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*** Doubles as heartwarming as you realize Zach is being an idiot to cheer Aelita up.
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*** Doubles as heartwarming as you realize Zach is being an idiot to cheer Aelita up.up.
* After Zach fights his way through cyborgs he is greeted by this line from Aelita
** "The front door was unlocked."
* After Zach fights his way through cyborgs he is greeted by this line from Aelita
** "The front door was unlocked."
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** *both*"PIZZA!!!!"
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** *both*"PIZZA!!!!"*both*"PIZZA!!!!"
* When Zach meets Aelita is worthy of mention here, especially since she is going through a rougher time than depicted in her own series.
** "You know what it's like when you lose a first love?" "Well... Yes and no. Does pizza count as a lover?" "Sure, why not?"
*** Doubles as heartwarming as you realize Zach is being an idiot to cheer Aelita up.
* When Zach meets Aelita is worthy of mention here, especially since she is going through a rougher time than depicted in her own series.
** "You know what it's like when you lose a first love?" "Well... Yes and no. Does pizza count as a lover?" "Sure, why not?"
*** Doubles as heartwarming as you realize Zach is being an idiot to cheer Aelita up.
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* "Is that cheese I smell... you can't take a hint, run!"
* Jacob calls shotgun in a car, but Monica uses her new cyborg abilities to beat him to it.
* When Zach literally failed to notice Melissa likes him in Chapter 14.
* Self explanatory here but:
** "I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING!"
* Jacob calls shotgun in a car, but Monica uses her new cyborg abilities to beat him to it.
* When Zach literally failed to notice Melissa likes him in Chapter 14.
* Self explanatory here but:
** "I HAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING!"
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* "Is that cheese I smell... The hunter machines have plasma cutters instead of standard issue energy blades. It seems bad but results in this gem.
** "Why does it have a PLASMA CUTTER!?"
** "Oh youcan't take a hint, run!"
know... for cutting... people... specifically you."
*Jacob calls shotgun in a car, but Monica uses her new cyborg abilities to beat him to it.
* WhenA good deal of dialogue between Zach literally failed to notice Melissa likes him in Chapter 14.
* Self explanatory here but:
and Hopey can be this.
** "IHAVE NO IDEA WHAT I'M DOING!"hope Lucy is okay..."
** "Pizza."
** *both*"PIZZA!!!!"
** "Why does it have a PLASMA CUTTER!?"
** "Oh you
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* When
* Self explanatory here but:
** "I
** "Pizza."
** *both*"PIZZA!!!!"
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* The book contains many references to other media, and if one can understand they can be quite funny
* Minnie is able to understand why Zach left Nyu, and why people blame her. Funnily enough she asks Nyu what she could have possible done to deserve this.
* Zach fights Him in what Him keeps stating to be the maliest fight between manly men of manly badassery (actually what he said) only for Zach to look confused and state he thought he was fighting a woman.
* Zach and Monica can both punch at hyperspeed during the Rising saga, so when they both duke it out they just so happen to block each attack the other makes DESPITE neither of them actually selecting a target area for the punch.
* Zach and Hopey in general. When these two finally get to be best friends they are quite hilarious, one example:
** "I hear you like Minnie."
** "So?"
** "Is that Necrophilia?"
** "Probably.... where were you going with this?"
** beat
** "Thatta way!"
* Minnie is able to understand why Zach left Nyu, and why people blame her. Funnily enough she asks Nyu what she could have possible done to deserve this.
* Zach fights Him in what Him keeps stating to be the maliest fight between manly men of manly badassery (actually what he said) only for Zach to look confused and state he thought he was fighting a woman.
* Zach and Monica can both punch at hyperspeed during the Rising saga, so when they both duke it out they just so happen to block each attack the other makes DESPITE neither of them actually selecting a target area for the punch.
* Zach and Hopey in general. When these two finally get to be best friends they are quite hilarious, one example:
** "I hear you like Minnie."
** "So?"
** "Is that Necrophilia?"
** "Probably.... where were you going with this?"
** beat
** "Thatta way!"
to:
* Minnie is able to understand why Zach left Nyu, and why people blame her. Funnily enough she asks Nyu what she could have possible done to deserve this.
* Zach fights Him in what Him keeps stating to be the maliest fight between manly men of manly badassery (actually what he said) only for Zach to look confused and state he thought he was fighting a woman.
* Zach and Monica can both punch at hyperspeed during the
* Zach
** "I hear you like Minnie."
** "So?"
**
* "Is that
** "Probably.... where were
* Jacob calls shotgun in a car, but Monica uses her new cyborg abilities to beat him to it.
* When Zach literally failed to notice Melissa likes him in Chapter 14.
