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changed Gizel to Giselle. Per new translation


* The Abel Search Party is a source of comedy gold. Watching a group of adults and teens descendants of a clan renowned for their magical prowess descends into a sorry state from 2 days of walking, sleeping outdoors wary of wildlife and magic beasts, and [[HomeSweetHome missing their homes]]. Merely being doused by '''rain''' made them behave like their ancestors' wrath has descended upon them, despite making a shelter with earth magic. They are enough of a reason to read the "[[SwitchingPOV Side: Gizel]]" chapters to just to see how [[SurroundedByIdiots Gizel]] is faring with them.

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* The Abel Search Party is a source of comedy gold. Watching a group of adults and teens descendants of a clan renowned for their magical prowess descends into a sorry state from 2 days of walking, sleeping outdoors wary of wildlife and magic beasts, and [[HomeSweetHome missing their homes]]. Merely being doused by '''rain''' made them behave like their ancestors' wrath has descended upon them, despite making a shelter with earth magic. They are enough of a reason to read the "[[SwitchingPOV Side: Gizel]]" Giselle]]" chapters to just to see how [[SurroundedByIdiots Gizel]] Giselle]] is faring with them.



* in "Gizel and the Evil Spirit", we get to see the meeting between [[{{Yandere}} Gizel]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIWillDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:
-->'''Narrator''': Even Sim, who had a far longer life span than most people and had once escaped from a burning castle with the screams of people screaming in despair, [[HorrifyingTheHorror was horrified by Gizel's condition]].

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* in "Gizel "Giselle and the Evil Spirit", we get to see the meeting between [[{{Yandere}} Gizel]] Giselle]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's Giselle's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel Giselle goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIWillDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:
-->'''Narrator''': Even Sim, who had a far longer life span than most people and had once escaped from a burning castle with the screams of people screaming in despair, [[HorrifyingTheHorror was horrified by Gizel's Giselle's condition]].
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* [[PsychoSupporter Penrath]], after he and Altamir grabs Abel by the shoulder and the former shaking the latter for more [[MagiBabble magic theory talk]], comments that [[ShippingGoggles they are getting along very well]] and that [[PairTheSmartOnes he sees Alta as a worthy campanion to Abel]], and giving a mocking look to [[LoveInterest Mea]]. Then, he [[SerialEscalation begins listing more candidates in history he thinks are worthy of Abel]], names and species Abel never heard about... until he reaches this before Abel asks him to stop:

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* [[PsychoSupporter Penrath]], after he and Altamir grabs Abel by the shoulder and the former shaking the latter for more [[MagiBabble magic theory talk]], comments that [[ShippingGoggles [[ShipperOnDeck they are getting along very well]] and that [[PairTheSmartOnes he sees Alta as a worthy campanion to Abel]], and giving a mocking look to [[LoveInterest Mea]]. Then, he [[SerialEscalation begins listing more candidates in history he thinks are worthy of Abel]], names and species Abel never heard about... until he reaches this before Abel asks him to stop:
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* As Abel overwhelms Collector with his "[[WhipItGood Abel whip]]", the latter summons his beast, “[[TreaNts Universal Hardwood Behemoth]]”, a [[{{Kaiju}} 40 meter across huge tree beast]], with black leaves with strength of metal acting as its fur, for Collector to hide inside its thicket. [[PrideBeforeAFall Right after Collector boasts]] its beast's NighInvulnerability, Abel's metallic whip strikes the behemoth, then:

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* As Abel overwhelms Collector with his "[[WhipItGood Abel whip]]", "Abel whip", the latter summons his beast, “[[TreaNts Universal Hardwood Behemoth]]”, a [[{{Kaiju}} 40 meter across huge tree beast]], with black leaves with strength of metal acting as its fur, for Collector to hide inside its thicket. [[PrideBeforeAFall Right after Collector boasts]] its beast's NighInvulnerability, Abel's metallic whip strikes the behemoth, then:
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* in “Gizel and the Evil Spirit”, we get to see the meeting between [[{{Yandere Gizel}}]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIWillDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:

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* in “Gizel and the Evil Spirit”, we get to see the meeting between [[{{Yandere Gizel}}]] [[{{Yandere}} Gizel]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIWillDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:
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* in “Gizel and the Evil Spirit”, we get to see the meeting between [[Yandere Gizel after Abel disappeared]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIWillDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:

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* in “Gizel and the Evil Spirit”, we get to see the meeting between [[Yandere Gizel after Abel disappeared]] [[{{Yandere Gizel}}]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIWillDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:
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-->'''Narrator''': Even Sim, who had a far longer life span than most people and had once escaped from a burning castle with the screams of people screaming in despair, [[HorrifyingTheHorror was horrified by Giselle's condition]].

