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* Yuki in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PteroSoarer dinosaur]] nest.
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* Yuki in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PteroSoarer dinosaur]] dinosaur nest.
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** Yuki attempting to use her futuristic money card in a "modern" machine. Only for alarms to start ringing as she flees in a panic.
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** Yuki attempting to use her futuristic money card in a "modern" machine. Only for alarms to start ringing as she flees in a panic.panic.
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* Episode 16 opens with Yuki eyeing a fancy old fashioned coffee maker. Though she worries she wont have enough money to buy it.
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* Episode 16 opens with Yuki eyeing a fancy old fashioned coffee maker. Though she worries she wont won't have enough money to buy it.
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** Yuki attempting to use her futuristic money card in a machine. Only for alarms to start ringing as she flees in a panic.
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** Yuki attempting to use her futuristic money card in a "modern" machine. Only for alarms to start ringing as she flees in a panic.
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--> '''Grospoliner''': Your a lot bigger since the last time I saw you '[[EmbarrassingNickname Little Miss]]' Rally.
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--> '''Grospoliner''': Your You're a lot bigger since the last time I saw you '[[EmbarrassingNickname Little Miss]]' Rally.
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--> '''Grospoliner''': Help me my master!
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--> '''Grospoliner''': Help me me, my master!
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* Episode 2 "Decide", Kiddy telling Yuki that she wants to have lunch in Katsumi's fancy hotel restaurant. She then says they can put it down as a "business expense".
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* Episode 2 "Decide", Kiddy telling Yuki that she wants to have lunch in Katsumi's fancy hotel restaurant. She then says they can put it down as a "business expense"."[[BlatantLies business expense]]".
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* Episode 16 opens with Yuki eyeing a fancying old fashioned coffee maker. Though she worries she wont have enough money to buy it.
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* Episode 16 opens with Yuki eyeing a fancying fancy old fashioned coffee maker. Though she worries she wont have enough money to buy it.
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--> '''Yuki''': (''as she looks back at the coffee maker, sitting in the window'') Don't look at me like that!
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--> '''Yuki''': (''as she looks back at the coffee maker, sitting in the window'') Don't look at me like that!that!
** Yuki attempting to use her futuristic money card in a machine. Only for alarms to start ringing as she flees in a panic.
** Yuki attempting to use her futuristic money card in a machine. Only for alarms to start ringing as she flees in a panic.
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* Yuik in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PteroSoarer dinosaur]] nest.
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* Yuik Yuki in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PteroSoarer dinosaur]] nest.nest.
* Episode 16 opens with Yuki eyeing a fancying old fashioned coffee maker. Though she worries she wont have enough money to buy it.
--> '''Yuki''': (''as she looks back at the coffee maker, sitting in the window'') Don't look at me like that!
* Episode 16 opens with Yuki eyeing a fancying old fashioned coffee maker. Though she worries she wont have enough money to buy it.
--> '''Yuki''': (''as she looks back at the coffee maker, sitting in the window'') Don't look at me like that!
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* Yuik in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PetroFlyer dinosaur]] nest.
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* Yuik in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PetroFlyer [[PteroSoarer dinosaur]] nest.
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--> '''Grospoliner''': Help me my master!
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--> '''Grospoliner''': Help me my master!master!
* Yuik in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PetroFlyer dinosaur]] nest.
* Yuik in episode 11 spots Lebia's Rhododendron bush on top of her roof. Then suggest it's a [[PetroFlyer dinosaur]] nest.
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--> '''Rally''': You can drop the "Little Miss", especially in the office.
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--> '''Rally''': You can drop the "Little Miss", especially in the office.office.
* Episode 9 starts with the AMP ladies all gushing over Grospoliner, Yuki even thinks he's adorable. The poor magic blade is then manhandled by everyone, prompting it to plead with Katsumi for help.
--> '''Grospoliner''': Help me my master!
* Episode 9 starts with the AMP ladies all gushing over Grospoliner, Yuki even thinks he's adorable. The poor magic blade is then manhandled by everyone, prompting it to plead with Katsumi for help.
--> '''Grospoliner''': Help me my master!