* Self explanatory here but:
**
** "Thatta way!"
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* The book contains many references to other media, and if one can understand they can be quite funny
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* The book contains many references to other media, and if one can understand they can be quite funnyfunny
* Minnie is able to understand why Zach left Nyu, and why people blame her. Funnily enough she asks Nyu what she could have possible done to deserve this.
* Zach fights Him in what Him keeps stating to be the maliest fight between manly men of manly badassery (actually what he said) only for Zach to look confused and state he thought he was fighting a woman.
* Zach and Monica can both punch at hyperspeed during the Rising saga, so when they both duke it out they just so happen to block each attack the other makes DESPITE neither of them actually selecting a target area for the punch.
* Zach and Hopey in general. When these two finally get to be best friends they are quite hilarious, one example:
** "I hear you like Minnie."
** "So?"
** "Is that Necrophilia?"
** "Probably.... where were you going with this?"
** beat
** "Thatta way!"
* Minnie is able to understand why Zach left Nyu, and why people blame her. Funnily enough she asks Nyu what she could have possible done to deserve this.
* Zach fights Him in what Him keeps stating to be the maliest fight between manly men of manly badassery (actually what he said) only for Zach to look confused and state he thought he was fighting a woman.
* Zach and Monica can both punch at hyperspeed during the Rising saga, so when they both duke it out they just so happen to block each attack the other makes DESPITE neither of them actually selecting a target area for the punch.
* Zach and Hopey in general. When these two finally get to be best friends they are quite hilarious, one example:
** "I hear you like Minnie."
** "So?"
** "Is that Necrophilia?"
** "Probably.... where were you going with this?"
** beat
** "Thatta way!"
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* When Hopey stabs The Destroyer in the toe, he gets a free 5 second flight
* Hopey fires a nuke at The Destroyer, saying he found it, but it doesnt explode, causing relief but to Hopey, the ultimate dissapointment
* Zach first goes [[SuperMode super]] and smashes face first into a wall
* Hopey fires a nuke at The Destroyer, saying he found it, but it doesnt explode, causing relief but to Hopey, the ultimate dissapointment
* Zach first goes [[SuperMode super]] and smashes face first into a wall
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* When Hopey stabs The Destroyer in the toe, he gets a free 5 second flight
* Hopey fires a nuke at The Destroyer, saying he found it, but it doesnt explode, causing relief butbook contains many references to Hopey, the ultimate dissapointment
* Zach first goes [[SuperMode super]]other media, and smashes face first into a wallif one can understand they can be quite funny
* Hopey fires a nuke at The Destroyer, saying he found it, but it doesnt explode, causing relief but
* Zach first goes [[SuperMode super]]
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* Hopey is immortal, so when he is hit by a truck people dont seem affected as he ressurects
* Tom has the power to make his face into a troll face... and perform the Lightning fart
* Kristine screams "I HATE YOU!" at Zach, but Matt Kisses her and she screams "I LOVE YOU... wait... ah fuck you!"
* Tom has the power to make his face into a troll face... and perform the Lightning fart
* Kristine screams "I HATE YOU!" at Zach, but Matt Kisses her and she screams "I LOVE YOU... wait... ah fuck you!"
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* When Hopey stabs The Destroyer in the toe, he gets a free 5 second flight
* Hopeyis immortal, so when fires a nuke at The Destroyer, saying he is hit by a truck people dont seem affected as he ressurects
* Tom hasfound it, but it doesnt explode, causing relief but to Hopey, the power to make his ultimate dissapointment
* Zach first goes [[SuperMode super]] and smashes face first into atroll face... and perform the Lightning fart
* Kristine screams "I HATE YOU!" at Zach, but Matt Kisses her and she screams "I LOVE YOU... wait... ah fuck you!"wall
* Hopey
* Tom has
* Zach first goes [[SuperMode super]] and smashes face first into a
* Kristine screams "I HATE YOU!" at Zach, but Matt Kisses her and she screams "I LOVE YOU... wait... ah fuck you!"
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* Tom has the power to make his face into a troll face... and perdorm the Lightning fart
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* Tom has the power to make his face into a troll face... and perdorm perform the Lightning fartfart
* Kristine screams "I HATE YOU!" at Zach, but Matt Kisses her and she screams "I LOVE YOU... wait... ah fuck you!"
* Kristine screams "I HATE YOU!" at Zach, but Matt Kisses her and she screams "I LOVE YOU... wait... ah fuck you!"
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* Hopey is immortal, so when he is hit by a truck people dont seem affected as he ressurects
* Tom has the power to make his face into a troll face... and perdorm the Lightning fart
* Tom has the power to make his face into a troll face... and perdorm the Lightning fart