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-->'''Narrator''': Even Sim, who had a far longer life span than most people and had once escaped from a burning castle with the screams of people screaming in despair, [[HorrifyingTheHorror was horrified by Giselle's Gizel's condition]].
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* in “Gizel and the Evil Spirit”, we get to see the meeting between [[Yandere Gizel after Abel disappeared]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIllDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:

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* in “Gizel and the Evil Spirit”, we get to see the meeting between [[Yandere Gizel after Abel disappeared]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIllDoAnything [[PleaseIWillDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:

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-->'''Mea''': “……In Mea’s opinion, this Abel is [[HistoricalBeautyUpgrade a little too muscular]] for me.”

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-->'''Mea''': “……In Mea’s opinion, this Abel is [[HistoricalBeautyUpgrade a little too muscular]] for me.
!!From the Light Novel's short stories
* in “Gizel and the Evil Spirit”, we get to see the meeting between [[Yandere Gizel after Abel disappeared]] and [[TheCorruptor Sim]], complete with a narrated short summary of [[TheDreaded Sim's history]] with destroying kingdoms through manipulation of those in power [[ForTheEvulz for the heck of it]]. Sim goes to spy on Gizel's as she sits in the Belek's house garden holding one of Abel's carved Ortems, [[TheMourningAfter depressed about her brother's escape from the village]]. Just as Sim muses about using her to control Abel, Gizel goes into a heartbroken maiden's speech about wanting her brother to return, even saying [[PleaseIllDoAnything she'll give up on the marriage]]... while [[DissonantSerenity mutilating the Ortem]] she was carrying with a knife. Sim's reaction:
-->'''Narrator''': Even Sim, who had a far longer life span than most people and had once escaped from a burning castle with the screams of people screaming in despair, [[HorrifyingTheHorror was horrified by Giselle's condition]].
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** He builds the tower through controlling 50 Ortems carrying lumber and stone using his magic, and comments on the various colors his vision turned into from drinking his [[MagicPotion Abel Potion]] for 10 consecutive days of work! With Altamir acting as his supervisor and shouting and screaming at him. Propably in revenge for almost [[{{Workaholic}} causing her death from overwork]] in [[CallBack the previous volume]].

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** He builds the tower through controlling 50 Ortems carrying lumber and stone using his magic, and comments on the various colors his vision turned into from drinking his [[MagicPotion Abel Potion]] for 10 consecutive days of work! With Altamir acting as his supervisor and shouting and screaming yelling at him. Propably in revenge for almost [[{{Workaholic}} causing her death from overwork]] in [[CallBack the previous volume]].
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* During the journey to the mountain to hunt for Live Foggs, Abel, Mea, Kamla, Sophia and Augen are taking a rest (for the third time, because of [[PatheticallyWeak Abel's poor stamina]]). Abel tries asking the three Levi followers questions about the Riveras Kingdom and Levi church, to figure out the situation of Palgas village well. Once [[ShrinkingViolet Sophia]] begins answering, [[PsychoSupporter she gets excited the more she talks]] about [[HighPriest Nelgliffe]] and how great of a person he is to the kingdom, [[MotorMouth and begins flooding Abel with trivia's and facts]], as he begins to feel danger as she gets closer and closer to him. Once Abel is asked about his reasons for asking, he replies that [[BeCarefulWhatYouSay he is interested]]. This causes Sophia to [[SQuee get super excited on poor Abel and grabs his hand]], and bombards him with suggestions to join Levi church, [[FangIrl telling him how much she respects and admires him, and hoping to one day pray to Levi with him]], [[ThisIsGonnaSuck while he feels dread from the thought of spending the mission with her]]. Fortunately, Kamla and Augen, [[DraggedByTheCollar decides to pull her away]] from Abel, [[EveryoneHasStandards seeing his distress]], while she's fighting their grip and yelling at them. She tries to reach to Abel, only from [[ClingyJealousGirl Mea]] to pull Abel by the arm, tells Sophia that he isn't interested, and whispers to him, while glaring at Sophia:

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* During the journey to the mountain to hunt for Live Foggs, Abel, Mea, Kamla, Sophia and Augen are taking a rest (for the third time, because of [[PatheticallyWeak Abel's poor stamina]]). Abel tries asking the three Levi followers questions about the Riveras Kingdom and Levi church, to figure out the situation of Palgas village well. Once [[ShrinkingViolet Sophia]] begins answering, [[PsychoSupporter she gets excited the more she talks]] about [[HighPriest Nelgliffe]] and how great of a person he is to the kingdom, [[MotorMouth and begins flooding Abel with trivia's and facts]], as he begins to feel danger as she gets closer and closer to him. Once Abel is asked about his reasons for asking, he replies that [[BeCarefulWhatYouSay he is interested]]. This causes Sophia to [[SQuee [[{{Squee}} get super excited on poor Abel and grabs his hand]], and bombards him with suggestions to join Levi church, [[FangIrl [[{{Fangirl}} telling him how much she respects and admires him, and hoping to one day pray to Levi with him]], [[ThisIsGonnaSuck while he feels dread from the thought of spending the mission with her]]. Fortunately, Kamla and Augen, [[DraggedByTheCollar decides to pull her away]] from Abel, [[EveryoneHasStandards seeing his distress]], while she's fighting their grip and yelling at them. She tries to reach to Abel, only from [[ClingyJealousGirl Mea]] to pull Abel by the arm, tells Sophia that he isn't interested, and whispers to him, while glaring at Sophia:



* After [[FrameUp Chloe accuses Abel of being a devil]], she tells him about the Devil's Trial, and how he'll be torched with a flame to [[BurnTheWitch determine if he's a devil or not]], and that he's required to wear [[SupernormalBindings Arogua stone shackles]], special kind of shackles to block his magic, and shows it to him. His reaction? [[SqUee He gushes about seeing the shackles, and thinks of how expensive and powerful these materials are]], and how it's rarely seen in Dinrat Kingdom, and proceed to ask Chloe:

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* After [[FrameUp Chloe accuses Abel of being a devil]], she tells him about the Devil's Trial, and how he'll be torched with a flame to [[BurnTheWitch determine if he's a devil or not]], and that he's required to wear [[SupernormalBindings Arogua stone shackles]], special kind of shackles to block his magic, and shows it to him. His reaction? [[SqUee [[{{Squee}} He gushes about seeing the shackles, and thinks of how expensive and powerful these materials are]], and how it's rarely seen in Dinrat Kingdom, and proceed to ask Chloe:



* Abel, initailly on-edge from seeing [[LivingLegend the Collector]] in front of him and is demanding something from him , [[SquEe quickly forgets himself]] and [[AdmiringTheAbomination approaches the clearly dangerous adventurer]], who just pointed a BigFreakingSword at him a minute ago, and asks him to show him his legendary item: "[[BagOfHolding Ravenous Dragon Tool Bag]]". When the Collector tells him he can't show it to him, Abel keeps finding a way to ask again and again:

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* Abel, initailly on-edge from seeing [[LivingLegend the Collector]] in front of him and is demanding something from him , [[SquEe [[{{Squee}} quickly forgets himself]] and [[AdmiringTheAbomination approaches the clearly dangerous adventurer]], who just pointed a BigFreakingSword at him a minute ago, and asks him to show him his legendary item: "[[BagOfHolding Ravenous Dragon Tool Bag]]". When the Collector tells him he can't show it to him, Abel keeps finding a way to ask again and again:



* The Collector summons one of his favorite trophies: [[FlyingFace The head]] of “The Imperial Dragon Grimrome”, a decapitated head of a magistic looking evil dragon, with huge bifurcated horns, emerald-colored scales and a magnificent purple beard, and use its BreathWeapon on Abel. Abel creates his [[DeployableCover Hydeem Magi-Metal]] to [[AttackReflector reflect energy attacks]] and form a [[LuckilyMyShieldWillProtectMe protective sphere to fully cover himself]]. The metal sphere endures the attack and Abel comes out safely, with the blast having ravaged the ground of the arena. However, the dragon head suffered the brunt of its own blast:

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* The Collector summons one of his favorite trophies: [[FlyingFace The head]] of “The Imperial Dragon Grimrome”, a decapitated head of a magistic majestic looking evil dragon, with huge bifurcated horns, emerald-colored scales and a magnificent purple beard, and use its BreathWeapon on Abel. Abel creates his [[DeployableCover Hydeem Magi-Metal]] to [[AttackReflector reflect energy attacks]] and form a [[LuckilyMyShieldWillProtectMe protective sphere to fully cover himself]]. The metal sphere endures the attack and Abel comes out safely, with the blast having ravaged the ground of the arena. However, the dragon head suffered the brunt of its own blast:



* As Abel overwhelms Collector with his "[[WhipItGood Abel whip]]", the latter summons his beast, “[[TreaNts Universal Hardwood Behemoth]]”, a [[KaiJu 40 meter across huge tree beast]], with black leaves with strength of metal acting as its fur, for Collector to hide inside its thicket. [[PrideBeforeAFall Right after Collector boasts]] its beast's NighInvulnerability, Abel's metallic whip strikes the behemoth, then:

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* As Abel overwhelms Collector with his "[[WhipItGood Abel whip]]", the latter summons his beast, “[[TreaNts Universal Hardwood Behemoth]]”, a [[KaiJu [[{{Kaiju}} 40 meter across huge tree beast]], with black leaves with strength of metal acting as its fur, for Collector to hide inside its thicket. [[PrideBeforeAFall Right after Collector boasts]] its beast's NighInvulnerability, Abel's metallic whip strikes the behemoth, then:



Peter puts his hand to the tip of his lips, which are colored venomously with elegant gestures, and [[TroLl smiles as he leaves]].\\

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Peter puts his hand to the tip of his lips, which are colored venomously with elegant gestures, and [[TroLl [[{{Troll}} smiles as he leaves]].\\



** He builds the tower through controlling 50 Ortems carrying lumber and stone using his magic, and comments on the various colors his vision turned into from drinking his [[MagicPotion Abel Potion]] for 10 consecutive days of work! With Altamir acting as his supervisor and shouting and screaming at him. Propably in revenge for almost [[WorkaHolic causing her death from overwork]] in [[CallBack the previous volume]].

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** He builds the tower through controlling 50 Ortems carrying lumber and stone using his magic, and comments on the various colors his vision turned into from drinking his [[MagicPotion Abel Potion]] for 10 consecutive days of work! With Altamir acting as his supervisor and shouting and screaming at him. Propably in revenge for almost [[WorkaHolic [[{{Workaholic}} causing her death from overwork]] in [[CallBack the previous volume]].
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* Abel tricking Lark with a [[ConsummateLiar fabricated story]] about Altamir's Tower's collapsing, [[DeceasedFallGuyGambit pinning the blame on the High Elf priest Devin]], and telling him of the [[AppealToWorseProblems Sky Country Alfhiem's plan for an invasion]]. Even painting [[BoisterousWeakling Devin]] as a [[BlatantLies supreme sorcerer that Abel couldn't defeat]], and took the witch Altamir with him, allowing Altamir to hide in the Fage territory as "the Wandering Mage [[SueDonym Alta]]"!! Abel kept telling himself it was for the good of the Kingdom, and [[SuspicouslySpecificDenial is not to protect himself]]:

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* Abel tricking Lark with a [[ConsummateLiar fabricated story]] about Altamir's Tower's collapsing, [[DeceasedFallGuyGambit pinning the blame on the High Elf priest Devin]], and telling him of the [[AppealToWorseProblems Sky Country Alfhiem's plan for an invasion]]. Even painting [[BoisterousWeakling Devin]] as a [[BlatantLies supreme sorcerer that Abel couldn't defeat]], and took the witch Altamir with him, allowing Altamir to hide in the Fage territory as "the Wandering Mage [[SueDonym Alta]]"!! Abel kept telling himself it was for the good of the Kingdom, and [[SuspicouslySpecificDenial [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial is not to protect himself]]:
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* Following the collapse of Altamir's Tower, Abel, Mea and Elia head back to Palgas village with Altamir and the Collector as well. However, they're stopped by Lark's private army and some adventurers recruits, along with Rinoa of the alchemist division, raising their weapons at them. Euris, leading the army, approaches them and pulls her sword... [[BaitAndSwitch then drops it on the ground and kneels down]]:
-->'''Euris''': “A-, [[TheDreaded Abel Belek]], Commander of the Alchemists! You are suspected of [[DestructiveSavior destroying a protected building designated by the kingdom]], unsealing a dangerous demon designated by the kingdom, and contacting it! Lark-sama wants to talk to you about it! Please ……, please! Will you please accompany me willingly? I swear on my life, [[AintTooProudToBeg I will never do anything wrong]]!”\\
Her voice was trembling.\\
The private army and adventurers behind her were all tense.
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* Abel tricking Lark with a [[ConsummateLiar fabricated story]] about Altamir's Tower's collapsing, [[DeceasedFallGuyGambit pinning the blame on the High Elf priest Devin]], and telling him of the [[AppealToWorseProblems Sky Country Alfhiem's plan for an invasion]]. Even painting [[BoisterousWeakling Devin]] as a [[BlatantLies supreme sorcerer that Abel couldn't defeat]], and took the witch Altamir with him, allowing Altamir to hide in the Fage territory as "the Wandering Mage [[SueDonym Alta]]"!! Abel kept telling himself it was for the good of the Kingdom, and [[SuspicouslySpecificDenial is not to protect himself]]:
-->'''Abel (narrating)''': The very survival of this kingdom is at stake. This much of lie is unavoidable. I’m not saying this just to save my own skin. In addition, [[ScrewYouElves Devin’s conscience will not be hurt at all]] no matter how many sins he has to cover.
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* This scene in the webnovel. [[DespairEventHorizon Abel was bemoaning his situation]] after his wooden totem truck broke down, foiling his escape from the village. He suddenly hear the sound of animal hoofs moving and turns around to find a horse-driven carriage, carrying burlap bags. He then hears a voice, not coming from the driver, telling him to stop sleeping on the side of the road, and the voice owner comes out from under the burlap bags pile. It's a girl with blue hair with sheep horns on her head, who then tells him this:

