiplash sort of way.
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* In ''The Last Ever After'', [[spoiler:after Sophie and Agatha learn the history of Vanessa and Callis, as well as the fact that they're twin sisters, they are frozen with shock. Then a hidden door opens, and a recording of Lady Lesso tells the students in the crypt to return to their respective schools in an orderly fashion.]] It's funny in a MoodWhiplash sort of way.
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* In ''The Last Ever After'', [[spoiler:after Sophie and Agatha learn the history of Vanessa and Callis, as well as the fact that they're twin sisters, they are frozen with shock. Then a hidden door opens, and a recording of Lady Lesso tells the students in the crypt to return to their respective schools in an orderly fashion.]] It's funny in a MoodWhiplash sort of way.way.
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** Afterward, with Agatha, she says she thinks it went well. Then Dot runs up and says all the rumors about how terribly it went.
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** How blatantly she throws Dot under the bus.
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** She plunks her Never's lunch -- a bucket of pig's feet -- down next to him and offers to share it.
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* Agatha denying she's a princess, and Tedros counting down to when she faints at the sight of blood. "Definitely a princess."
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* Agatha denying she's a princess, and Tedros counting down to when she faints at the sight of her blood. "Definitely a princess."
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* Agatha denying she's a princess, and Tedros counting down to when she faints at the sight of blood. "Definitly "Definitely a princess."
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* Poor Dot had been made to take up residence in a toilet after being kicked out of her room by her former friends. She later tells one of them that she can't eat chocolate anymore because it reminds her of...
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* Poor Dot had been made to take up residence in a toilet after being kicked out of her room by her former friends. She later tells one of them that she can't eat chocolate anymore because it reminds her of...of...
Also, Agatha denying she's a princess, and Tedros counting down when she faints at the sight of blood. "Definetly a princess."
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** Later, when Tedros confronts Agatha about [[spoiler: how she got him to pick her]], she makes up a curse that turns people as dumb as a donkey's arse.
** Later, when Tedros confronts Agatha about [[spoiler: how she got him to pick her]], she makes up a curse that turns people as dumb as a donkey's arse.
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--> '''Lady Lesso''': ''That's the spirit!''spirit!''
* Poor Dot had been made to take up residence in a toilet after being kicked out of her room by her former friends. She later tells one of them that she can't eat chocolate anymore because it reminds her of...
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--> ''Sophie'': '''My '''Sophie''': ''My roommates are trying to kill me!''
-->''Lady Lesso'': '''That's '''Lady Lesso''': ''That's the spirit!'''spirit!''
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--> ''Lady Lesso'': '''That's the spirit!'''