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-->'''Steris''': For the insult factor, Waxmillium. Those who were snubbed will be even more aghast to learn Shewrman was here. By including a few bad alloys like him-men and women who are utterly undesirable but who don't realize it-, House Yomen is essentially saying "we'd even prefer spending time with ''these'' people to spending it with you." Very effective. Very nasty.
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-->'''Steris''': For the insult factor, Waxmillium. Those who were snubbed will be even more aghast to learn Shewrman was here. By including a few bad alloys like him-men him -- men and women who are utterly undesirable but who don't realize it-, it-- House Yomen is essentially saying "we'd even prefer spending time with ''these'' people to spending it with you." Very effective. Very nasty.
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* Just about anything Wayne says
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* Just about anything Wayne sayssays:
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'''Voice from the darkness''': Yes, he was simply too handsome, too clever, and too immensely remarkable in all aspects of his existence to allow to live. It took a hundred men to bring him down, and he killed all but one. His last words were "Tell Wax...that he's a total git...and he still owes me five notes.\\
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'''Voice from the darkness''': Yes, he was simply too handsome, too clever, and too immensely remarkable in all aspects of his existence to allow to live. It took a hundred men to bring him down, and he killed all but one. His last words were "Tell Wax...that he's a total git...and he still owes me five notes.\\"\\
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* Steris greets Wax at a party and warns him to stay clear of a man who she calls "an infamously dreadful party guest" and "probably the least likable person in all of upper society."
-->'''Wax''': So why is he here?
-->'''Steris''': For the insult factor, Waxmillium. Those who were snubbed will be even more aghast to learn Shewrman was here. By including a few bad alloys like him-men and women who are utterly undesirable but who don't realize it-, House Yomen is essentially saying "we'd even prefer spending time with ''these'' people to spending it with you." Very effective. Very nasty.
-->'''Wax''': So why is he here?
-->'''Steris''': For the insult factor, Waxmillium. Those who were snubbed will be even more aghast to learn Shewrman was here. By including a few bad alloys like him-men and women who are utterly undesirable but who don't realize it-, House Yomen is essentially saying "we'd even prefer spending time with ''these'' people to spending it with you." Very effective. Very nasty.
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** Doubly funny because his entire character arc up to this point has been trying to be more civilized. Old habits die hard, indeed...
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** Doubly funny because his entire character arc up to this point has been trying to be more civilized. Old habits die hard, indeed... Also, he had more guns.
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** Later on, after Wax saves her from kidnapping, she offers to amend the plan, noting that a RescueRomance is a good excuse for stepping up the timetable considerably. When he points out that he intends to continue playing the gunslinger-lawkeeper, she simply notes, "Every gentleman needs a hobby," and points out that it's better than the self-indulgences of some of the gentlemen she knows -- and because his gunslinging saved her life, she's not really in a position to complain.
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** Later on, after Wax saves her from kidnapping, she offers to amend the plan, noting that a RescueRomance is a good excuse for stepping up the timetable considerably. When he points out that he intends to continue playing the gunslinger-lawkeeper, she simply notes, "Every gentleman needs a hobby," and points out that it's better than the self-indulgences of some of the gentlemen she knows -- and because his gunslinging saved her life, she's not really in a position to complain. There's also the implication that she was ''really turned on'' by him rescuing her (adding to the funny, and has started falling in love with him, adding some heartwarming.
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* At one point, Wax claims not to have a gun in a dangerous situation. Once it escalates, he pulls out a gun, and Wayne accuses him of lying. Wax's response is that he wasn't lying--he never brings ''a'' gun anywhere. Then he [[ExactWords pulls out another]].
** Doubly funny because his entire character arc up to this point has been trying to be more civilized. Old habits die hard, indeed...
** Doubly funny because his entire character arc up to this point has been trying to be more civilized. Old habits die hard, indeed...
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** Especially since the curse is cut short by his being shot in the face.
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** Especially since the curse is cut short by his being [[BloodyHilarious shot in the face.]]
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* According to Wax, everything Wayne says has to be taken with a pinch of copper. He claimed to know the names of all the Twinborn combinations and having stolen a horse that could burp perfectly musical notes.
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** Better yet, this pun is purely for the reader's benefit, as [[AllThereInTheManual Scadriel has no moon]].