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* This scene in the webnovel. [[DespairEventHorizon Abel was bemoaning his situation]] after his wooden totem Ortem truck broke down, foiling his escape from the village. He suddenly hear the sound of animal hoofs moving and turns around to find a horse-driven carriage, carrying burlap bags. He then hears a voice, not coming from the driver, telling him to stop sleeping on the side of the road, and the voice owner comes out from under the burlap bags pile. It's a girl with blue hair with sheep horns on her head, who then tells him this:



* Abel teaching Rinoa and her alchemy division faction how to carve totems in order to teach them [[WeatherManipulation cloud-gathering magic]] from his village, in order to make it rain on the Fage territory. They start enthusiastic to learn new magic because all their attempts failed and were harassed by Icarus and his faction, but little by little, Abel becomes [[DrillSergeantNasty way too aggressive with his teaching]]. Asking one mage to redo the totem [[ThePerfectionist because of a little barely seen flaw]], another is a [[ControlFreak bit smaller than what he asked for]], pretty much overworking the poor well-meaning mages.

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* Abel teaching Rinoa and her alchemy division faction how to carve totems Ortems in order to teach them [[WeatherManipulation cloud-gathering magic]] from his village, in order to make it rain on the Fage territory. They start enthusiastic to learn new magic because all their attempts failed and were harassed by Icarus and his faction, but little by little, Abel becomes [[DrillSergeantNasty way too aggressive with his teaching]]. Asking one mage to redo the totem Ortem [[ThePerfectionist because of a little barely seen flaw]], another is a [[ControlFreak bit smaller than what he asked for]], pretty much overworking the poor well-meaning mages.



** He builds the tower through controlling 50 totem carrying lumber and stone using his magic, and comments on the various colors his vision turned into from drinking his [[MagicPotion Abel Potion]] for 10 consecutive days of work! With Altamir acting as his supervisor and shouting and screaming at him. Propably in revenge for almost [[WorkaHolic causing her death from overwork]] in [[CallBack the previous volume]].

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** He builds the tower through controlling 50 totem Ortems carrying lumber and stone using his magic, and comments on the various colors his vision turned into from drinking his [[MagicPotion Abel Potion]] for 10 consecutive days of work! With Altamir acting as his supervisor and shouting and screaming at him. Propably in revenge for almost [[WorkaHolic causing her death from overwork]] in [[CallBack the previous volume]].

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Peter puts his hand to the tip of his lips, which are colored venomously with elegant
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gestures, and [[Troll smiles as he leaves]].\\
'''Peter''': “[[WellIntentionedExtremist It’s more important to kick Abel in the shins]] as many times as possible to keep him in a bit of a funk. It’s clear from this incident that [[JerkassHasAPoint if he gets carried away, he’ll be in big trouble]], right?”
'''Mea''': “Peter-san …… Peter-san! [[BigStupidDoodooHead You Queer! You’re a black-hearted, lying, disgusting Queer]]!”
Mea’s eyes were filled with tears as she blamed Peter.\\
When I looked up, my eyes met hers.\\