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* Near the beginning of episode 7, everyone lightly teases Kiddy about her crush on Ralph.
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* Near the beginning of episode 7, everyone lightly teases Kiddy about her crush on Ralph.Ralph.
* Episode 8, Grospoliner and Rally acting like old friends. Also counts as a heartwarming moment.
--> '''Grospoliner''': Your a lot bigger since the last time I saw you '[[EmbarrassingNickname Little Miss]]' Rally.
--> '''Rally''': You can drop the "Little Miss", especially in the office.
* Episode 8, Grospoliner and Rally acting like old friends. Also counts as a heartwarming moment.
--> '''Grospoliner''': Your a lot bigger since the last time I saw you '[[EmbarrassingNickname Little Miss]]' Rally.
--> '''Rally''': You can drop the "Little Miss", especially in the office.
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--> '''Katsumi''': But wouldn't it be weird if they ended up on a date tonight...?
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--> '''Katsumi''': But wouldn't it be weird if they ended up on a date tonight...??
* Near the beginning of episode 7, everyone lightly teases Kiddy about her crush on Ralph.
* Near the beginning of episode 7, everyone lightly teases Kiddy about her crush on Ralph.
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* Episode 6 opens with a tense confrontation between Kiddy and Ralph. Both then agree they never want to see each other again and leave in a huff. Then [[TheMatchmaker Katsumi]] of all people then gets a mischievous looking smile on her face.
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* Episode 6 opens with a tense confrontation between Kiddy and Ralph. Both then agree they never want to see each other again and leave in a huff. Then [[TheMatchmaker Katsumi]] of all people then gets a mischievous looking smile on her face.
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** During the actual party, [[NeatFreak Nami]] spends most of her time cleaning up after everybody rather than having a good time.
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** During the actual party, [[NeatFreak Nami]] spends most of her time cleaning up after everybody rather than having a good time.time.
* Episode 6 opens with a tense confrontation between Kiddy and Ralph. Both then agree they never want to see each other again and leave in a huff. Then [[TheMatchmaker Katsumi]] of all people then gets a mischievous looking smile on her face.
--> '''Katsumi''': But wouldn't it be weird if they ended up on a date tonight...?
* Episode 6 opens with a tense confrontation between Kiddy and Ralph. Both then agree they never want to see each other again and leave in a huff. Then [[TheMatchmaker Katsumi]] of all people then gets a mischievous looking smile on her face.
--> '''Katsumi''': But wouldn't it be weird if they ended up on a date tonight...?
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--> '''Nani''': (''rings a bell with a glum expression on her face'') Well at least that's better than being called unmemorable.
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--> '''Nani''': '''Nami''': (''rings a bell with a glum expression on her face'') Well at least that's better than being called unmemorable.
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--> '''Yuki''': I'm the conventional one: part 2. What am I, an extra?
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--> '''Yuki''': I'm the conventional one: part 2. What am I, an extra?extra?
** During the actual party, [[NeatFreak Nami]] spends most of her time cleaning up after everybody rather than having a good time.
** During the actual party, [[NeatFreak Nami]] spends most of her time cleaning up after everybody rather than having a good time.
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--> '''Katsumi''': I'm with you.
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--> '''Katsumi''': I'm with you.you.
** Everybody's reactions when they learn what the people in the other precincts think of them.
--> '''Katsumi''': (''looking glum'') Hey Kiddy, do I really seem glum?
--> '''Kiddy''': (''outraged'') How about me? Am I a good-for-nothing thug!?
--> '''Nani''': (''rings a bell with a glum expression on her face'') Well at least that's better than being called unmemorable.
--> '''Lebia''': And they say that ''I'm'' the conventional one.
--> '''Yuki''': I'm the conventional one: part 2. What am I, an extra?
** Everybody's reactions when they learn what the people in the other precincts think of them.
--> '''Katsumi''': (''looking glum'') Hey Kiddy, do I really seem glum?
--> '''Kiddy''': (''outraged'') How about me? Am I a good-for-nothing thug!?
--> '''Nani''': (''rings a bell with a glum expression on her face'') Well at least that's better than being called unmemorable.
