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* The dialogue in general.
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* Bratishka's reaction to Poekhavshiy trying to offer him a plate of "sweet bread" (feces), which leads Bratishka to angrily tell Pokhavshiy to wash himself while the latter is reduced to a blubbering mess.
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* Bratishka's reaction to Poekhavshiy trying to offer him a plate of "sweet bread" (feces), which leads Bratishka to angrily tell Pokhavshiy Poekhavshiy to wash himself while the latter is reduced to a blubbering mess.
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* Bratishka's reaction to Pokhavshiy's story of his first time having sex.
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* Bratishka's reaction to Pokhavshiy's Poekhavshiy's story of his first time having sex.
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* Bratishka's reaction to Pokhavshiy's story of his first sex.
* Bratishka's reaction to Poekhavshiy trying to offer him a plate of "sweet bread", which leds Bratishka to angrily tells Pokhavshiy to wash himself while the latter is reduced to a blubbering mess.
* Poekhavshiy's unusual speech of a country bumpkin makes anything he says sound hilarious.
* Bratishka's reaction to Poekhavshiy trying to offer him a plate of "sweet bread", which leds Bratishka to angrily tells Pokhavshiy to wash himself while the latter is reduced to a blubbering mess.
* Poekhavshiy's unusual speech of a country bumpkin makes anything he says sound hilarious.
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* Bratishka's reaction to Pokhavshiy's story of his first time having sex.
* Bratishka's reaction to Poekhavshiy trying to offer him a plate of "sweetbread", bread" (feces), which leds leads Bratishka to angrily tells tell Pokhavshiy to wash himself while the latter is reduced to a blubbering mess.
* Poekhavshiy'sunusual speech of a country bumpkin makes bumpkin-like dialect and speech patterns make anything he says sound hilarious.hilarious.
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* Bratishka's reaction to Poekhavshiy trying to offer him a plate of "sweet
* Poekhavshiy's
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* Dialogue in general.
* Yepifantsev's reaction to Pakhom's story of his first sex.
* Yepifantsev's reaction to Pakhom trying to feed him with feces.
* Pakhom's unusual speech of a country bumpkin makes anything he says sound hilarious.
* Yepifantsev's reaction to Pakhom's story of his first sex.
* Yepifantsev's reaction to Pakhom trying to feed him with feces.
* Pakhom's unusual speech of a country bumpkin makes anything he says sound hilarious.
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* Dialogue The dialogue in general.
*Yepifantsev's Bratishka's reaction to Pakhom's Pokhavshiy's story of his first sex.
*Yepifantsev's Bratishka's reaction to Pakhom Poekhavshiy trying to feed offer him with feces.
a plate of "sweet bread", which leds Bratishka to angrily tells Pokhavshiy to wash himself while the latter is reduced to a blubbering mess.
*Pakhom's Poekhavshiy's unusual speech of a country bumpkin makes anything he says sound hilarious.
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* The scene where Pakhom tells Yepifantsev how did he lose his virginity, and Yepifantsev's reaction to it.
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* The scene where Pakhom tells Yepifantsev how did he lose his virginity, and Dialogue in general.
* Yepifantsev's reaction toit.Pakhom's story of his first sex.
* Yepifantsev's reaction to Pakhom trying to feed him with feces.
* Pakhom's unusual speech of a country bumpkin makes anything he says sound hilarious.
* Yepifantsev's reaction to
* Yepifantsev's reaction to Pakhom trying to feed him with feces.
* Pakhom's unusual speech of a country bumpkin makes anything he says sound hilarious.
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* The scene where Pakhom tells Yepifantsev how did he lose his virginity, and Yepifantsev's reaction to it.