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gestures, and [[Troll [[TroLl smiles as he leaves]].\\
'''Peter''': “[[WellIntentionedExtremist It’s more important to kick Abel in the shins]] as many times as possible to keep him in a bit of a funk. It’s clear from this incident that [[JerkassHasAPoint if he gets carried away, he’ll be in big trouble]], right?”
right?”\\
'''Mea''': “Peter-san …… Peter-san! [[BigStupidDoodooHead You Queer! You’re a black-hearted, lying, disgusting Queer]]!”
Queer]]!”\\
Mea’s eyes were filled with tears as she blamed Peter.\\
When I looked up, my eyes met hers.\\
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* [[PsychoSupporter Penrath]], after he and Altamir grabs Abel by the shoulder and the former shaking the latter for more [[MagiBabble magic theory talk]], comments that [[Shipping Goggles they are getting along very well]] and that [[PairTheSmartOnes he sees Alta as a worthy campanion to Abel]], and giving a mocking look to [[LoveInterest Mea]]. Then, he [[SerialEscalation begins listing more candidates in history he thinks are worthy of Abel]], names and species Abel never heard about... until he reaches this before Abel asks him to stop:

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* [[PsychoSupporter Penrath]], after he and Altamir grabs Abel by the shoulder and the former shaking the latter for more [[MagiBabble magic theory talk]], comments that [[Shipping Goggles [[ShippingGoggles they are getting along very well]] and that [[PairTheSmartOnes he sees Alta as a worthy campanion to Abel]], and giving a mocking look to [[LoveInterest Mea]]. Then, he [[SerialEscalation begins listing more candidates in history he thinks are worthy of Abel]], names and species Abel never heard about... until he reaches this before Abel asks him to stop:

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-->'''Shame''': “Did you know that? In the easternmost part of the Dinrat Kingdom, there has been a
massive deformation of the topography and undersea faults that have changed the ocean currents, and the royal family is trying to cover it up. Abel-chan did it, right!? It’s definitely [[PersonOfMassDestruction Abel-chan]], right!?”\\

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-->'''Shame''': “Did you know that? In the easternmost part of the Dinrat Kingdom, there has been a
a massive deformation of the topography and undersea faults that have changed the ocean currents, and the royal family is trying to cover it up. Abel-chan did it, right!? It’s definitely [[PersonOfMassDestruction Abel-chan]], right!?”\\

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'''Abel (narrating)''': Is it the [[DeadlyDisk Abel saw]]!?\\

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'''Abel (narrating)''': Is it the [[DeadlyDisk [[DeadlyDisc Abel saw]]!?\\



* [[PsychoSupporter Penrath]], after he and Altamir grabs Abel by the shoulder and the former shaking the latter for more [[MagiBabble magic theory talk]], comments that [[ShippingGoogles they are getting along very well]] and that [[PairTheSmartOnes he sees Alta as a worthy campanion to Abel]], and giving a mocking look to [[LoveInterest Mea]]. Then, he [[SerialEscalation begins listing more candidates in history he thinks are worthy of Abel]], names and species Abel never heard about.. until he reaches this before Abel asks him to stop:

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* [[PsychoSupporter Penrath]], after he and Altamir grabs Abel by the shoulder and the former shaking the latter for more [[MagiBabble magic theory talk]], comments that [[ShippingGoogles [[Shipping Goggles they are getting along very well]] and that [[PairTheSmartOnes he sees Alta as a worthy campanion to Abel]], and giving a mocking look to [[LoveInterest Mea]]. Then, he [[SerialEscalation begins listing more candidates in history he thinks are worthy of Abel]], names and species Abel never heard about..about... until he reaches this before Abel asks him to stop:



* Abel ends up taking over the work for building the Magic Wave Tower, by himself!!! How did that happen? Well, Abel and Altamir originally hired many carpenters and alchemists from the territory to build the tower, but with them (Abel and Altamir) being MadScientists, they rushed the project and [[StrikeEpisode all workers went on a strike]]. They hired a carpenter supervisor on the promise that he would
never work more than ten hours a day, and borrowed some of Peter's men to continue the work, but from the second day, Peter’s men collapsed from overwork. The day after that, a large number of Peter’s men went missing, and on the fourth day, the supervising carpenter asked Abel to [[GetOut stay away from him]] for breach of contract, and then Peter bowed to him and [[EpicFail asked not to dispatch human resources]].

