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* Harry getting the Unravelling from [[spoiler:Aurora]] and yelling [[WesternAnimation/WileECoyoteAndTheRoadRunner "meep meep!"]] before running off.
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* Harry getting the Unravelling from [[spoiler:Aurora]] Aurora and yelling [[WesternAnimation/WileECoyoteAndTheRoadRunner "meep meep!"]] before running off.
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* When Ebenezar and Martha Liberty are discussing the amount of Americans already on the Senior Council, Eb figures that he'll want someone who isn't. Listens-to-Wind drily puts in that he's the ''only'' American, "unlike the rest of you Johnny-come-latelies."
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* Mab, [[PhysicalGod The Queen]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromVeryFast of Air and Darkness]], approaches Harry to congratulate him over his victory. Harry is so exhausted by this time, the only response he can muster is weary "Go away, Mab", without even looking at her. And she finds it ActuallyPrettyFunny.
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* Mab, [[PhysicalGod The Queen]] [[NamesToRunAwayFromVeryFast of Air and Darkness]], approaches Harry to congratulate him over his victory. Harry is so exhausted by this time, the only response he can muster is a weary "Go away, Mab", without even looking at her. And she finds it ActuallyPrettyFunny.
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* Mab's response to Harry confirming that Lloyd Slate has betrayed the Winter Court and sided with Aurora. Declaring that it is the last time she lets Maeve hire the help.
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* Mab's response to Harry confirming that Lloyd Slate has betrayed the Winter Court and sided with Aurora. Declaring that it is it’s the last time she lets Maeve hire the help.
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* Dresden storming off from the council, in the blue beetle:
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* Dresden storming off from the council, in the blue beetle:Blue Beetle:
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* Mab's response to Harry confirming that Lloyd Slate has betrayed the Winter Court and sided with Aurora. Declaring that it is the last time she let's Maeve hire the help.
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* Mab's response to Harry confirming that Lloyd Slate has betrayed the Winter Court and sided with Aurora. Declaring that it is the last time she let's Maeve hire the help.
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** To put this one in perspective: Harry was in an area of the Nevernever ''teeming'' with warriors of both Summer and Winter Courts, about to take part in a battle that LITERALLY held the balance of the entire world at stake... and he has the cojones to say that, particularly when considering that the fae ''hate'' being called faeries. CrazyAwesome to the extreme.
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** To put this one in perspective: Harry was in an area of the Nevernever ''teeming'' with warriors of both Summer and Winter Courts, about to take part in a battle that LITERALLY held the balance of the entire world at stake... and he has the cojones to say that, particularly when considering that the fae ''hate'' being called faeries. CrazyAwesome CrazyIsCool to the extreme.
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-->The plant monster—No, wait. I couldn’t possibly refer to that thing as a “plant monster.” I’d be a laughingstock. It’s hard to give a monster a cool name on the spur of the moment.
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-->The plant monster—No, wait. I couldn’t couldn't possibly refer to that thing as a “plant "plant monster.” I’d " I'd be a laughingstock. It’s It's hard to give a monster a cool name on the spur of the moment.
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'''Murphy''': Harry, that’s not a plan, it’s a Looney Tune.
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'''Murphy''': Harry, that’s that's not a plan, it’s it's a Looney Tune.
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“Hi,” I said. King of wit, that’s me.\\
The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded, “Greetings, Wizard Dresden. Am I interrupting anything?”\\
My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded, “Greetings, Wizard Dresden. Am I interrupting anything?”\\
My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
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The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded,
My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips.
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* How did Harry work out that the toads from the first chapter were real? Simple - the one he'd picked up before the attempt on his life had crapped in his hand.
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* Mister [[CatScare startling]] Morgan.
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>The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded, “Greetings, Wizard Dresden. Am I interrupting anything?”\\
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-->"Research trip in the Yucatan"
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-->"Living under the Polar Ice Cap"
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-->"He Got REAL Married"
-->"Pyramid Sitting" (Whatever that was)
-->"Living under the Polar Ice Cap"
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-->"Research trip in the Yucatan"
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-->I folded my arms and had them sternly crossed over my chest when a tall, shrouded form emerged from the mist below. Dark robes swirled, a deep hood concealed, and a gloved hand gripped a wooden staff.
-->The Gatekeeper turned his head toward me and became still for a moment. Then he reached his other gloved hand into his hood. He made a strangled, muffled sound.
-->“Hi,” I said. King of wit, that’s me.
-->The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded, “Greetings, Wizard Dresden. Am I interrupting anything?”
-->My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
-->The Gatekeeper turned his head toward me and became still for a moment. Then he reached his other gloved hand into his hood. He made a strangled, muffled sound.
-->“Hi,” I said. King of wit, that’s me.
-->The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded, “Greetings, Wizard Dresden. Am I interrupting anything?”
-->My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
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-->I folded my arms and had them sternly crossed over my chest when a tall, shrouded form emerged from the mist below. Dark robes swirled, a deep hood concealed, and a gloved hand gripped a wooden staff.
-->Thestaff.\\
The Gatekeeper turned his head toward me and became still for a moment. Then he reached his other gloved hand into his hood. He made a strangled, muffledsound.
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“Hi,” I said. King of wit, that’sme.
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-->Myanything?”\\
My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
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My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
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-->I folded my arms and had them sternly crossed over my chest when a tall, shrouded form emerged from the mist below. Dark robes swirled, a deep hood concealed, and a gloved hand gripped a wooden staff.
-->The Gatekeeper turned his head toward me and became still for a moment. Then he reached his other gloved hand into his hood. He made a strangled, muffled sound.
-->“Hi,” I said. King of wit, that’s me.
-->The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded, “Greetings, Wizard Dresden. Am I interrupting anything?”
-->My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
-->I folded my arms and had them sternly crossed over my chest when a tall, shrouded form emerged from the mist below. Dark robes swirled, a deep hood concealed, and a gloved hand gripped a wooden staff.
-->The Gatekeeper turned his head toward me and became still for a moment. Then he reached his other gloved hand into his hood. He made a strangled, muffled sound.
-->“Hi,” I said. King of wit, that’s me.
-->The Gatekeeper sounded as though he had to swallow half a gallon of laughter as he responded, “Greetings, Wizard Dresden. Am I interrupting anything?”
-->My other boot fell off and plopped to the ground. I regarded my dangling, muddy sock-feet with pursed lips. “Nothing all that important.”
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** Harry finally figures out they’re real because one of them [[ToiletHumour shat on him.]]