--> '''Lebia''': And they say that ''I'm'' the conventional one.
--> '''Yuki''': I'm the conventional one: part 2. What am I, an extra?
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* Episode 5 opens with the AMP ladies having to apologize for getting involved with a crime that actually had nothing to do with a Lucifer Hawk. When Ralph arrives and tells them their apology isn't good enough, Kiddy recognizes him as the cop who gave them a hard time on a previous case. She then proceeds to grab the poor man in a NeckLift, before tossing him several feet. Much to the shock and embarrassment of the other girls.
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* Episode 5 opens with the AMP ladies having to apologize for getting involved with a crime that actually had nothing to do with a Lucifer Hawk. When Ralph arrives and tells them their apology isn't good enough, Kiddy recognizes him as the cop who gave them a hard time on a previous case. She then proceeds to grab the poor man in a NeckLift, before tossing him several feet. Much to the shock and embarrassment of the other girls.girls.
** The exasperated expressions on each of the girls' faces as they write out an apology for their interference.
--> '''Yuki''': I can't help thinking it was a mistake to apologize in the first place.
--> '''Katsumi''': I'm with you.
** The exasperated expressions on each of the girls' faces as they write out an apology for their interference.
--> '''Yuki''': I can't help thinking it was a mistake to apologize in the first place.
--> '''Katsumi''': I'm with you.
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** Katsumi's reaction when Roy tells her she needs to ditch her police uniform.
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** Katsumi's reaction when Roy tells her she needs to ditch her police uniform.uniform.
* Episode 5 opens with the AMP ladies having to apologize for getting involved with a crime that actually had nothing to do with a Lucifer Hawk. When Ralph arrives and tells them their apology isn't good enough, Kiddy recognizes him as the cop who gave them a hard time on a previous case. She then proceeds to grab the poor man in a NeckLift, before tossing him several feet. Much to the shock and embarrassment of the other girls.
* Episode 5 opens with the AMP ladies having to apologize for getting involved with a crime that actually had nothing to do with a Lucifer Hawk. When Ralph arrives and tells them their apology isn't good enough, Kiddy recognizes him as the cop who gave them a hard time on a previous case. She then proceeds to grab the poor man in a NeckLift, before tossing him several feet. Much to the shock and embarrassment of the other girls.
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** Katsumi and Roy's reaction when she accidentally shoots a "friendly" target on the practice range.
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** Katsumi and Roy's reaction when she accidentally shoots a "friendly" target on the practice range.range.
** Katsumi's reaction when Roy tells her she needs to ditch her police uniform.
** Katsumi's reaction when Roy tells her she needs to ditch her police uniform.
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--> '''Roy''': I always wanted to ride one of these!
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--> '''Roy''': I always wanted to ride one of these!these!
** Katsumi and Roy's reaction when she accidentally shoots a "friendly" target on the practice range.
** Katsumi and Roy's reaction when she accidentally shoots a "friendly" target on the practice range.
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** Roy's rather {{Adrokable}} reaction to Katsumi's [[CoolCar Spinner]].
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** Roy's rather {{Adrokable}} {{Adorkable}} reaction to Katsumi's [[CoolCar Spinner]].
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* Episode 3, Katsumi and Roy meeting each other for the first time. Neither one seems particularly offended, just really confused.
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* Episode 3, Katsumi and Roy meeting each other for the first time. Neither one seems particularly offended, just really confused.confused.
** Roy's rather {{Adrokable}} reaction to Katsumi's [[CoolCar Spinner]].
--> '''Roy''': I always wanted to ride one of these!
** Roy's rather {{Adrokable}} reaction to Katsumi's [[CoolCar Spinner]].
--> '''Roy''': I always wanted to ride one of these!
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* Episode 2 "Decide", Kiddy telling Yuki that she wants to have lunch in Katsumi's fancy hotel restaurant. She then says they can put it down as a "business expense".
* Episode 3, Katsumi and Roy meeting each other for the first time. Neither one seems particularly offended, just really confused.
* Episode 3, Katsumi and Roy meeting each other for the first time. Neither one seems particularly offended, just really confused.