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* Abel ends up taking over the work for building the Magic Wave Tower, by himself!!! How did that happen? Well, Abel and Altamir originally hired many carpenters and alchemists from the territory to build the tower, but with them (Abel and Altamir) being MadScientists, they rushed the project and [[StrikeEpisode all workers went on a strike]]. They hired a carpenter supervisor on the promise that he would
would never work more than ten hours a day, and borrowed some of Peter's men to continue the work, but from the second day, Peter’s men collapsed from overwork. The day after that, a large number of Peter’s men went missing, and on the fourth day, the supervising carpenter asked Abel to [[GetOut stay away from him]] for breach of contract, and then Peter bowed to him and [[EpicFail asked not to dispatch human resources]].
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* The Collector summons one of his favorite trophies: [[FlyingFace The head]] of “The Imperial Dragon Grimrome”, a decapitated head of a magistic looking evil dragon, with huge bifurcated horns, emerald-colored scales and a magnificent purple beard, and use its BreathWeapon on Abel. Abel creates his [[DeployableCover Hydeem Magi-Metal]] to [[AttackReflector reflect energy attacks]] and form a [[LuckilyMyShieldWillProtectMe protective sphere to fully cover himself]]. The metal sphere endures the attack and Abel comes out safely, with the blast having ravaged the ground of the arena. However, the dragon head suffered the brunt of its own blast:
--> As I looked ahead, I saw that the horns of the floating imperial dragon Grimrome had been snapped off and part of his magnificent beard was balding.\\
The scales are also slightly cracked.\\
The dignified face of the Grimrome had turned into something quite pathetic. The scales have been peeled off from the base, and the sparse beard that remains looks pitiful.\\
'''Collector''': “M-My …… My treasure …… Impossible, the head of the Imperial Dragon Grimrome …… turned, turned into something miserable like this ……!”
** Then it's followed by a subtle TakeThat on the concept of the [[CollectorOfTheStrange Collector]]:
-->'''Collector''': “[[MoralMyopia How dare you damage my collection]], ……! You have no idea how valuable this mount is! How much pain I’ve gone through for this! Consider that [[IllKillYou death is the only way to end this]]!”\\
'''Abel (narrating)''': It is still in its original form, and it was me who was almost killed. This is not a talk about self-defense anymore.\\
If you just want to [[BattleTrophy brag about it]], you should have just [[StatingTheSimpleSolution displayed it at home]], but if you take it all the way to the battlefield and then make a fuss about [[WreckedWeapon it being broken]], all I can say is [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech that it’s your fault]].
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* As Abel overwhelms Collector with his "[[WhipItGood Abel whip]]", the latter summons his beast, “[[TreaNts Universal Hardwood Behemoth]]”, a [[KaiJu 40 meter across huge tree beast]], with black leaves with strength of metal acting as its fur, for Collector to hide inside its thicket. [[PrideBeforeAFall Right after Collector boasts]] its beast's NighInvulnerability, Abel's metallic whip strikes the behemoth, then:
-->'''Abel (narrating)''': The “Universal Hardwood Behemoth” was hit by my giant whip, and it dipped and creaked all over.\\
The hard, metallic leaves fell from its body, and the behemoth was instantly [[StrippedToTheBone stripped naked]], revealing the collector hiding in its depths.\\
'''Abel''': “[[NotSoInvincibleAfterAll Huh, so it’s not that hard……]].”\\
'''Collector''': “[[ThisCannotBe M-My, my behemoth]]!?”
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[[KilledOffForReal It was bottled up in the chaos and disappeared]].

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[[KilledOffForReal It was bottled up in the chaos and disappeared]].disappeared]].
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* Shame telling Abel about a sudden change in the country's landmass, probably due to his fight with Kudor:
-->'''Shame''': “Did you know that? In the easternmost part of the Dinrat Kingdom, there has been a
massive deformation of the topography and undersea faults that have changed the ocean currents, and the royal family is trying to cover it up. Abel-chan did it, right!? It’s definitely [[PersonOfMassDestruction Abel-chan]], right!?”\\
'''Abel (narrating)''': Is it the [[DeadlyDisk Abel saw]]!?\\
The Abel saw cut [[TerrainSculpting through the ocean floor]]!?\\
At that moment, I stopped thinking about everything and focused only on how to ensure that the damage to Kudor was done.
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* [[PsychoSupporter Penrath]], after he and Altamir grabs Abel by the shoulder and the former shaking the latter for more [[MagiBabble magic theory talk]], comments that [[ShippingGoogles they are getting along very well]] and that [[PairTheSmartOnes he sees Alta as a worthy campanion to Abel]], and giving a mocking look to [[LoveInterest Mea]]. Then, he [[SerialEscalation begins listing more candidates in history he thinks are worthy of Abel]], names and species Abel never heard about.. until he reaches this before Abel asks him to stop:
-->'''Penrath''': “Even if you include all living things, the only ones left are the wise dragon Kerubiun, the FireGod Maharbo, and the [[BigGood Evil goddess Kudor]]!”\\
'''Abel (narrating)''': What do you think people are?
** Followed by Altamir's reaction:
-->'''Altamir''': “Wha-, Huh? Old Pen, what are you saying, you idiot! I’m not like that, you know! [[CelibateEccentricGenius I’m not interested in such frivolous things]], and [[OurGhostsAreDifferent I’m not the kind of person who can do such things]]. And of all of them, not this guy (Abel), not him! He’s scum! [[CallBack He blew up someone’s house on the first meeting, you know]]!”\\
'''Abel (narrating)''': Altamir blushes and [[DopeSlap slaps me and Penrath]] on the back.\\
What’s with this girl, she’s as excited as she was when she met Peter again.\\
'''Altamir''': “And look, [[EveryoneCanSeeIt Abel has Mea, right]]?”
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* Peter with a dozen or so of his men appear before Abel could warn Penrath, hold Abel down and arrest Penrath, for being one of Levi's four Great Priests. The scene is presented as a very sad moment, with Abel losing his slave.. er fellow sorcerer and calling his name as [[PutOnAPrisonBus he's dragged off]]. Abel falls on his knees after Peter tells him he cannot let someone like Penrath walk free, and Mea suddenly appears to comfort him with a hug, that he returns while crying. Then out of nowhere:
-->'''Peter''': “Oh, Mea-chan, you’re here. [[TheStoolPigeon Thank you for the information]], you’ve been very helpful.”\\
Peter turned around and waved his hand in the air.\\
'''Abel''': “Peter-san!?”\\
I was [[AmusingInjuries hit in the jaw by Mea]] vigorously standing up, and I fell to the ground.\\
'''Mea''': “How could you! Why! [[YouSaidYouWouldLetThemGo You said you’d never tell]]!”\\
Peter puts his hand to the tip of his lips, which are colored venomously with elegant
gestures, and [[Troll smiles as he leaves]].\\
'''Peter''': “[[WellIntentionedExtremist It’s more important to kick Abel in the shins]] as many times as possible to keep him in a bit of a funk. It’s clear from this incident that [[JerkassHasAPoint if he gets carried away, he’ll be in big trouble]], right?”
'''Mea''': “Peter-san …… Peter-san! [[BigStupidDoodooHead You Queer! You’re a black-hearted, lying, disgusting Queer]]!”
Mea’s eyes were filled with tears as she blamed Peter.\\
When I looked up, my eyes met hers.\\
'''Mea''': “[[BlatantLies I-It’s not me, Abel]]! [[WomanScorned M-Mea would not do that]]! That’s just the Queer’s lie, okay? Okay?”

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* Abel ends up taking over the work for building the Magic Wave Tower, by himself!!! How did that happen? Well, Abel and Altamir originally hired many carpenters and alchemists from the territory to build the tower, but with them (Abel and Altamir) being MadScientists, they rushed the project and [[StrikeEpisode all workers went on a strike]]. They hired a carpenter supervisor on the promise that he would
never work more than ten hours a day, and borrowed some of Peter's men to continue the work, but from the second day, Peter’s men collapsed from overwork. The day after that, a large number of Peter’s men went missing, and on the fourth day, the supervising carpenter asked Abel to [[GetOut stay away from him]] for breach of contract, and then Peter bowed to him and [[EpicFail asked not to dispatch human resources]].
** He builds the tower through controlling 50 totem carrying lumber and stone using his magic, and comments on the various colors his vision turned into from drinking his [[MagicPotion Abel Potion]] for 10 consecutive days of work! With Altamir acting as his supervisor and shouting and screaming at him. Propably in revenge for almost [[WorkaHolic causing her death from overwork]] in [[CallBack the previous volume]].
-->'''Abel''': “I’m sorry, Alta-san …… I think I’m losing it. After all, our brains can’t handle having the whole thing run with different precision …… Since a while ago, my hands have been kind of shaking ……”\\
'''Altamir''': “[[MeanBoss What!? What’s wrong with your usual tone]]!? Here, get over it and you can go! You see, [[WelcomeToMyWorld you’re always telling your subordinates this and that]] in the alchemy division!”\\
'''Abel''': Now [[SuddenHumility I really understand the feelings of the members of the alchemist division]].
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* Mea's opinion on [[UnwantedFalseFaith Avel]]'s picture, the Riveras Kingdom's replacement god who's [[VeryLooselyBasedOnATrueStory loosely based]] on Abel:
-->'''Mea''': “……In Mea’s opinion, this Abel is [[HistoricalBeautyUpgrade a little too muscular]] for me.”

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